College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 3 Reading (1)
(2006 Anhui volume)

composition test questions
Nature is a book, society is a book, parents are a book, teachers are a book, classmates are a book, and oneself is a book...

In life experience, the process of various contact and communication is the process of "reading".Reading is confrontation, reading is exploration, reading is understanding, reading is perception, reading is taste, reading is communication, reading is transcendence...

Please write an article of no less than 800 words on the topic of "reading".

[Notice]

①What you write must be within the scope of the topic. ② Make up your own mind. ③The style is optional. ④The topic is self-made. ⑤Writing norms, using punctuation marks correctly. ⑥No plagiarism.

Question Analysis
2006 was the first year for Anhui's college entrance examination Chinese subject to independently propose questions. The composition questions continued in the form and style of the national college entrance examination papers in recent years-continuing to appear in the form of topic composition.However, there have been certain changes in seeking innovation while maintaining stability.First of all, the topic presentation form borrows from the proposition form of the college entrance examination composition in Shanghai ("miscellaneous" and "busy") and Jiangxi Province in 2005 ("face") in the past few years-the form of single-word topics.The prompt material has beautiful language and contains certain philosophy.The first paragraph is a parallel sentence composed of several metaphorical sentences. It points out the scope and content of reading, and clearly tells candidates that they can "read" nature and "read" society; "Teacher; you can "read" your classmates, you can also "read" yourself and so on.The first sentence of the second paragraph explains what "reading" is, and then it is a parallel paragraph composed of several four-character sentences, which uses progressive sentence expansion to clarify the meaning of "reading".Generally speaking, this topic is relatively popular, very close to students, and contains certain philosophical principles, so that candidates can have something to say, and it is easier to write argumentative essays, novels, and essays.

Writing Ideas Tips
Candidates need to break through two points when reviewing questions: one is how to "read", why they should "read" and that they have gained something in the process of "reading". Think, write thoughts, write personalities.The second is to analyze "reading" itself. It is not appropriate to stay at the level of general knowledge, understanding, and familiarity. Deep, from simple to complex, from low-level to high-level profundity and uniqueness, so that people feel that your "reading" is a "reading" full of strength and depth.

Full score sample essay
读弦
(A candidate from Anhui)

Read all the strings of life...

--Inscription

In the trance and confusion, how many people can see through the truth, accompanied by the ancient sky, life is a gorgeous string like a wave.

Blossoming red is like bursts of broken hearts, playing a song "Li Sao" endlessly, and a river flowing. Can you see through the Qingjiang River hiding in the depths of Miluo?The river flows forever, wanting to draw a knife to cut off the water, helpless to cut off the unceasing love, the moon is like a bean, the river water licks your soul that has been unwilling to convert for a long time like a fish, where is your confession?Where is your loneliness?Where is your favorite wreath? "Mourning for the hardships of the people's lives", what a sad and helpless call this is!Well worth it!Well worth it!You waved your sleeves and crushed your dreams into floating algae, and I read your vicissitudes beyond the strings.

The moon is full on the west building, the peanut trees are mixed, accompanied by the intoxication of history, the red-sleeved shoes can’t dance too many pomegranate skirts, and sometimes the heart is like a frightened gull and heron, flying around, "Why is the word worry?" Is this Do you feel emotion after reading all your life?All the old dreams from the past can only be the comfort that is hard to let go in the turmoil. Reading your life is like the waning moon drawn by the dawn wind, quietly swaying the faint light, shining in a bay of passing water. Endless taste, poignant and seductive.This reminds me that the most distressing thing in the world is women and porcelain. Porcelain is fragile, but women are like flowers, sighing in succession. It is the pain of flowers that are withered to the bone, tearing a woman's sweet face like an invisible rolling .And Li Qingzhao played an immortal song with her unique strings, which made people love and regret.

Accompanied by the story of red sleeves adding fragrance, people always think of Pu Songling, no matter the footsteps of Zhizhi, the fragrant jade of peony flowers, or the ferocity torn off the painted skin, his unique personality always emerges.Reading history makes people wise, and reading monsters makes people passionate. Under a lonely lamp, it rains heavily at night, with a copy of "Liao Zhai" in hand, ghosts and monsters break into the heart, which makes people daydream.After reading Pu Songling, there is always a song beyond the strings, which can be heard in the ear and spread to the sky.

The endless life, the vicissitudes of life, Nora's departure, Tess's tenderness, or the troubles of young Werther, or Tagore's immortal childlike innocence, are all different strings and joys of life.

The turmoil of looking at flowers in the fog, the expectation of looking at the moon in the water, reading strings for life, like the song of high mountains and flowing water, the sound of two springs reflecting the moon, playing immortality, playing the youthful ambition of a classmate, like Qu Yuan for the people, Li Qingzhao Playing the piano for love, and Pu Songling for the injustice of the world, immortal people need immortal ambitions, and immortal songs need immortal strings.

Play the strings for life, let your life be like a string, and read a song with a voiceless tone.

score review
Candidates cast classical poems and essays in the text without leaving traces, which is fresh and natural, showing the candidates' superb language control ability and good classical literature accomplishment.The sentence pattern is a combination of length and length, the long sentences are tortuous and soothing, graceful and elegant, the short sentences are concise, capable, lively and agile, and the long and short sentences are well arranged, looking up and looking up.

wonderful words
All the old dreams from the past can only be the comfort that is hard to let go in the turmoil. Reading your life is like the waning moon drawn by the dawn wind, quietly swaying the faint light, shining in a bay of passing water. Endless taste, poignant and seductive.

classic case
Qu Yuan and Li Sao, Li Qingzhao and Ci, Pu Songling and Liaozhai

light taste
(A candidate from Anhui)

Lightness is the lone moon in the sky, the clear lotus out of the water, and the plum blossoms in the corner.

Tranquility is a kind of open-minded mind, a feeling of being born from the world.

The taste is light, and you can taste "the heart is as wide as the sun, the moon, and the sky and the earth", and "the lonely moon in the bright sky" and "the hut is in the human environment, without the noise of cars and horses".

Lightness is the tranquility of "the bright moon shines among the pines, and the clear spring stone flows upwards", it is the rural leisure and fun of "the moon is cold in the shadow of willows and willows, and the piccolo is played several times", lightness is Zhuang Zhou's leisurely excursion, it is Ji Kang's Guangling San, it is Lin Hejing's plum wife Hezi.

Read lightly, taste lightly, taste lightly life, like to be close to nature, listen to the sounds of nature, feel the feelings of heaven and earth, like to stand by the pool, listen to the clear spring in the mountains, watch the butterfly dance among flowers, watch the cycle of seasons, light life, like Baiyun Qingfeng is a companion, and Yaoqin Wutong is a friend, and a small bridge and flowing water are walking together.

The prosperity of the world has blurred the eyes of too many people, but the world cannot be blamed.Looking at flowers in the fog, looking at the moon in the water, can you tell the vagaries of this world?So they were disappointed, miserable, and unable to extricate themselves.At this time, I just want to say one thing to such a person: why don't you read it lightly and taste her charm, then you won't be so depressed.

If you are friends with Qingdan, you can give up rock and roll, stay away from the turmoil of the case, and live under the Hengmen, listening to the pure music of silk and bamboo, sleeping with the sound of Mojie, and being an idler in the world.If you are friends with lightness, you can stand quietly in the courtyard, see the cold moon in the window, only feel the brilliance, but not the desolation, and you can listen to the chirping of autumn insects outside the wall, only the feeling of intimacy, without feeling of bleakness.If you make friends with lightness, you will be able to feel like still water, and you will not be able to rise or fall; you can watch the flowers bloom and fall in front of the court, and watch the clouds and clouds in the sky.

Taste lightness, understand that real lightness is not indifference, not negative, not artificial, not deliberately carved, it is calm but not pretentious, simple but not vulgar, has breathtaking power but not wanton publicity, it is deep in the soul Confession is the accumulation of emotions, the integration of body and mind with nature, the expression of true feelings and the state of mind.

Understand the mediocrity, and read the true meaning of life.

Read light feelings, read light rhymes, and read the state of light people.

The taste is light, the product is high and the earth is different, and the product is infinite.

score review
The author chooses "lightness" to read, and believes that lightness "is an open-minded mind, a feeling of being out of the world", "a confession in the depths of the soul, an accumulation of emotions, a blend of body and mind and nature, and a return to nature. The expression of true feelings is a state of mind that returns to nature."The article has a unique perspective, novel ideas, and fluent and beautiful language, which can quite reflect the candidates' profound language skills.

wonderful words
Lightness is the lone moon in the sky, the clear lotus out of the water, and the plum blossoms in the corner.

Tranquility is a kind of open-minded mind, a feeling of being born from the world.

The taste is light, and you can taste "the heart is as wide as the sun, the moon, and the sky and the earth", and "the lonely moon in the bright sky" and "the hut is in the human environment, without the noise of cars and horses".

read "sentiment"

(A candidate from Anhui)

The afternoon sun flows slowly, with a handful of clear tea, let your eyes lightly caress the pages of the book, and your soul is enlightened and sublimated in the warm air.

Reading is perception.

Reading Zhuangzi, what you read is ethereal and clear.The heart is like clear autumn water, and the boat is like an untied boat.He is willing to be a tree guarding the moon, he is willing to "drag its tail in the paint", just to guard the tree of pure soul.

Reading Li Bai, what you read is unrestrained and uninhibited. "Laughing up to the sky and going out, I am not a Penghao person", which created his heroism and elegance. "I am born to be useful, and I will come back after all the money is gone", which aroused his self-confidence and greatness.When the wine enters the guts, seven percent turns into moonlight, and the remaining three percent screams into sword energy, and it's half a prosperous Tang Dynasty when you spit it out.

Reading Sima Qian, what you read is uprightness and tenacity.In the face of cruel punishment and the ridicule of everyone, he did not give in, and he still stood at the pinnacle of history. "Study on the time between heaven and man, understand the changes of the past and the present, and form the words of the family." Upright and upright, leave the universe full of righteousness; worry and meditate, write a letter and history to reflect the world.It is Tai Shigong's awe-inspiring righteousness that makes him stand on the peak of life and scream, "People are mortal, and death is either heavier than Mount Tai or lighter than a feather!"

When reading Li Qingzhao, what I read is melancholy and sad. "Flowers drift by themselves and water flows by itself. One kind of lovesickness, two places of worry", what a trace of melancholy. "The phoenix tree is even more drizzle", what a ray of sadness. "To be a hero in life, to be a hero in death" is a kind of tragic. "I'm afraid that the boat in Shuangxi will not be able to carry it, and there will be many worries", what a heartbroken curtain it is.

"The geese on the edge of the cloud break the sky and the moon, and the sheep on the Longshang return to the grass." When reading Su Wu, what you read is loyalty, and what you realize is stalwart.

"I smile to the sky from the sidelines, and I will leave the Kunlun with my heart and gall." When reading Tan Sitong, what I read is righteousness, and what I realize is tenacity.

"Flowers wither and flowers fly all over the sky, who will show pity when the redness disappears?" When I read Sister Lin, I read the shyness of "half-rolled Hunan curtain and half-closed door", and the poignant beauty of "chanting to the moon with fragrance in my mouth". What I realized was the despair of "wind, knife, frost, and sword". What I realized was the sorrow and resentment of "the person who buried flowers today laughed like a fool, but who will be buried next year?"

"Don't ask me where I come from, my hometown is far away." Reading Sanmao, I read the optimism and heartiness that is in the desert but loves life, and I read the smiling face of the bird of paradise in my arms. It is the sadness that goes deep into the bone marrow in a happy heart, the despair immersed in life after losing a lover.

Reading is a feeling, the feeling is the smile of "raise your hands and work hard, and the two love each other", it is the hesitation of "the flowers fall helplessly, and the swallow returns like a deja vu", and the understanding is "there is no way to get rid of this feeling, so I frowned, but The hazyness of "on the heart" is the sigh of "reading the red medicine by the bridge, knowing who was born every year".

The long road of human growth, moved in the leisurely afternoon, shed tears in the quiet midnight, and realized in the twilight morning light, is beautiful.

Because of reading, because of perception.

The soul can be sublimated, and life can be sublimated!
score review
This article is an argumentative lyric prose.Focusing on the topic of "reading", candidates through careful taste and interpretation of characters or literary images such as Zhuangzi, Li Bai, Sima Qian, Li Qingzhao, Su Wu, Tan Sitong, Lin Daiyu, Sanmao, etc., link reading with perception and express "because of reading". , because of comprehension. The soul can be sublimated, and the life can be sublimated."In addition, a large number of quotations in the text are natural and smooth, without any sense of refinement, and the language is sonorous and powerful, which is catchy and lingering after reading.

classic case
Zhuangzi, Li Bai, Sima Qian, Li Qingzhao, Su Wu, Tan Sitong, Lin Daiyu, San Mao Huangshan Song, I understand you!

(A candidate from Anhui)

Can you understand the welcoming pine on the cliff of Mount Huangshan?

(End of this chapter)