College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 87 Chopsticks and self-deprecation (2)
For an exam, this subject is an experimental subject, and at the end of the period, the form of "open book" is used as required.So, after making up the seat numbers, just after the test papers were distributed, the students next to each other whispered to each other, busy with the "alliance"!Due to my seating capacity and psychology, I didn't want to "alliance" with them, so I sat there quietly by myself.Time really flies, half of the two hours passed, "Yeah...those people have handed in the paper!" At this time, the classmate next to him said: "Hey, ×××, are you done yet? We It's almost ready, I'll show you later!" After finishing speaking, they continued their "alliance" battle.I replied: "No, I'd better do it by myself, the similarities are not a joke!" After finishing speaking, continue with mine.After a while, they handed in the paper.Before leaving, I was still thinking: "I don't know good people! Really, Chunchun is a little girl who hasn't grown up, Chunchun..." In the end, I also handed in the paper.When I left the examination room, they were still discussing there. I wanted to have a fierce debate with them, but in the end I laughed at myself: "Big brothers and sisters, my little sister is really innocent. You will definitely Teach me well. So that I won’t become a simple little girl in your hearts! Don’t forget!!!!” After finishing speaking, the students laughed.

Thinking about it carefully, in fact, what they said was not unreasonable. Why couldn't I figure it out at the time?But if I "union" as they say, my integrity is lost, my personality is gone...

Indeed, in the face of difficulties in life, we can laugh them off, extricate ourselves, comfort ourselves, in order to get out of the quagmire.Make good use of the tool of "self-deprecating", so that we can go through the stormy road of life smoothly.

score review
This paper examines the questions accurately. By writing two things that he personally experienced, the author highlights that self-deprecating is a positive attitude towards life, which can help people "self-liberate, self-comfort", "get out of the quagmire", and that self-deprecation is indispensable in the journey of life. theme.The structure is complete and well organized.

Self-deprecating
(a candidate from Chongqing)

Self-deprecating, reminds me of self-defense.A helpless choice to relieve the embarrassing atmosphere for oneself.

We often encounter many embarrassing things in life: When you talk endlessly and devote yourself to the "one-man show", only to find that there are very few audiences in the audience, and you can only endure the "sorrow" and continue to be impassioned. They don’t understand your fringe art; when you unscrupulously want to call a “beauty” in front of you, she looks back and smiles, but it makes you surprised, stunned, and there is no response for a long time, and then she mocks herself with a wry smile: "I'm sorry, I made a mistake! I'm sorry!..." Then they went their own ways, and I was really a little scared, sticking out my tongue, scratching my ears and scratching my cheeks is inevitable, how can I regret it.

This is a funny version of self-deprecating.

The flipside of self-deprecating is the sorrow that a person in trouble cannot afford to preserve his dignity.It was a heavy, pitiful gesture.The typical Ah Q is the founder of the highest state of self-deprecating, but after laughing, there is an inseparable sadness.If Ah Q had money and status, he might have a different face and a different pattern.His humbleness is caused by social reasons and his own depravity.In response to the saying that "the times make heroes", Ah Q became the "hero" of that era.

This is a kind of self-deprecation that looks like a comedy but is full of tragic colors.

Self-deprecating can resolve personal situations, mediate the atmosphere of joy when everyone gathers together, and resolve conflicts so that we can get along more harmoniously with each other.

Self-deprecation is also a kind of self-denial or affirmation, and it is also a manifestation of the courage to admit mistakes.

It's rare to be confused, there are too many unsatisfactory things in life, too much loss, when you are alone, you can laugh at yourself, relax your heart, and let yourself live a happier life.

score review
The article started from explaining self-deprecating, and wrote two different kinds of self-deprecating: one is "the helpless choice to relieve oneself from the embarrassing atmosphere", "it is a funny version of self-deprecating"; And the sadness that can’t be taken for granted”, “is a kind of self-deprecating that looks like a comedy but is full of tragic colors”.In the end, it will be a matter of course, revealing the essence and function of self-deprecating, and pointing out the center of the article.The structure of the full text is complete, and the transition is natural.

Peach's previous bosom
(a candidate from Chongqing)

The title says, I would like to analyze a true self through this article.

A ray of spring light squeezed out from the crack of the door, giving the dim room a little life.The pot of oleander on the desk probably also heard the call of spring, and began to glow a little green.Oleander, it is said that it is the child of the bamboo father and the peach tree mother. Maybe it can’t represent anything, but I believe it has spirituality. After accompanying me for eighteen years, it understands me better than anyone else. My past and present, I know my hidden weaknesses better than anyone else.

I opened the window, watered the oleanders, and then took out the completed almanac from the wall and replaced it with a new one reluctantly.How many times have you repeated this action?It's not that I'm too old to remember, but I just don't want to go through the reincarnation from the north to the south to the recovery of all things again, because it means that the distant time will be farther away from me.Even if I close my eyes and stop thinking, the snow is still melting on the trees and my phlox is still blooming and falling.

When I was young, heh, it seemed too desolate. Then, to put it another way, a few years ago, I could forgive poverty, but I couldn't stand mediocrity.But now, I can't be poor. In the days when I was short of money, my mother's painful groans frightened me, so mediocrity became beyond reproach.

I did have the ambition to struggle. Every late night, I would sit by the window and do my homework, vowing to take off with my oleander. When it bloomed, I also bore fruit.However, how can my ideals and beliefs be so persistent that I have worked hard for decades in the sea of ​​​​questions and are still pure and fresh?

I used to think that I was invincible, but if the opponent is time, I will definitely lose. The root cause, Oleander knows, is not in other things, but in my fickle personality.

I once wrote the oath on my face, but never engraved it in my heart. I am very tolerant, not only tolerant of others, but also tolerant of myself, so I rarely feel guilty about mistakes and feel lost about failures.When a day slipped by the hand that I hesitated to reach out to keep it, I couldn't help dripping from my head and weeping down my cheeks.

The biggest characteristic of history is repetition.This is the first time I regret it in front of my little peach tree!Maybe it was laughing too.I don't want to do this kind of ridiculous thing anymore, because it is not funny to me, but a mockery, and even more sad.

The only thing I feel gratified is that I still dare to laugh at myself, and dare to endure the severe pain to tear off the veil of hypocrisy in my life.

score review
The article puts forward the theme of this article straight to the point in the way of inscription (examination): "dialysis reveals a true self", and at the end of the question again, the links are closely linked, highlighting the center of the article.Candidates have a degree of "self-deprecating" and make appropriate decisions, avoiding the problem of overly belittling themselves in such compositions.In addition, the language of the article is concise and full of speculative color.

i'm fat, i'm happy
(a candidate from Chongqing)

The Chinese often say "the heart is wide and the body is fat". This is a saying left by our ancestors for many years. Of course it is not wrong, and I have fulfilled this sentence myself.

If you want to say that I am fat, it has been a long time, and there is a reason for it.First of all, genetics. My father is an overweight person. Let’s put it this way, his "waist circumference" is equal to the "pants length", and he has never lost a single bit of weight in three years of natural disasters since he was fat. The second is external influences. My mother’s cooking skills are first-class, especially Sichuan cuisine, and a fish-flavored eggplant stick is even more mouth-watering.Under the guidance of the theory that "food is paramount to the people", the more meals I have for breakfast, lunch and dinner, the better; finally, it is my unique conditions. Since I was young, no matter what illness I have, my appetite has not been affected.There is no way, it tastes good after eating, even if you don’t want to gain weight.So under the joint action of external force and internal force, a fat girl who looks like a tube and a box is finally created.

When a person becomes "fat", his heart will "of course" be wide-eyed. In my dictionary, I never know what narrow-mindedness is. Many people "struggle with reason", but for me, the big becomes small, and the small becomes small.Although it is not wise to be a human being in this way, and I have suffered a lot of dumb losses because of this, it has bought me a relaxed and happy every day.The heart is wide, and the troubles in the heart are less.The laughter that often hangs on my face is naturally more than others. Maybe sometimes I laugh too much, so that my classmates call me a hopeless optimist!Alas, I can't help it, who made me lose a straight bone, and my laughing muscles are too developed.

To be honest, it's not that I don't envy the beautiful girls who are graceful and graceful on the screen.But this is only limited to envy, I never thought about the idea of ​​losing weight.Between the two beauties of food and beauty, I chose food without hesitation.There are already too many beauties in the world, and I don't need to intervene.Why bother to wrong yourself, live freely according to your wish, wouldn't you be happy!
Cheering, happy, this is a fat man who never worries about his figure, an optimist who is covered by the sky falling down!

score review
The author uses his own experience to explain the meaning and function of self-deprecating, which is closely related to the requirements of the composition topic and meets the meaning of the topic.The article is well detailed, focused, and the humorous language is unique.

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