College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 84 Leave it for tomorrow (1)
(Tianjin Volume 2005)

composition test questions
Write a composition with the title "Leave it for Tomorrow".

There is no limit to the style of writing except poetry, no less than 800 words.

Question Analysis
This is a title essay.Although the text of the composition test is less than 2005 characters, the content, scope, requirements, and key points of the writing are expressed very clearly, concisely and clearly. "Leave it for tomorrow" is also quite poetic.However, due to the absence of the object of "stay", the meaning behind it left a huge space for the imagination of the candidates. What to "leave" for tomorrow, how to "keep" and how to "give"?It is enough to arouse the candidates' rich thinking, and it is enough to make the candidates expand their thinking wings, and then filter and organize related themes to determine the focus of their composition.And the specific composition "image" of "tomorrow" can inspire all candidates to connect their own future and future with the future and prospects of society and the country, from small "me" to big "me", from study to life, From hard work to joy, from request to dedication...open your mind, base yourself on today, and look forward to the future. The topic "Leave it for tomorrow" can not only arouse candidates' thinking on the improvement of personal quality, but also arouse their attention to the protection of the ecological environment, the harmony of the social environment, the planning of national sustainable development, and the coordination of human survival and development. and many other descriptions.Therefore, the [-] Tianjin College Entrance Examination composition question "Leave it for Tomorrow" has lofty intentions, profound realm and rich connotations.As long as it has real feelings and a healthy theme, you can write a suitable article.

Writing Ideas Tips
The unlimited style and open proposition lead many students to write narrative articles. This style is low in difficulty and easy to conceive, but it takes a lot of work to write well.What is left for tomorrow?Is it the apology that I have been wanting to say but didn't say after the friction with my classmates?Or the inexplicably sweet and melancholy feelings of adolescence?You can write about leaving tears for tomorrow to encourage people to overcome difficulties and continue to fight courageously; you can also write about leaving sweet spring water for tomorrow, telling people to pay attention to environmental protection when paying attention to production development; you can also write about what I want to leave for tomorrow , what our generation wants to leave for tomorrow; we can also write about what a certain person in history wants to leave for tomorrow; we can also write about people living today, but we must think about tomorrow, how can we truly think about tomorrow? ,etc. The topic "Leave for Tomorrow" is easy to write empty and vague. It is best to make it bigger and smaller, and write about a little bit. The key is to write the meaning and value of "Leave for Tomorrow".

Full score sample essay
leave it for tomorrow
(Candidate No. [-] in Tianjin)

Looking back suddenly, the laughter is like a cloud of smoke, and the years flow away without leaving a trace.

Don't think that the future is always beautiful, the road is far away, the world is unpredictable, maybe from tomorrow, the beauty will no longer exist.Don't be sad for the right and wrong of people now, let alone be decadent for the right and wrong of things in the future.

The wind is gone, following my old dream.All that was left was the air, and every strand of it was filled with cool air.

Today, I am like a lonely fallen leaf, who can only appreciate the poignant beauty that drifts away. I am also like a cloud, looking for beauty in the sky.I leave my hopes for tomorrow.

The waiting time is always like a sleepless night, helpless and long.But there is a hope in my heart, a hope, and this kind of waiting will be meaningful.I believe that the morning sun will bloom brilliantly tomorrow, retain the beauty of yesterday, welcome a new day, and let yesterday's thoughts become the realization of tomorrow's goals. The unexpected joy of success will bring me incomparable happiness and satisfaction.

Today's fatigue and pain are just to cast tomorrow's glory.Are you willing to pay for it?Even if you accept the pain by default, have you ever been discouraged and shaken when difficulties come?The most important thing is to persevere tenaciously, not to be distracted by external interference, not to frown because of temporary worries about gains and losses, and to stop talking.And every restraint means stronger than before.

Tomorrow is not a mystery to anyone, live sincerely, pursue persistently, and the rope of destiny is within your grasp.We all yearn for the dream life, but none of us can live in the dream forever.

On the road of life, it is impossible to be smooth sailing, most people's life road is bumpy.And it is precisely because of this rugged life landscape that makes life more fulfilling and meaningful.

My heart is full of sadness and loneliness. With the passage of time, the colors in my life have been washed pale by the waves of the years, and the sadness deep in my heart will sweep away my already very fragile psychological defense from time to time.But my heart is not silent, I still long for the beauty of tomorrow.

Leaving it for tomorrow is not a promise that passes away with the wind, but a sudden repentance after going through vicissitudes. Humans are emotional animals, and they need to guard their own beliefs, which are the source of motivation for life continuation.

Leave it for tomorrow, and you will get the nourishment of a clear spring in your heart, and this nourishment will keep you passionate and passionate about life.

score review
Candidates string heart words into a soul necklace, each feeling is full of cherishment and a touch of sadness, showing the author's inner monologue, a yearning and pursuit of life.The language of the article is beautiful, the content is rich, the purpose is clear, the center is highlighted, and the interpretation of the topic and the perfect expression are just right, which completes an excellent work in the examination room.

wonderful words
Looking back suddenly, the laughter is like a cloud of smoke, and the years flow away without leaving a trace.

The wind is gone, following my old dream.All that was left was the air, and every strand of it was filled with cool air.

The waiting time is always like a sleepless night, helpless and long.But there is a hope in my heart, a hope, and this kind of waiting will be meaningful.

leave it for tomorrow
(Candidate No. [-] in Tianjin)

One afternoon in 3030, Yibo sat at the window in frustration, staring blankly at the empty buildings before him.The gray-yellow sky overhead was still drizzling, and there was an unpleasant smell in the air.Hey, it's acid rain again!Ipo couldn't help but sighed deeply.

Just a few days ago, the last group of people on Earth also collectively moved to the constructed Mars, abandoning this devastated human homeland.At that time, Yibo was resting in the apartment on the 126th floor underground. When he received the E-mail notification, the elevator had been cut off. When he climbed to the ground panting, the rocket had already lifted off.Desperate, he shouted to the sky: "There is still me! You can't throw me away like this!" No one responded, and all the mechanical equipment on the ground were cut off. Ipo couldn't communicate with people on Mars, let alone People didn't plan to build a space station between Mars and Earth-the cost is too high.

Emptiness and fear struck again and again, almost making Ipo breathless.Suddenly, "Dongdongdong", there was a knock on the door of the studio, did anyone leave yet?Yibo forgot that he could use the remote control to open the door, so he rushed to the door and opened it.ah!

"Okay, it's really not gone yet!" the golden monkey roared angrily, "Human beings are so selfish! Make the earth like this, just get away!"

Before Yibo came back to his senses, the other animals were chattering and swearing, and the red-crowned crane cleared its throat and shouted: "Be quiet, everyone, please be quiet! Let me say a few words. Don't be angry, sir. The monkey is a bit too much, but what it said is true. Although our IQ is not as high as yours, we know who polluted our shared home like this. Trees are as rare as animals. Not really. The climate is erratic, it snows in June, and it’s either acid rain or floods in January. The sky is yellow, the soil is yellow, and even the air is full of yellow sand and carbon dioxide. Who caused all this decay? Mars will be like this in the future, so what should we do then? Run again?"

The red-crowned cranes were still chattering.Yibo's heart is extremely complicated. Why do humans migrate?Why is the earth like this?Yibo shed tears, for the poor earth, and for the more shameful human beings.

"I want to atone for mankind, build today, and leave a beautiful earth for tomorrow." Yibo made up his mind and began to work like a foolish old man moving mountains. He thought, planting a hundred trees a day can create billions for tomorrow One of the best.Even if this life is exhausted, he will do his best to transform the devastated home and leave a warm and harmonious society for tomorrow.

score review
The article takes science fiction fairy tales as the genre, develops rich imagination and reasonable associations, and fabricates a story a thousand years later: Ipo fails to escape the riddled earth and becomes the last human on earth.How to face the reality in front of us, how to coexist with other animals on the earth again?Yibo is determined to solve these problems with practical actions, that is, Yibo's determination at the end, and he does not forget to point the question at the end.Candidates have bold imagination, rich associations, and novel themes, which are the outstanding features of this article.

leave it for tomorrow
(Candidate No. [-] in Tianjin)

In ancient times, there were Li Bai's heroism of "don't make the golden cup empty to the moon", Du Fu's melancholy of "the world is a sand gull", and Liu Yong's gracefulness of "holding his hands and looking at his tearful eyes".Talking to the ancients, thinking about thousands of years, I can't help asking what kind of life will I have?Is it wisdom, contemplation or envy to leave to future generations?Live real, dream deeply, subjective self, objective world contest.

Find yourself, live out your own personality and free and easy, if you ask to leave it for tomorrow, it is not red sleeves adding to the chaos, nor is Tsing Yi arrogant. The reality has given me challenges that I am not absent from, and I am not without black humor masturbation.On the stage of life, I am a good actor.Man is an animal of thought, and thought is my dignity, a complete combination of contradictions.

At the moment of stretching the mind, there will always be wind and rain. If you think about it, you will come out of the haze.Indeed, to be a strong person in life does not believe in fate and is willing to condemn.However, today's self seems to have stepped into the mud, longing for the truth in the heart, and has a unique personality.

In the publicity of youth, always in the hustle and bustle.Others' footsteps are as brisk as a kangaroo, but I am like a hedgehog. If there is a slight abnormality, I will curl up and roll slowly.At the same time, with some contingency arrogance skills in mind: brutality blinds the fragility of the will, burying the beloved, favoring left and right and talking about it.Behaviors that betray the true will, no matter casually or intentionally, often have a sense of defeat, because the soul is sensitive to a deep dilemma, and I am like this today.

Tomorrow’s me, the fog will clear, everything will finally be clear, the flowers will be scattered in the sky, longing for simplicity and purity, all the complexity will come from man-made, maybe I am moaning without illness or old-fashioned, this is indeed the feeling given to me by the reality of civilization, the reflection of ancient thinking The splendor of my baptism.

(End of this chapter)