College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 24 Forgetting and Remembering (2)
Melting moon, faint wind, just like the fragrance of flowers, the wind will always dissipate for a moment.However, their names have always been famous in history and will last forever.

Xiang Yu
Looking at you standing on the edge of Wujiang River, you are majestic and heroic.I believe that what people forget is your embarrassment, and what is remembered is your pride, generosity and infatuation.Suicide by the river was due to your generosity, so people will only remember your generosity, and you deserve the title of "ghost hero".People remember you, no wonder Li Qingzhao said "Thinking of Xiang Yu so far".

Sima Qian

Watching you sitting at the desk writing vigorously, writing that masterpiece.People will only admire you for forgetting the pain and shame of castration.Only relying on the belief of "studying the relationship between heaven and man, understanding the changes of the past and the present, and becoming a family's story", he writes the deeds of others, but forgets his own honor and disgrace.However, your deeds shine through the annals of history, and your name has been passed down for thousands of years.People remember you, just like remembering that you once said that "mortals are either lighter than a feather or heavier than Mount Tai".

李白
Seeing you carefree in the palace, the noble concubine holds the inkstone, and the wrestler takes off his boots.People forget your gloomy past, pass on your masterpieces, and remember your merits and virtues.Because, the sentence "I am born to be useful, and I will come back after all my money is gone" has inspired many people with lofty ideals, and the sentence "An Neng can smash my eyebrows and bend my waist to serve the powerful makes me unhappy" expresses infinite contempt for the power of the powerful.Looking up at Shixian, a sense of arrogance arises spontaneously.Life can go like this once, and there will be no regrets.It is only natural that people admire you and remember you!
杜甫
Seeing you living a leisurely life in the suburbs of Chengdu, people are amazed at your ease.You have forgotten your disappointment, but you still remember the days of the common people.Therefore, when you say, "There are tens of thousands of mansions in peace, sheltering the world's poor and happy people, and being unmoved by wind and rain, it is as safe as a mountain", how broad-minded you are, and how deeply you love the people!Your feelings of worrying about the country and the people, and your broad mind will be remembered by future generations.Your masterpiece will be handed down forever.You deserve the title of "Poem Saint".

Looking back at history, Xiang Yu, Sima Qian, Li Bai, and Du Fu, they cannot but be moved. They see failure, frustration, and shame lightly, and we cannot but engrave their names in our hearts.

Melting the moon, light wind, forgetting everything that should be forgotten, and remembering everything that should be remembered, this is our blessing.The past follows the wind, watching the clouds roll and the clouds relax; the plum blossoms are fragrant, and the fragrance of the flowers is elegant.

The smoke goes with the wind, and the name flows with the history.

score review
The article uses a dual sentence composition title full of philosophical meaning, "Smoke goes with the wind, names follow the history", which is highly concise, highlights the main idea, and hints at the direction of the article's techniques and intentions. It is really wonderful.In addition, the proper quotation of famous lines from ancient poems and the skillful use of various rhetorical techniques add a lot of literary grace to the article.

Forever Tan Sitong
(Candidate No. [-] in Sichuan)

(100 years ago, Tan Sitong blood-stained Caishikou for the reform, sacrificed his life for righteousness, and sacrificed himself for benevolence. The sea is floating, and the years are like tides. Tan Sitong will always be reincarnated in time, and our country and people will always remember it.)
The spring breeze is colorless and the rivers and mountains are dark, Donghang dare not look at Maguan.

The diseased bones of Shenzhou are like autumn grass, and the ancient roads of the Six Dynasties sing blood birds.

Only when the country is broken can we know that people are inferior, and the Treaty of Shimonoseki is unbearable.

Years of wars and turmoil have caused the three armed forces to shed tears on Taiwan.

There are corpses lying on the secluded path of the green hills, and ghosts cry by the side of the post road and bridge.

A hundred years of wind and rain and blood have flowed back, and no one has collected the bones of the green hills.

The golden palace is full of gloom, and the monarchs and ministers look at each other with tears on their clothes.

Where is the back court song still sung, a sad song telling the rise and fall.

The treaty of subjugation, the hatred of the subjugation of the country, what is the sound of the subjugation of the country at this time.

Looking back on the motherland and the mountains and rivers, who is pity for the devastation?
Nanhai Juzi Wanyan Shu, Shi Potian shocked the earth.

State reform and reform, snow and rain around the palace gate one after another.

The huge wind blew the waves and the purple flames opened, and the thunder waves rushed to Tianpai.

The youth in the imperial capital fights with the sleeves, so that the sun and the moon will not sink.

Advocating Western learning to abolish the imperial examination, the Empress Dowager Xigong burst into tears.

The law of the ancestors cannot be changed, and the death of the country cannot destroy the ancestors.

As soon as the king went to Yingtai, the wind swept away the flowers and dust.

The way is that God feels the autumn colors, and the clear sky is dyed red.

Sitong is in his thirties this year, and has never had a wife since.

The prosperity of the country requires bloodshed, and the bloodshed should start from the same generation.

Desire to kill thieves, powerless to return to heaven.

A worthy death, happy!Hurry up!

The execution ground chanted, thousands of people were shocked, and it turned into blue soil in 33 years.

The Yellow River sobbed and poured into the sky, and cut the world of mortals with a knife.

The poor wife stays in the vacant room and hears Huang Meiyu knocking on the window at night.

The corolla is not full and the small window is open. It is suspected that the gentleman has turned into a butterfly.

But seeing the light wind in the pond, where can I find Lang in the smoked willows.

The path is full of residual flowers, not bonuses but blood red.

But put the lovesickness into the mourning kite, and the song of resentment recruits the decapitated soul again.

There is hatred in the song and careful thinking, can you hear it when you are in the underworld?
With slender fingers and thirteen strings in jade hands, the broken mirror is flying with hatred.

The humble concubine alone cuts the rain in Bashan, and the blood cuckoo in the evening rain and the morning cloud.

Suddenly there is a returning boat on the lake, a dream and half a lake.

Hearing the sound of the harp on the Junjiang River, it is translated into a butterfly pouring wind chimes.

The sound of Zhu Xianqin comes for nine days, and the wind blows the bamboo and jade dust in the courtyard.

Yin and Yang are separated by different paths, and they sing five times with his wife.

At the end of the song, people's souls are far away, and the sound of the boat's oars is too late.

Climbing willow sticks and inscribing blood books, follow the king leisurely along the river.

"The past can't be traced back to the past, every lovesickness is dusty.

In the next life, I will turn into a lotus picker and meet you in Hengtang water. "

(Borrowing Tan Sitong's resurrection, the tree is a man of flesh and blood, affection and love, with iron bones and tenderness like water, a real hero. His wife said: "The past cannot be traced back, and all lovesickness is covered with ashes. In the next life, you will become a lotus picker. Meet you in Hengtang water." It means: forget you in this life, and continue the relationship in the next life. Tan Sitong is remembered as a hero, but his love for this life is painfully forgotten by his wife. In fact, the two are equally unforgettable.)
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The rich language library, deep grasp of history, exquisite layout, and romantic expression techniques all reflect the candidates' talents in many aspects.The preface before the poem is highly generalized and cleverly put into the topic; the postscript at the end of the poem cleverly covers the topic and highlights the main idea, so that the beginning and the end of the poem are harmonious and integrated.

On the banks of forgetting and remembering

(Candidate No. [-] in Sichuan)

Xi Murong said: "Life is an endless river, and we are all the ones who cross it." On the left bank of the river of life is forgetting, and on the right bank of the river of life is remembering.We traveled on the left bank and the right bank in our own unique boats, only to know-forget what should be forgotten, and remember what should be remembered.

Walking on the road of life, we smile and watch the flowers bloom and fall outside the window, and the leaves wither and fall, and watch the clouds and clouds outside the sky, and the wind stops and the wind blows.On the road, we have experienced too many things mixed with sorrow and joy. During the voyage of the river of life, we have learned to forget the joys and sorrows that should be forgotten, and learned to remember the bits and pieces that should be remembered.

With his hair disheveled and his face looking up to the sky, Dongpo yelled, "The great river is going east." All the annoying and trifling things he faced instantly sank into the rolling waves and disappeared without a trace.The majestic torrential river made Dongpo choose to forget, forget those frustrations, sorrows, and those unsatisfactory official careers.Tao Qian leisurely picks chrysanthemums under the eastern fence, accompanied by the dancing butterflies in "Zhuang Shengxiao Dreams the Butterfly".Facing Nanshan, Yuanming chose to forget, forget the ugliness of the officialdom, and forget all the unhappiness he encountered. It is wise to "ferry".

People stay on the left bank of the river, and besides this, there are also people living happily on the right bank.

Sitting under the pavilion by the pool, Jushi Yi An, who was drinking alone with tears streaming down her face, told me in her words that she will always remember the little things she has experienced in this life, and that is the choice she made on the way to "struggle for crossing" .Haizi used "facing the sea, the spring is warm and the flowers are blooming" to tell me that "from tomorrow" he will remember all the "water" of life, because it is the "jade dew" he used to "water" his "flowers".Sanmao has forever remembered the soul of the Sahara with her words.Van Gogh used "Sunflower" to forever remember his "ship"...

These are the lives on both sides of the river of life, this is the choice of forgetting and remembering.The petals blown by the wind are like bursts of broken childhood, the ancient music of Juhuang interprets the gap of the soul, hides in the depths of dreams and memories, listens to the flowers and the night to sing the nightmare, the bustling, and the origin of all memories, Forget the unhappiness and trivialities that should be forgotten by the clear laughter and the unclear tears that no one knows, and remember the depth and eternity that should be remembered.

The lonely white rabbit walks around, his clothes are not as good as new ones, and his people are not as good as old ones.Sail in the "river of life", sit on your own unique boat, know - forget on the left, remember on the right, and there is endless shuttle in the middle!
score review
This article is cleverly conceived, comparing "forgetting" and "remembering" as the two banks of a river, and comparing the life experiences of the two groups of characters, it strongly demonstrates the thesis of the article: forget what should be forgotten, and remember what should be remembered.The language of the article is fluent and natural, and the quotations of famous poems are appropriate, which is really a masterpiece in the examination room.

between remembering and forgetting

(A Candidate from Shaanxi)

Sometimes, remembering is like a furnace of fire, turning pig iron into fine steel; sometimes, forgetting is like a storm, turning flowers into fallen leaves.Rebirth and destruction are often between remembering and forgetting.

(One)

He stood in the field, raised the hoe, and worked hard. Beads of sweat flowed down his forehead, over his handsome face, and dripped into the field.

He is not an ordinary farmer, he is Goujian.He was humble to Fuchai, and there were 300 eunuchs in Wu, and he had to be Fuchai's pawn himself.When he returned to Kuaiji, he cultivated it himself, so that he would not eat unless his parents planted it, and would not wear unless his wife woven it.Eating crude meals, but also licking the gall; while resting on the firewood bunk, I was still thinking about recruiting talents from all over the world.He never slackens for a moment.

Why is he working so hard?When the country fell, he could escape, live in seclusion, and die peacefully, but he didn't!Because he has not forgotten the responsibility of the monarch, and the shame of subjugation!In his heart, he remembered the heartache at the moment when he bowed his head to Fu Chai, and remembered the tears in his eyes when his people welcomed him back to Kuaiji!This memory enables him to endure the pain of gallbladder and the hardness of firewood!

Remember the shame, remember the failure, let Goujian stand up again, and finally achieved a great cause for a generation!
(two)

He sat there smiling happily.With wonderful music in my ears, delicious food in my mouth, and beautiful women in my arms.

In the rhyme of silk, bamboo and qin, you can't hear the noise of ministers discussing disputes; in the fragrance of wine, you can't smell the pungent smell of war burning through the city; .He has forgotten that he is Liu Bei's son, the king of Shu Han!

He really thinks this is very good, not to be entangled in government affairs, but to enjoy the glory and enjoyment.The fathers were exposed to frost and dew, and only by cutting thorns can they have a place of size.The purpose of Zilong's desperate charge in the chaotic army, his father's good intentions of not abandoning the common people before chasing troops, and Kong Ming's loyalty in "The List of Teachers", Liu Chan has completely forgotten!It is really chilling for him to give such a rich land of abundance to others like throwing away grass.

Forgetting the mission, forgetting the responsibility, let Liu Chan be infamous as an unworthy descendant through the ages!

(three)

Remembering and forgetting may be just an attitude, but between remembering and forgetting determines success or failure.

score review
The entry point of this article is ingenious. Through the comparison of the two subjugated kings, it is logical to introduce the viewpoint that "the difference between remembering and forgetting determines the success or failure of success or failure".The article has profound ideas, typical use cases, clear writing, and novel and unique structural arrangements.

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