College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 63 Miscellaneous (1)
(2003 Shanghai Volume)

composition test questions
Miscellaneous has many meanings, both positive and negative.Please contact life or science, culture, art, etc., use "miscellaneous" as the topic, and write an article of about 1000 words from the angle of your choice.The style is not limited (do not write it as poetry).

Question Analysis
The topic of "miscellaneous" is very individual, and the individuality is reflected in the unique perspective of the questioner.Candidates may not know how to start when they first look at the topic, and their psychological preparation may not be sufficient, but after careful analysis, they still have something to say, and it is reasonable to say.Although this topic is unexpected, it is very helpful to guide students to read more, think more, and practice more. "Miscellaneous" articles actually mean that everything in the world is an article. The things in the book are articles, and the things in society are also articles. Focus on accumulation on weekdays, so you will naturally have something to say during the exam.Judging from the topic itself, "miscellaneous" is very inclusive.The world is all-encompassing and can involve science, culture, art, and all aspects of life. "Miscellaneous" is everyone, and the atmosphere of the title lies in the fact that it reveals the law, that is, human life and the natural world are rich and colorful instead of monotonous and poor.From the perspective of proposition selection, it can comprehensively examine the quality of candidates.It can not only test whether the candidate's knowledge is broad or not, and whether his thinking is open or not, but also test the candidate's outlook on life and value orientation.

Writing Ideas Tips
"Miscellaneous" has the breadth of science and technology, culture, art, etc., as well as emotional praise and criticism, and scientific conception.The "miscellaneous" things written by candidates can be regular things that are miscellaneous and orderly, miscellaneous but not chaotic, so as to write the truth, goodness and beauty of things; or vice versa, writing miscellaneous and disorderly things Opportunities and challenges brought by things to science and technology, culture, art, etc., so as to write about people's perseverance and spirit of seeking truth, goodness, and beauty.Ancient and modern, Chinese and foreign, astronomy and geography, candidates only need to circle around one center to organize materials. In general, they can write about the flourishing of art, the contention of a hundred schools of thought in science, the inclusiveness of national culture, and the inclusiveness of cities! ... In small aspects, you can write about your extensive reading, rich travel experience, and diverse interests and hobbies... In short, you should write your life perception and philosophy, revealing the profound connotation of "miscellaneous".

Full score sample essay
"Miscellaneous" emotion
(a candidate from Shanghai)

Hello everyone, my name is "Za", I believe everyone will recognize me, today, I would like to take this opportunity to confide my heart to everyone.

As we all know, 5000 years ago, my father, Cangjie, thought of making a character on a whim, so I, along with thousands of my brothers and sisters, came to the world.At first, I was not so ugly like my brothers, but I was defined as "chaotic" and "messy" all my life, and I was labeled as a "derogatory" faction, and was despised by the world.So, gradually, I became more and more ugly, and my reputation became worse and worse.

For thousands of years, people have frowned at the sight of me and the words made up of me, such as noisy, chaotic, etc., which hurt me greatly.So, in these thousands of years, I can only hide in the corner of the dictionary with a big black pot on my back.

Not long ago, I went out for a walk, and when I got home, I couldn't help but "come back with tears in my eyes", lamenting the greatness of science and democracy.

The thing is like this, I went to a bookstore to visit a brother, and at the door, I saw ×× magazines for sale, and I was surprised: my name was actually on it.When I met the old man and asked about this matter, he patted me and said with a smile: "Brother, now society is progressing and developing faster and faster, and information updates and production are also becoming more frequent. In order to keep up with the pace of social development, people , You need to know all kinds of information, so many things are gathered together, it becomes a magazine for people to refer to and study." Seeing me smiling smugly, he said: "Let's go, look elsewhere."

Facing the spring breeze, we came to the Academy of Sciences with light steps.The brother pointed to an elder who was focused on books and said to me: "He is the scientist Yuan Longping who developed hybrid rice. Hybrid rice is a brand-new technology. It uses two different rices with their own advantageous genes. Using genetically modified technology to synthesize high-yielding rice, the term hybrid rice is now widely known, and your reputation is getting bigger and bigger, and everyone's impression of you is gradually getting better."

With excitement, I left the Academy of Sciences with my head held high and came to a nearby high school.In a biology class, I suddenly heard the biology teacher talking about "hybrid superiority" to the students. When I heard it, I couldn't help but feel a nameless anger: Isn't this laughing at me?Seeing my angry face, my brother chuckled and said, "I think you have an old idea. The so-called hybrid in biology means that the creature has two alleles of Aa, and this kind of creature is often more adaptable to the environment." I heard Then I was ashamed and ashamed.After that, I listened to another chemistry class, listening to the chemistry teacher explain the definition of "hybridization" and its advantages.

Feeling moved, I returned home, feeling the changes in the concept of the world.Once upon a time, I wandered along the Miluo River, wanting to imitate Qu Yuan, and it was all over.Now, when I see my name everywhere and hear my title over and over again, I am satisfied. At the same time, I finally feel that it does not matter if a word is derogatory. .

score review
In this article, "Miscellaneous" uses the tone of No. 1 to narrate the travel experience, which justifies the traditional name of "Miscellaneous".The article is traced by travel, clear and natural; what is more valuable is that candidates can apply what they have learned, close to reality, and integrate literature, technology, agriculture, physics, chemistry and other knowledge in one furnace, and write with ease and flexibility , It fully proves that "miscellaneous" is necessary for the development of today's science and technology.

Datong

(a candidate from Shanghai)

Turning over the test paper, I saw the composition question - "Miscellaneous", I felt like laughing, it really fits my current mood, complicated, nervous but a little excited, uneasy but full of expectations, how can the word "Miscellaneous" Amazing! (laughs) So, I calmed down, closed my eyes and meditated to say "Miscellaneous" from the beginning.

With some difficulty, turning over the heavy pages of history, you will see traces of "miscellaneous" from time to time.First, the heroes of the Spring and Autumn and Warring States ruled Kyushu, and then Qin Shihuang ended this mixed scene and unified the world; then the Three Kingdoms stood up and divided the world evenly, and was replaced by the Wei and Jin Dynasties; then the melee of the Northern and Southern Dynasties ended with Tang; The chaos of the country was ended by the Northern Song Dynasty, and history repeated the cycle from chaos to unity again and again, as if this was an eternal theorem.And history, in this giant wheel that keeps turning, has quietly gone through thousands of years.

The influence of "miscellaneous" on us is far more than history. If you are lucky enough to travel the north and south of the Yangtze River and take a look at the folk customs and houses in various places, you will know how extraordinary the influence of the word "miscellaneous" is.As far as residential houses in various places are concerned, Huizhou is a place where salt merchants live, so the buildings there are "twists and turns like a wit's pen", with white powder walls, dark roof tiles, row upon row of animal-shaped brackets, high walls and uneven walls. The shape all reveals an atmosphere of "Jia and Confucianism"; if you go to Fujian, the Hakka architecture in southern Fujian will give people a rock-solid and round aesthetic sense; if you come to the gardens in the south of the Yangtze River, among the winding paths Among the Yiran pavilions, you can't help but recite the poem "how deep is the courtyard"; but if you climb the majestic and magnificent Great Wall, you will feel the momentum of being completely cleared and enlightened.In just one China, the architectural styles are so different and diverse.But it is this seemingly disorganized and irrelevant construction style that has formed a unique Chinese brick and wood structure building system, occupying an important place in the forest of world architecture.So we can see the cheerfulness of architectural art from it, and the perfect integration of "miscellaneous" can be seen in its artistic inclusion.

I actually found that the vast world is mostly messy but well-organized, not only from the perspective of humanities, but also so clearly reflected in the spirit of the city.From the perspective of this lovely city where I live, tradition and foreign style, fashion and nostalgia, any kind of culture in the world can find a foothold here.It is precisely because of the inclusive and inclusive spirit that Shanghai is orderly but not chaotic, but exudes a mixed charm that makes people intoxicated.

I also think of the vast land of the Central Plains, where 56 ethnic groups live together, and we have a common name: Sons and Daughters of China.

I also want to think that a hundred schools of thought contend, that there are three religions and nine streams, and they are both called Chinese culture.

At the intersection of time and space, all "miscellaneous" merge together, regardless of boundaries, contained in this magical universe.

It really meets such a standard. "Everyone is beautiful, the beauty of the beauties is beautiful, the beauty is shared, and the world is united." We advocate "miscellaneous", because if there is no "miscellaneous", there will be no "great harmony".From miscellaneous to same, this is my little insight.

score review
The article starts with the folk customs and dwellings of various places to explain how extraordinary the influence of the word "za" is, and draws the conclusion that "'za' is so perfectly integrated, its artistic inclusion can be seen", and then ingeniously Transition, use "I still want... I still want to..." to open up the ink, connect with reality, and affirm the meaning of "miscellaneous".The author's thinking is open, and the pen can be retracted and retracted freely. The article stops and the readers don't think about it.The composition in the examination room is indeed commendable.

furnace
(a candidate from Shanghai)

The word "miscellaneous" often corresponds to "pure", and its status has always been neglected, just as those who engage in "pure literature" often walk with their heads held high when they see "popular novelists"; For commercial films, the word "art" is even more talked about. Of course, "art" is what I pursue, and "art" belongs to commercial films, nothing else, but there is "art" to make money. It is these people who pursue "miscellaneous" that lead the times and open up new eras one after another.

(End of this chapter)