College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 43 Seeing Yourself and Seeing Others (1)
(2004 National Volume 4)

composition test questions
(National volume, Gansu, Qinghai and other regions)

Read the text below, according to what the article says.

A rich man went to ask a philosopher why many people dislike him after he became rich.The philosopher took him to the window and said: "Look out, what do you see?" The rich man said: "I see many people outside." The philosopher took him to the mirror again and asked: "Now What did you see?" The rich man replied: "Myself." The philosopher smiled and said: "The window and the mirror are both made of glass, the only difference is that the mirror has a thin layer of silver. But because of this Yinzi will make you only see yourself and not others."

[Notice]

Please write an article of no less than 800 words on the topic of "seeing yourself and seeing others", make up your own ideas, choose your own style, and draw up your own title.Written content must be within the scope of the topic.

Question Analysis
This is a relational topic composition question.The purpose of the proposition is to inspire candidates to pay attention to others, and not to only care about themselves and ignore others because of certain interests.The material of the test question is a little philosophical story: the philosopher cleverly used the difference between glass and mirror to remind the businessman that because of a little money, he only sees himself and cannot see others, which is the reason for his unpopularity.People not only have responsibilities to themselves, but also have obligations to others. When dealing with a certain problem, they should consider from their own perspective, but also from the perspective of others; seeing their own advantages is as important as seeing the advantages of others. etc.

Writing Ideas Tips
Candidates can conceive stories based on the materials, telling about the performance and harm of seeing themselves but not others, or they can put aside the materials and think about the topic itself, such as explaining the importance of seeing oneself, the dialectical relationship between seeing oneself and seeing others, etc. .Candidates only need to focus on the topic and combine their own circumstances to choose a small and familiar entry point to the topic.

Full score sample essay
heart stage
(a candidate from Gansu)

There is a stage in everyone's heart, as big as the heart is, the stage is as big as it is.

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Maybe, you just enjoy the care of your parents as a matter of course, but you have never paid attention to their increasingly gray hair; maybe, you just use your extraordinary wisdom to attack your opponents in the market, and even go bankrupt. At this time, you will say "this is competition", but have you ever thought that this will attract more "staring tigers".Perhaps, you cheated and cheated just for some petty profits of your own. In the end, you betrayed your relatives, but you happily indulged in the "trophy" you earned so hard.

Maybe……

Perhaps, on the stage of your own heart, you have always been a solo dancer.

The universe was exploded by a tiny particle, and from then on, a beautiful earth appeared in the vast sky. Human beings appeared and multiplied, and gradually developed from the era of raw hair and blood, forming a society and possessing civilization.

The nature of a person's "individual" determines that it is impossible for him not to pretend to be himself and only see others, and he will also have selfish desires.However, things often have a "degree". People always live in a group. If they only have themselves in their eyes and do not leave room for others, then they will always live in the "self" until they are alone. die.

The ancient emperors concentrated all their powers in one body, but if he did not have the courage to "inclusive of all rivers, tolerance is great" and if he did not keep the people in his heart, then he would probably be a "boat that capsizes."And so are we moderns.After all, we don't have the right to respond to everyone, we always have to live among the crowd, we always want to be loved by others, so don't be that solo dancer, see others as well as yourself.

Looking back on the railing, it doesn't matter what we gave, what we got, what we gave, what we gained, as long as we keep others in our hearts, we can have no complaints or regrets; leaning on Lu, looking at what we will do and get what we will see in our eyes It doesn't matter what you hide in your heart, as long as you see yourself and others, you can have a clear heart.

Everyone has a stage in their hearts. The dancers on it have to see how big the stage is; and the size of the stage depends on how big your heart is!

score review
The author starts with how to look at his parents, lists various phenomena in daily life and the historical lessons of ancient emperors, and expresses that "if he only has himself in his eyes and does not leave room for others, then he will live forever in the The principle of "in the self".The ending part of the sentence is neat and powerful.

same place, different people
(a candidate from Gansu)

It is said that although Yu Gong is an honest and rough man, he thought carefully before moving the mountain.

"Two big mountains isolate our village from the development opportunities of the outside world. Mountains are the mountains that prevent us from seeing prosperity and prosperity, and prevent us from getting opportunities and development." Thinking of this, Yu Gong became even more energetic.

"For the benefit of the whole village for generations, I am not afraid of any mountain, no matter how big it is. Even if I have to do it alone and suffer to death, I am willing." Yugong said to himself.

Zhisou from the same village is a well-known retailer in the local area. He drives the camel team to transport the daily necessities that cannot be bought in the mountains from the cities outside the mountains, and then sells them to the villagers at high prices.Due to the inconvenience of going out of the mountain, the villagers had to accept the high-priced items from Zhisou in order to make a living.The wise old man broke out day by day relying on two big mountains.In fact, his wish is very simple: earn a lot of money, and then settle down in the city, so that he will no longer be a poor mountain person, and stop dealing with those smelly country bumpkins.

For the good life of the folks in the future, Yu Gong has been working from morning to night, rain or shine, since he started working.And Zhisou also travels among the mountains for his ideals, and his motivation to earn money is no worse than that of Yugong Yishan.Since both of them work in the mountains, there are more opportunities to meet each other.Hey, don't you think they chatted?
"Fool, learn more from me, earn money from those country bumpkins to make your life prosperous, how good is it for yourself if you work so hard?" The wise old man "educated" Yu Gong in a wise man's tone.

"For the sake of my fellow villagers, I don't care about my own good life. The villagers gradually come to help move the mountains, and I feel more and more that what I'm doing is right." Yugong said seriously.

"Oh, also, the villagers have great opinions on you, and some even scold you for being greedy and selfish. As a fellow villager, I advise you to change it."

"Stupid! Smart people only treat themselves well." Zhisou retorted.

"If you treat everyone well, you are truly treating yourself well." Yugong said calmly.

"You and I have different life principles, so I don't talk speculatively. But I hope you still change it so that you can do it yourself." With the change of more than a dozen springs, summers, autumns and winters, the inside of the mountain and the outside of the mountain have been connected by a road.It is very easy for the folks to go to the city to buy what they need.Yu Gong, who is already in his dying years, often looks at the passers-by on the roadside at the head of the village, with a satisfied and happy expression on his face.And Zhisou was driven away by the villagers two years ago and scolded.

In the spring of the second year, Yu Gong passed away.Perhaps as he said: "I can't take care of myself." As soon as everyone's business was done, he just went there.In order to commemorate him, the villagers erected a monument by the roadside at the entrance of the village.On the top of the monument is the head of Yu Gong.There is a passage engraved on the bottom: People who only see themselves will be stigmatized for thousands of years; people who always think about others will live forever.

score review
This composition adopts "new story rewriting", that is, using the ancient Chinese fable "The Foolish Old Man Moves the Mountain" as a blueprint, retells a story, endows it with new content and new meaning, which is unique and eye-catching.Candidates use the eyes of contemporary people to observe the ancient things of the ancients, and use modern consciousness to transform and develop ancient fables.The behaviors of the protagonists Yugong and Zhisou are re-contrasted.

a glass of water

(a candidate from Gansu)

Gently open the window, what do you see?Heaven, earth, sun and moon, the essence of plants and trees.A glass of boiled water is clear and transparent, and if you take a deep breath of hot air, you will instantly feel the moistness of spring, the heat of summer, the coolness of autumn, and the coldness of winter.

Young people like to drink coffee because it is strong; middle-aged people like to drink tea because of its fragrance; old people like to drink boiled water because it can illuminate others.

A glass of boiled water is very ordinary, but it allows you to see the whole world through it.Holding a glass of such water in your hand, if you take a sip in the morning, it will be light but slightly sweet, just like the nectar in the morning, dripping on the tip of the leaves.That is mother's love, can you see it?It is as pure as the snow lotus blooming on the mountain, and as deep as the stream flowing in the valley!Who is calling us to come in our deepest heart?Who is sowing selfless care on every inch of our skin?

"Whoever says that the heart of an inch of grass will be rewarded with three springs."

This kind of water is the essence of the sun and the moon, and it is the nectar brewed by Huayu.In thirst, this is irreplaceable by any drink.Through the water that travels through time and space, there is also a pair of eager eyes of teachers. When a seedling breaks out of the ground, there will be thousands of gardeners busy for her.

Along the Qingshi Road of the campus, along the familiar Willow Road, can you see that the buds that have just entered the school have grown strong and green?

"One piece of chalk, two feet of podium, three sentences of truth." Little by little, nourish the heart.

Through a glass of boiled water, you can see the whole world.Spring breeze and summer rain, autumn fruit and winter snow, grass, trees, insects and fish, birds and animals... and how small the self is!I once flew a kite on the hillside, but it was not as good as the birds in the sky; I once drank spring water in the valley, but the fish were more free; I tried to leave the house, but I never left the sight of grandpa and grandma exhort.

All this turned out to be love.Without love, how can thousands of people work for you; without love, how can you care for thousands of people?
I love this glass of boiled water, and all the people stand in front of them clearly.Don't be disturbed by the turbidity of coffee, don't be forgotten by the blindness of tea, and don't be arrogant by the boiling of soda.

It’s just plain boiled water like this, bland and tasteless, but I can taste a thousand flavors, whether it’s sweet, sour, bitter, or spicy. It’s other people’s love, affection, and care. Sincerely give.

(End of this chapter)