College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 53 Character Literary Image (2)
The past is like smoke, but it cannot take away such a familiar name, a name that people rely on, cast aside, admire, and despise—Zeng Guofan.Counting the peaks standing in the setting sun without words, perhaps what Zeng Guofan himself left to future generations is also a silent tablet without words.A genius who was outstanding in learning when he was young, a young Confucian who was admitted to Jinshi in his 20s, and a brave man who stood up to rescue the Qing government when the Taiping Heavenly Kingdom attacked internal and external troubles and the wind and rain were precarious.He used to be proud in the officialdom, a top-ranking official, but also suffered a lot and lived in the countryside; he once wore millions of armor on the battlefield, scolded Fang Qiu, and was defeated so badly that he almost drowned himself.This completely different and enigmatic life experience may be the reflection of the fusion of two completely different personalities in his life.

The inner sage and the outer king, yes, this is exactly the state of life that Guofan has been striving for all his life.I was shocked when I opened "Zeng Guofan's Family Letter", "Bing Jian", and the page belonging to Guofan's heart. Is this the pillar of the Qing court who became famous in the political arena, fought decisively on the battlefield, and was determined?No!Not like it!Moist and meaningful diction, earnest warnings, sincere and sincere confession; kindness, patience, and Cao Zhi's "compassion for martyrs".I can't help but marvel, I can't help but be impressed, and I can't help but reflect.Looking at the former sages, there is the coquettishness of Emperor Qin and Han Wu, the literary talent of Tang Zong and Song Zu, and the bow and eagle shooting of Genghis Khan, the arrogance of a generation.But who can be like Zeng Wenzheng, the inner sage and the outer king, who is honest and selfless when he is an official, and thirsty for talents; Arrogance; as a father and brother, he is strict with his relatives, and does not allow one person to attain the Tao, and the chickens and dogs ascend to heaven.Zeng Guofan is a person who can never understand, a literati, a Confucian general, and a good official.Perhaps only Chairman Mao Zedong's evaluation is the most pertinent: "Zeng Guofan is the most powerful figure in the local class."

After all, no one is perfect. Anqing City was destroyed, and it took three days to rebuild;

"If you don't see it, the water of the Yellow River comes up from the sky, rushing to the sea and never returning. If you don't see the mirror in the high hall with sad white hair, it looks like blue silk in the morning and snow in the evening." The head of the stele is full of characters", perhaps only history can best interpret Zeng Guofan's sentence when he broke down in Tianjing and wanted to add a yellow robe to his life: relying on the sky to shine on the sea and countless flowers, the flowing water and the high mountains know themselves .

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Candidates boldly pointed out that Zeng Guofan was a literati, Confucian general, and good official who were "relied on, cast aside by others, admired by others, and despised by others", and demonstrated it with specific facts, which is refreshing and enlightening.The article integrates narration, discussion, and lyricism. The materials are vivid and wonderful, and the angles are unique, which makes people have a more comprehensive and three-dimensional understanding of the historical figure Zeng Guofan.

fighter of life

(a candidate from Fujian)

He is not only the Taishan Beidou in the modern scientific world, but also a life fighter who will never stop fighting. Who is he?He is Stephen Hawking.

If his destiny is the dilapidated flower stand, then because of his strong will, it becomes blooming and dazzling; if his destiny is the dark night sky, then because of his strong will, it becomes full of stars, Shining brightly; if his fate is the barren land, then because of his strong will, it becomes lush and green.Yes, his success is not only his extraordinary scientific achievements, but also his indomitable will and incomparable confidence in life. This is a great man of an era and a fighter in life.Let's think about his achievements first. With his wisdom and hard work, he wrote the famous "A Brief History of Time", which promoted the rapid development of the scientific community and made great contributions to the world.At the same time, he is also honored as one of the world's great scientists alongside Newton in Britain and Einstein in Germany.He is enough to climb to the top of today's scientific pyramid and become the most dazzling North Star.

While we marvel at his extraordinary achievements in his career, we can't help but lament his misfortune of fate and his incomparable tenacity of will.In him, not only shines the incomparable brilliance of a wise man, but also exudes a kind of toughness unique to a fighter. He is the crystallization of spiritual wisdom and the gathering of personality strength.He, the fighter of life.

I remember that at a press conference, a female reporter asked an extremely sharp question that silenced the audience.She said: "Mr. Hawking, don't you feel sad for being fixed on a wheelchair?" As we all know, Hawking is a paralyzed person, only some fingers can move, and his fate is extremely tragic.However, Hawking calmly typed these words on the keyboard with his fingers: "I am not sad, but I am very fortunate, because although God fixed me in a wheelchair, he gave me enough to imagine everything in the world and enough to inspire The ability to fight in life. In fact, God is very fair to people.” His answer received the most enthusiastic applause from the audience.Yes, he defeated fate and defeated himself.Dear friends, have you been impressed by Hawking's self-confidence of "breaking through the clouds every day" and his tenacity of "not moving before the collapse of Mount Tai"?Yes, the fighting spirit of life has been fully demonstrated in him, and the fighting spirit of life has been perfectly inlaid in him.

Perhaps, we will encounter setbacks of one kind or another in our life, but we must firmly believe that our destiny is in our own hands. Let us pat the dust on us with Liu Yuxi's open-mindedness of "struggling for spring back to the sky", Continue our life journey and pursue our ideals!Hawking, he is the fire, lighting up the lamp for us to go forward; Hawking, he is the lamp, illuminating our way forward.

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The selection of examples in this article is quite typical, the combination of fiction and reality is perfect, and the coordination of narrative and discussion is just right.The language expression is very good, and a variety of rhetorical techniques are used extremely brilliantly; through vivid metaphors, the examinee interprets these rational things into a living picture of life, showing the student's profound cultural accumulation and solid language skills.

Brave, warrior!
(a candidate from Fujian)

who is it?I once hesitated, and then I picked up the pen with full enthusiasm and stabbed at the enemy's throat; who is it?Once shouted, and then inspired generations of aspiring young people to march forward bravely on the road paved with thorns, and pursue the light; who is it?I used to grieve for the dead because I couldn't always be a ox of the people and do one more thing for the revolution.It's you, Mr. Lu Xun!You are a hero who knows the current affairs in the vicissitudes of life; with swords and swords, you are a warrior who will never fall!Zhuangzai, you are a giant in the hearts of thousands of people.

There is a sense of fortitude and justice in your eyebrows, and your sharp eyes reveal the ugly side of the society at that time!You have seen Mrs. Xianglin who was oppressed to death by traditional feudal ideology; you have seen the sad and indisputable Ah Q; you have also seen how your childhood friend Runtu became numb.So, you write down these ugliness with paper, use pen instead of gun, hit the current situation, and wake people up from their dreams.You said that people's diseases need to be treated with words, not just medicine.Slowly, some people rubbed their sleepy eyes and saw the filth; they stood up under your guidance to make a revolution, not only for themselves, but also for the country.All of this gave you hope, you smiled, and you saw batches of warriors preparing to go to the battlefield just like you!Silence, silence, if you don't break out in silence, you will perish in silence!A true warrior dares to face up to the blood dripping on the battlefield, dare to face the bleak life!

You are like a red sun bursting with red flames, burning hot in the calm and pale sky. The life of a warrior is not afraid of hardships and dangers. In the purgatory of the hellish world, when mourning for "Jun Liu Hezhen" again and again Take the test.Warrior, you may be the fire phoenix that is about to nirvana.

You cherish the youth, and your two books are the hope of the little conductor.When you know that there is a spark of revolution around you, you will care with undying enthusiasm.You always firmly believe that a single spark can start a prairie fire!You wrote an elegy for Mr. Liu Hezhen, "I can't bear to see my friends become new ghosts, and I am angry to look for small poems in the knife cluster".Have you ever been afraid!As everyone knows, your actions will make more Mr. Liu Hezhen stand up. Today, if you are still alive, you will see the glory left by the victory of the revolution.People call you like this: Warrior, an immortal literary giant, a spiritual giant who will live forever!

Your indomitable, firm and fearless, more like a flag held high!The passage of time can wash away old mysteries, but you—the glory of a warrior will always be engraved in history and deep in people's hearts.nice!Warrior, listen, the pace of the people...

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This student closely follows the meaning of the title and describes the glorious deeds of a generation of literary master Mr. Lu Xun from multiple angles.The full text is rich in content, rigorous in structure, concise in writing, sophisticated in writing style, and uses many rhetorical techniques such as parallelism, quotation, questioning, and antithesis, making the article elegant, charming, and deeply moving.

Xue Baochai's Broken Soul Grand View Garden
(a candidate from Fujian)

"Yellow flowers are piled up all over the ground, haggard and worn out, who can pick them now!?"

Accompanied by mournful sobs, Baochai walked slowly from the gate of the Grand View Garden.Gold hairpins and silver accessories are enough to show her wealth, but makeup can't cover up the wrinkles around her eyes.

20 years like a day.The youthful appearance of the past is no longer there, and the slightly flashing white hair is the best proof; the bustling Grand View Garden in the past is also in ruins, and the fallen leaves all over the ground are an excellent explanation and interpretation.

Baochai dismissed the girl and sat alone on a small stone by the pool.The son is now an important minister of the imperial court, and his family is prosperous, so he has already chosen another site to build the compound.And she, while trying her best to bring up her son, has already become empty.

20 years of staying alone in an empty room, thousands of nights of endless lovesickness, all turned into hot tears to wash off the makeup, and the bumps on the face are the best interpretation of the years.

Tears fell down.

Baochai smiled bitterly.All the while, she was under tremendous pressure.Everyone blames her for being ruthless and killing sister Lin, but who sympathizes with her 20 years of loneliness?

When Jia's mansion was raided, she was the one who helped deal with it under the humiliating identity.

When Baoyu became a monk, it was she who suppressed her pain and stabilized Mrs. Wang.

When her son was born, she was the one who abandoned her eldest lady's temper and worked hard to earn money for him to eat, dress and dress well.

How many sleepless nights, how many times the embroidery needle pierced her snow-white skin—the skin that once fascinated Baoyu, and how many times she hugged her son and cried in her dreams.Everything has turned into tears today.

Baochai wiped away the tears from her eyes, and the pearls and jade on her head made a crisp sound under the wind.A butterfly flew by, and when she raised her fan to take a picture, she stopped.The years are not forgiving, the old fun is gone, and even the strength is exhausted.The picture of the spring flower girl going to the butterfly has long since disappeared under the erosion of the years.

She closed her eyes in pain, remembering the teachings of her parents when she was a child.Feudal ethics killed her nature, she pursued glory and wealth at all costs, she got it, but she lost it again.She was not reconciled, her love was based on money, and she even indirectly forced her beloved sister Lin to death.Everything is so natural, but it is heartbreaking.

"The person who buried the flowers today laughed like a fool, but who will be buried in another year?"

Sister Lin's voice came from far away in the blue sky.

Baochai looked around in surprise.Is it a hallucination?She sat down again.Now she has nothing to worry about, and her son has a successful career.But she has infinite remorse, what did she get?Could it be that she is just a tool for the Jia family to carry on the family line?Thinking of this, she became resentful again: why should she live in this dynasty without family affection or love.The decadent dynasty is falling, son?She laughed miserably again.

After taking a few quick steps, she suddenly understood how helpless Sister Lin was at the beginning.It's all this corrupt dynasty.

"Flowers wither and flowers fly all over the sky, who will pity when the red flowers are gone?"

Accompanied by a dismal cry, a burst of water splashed, and a ray of fragrance disappeared immediately.

The world blames it for being too smooth,

I don't know how ups and downs my life experience is.

Fragrance soul has passed away,

I only blame the dynasty for being too corrupt.

score review
In the form of a "continuation", this article takes the character "Xue Baochai" in the classic literary masterpiece "A Dream of Red Mansions" as the main subject, and fictionalizes the scenes, characters and stories of the Grand View Garden decades later for readers.The storyline, the character of the characters are integrated with the original work, the psychological depiction of the characters is delicate, and the language is fluent. It is indeed a rare "sequel" masterpiece.

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