Primary school students' full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 6 Growing Pains (1)
Misleading "Tomorrow"

Ye Hui
One day, the teacher announced that there would be an English test next Tuesday, so I planned to use Saturday and Sunday to review and prepare for the test.

When school was over on Saturday, Zhiming asked me to go to his house in the afternoon to play the latest computer games.I said to him: "I want to review at home, but I want to..." He immediately interrupted me and said: "English test, 'Pediatrics'! It's not too late to review tomorrow!" I already want to play that game , and now with his instigation, he agreed to him.After playing all afternoon, I am very tired.When I got home, after dinner, I went to bed.

On Sunday morning, I just watch TV.Because my favorite TV program "Captain Football" was playing, I gave up reviewing.After lunch, I received another call from Xiaoqiang, who asked me to play football at a nearby stadium. I was very happy to hear that, and hurriedly changed into my jersey and rushed to the stadium.I thought to myself, let’s talk about the review tomorrow!In the evening, I just remembered that I hadn't done my homework well, so I immediately "burned the midnight oil".When I finished all my homework, I immediately fell asleep on the desk.

The next morning, I was almost late.I was listless in class and dozed off while listening to the teacher.After a long time, I finally waited until the school bell rang, and went to the library to do my homework with a few classmates.I was embarrassed to review in front of them, for fear that they would laugh at me for "digging a well when I was thirsty", so I pretended that I had finished my review and found some extracurricular books to read.At night, as if I had taken sleeping pills, I lay down on the desk and soon fell asleep again.

The day of the test finally came, I was very flustered, I didn't read all the test questions, and handed in the paper after finishing it perfunctorily.When the teacher sent back the test, the terrible thing finally happened. My score was a big "0"!At that time, I kept blaming myself: "Why did you miss one day after another? Why didn't you make good use of the time to review?"

"Tomorrow after tomorrow, there are so many tomorrows! Every day is waiting for tomorrow, and everything will come to naught..." I read this "Song of Tomorrow" which exhorts people to work hard, and I realized my mistakes.Since then, I have paid attention to cherishing time, and don't just put off today's things until tomorrow.

Laziness is a bad habit with a strong inertia, and it is difficult for children to get rid of it once they are infected.We are always used to putting off until tomorrow what we should do today. As the "Song of Tomorrow" said, nothing will be accomplished in the end.Obviously, the little author fell into such a quagmire.By describing this incident, the young author received a profound lesson and understood the truth of "cherishing time".

lengthy tooth reconstruction project

Qin Chefeng

I have four big dies, how big are they?To say it modestly, when I open my mouth to the maximum, I can only see four of them: and they are very modest, leaving an alley in the middle, so that everyone calls me "Toyota No. 1000".Don't think it's a Japanese car. People say that my four dies are so big that they can plow the land, like four small cultivators.Every time I brush my teeth, I worry about the mirror. It would be great if I could have a toothbrush and make the four toothbrushes smaller!My mother also seemed to have noticed that my four dies were detrimental to the appearance of the city, so she decided to invest more than [-] yuan in my teeth and carry out a huge rescue project.From then on, my poor big die began to suffer endlessly.

That day, my mother took me to the hospital.As soon as I entered the outpatient room, I heard the "squeak" sound of the electric drill, and I was terrified.This electric drill is used to deal with things like nails and steel plates. If you use them to deal with teeth... it's terrible!I pulled my mother's clothes to go back, but my mother made up her mind and invited a doctor.The doctor asked me to lie on a recliner, and told me to open my mouth wide, hold a "turning head" in each hand, and hit my four teeth from both sides. numb.I closed my eyes tightly, and really wanted to yell "Help", but I didn't dare to really yell, you know those two "guys" can work in my mouth!Should there be a mistake, and there must be a hole in my cheek?After half an hour of torment, I was finally freed. I looked in the mirror and saw that the four big dies had been ground a bit smaller, but they looked more like Zhu Bajie's rake teeth.

On the second day, all my teeth were fitted with metal anchors, and a steel wire passed through the anchors to firmly connect the teeth together. I became a veritable "iron teeth and copper teeth".The toothache was so bad that day that I couldn't eat.My mother loves me so much that she lets me drink milk and juice, anyway, I don’t need to chew with my teeth.But how can I drink it.

I didn't eat several meals in a row, and I was so hungry that I couldn't stand it.At lunch that day, I really forgot about the pain and devoured it hungrily.Suddenly, my teeth hit the bowl, and there was a piercing pain.I ran into the bathroom and looked in the mirror, only to see that my gums were bleeding continuously.So, I rummaged through boxes and boxes to find hemostatic medicine.This medicine is also strange, you can see it when you don't look for it, but you can't get it out when you look for it.Reluctantly, I had to take out ice cubes from the refrigerator and put them on my gums.There was another piercing pain, but after the pain passed, the bleeding was actually stopped.

Over the next few days, the pain gradually subsided.After a few weeks, the pain was gone and I was finally able to eat big fish and meat.But not long after, my mother wanted to take me to the doctor to fix my teeth, and said it would take at least a year.

a year? 12 months? 365 days?Damn, please forgive me!

The young author of this article wrote an article with detailed content and vivid language through an incident that happened to him, which left a deep impression on people after reading it.This article has two characteristics: 1. The language is humorous, such as "Toyota No. 2" and "implementing a huge rescue project" in the article; [-]. The language is colloquial, which makes people feel friendly, as if it happened around us , such as "I'm terrified", "It's terrible", "Please forgive me!" and so on.

my concern
郝畅
Everyone has a little secret in their hearts. I have such a thing in my heart. It always makes me troubled and depressed. I began to become withdrawn and self-closing, unwilling to talk to others, and always staring at the sky in a daze.I always feel that life is bleak and lacks joy. Today I would like to take this opportunity to confide my troubles.

This happened two years ago. In the summer of that year, our family moved into a new house with two bedrooms and one living room. There were brand new large color TVs, wardrobes, desks and other new furniture in it. Only the parents’ bedroom A dilapidated iron bed in the room was dazzling, and it was out of place with the new furniture, very out of harmony.

My father is a face-saving person. He often has guests at home, and he always hopes to give the home a new look; while my mother is very nostalgic, and is reluctant to throw away everything. As time goes by, the conflicts finally intensified, and the "war" I was most worried about broke out. The two of them talked to each other, and they were at each other's throats, each with a higher pitch than the other, completely ignoring my existence.

In the next few days, the originally lively table became silent, and every meal was tasteless. The "Cold War" has begun again.They ignored each other, and I became the mouthpiece between them.In order to ease the depressive atmosphere, I advised my mother for a while: "You just sell it, 'take a step back, the sea and the sky'!" But my mother always pushed me away and said: "Go, go, go, you are still young, don't worry about it!" Understood." Helplessly, I had no choice but to persuade my father again: "Don't sell it..." "You can't do it if you don't sell it!" My father ignored me and vetoed it sternly.My painstaking efforts were in vain.

In this way, Mom and Dad were deadlocked for a long time, and no one would give in. The air in the house seemed to freeze, and there was no more laughter in the past.They quarreled over trivial matters every day and every day. I often "pressed the gourd and scooped it up."Their words also stabbed my young heart, how could this not become my concern?

Mom and Dad, I hope you have more understanding, more tolerance, and more respect, so that our home is sunny every day instead of cloudy; let our house be full of laughter every day instead of silence and depression, Don't let the shadow hang over my young heart.Mom and Dad, I love you, and you love me too. For the sake of my healthy growth, please stop quarreling and let our family live happily and worry-free!

The greatest advantage of this article is that it expresses the truest feelings. The parents had a dispute around the dilapidated iron bed, which directly affected the young author's heart.At the end of the article, the young author expresses his feelings and wishes, with sincere and moving feelings.

Trouble as a guest

Lin Ling
During the winter vacation, my mother took me to my uncle's house.

As soon as we entered the door, my uncle and aunt let us in with smiles on their faces, enthusiastically poured tea and gave us candy.I stood on the side anxiously, thinking about my mother's exhortation: Be gentle and polite. Looking at the unfamiliar uncle and aunt, I feel very uncomfortable.

My aunt looked at me with eyes full of crow's feet, grinned and said: "This is Linling, I haven't seen you in a few years, she looks so beautiful. Is your grades good?" Mom said: "No, little The girl doesn’t want to work hard, and her grades are slowly declining.” My uncle looked at me happily and asked me how my grades were, and I whispered shyly, “The grades are not good.” The uncle said, “You are really a child. Be humble, you will be promising when you grow up."

I don't know how much time passed, and my mother, uncle, and aunt stopped talking about me.I was so thirsty, I really wanted to drink some water, but I was inexplicably afraid, so I had to insist on not drinking, and I was really annoyed.

Finally made it to lunch.I looked at the table full of dishes and wanted to grab some of my favorite dishes, but I was afraid of jokes.My uncle and aunt were very hospitable, and they kept taking turns picking up vegetables for me. I was so panicked that I didn't even have time to fight, and I was caught with a full bowl.In this way, I finished eating a small bowl of rice in the atmosphere of "eat it" and "eat it" in my ears, and then I hurriedly put down the rice bowl and breathed a sigh of relief.

After the meal, the uncle stubbornly asked the aunt to make meat pies with rice noodles.My uncle and aunt are making meatloaf, and my mother washes her hands to help, leaving me sitting on the sofa bored: it's so lonely here, and I can't find a partner of my age.It would be great if I were at home, I can make trouble and sing with my friends.So I boldly turned on the 35cm half-new and half-old TV in the house, and watched the blurry picture alone.

Uncle and the others muttered to make meatloaf, and it was already past 4 o'clock in the afternoon.I tried to eat two meat pies, but my aunt insisted on eating more meat pies with a big bowl, "Your mother said you love meat pies the most. Don't be shy, eat more!" I blushed. I picked up the meatloaf and chewed it again, complaining in my heart: Mom told my aunt everything, really!
Mom, aunt, and uncle pulled away from homework again.I sat next to me and had nothing to do, and my feet were numb from sitting.After finally hearing my mother say to go home early, I let out a sigh of relief and stood up immediately. Before my mother walked out of the door, I had already walked to the corner of the street.

The outstanding feature of this article is that the psychological description is very delicate."I" was troubled by mother's exhortations, exhortations, talking about everything, and endless housework.The language is simple and sincere, and the expressions are very expressive.

myopia
许卓
I repent, regret why I didn't pay attention to protecting my eyes, and ended up like this!
Before, I had a pair of big and bright eyes with normal eyesight. Everyone said that my eyes were good-looking.My mother often reminds me to protect my eyes. I promise very loudly, but I always don't pay attention.

Because I buried my head low and held my pen short when doing homework in class, I planted the seeds of myopia.It didn't feel like anything at the time, and I didn't know a thing.The words on the blackboard were a bit blurry at first, but I recognized them, and I didn't care.It was only later that I realized it.

My father bought me a "vision health", I use it every day, twice a day.After using it for a few months, my eyesight has improved.

Soon, I was promoted to the sixth grade with a lot of homework.I read and review at night, and I can go to bed very late, but when I fall asleep, I toss and turn, unable to fall asleep, and sometimes forget to use "Vision Health".Now, study is even more tense, and we have reached the time of the final struggle - the general review for primary school graduation.There are more homework, and the spare time has been occupied by overwhelming homework.My eyesight has declined again.

Looking forward to the stars and the moon like looking forward to a Sunday, I can finally relax.My "TV addiction" is here again. Good-looking cartoons and thrilling TV series always fascinate me.The seeds of myopia bloomed.

This day has come, and the seeds of myopia have borne fruit.Mom and Dad took me to the hospital, and the doctor checked my eyesight.After the optometry, an astonishing number appeared in front of my eyes, "375 degrees". I was at a loss, and before I woke up, another voice came: "You must wear glasses." I'm overwhelmed, I'm stumped.Since then, a pair of cold glasses have ruthlessly "set camp" on the bridge of my nose.

I regret it, but it's too late.I have personally realized that the eyes must be protected, if not, it will be too late to regret.

Students, protect your eyes!

The young author narrates his feelings in simple and humorous language through his own personal experience.In the process of narration, the author writes very concretely about his actions and psychological activities, which plays an important role in highlighting the center.

my day full of joys and sorrows

Wang Mengyin

Joy

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