College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 65 The Choice of the Heart (1)
(2002 National Volume)

composition test questions
There was a climber who encountered a snowstorm on the way, and he knew that if he couldn't find a shelter from the wind, he would die.He walked and walked, and suddenly he bumped into something stiff under his feet. He looked through the snow and saw that it was a frozen person. He thought to himself: should we save him or continue on?After thinking over and over again, he decided to save this person.So he took off his gloves and began to massage the frozen man's body.After some hard work, he finally woke him up.So, the two walked out of the snow with their arms.

Perhaps everyone may not be able to encounter such a choice of life and death, but we will also face some choices related to touching the soul in our lives. In this case, how should we choose?Why did you make such a choice?

[Notice]

请以“心灵的选择”为话题写一篇作文，范围不要超出这个内容之外：1、立意自定。2、文体自选。3、题目自拟。4、不少于800字。5、不得抄袭。

Question Analysis
This composition question is closely related to the "Outline of Civic Morality Construction", which is very close to the actual life of the students.Everyone will encounter various contradictions in their life and need to make correct choices and value judgments. Therefore, every candidate has something to say, and it is not difficult to select candidates.It can be seen from the materials that the climbers make a decision after a lot of "overwhelming" thinking in the depths of their hearts, and the result is a "win-win". Embody emotional and moral values.The prompt "Things that touch the soul and require a choice" clearly puts forward this point, which has a guiding role in the selection of materials.The prompt "The scope should not exceed this content" reminds candidates that if they write content that has nothing to do with "spiritual choice" (such as other choices), it will be regarded as deviating from the meaning of the question.Although this requirement is not quite the same as in 2001 in terms of expression, it is the same in terms of its function—the questioner uses "orientation" to remedy the disadvantages of candidates who are too broad in topic and easy to set questions, so the topic composition still needs to pay attention The idea of ​​reviewing the question.

Writing Ideas Tips
The core of the topic of "choice of mind" is not the choice itself, but the process of spiritual struggle.Analyzing the three different realms of reviewing questions, its basic meaning lies in "realistic choice", and further extended to "life choice".However, candidates should not just stay at this level, but must clarify the essential meaning of the topic.The key to this topic is not "choice" itself, but "giving up". In other words, the essence of "choice" lies in "giving up". "Giving up" is a test of human nature, much harder than "choosing".A person who can "give up" should of course be a person who can "choose".And "giving up" is more generous, more selfless, and more open-minded than "choosing".

Full score sample essay
Remonstrance Qu Yuanshu
(a candidate from Jiangsu)

Duke Qu:

After thousands of years, is it safe and sound?
Every time I read the masterpiece, or stand at the desk, or watch the dragon boat race, and the rice dumpling is thrown into the belly of the fish, I am deeply moved.After thinking about it again and again, I can't help but feel sorry for your ending or "end".With your literary skills and martial arts strategy, how many people in the future generations can rival you, why bother to throw a thousand weights lightly for a mere king of Chu?
Thinking about it, the old man was too stubborn. "You can't do it, you can float in the sea on a pine tree", if Confucius left behind, why should you hang yourself on a tree!Why give up the whole forest for one tree?If you don't want to cross the ocean and go abroad, there are still several options to choose from.

One said: Abandon official and follow literature.Your "Li Sao", "Heavenly Questions", and "Ode to Orange" are famous all over the world. If you use this as a solicitation, which literati would dare not follow?If you want to set up a cram school, not to mention a dozen pieces of dried meat, it will cost hundreds of yuan, thousands of yuan.At that time, disciples will publish articles and hype it up, won't you gain both fame and fortune?Le Zai Le Zai!You may have heard Wang Xuan, the founder of Peking University, say: "In recent years, I have not achieved much, but I will have an additional title every year, three materials 'academician'." This is the first plan.

The second said: half official, half hidden.If you don't care about official position, you might as well hang a public title in the government and receive a salary, "picking chrysanthemums under the eastern fence, and seeing Nanshan leisurely".Get another three wives and four concubines, full of children and grandchildren."Father" and "father" that one, for sons, grandsons, tickets, cars, roads, how can you have the leisure to "search up and down"?This is option two.

Three said: use "oil" to moisten the official.If you are determined to become an official, you must add some "oil" and have some taboos.The truth, the truth, and the bottom line must not be spoken.If wars are raging everywhere, you have to sing "Fire Burns Prosperity"; if you draft documents, you have to sing praises.For the lord's concubines, whoever is favored must focus on flattery.You know, the crony wind and the pillow wind are stronger than the twelve-level typhoon.Don't you see, isn't Zhu Shijian of the Hongta Group acting at the orders of his wife?If it really doesn't work, I have to take away my conscience temporarily, reluctantly part with my love, and send Chanjuan respectfully, so as to win the "majestic grace of the emperor".Considering the subtlety of your writing and the dexterity of playing Chen, you will definitely be appreciated. What about Jin Shang, Ling Yizilan, Sima Zijiao and others?But "while talking and laughing, the mast and scull were wiped out in ashes".This is option three.

The seniors can choose one of the above three strategies.Now that your ideas are changing, you must not stick to your will; besides, once your stalwart body is lost in running water, what a pity all living beings will feel!
A mere kid, disturbing the seniors, was extremely terrified.

That is to say
Change your mind.

late birth
Certain year, certain month, certain day
score review
The article adopts a written style, by commenting on the ancients and ancient events, and pointing out the current disadvantages, reflecting the examinee's profound cultural accumulation and insight into social life.The content of the article is profound, and the language is meaningful and elegant, which is a rare masterpiece in the examination room.

Choice
(Candidate No. [-] from Zhejiang)

The setting sun melts gold, the twilight merges, and night begins to shroud the gloomy cell.Being in prison, I never thought about it, but it should be expected.Beishuai gave me two choices: I can enjoy the glory and wealth in my life, otherwise it is "a dead end".I am speechless, letting my thoughts take me away...

Living in troubled times, he was ordered to be in crisis.Although I am well aware of the corruption of the imperial court where I live, but as a passionate man, how can I disregard the safety of the country and the lives and deaths of the people.I remember when I was trapped in the north, Lu Shimeng once persuaded: "In troubled times, you should choose good branches to live in. Although you are virtuous, will you be able to resist the Japanese?" I also remember a colleague who returned home from illness said: "The whole world When everything is turbid, don’t hide.” Yes, hiding is always the best way for people to escape from reality.The big hermit hides in the city, and the small hermit hides in the wild.How could there not be a few barren hills in the whole world to settle that lonely heart?But I know that no matter where I go, I can't make my heart return to indifference.Didn't Qu Zi say: "The whole world is turbid and I am pure alone, and everyone is drunk and I am alone awake." It is true that being sober is a very painful thing, but I will not be covered by the dust of the world with my bright body.

"Abandon the dark and turn to the bright, choose the good and follow it." Bei Shuai's words still seem to linger in my ears.Life or death, choose one. "Huh", I sneered, I used to think that there are thousands of choices in the world, but when there are only two choices left in life, how sad it is.In fact, this is no longer a choice.Since I was ordered to go north, since I criticized the enemy and slandered the chieftain, since I joined forces to fight against the Yuan Dynasty, and since I fought alone, countless times, I have made choices.Death - not what I want.But when humiliating life and tragic death hang together, I choose it without hesitation.Maybe later generations will say that I am stupid, but integrity is indeed more important than my life in my opinion. What I want is a bright world. When I can't get it, I can only call for it with blood.Yes, the darkness of the world cannot destroy the light of a single candle!

I dragged the heavy chains to the window, the cold stars hang in the sky, the bright moon shines brightly, woohoo!May the people's livelihood no longer be difficult, and enjoy peace and happiness.I spread the paper and swiped a brush, and burst into tears: the journey in troubled times, the night is heavy, and there are endless melancholy.The mountains and rivers of the old country, looking northwest, the waste pond is deep in spring and people are still.Back in the day, gold and iron horses swore to die in the Central Plains.I can't bear to look back, and I can't continue my lonely dream. ... I hope that the loyalty will shine, and the history will be heard all over the world.

Since ancient times, no one has died in life, so keep your loyal heart to reflect the history!
This is my choice!

score review
With the help of unique imagination, the student quoted the past and the present, edited the screen, and reproduced Wen Tianxiang's turbulent inner turmoil.Finally, the article ends with Wen Tianxiang's words and poems, especially "No one in life has died since ancient times, keep his heart to reflect the history" and the concluding sentence "This is my choice!" It's gut-wrenching.The writing style of the article is skillful, the language is mature, and the connection is natural. It is indeed a rare masterpiece in the narrative category.

leave the way home
(Candidate No. [-] from Zhejiang)

Celica said that life is a story.It is also said that life is strong tea.But I prefer to say that life is a journey.

I don't know if passers-by turn around and go home when they are in trouble at a fork in the road.The concept of home has become increasingly blurred.When I chose the intersection to go forward, I once rebelliously and naively left home behind and wanted to enjoy the joy of the road alone.

After taking the train and passing through some small stations in the countryside, I can always catch a glimpse of some dim-witted people.What kind of people are those!Leaning, lying down, numb, sluggish.Their road disappeared into the sky along these sleepers, and they did not know where they led.Whenever this happens, I always look back at the same endless sleepers behind the car-home is in the sky.

(End of this chapter)