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Chapter 149 Then you come and hit me 【Part 3 please subscribe】
Chapter 149 Then hit me
Even in different time and space, Ningxue and Ningyue hope that "Dream Eater" can break through a path with an upright body like the previous life, and finally become an animation.
In order to affirm the value of the classic itself, it is also the same as the highest pursuit in the comics.
Taking advantage of the burning fighting spirit in their hearts, Ningxue and Ningyue decided to continue to see what Ye Jingshu said.
Take advantage of this time to do more things, otherwise they don't know when they will enter the state of salted fish again.
What Ye Jingshu said was indeed related to the novel. She had already successfully written the first three chapters of "Shuttle of Ten Thousand Worlds", a total of more than 8000 words. This extraordinary efficiency made Ningxue and Ningyue doubt her Will there be a pile of running accounts written out?
After reading these three chapters patiently, Ningxue and Ningyue couldn't help raising their eyebrows.
It's not that I'm dissatisfied with it, but that it's surprisingly good.
The first world the protagonist travels through is the world of a popular high-martial fantasy novel. Traveling to the world of online novels is one of the selling points of "Ten Thousand Worlds Shuttle", so it has to be pointed out from the beginning.
As for the single-person unlimited flow, this has to be slowly reflected in the plot.
Of course, both of these points must be pointed out in the introduction of the novel.
Ningxue and Ningyue are not professionals. They wrote novels in their previous life, but they failed to enter the high-quality goods by the time the book was finished. They have a certain point of view. Judging from their point of view.
Ye Jingshu's writing is actually very good. She followed the principles she said, and in the first three chapters, she wrote out the protagonist's identity, golden finger, and the future direction of the plot.
This is a very miraculous thing. Although Ningxue and Ningyue shared a lot of experience with her, Ye Jingshu is only a novice after all. I don’t know how many times she revised it, but she was able to reach this level when she wrote the book for the first time. Level, after writing more, Ningxue and Ningyue can already foresee what Ye Jingshu will look like when she becomes the old Siji.
Ye Jingshu wrote all the attractive ideas, but the only thing that makes people uncomfortable is that she seems a bit wordy.
Well, the girl author.
It's a pity that this is not a light novel. For fast-paced fantasy novels, the long-windedness will affect the reading experience.
"Other aspects are good, but the wording seems a bit long-winded. It would be best to reduce the 8000 words to about 6500." Ningxue replied directly.
It didn't take long for Ye Jingshu to reply "Okay", and then went diving.
"Huh, it seems that everything is moving in a good direction."
Ningxue and Ningyue were very satisfied. As for him, he hadn't released a new song for a while, isn't it a long time for more than 20 days, and he just came back from Haicheng, so let's continue to be lazy for a while.
With this in mind, Ningxue and Ningyue received invitations from "Time" and "Literature" in the afternoon, and this time Ningyue explicitly rejected them, after all, she still wanted to use her "warm" identity to have a good time. To heal this world, it would take a lot of brain cells to use an extra pen name, so let Ningxue continue to manage the pen name "Gu Yu".
"I want to think about it again." Ningxue replied.
Hearing that Ningyue rejected it, but Ningxue was still considering it, "Time" and "Literature" knew that she really wanted to think about it, so they stopped bothering her, and they were also worried that she would ask too many questions. It will make Ningxue feel disgusted.
On the other hand, during this period, Wu Ke has officially signed a two-year contract with "Time" magazine, and will officially start a long-form serialization in the second half of October, and the early publicity work has slowly begun up.
……
After dinner, Ning Yue was idly swiping her phone when a new message popped up on her QQ.
"Warm old thief! Bleeding knife.jpg"
"Ha, who is this person?"
Ningyue didn't react for a while, and the ones who would call her a warm old thief aggressively were those readers who both loved and hated "Lingzhu". When did they expose themselves and come to their door?
Ning Yue was stunned, and when she was about to click on the message, a glimmer of light suddenly flashed in her mind.
Damn, I would call them that, besides those readers, there is one more person.
Isn't that Yue Guanghai, her editor in charge of "Let's Listen" magazine?
"clatter--"
I poked my finger, entered QQ, and found that the person who sent the message was indeed the funny editor who claimed that the president of the magazine was her father and the editor-in-chief was her uncle.
"I really have the foresight." Ning Yue never hesitated to praise herself.
Except for Yue Guanghai's resentful calling her "Teacher Nuan" during the first conversation, and the occasional small exchanges after that, the funny editor's phrase "Warm Old Thief" was the first to catch people's attention.
So Ning Yue has listed her as the number one fan poisoned by "Lingzhu".
[Warmth]: What are you doing again, do you want to fight with me?
[Moonlight Sea]: Let's not mention the fight, I'm a civilized person, so why didn't you submit two issues in a row, old thief?
[Warmth]: Huh?
[Moonlight Sea]: I'm talking about submitting manuscripts, you old thief!
[Warmth]: I've been busy recently, so I don't have time.
Ning Yue has gradually gotten used to the title of old thief.
[Moonlight Sea]: Aren't you on vacation recently? Hurry up and write a novel and submit it here.
[Warm]: Huh?are you kidding meI'm seriously ill, I've said it all, me!without!null!
The two of them have already used this kind of more casual words with ease. In short, they are hurting each other. Yue Guanghai never tires of it, and Ningyue is also rare to find a good opponent who can fight without guilt, so naturally she does her best.
【Moonlight Sea】: Bleeding Knife.jpg.
[Warmth]: Wow, you are threatening me!It's amazing that "Let's Listen" has not closed down with an editor like you!
[Moonlight Sea]: Hurry up and submit
[Warm]: No time, I'm busy.He also said that you were abused by "Lingzhu" and became emotional!
[Moonlight Sea]: Stop talking nonsense, just say whether you can write or not.
[Warmth]: I won't write, or you'll hit me!My stomach hurts from laughing.jpg
[Moonlight Sea]: Good!This is your request, old thief.
[Warmth]: Wow, you really want to come, I'm so scared.
[Moonlight Sea]: I want to impose justice on you on behalf of thousands of readers!Great Sword.jpg
[Warmth]: Well, I will wait for nothing, hahaha.roll.jpg
[Moonlight Sea]: Angry little yellow face.jpg
【Warmth】: Despise.jpg
After posting the emoji, Ning Yue realized that Yue Guanghai hadn't continued to reply after a few minutes, so she couldn't help but feel complacent. In this brief spat of saliva, she won the victory without any surprise.
Young man, you are still far from fighting me.
So she continued to play with her mobile phone.
after awhile……
"Boom boom boom!"
Suddenly there was a knock on the door.
"Hey, who is it?" Ning Yue was stunned, stood up and shouted in doubt.
"I'm delivering a courier, please come out and sign for it." A female voice came from outside the door.
"Express delivery, huh?" Ning Yue walked to the door, looked through the cat's eyes, and found a girl standing outside the door, holding a package in her hand.
This chapter is 200 monthly tickets plus updates, and there will be more in the future.
(End of this chapter)
Even in different time and space, Ningxue and Ningyue hope that "Dream Eater" can break through a path with an upright body like the previous life, and finally become an animation.
In order to affirm the value of the classic itself, it is also the same as the highest pursuit in the comics.
Taking advantage of the burning fighting spirit in their hearts, Ningxue and Ningyue decided to continue to see what Ye Jingshu said.
Take advantage of this time to do more things, otherwise they don't know when they will enter the state of salted fish again.
What Ye Jingshu said was indeed related to the novel. She had already successfully written the first three chapters of "Shuttle of Ten Thousand Worlds", a total of more than 8000 words. This extraordinary efficiency made Ningxue and Ningyue doubt her Will there be a pile of running accounts written out?
After reading these three chapters patiently, Ningxue and Ningyue couldn't help raising their eyebrows.
It's not that I'm dissatisfied with it, but that it's surprisingly good.
The first world the protagonist travels through is the world of a popular high-martial fantasy novel. Traveling to the world of online novels is one of the selling points of "Ten Thousand Worlds Shuttle", so it has to be pointed out from the beginning.
As for the single-person unlimited flow, this has to be slowly reflected in the plot.
Of course, both of these points must be pointed out in the introduction of the novel.
Ningxue and Ningyue are not professionals. They wrote novels in their previous life, but they failed to enter the high-quality goods by the time the book was finished. They have a certain point of view. Judging from their point of view.
Ye Jingshu's writing is actually very good. She followed the principles she said, and in the first three chapters, she wrote out the protagonist's identity, golden finger, and the future direction of the plot.
This is a very miraculous thing. Although Ningxue and Ningyue shared a lot of experience with her, Ye Jingshu is only a novice after all. I don’t know how many times she revised it, but she was able to reach this level when she wrote the book for the first time. Level, after writing more, Ningxue and Ningyue can already foresee what Ye Jingshu will look like when she becomes the old Siji.
Ye Jingshu wrote all the attractive ideas, but the only thing that makes people uncomfortable is that she seems a bit wordy.
Well, the girl author.
It's a pity that this is not a light novel. For fast-paced fantasy novels, the long-windedness will affect the reading experience.
"Other aspects are good, but the wording seems a bit long-winded. It would be best to reduce the 8000 words to about 6500." Ningxue replied directly.
It didn't take long for Ye Jingshu to reply "Okay", and then went diving.
"Huh, it seems that everything is moving in a good direction."
Ningxue and Ningyue were very satisfied. As for him, he hadn't released a new song for a while, isn't it a long time for more than 20 days, and he just came back from Haicheng, so let's continue to be lazy for a while.
With this in mind, Ningxue and Ningyue received invitations from "Time" and "Literature" in the afternoon, and this time Ningyue explicitly rejected them, after all, she still wanted to use her "warm" identity to have a good time. To heal this world, it would take a lot of brain cells to use an extra pen name, so let Ningxue continue to manage the pen name "Gu Yu".
"I want to think about it again." Ningxue replied.
Hearing that Ningyue rejected it, but Ningxue was still considering it, "Time" and "Literature" knew that she really wanted to think about it, so they stopped bothering her, and they were also worried that she would ask too many questions. It will make Ningxue feel disgusted.
On the other hand, during this period, Wu Ke has officially signed a two-year contract with "Time" magazine, and will officially start a long-form serialization in the second half of October, and the early publicity work has slowly begun up.
……
After dinner, Ning Yue was idly swiping her phone when a new message popped up on her QQ.
"Warm old thief! Bleeding knife.jpg"
"Ha, who is this person?"
Ningyue didn't react for a while, and the ones who would call her a warm old thief aggressively were those readers who both loved and hated "Lingzhu". When did they expose themselves and come to their door?
Ning Yue was stunned, and when she was about to click on the message, a glimmer of light suddenly flashed in her mind.
Damn, I would call them that, besides those readers, there is one more person.
Isn't that Yue Guanghai, her editor in charge of "Let's Listen" magazine?
"clatter--"
I poked my finger, entered QQ, and found that the person who sent the message was indeed the funny editor who claimed that the president of the magazine was her father and the editor-in-chief was her uncle.
"I really have the foresight." Ning Yue never hesitated to praise herself.
Except for Yue Guanghai's resentful calling her "Teacher Nuan" during the first conversation, and the occasional small exchanges after that, the funny editor's phrase "Warm Old Thief" was the first to catch people's attention.
So Ning Yue has listed her as the number one fan poisoned by "Lingzhu".
[Warmth]: What are you doing again, do you want to fight with me?
[Moonlight Sea]: Let's not mention the fight, I'm a civilized person, so why didn't you submit two issues in a row, old thief?
[Warmth]: Huh?
[Moonlight Sea]: I'm talking about submitting manuscripts, you old thief!
[Warmth]: I've been busy recently, so I don't have time.
Ning Yue has gradually gotten used to the title of old thief.
[Moonlight Sea]: Aren't you on vacation recently? Hurry up and write a novel and submit it here.
[Warm]: Huh?are you kidding meI'm seriously ill, I've said it all, me!without!null!
The two of them have already used this kind of more casual words with ease. In short, they are hurting each other. Yue Guanghai never tires of it, and Ningyue is also rare to find a good opponent who can fight without guilt, so naturally she does her best.
【Moonlight Sea】: Bleeding Knife.jpg.
[Warmth]: Wow, you are threatening me!It's amazing that "Let's Listen" has not closed down with an editor like you!
[Moonlight Sea]: Hurry up and submit
[Warm]: No time, I'm busy.He also said that you were abused by "Lingzhu" and became emotional!
[Moonlight Sea]: Stop talking nonsense, just say whether you can write or not.
[Warmth]: I won't write, or you'll hit me!My stomach hurts from laughing.jpg
[Moonlight Sea]: Good!This is your request, old thief.
[Warmth]: Wow, you really want to come, I'm so scared.
[Moonlight Sea]: I want to impose justice on you on behalf of thousands of readers!Great Sword.jpg
[Warmth]: Well, I will wait for nothing, hahaha.roll.jpg
[Moonlight Sea]: Angry little yellow face.jpg
【Warmth】: Despise.jpg
After posting the emoji, Ning Yue realized that Yue Guanghai hadn't continued to reply after a few minutes, so she couldn't help but feel complacent. In this brief spat of saliva, she won the victory without any surprise.
Young man, you are still far from fighting me.
So she continued to play with her mobile phone.
after awhile……
"Boom boom boom!"
Suddenly there was a knock on the door.
"Hey, who is it?" Ning Yue was stunned, stood up and shouted in doubt.
"I'm delivering a courier, please come out and sign for it." A female voice came from outside the door.
"Express delivery, huh?" Ning Yue walked to the door, looked through the cat's eyes, and found a girl standing outside the door, holding a package in her hand.
This chapter is 200 monthly tickets plus updates, and there will be more in the future.
(End of this chapter)
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