High school English composition imitation show

Chapter 5 Descriptive Text

Ideals are like the stars—we never reach them, but like mariners, we chart our course by them.
English Pictures and I
English Pictures is my best friend.
Three years ago, when I just became a high school student, I found that my knowledge of English was too limited. I also found it very difficult to learn English well. Though I worked hard, I failed. I read a lot of English materials and many reference books outside class, in the hope of improving my English in this way. But it didn't help. I was discouraged and almost wanted to give up.
One day, I found some copies of the magazine English Pictures in the school library by chance. I borrowed them and read them immediately. They had so many interesting stories, so many pictures in English and so many excellent exercises that I didn't want to put them down. From then on, I always borrowed it from the school library. When I read it, I find English easier to learn, and the more I read it, the easier it becomes.
English Pictures has been my best friends. I have been its reader for 4 years. During these years, I ve learned a lot of grammar, how to use some useful verbs, how to make sentences correctly and how to read texts faster and understand them Better. Moreover, I ve also learned about many strange and interesting things in and outside China, such as the childhood of Abraham Lincoln, how Mother Meng taught her son Meng Zi and so on.
English Pictures can not only widen our knowledge of English, enrich our common sense and enlarge our vocabulary, but also give us courage and pleasure.
Since I made friends with English Pictures, I have become more and more interested in English. One of my English teachers once said, “You should not miss English materials that you can get outside the classroom.” So in my spare time, I always read English Pictures, A School Friend of English and other English materials.
Among these, I like English Pictures best.
The language of this article is fluent, the structure is rigorous, and the grammar is relatively standard, which successfully describes the help brought by "English Pictorial" to the author.

My Baby Cat
I have an eightmonthold baby cat named Snowman. His hair is as white as snow, with a little patch of black on his head. When he opens his eyes which are like blue lakes, you will find him beautiful and intelligent.
Snowman is fond of eating and sleeping in the sun. Several days ago, I bought a bag of cat food as his dessert. From then on, he waited at the cupboard for it every morning.
Snowman is so timid that he dares not go far away from home. One day, I took him out. He pressed himself close to me and seemed scared to death. As soon as he heard some people speaking not far away, I could feel him trembling all over.
Snowman is naughty and clever. He is interested in the hen downstairs. He often sits on the windows sill, enjoying the sunshine and the winter scene outside. His eyes seem to be closed, but in fact, he is staring at the hen. day, not satisfied with only watching her, he could not help but jump down into the little yard in which the hen always had a walk in the morning. He ran after the hen, but did not catch her, because I stopped him and scolded him.
When he was two months old, my cousin caught a fish for him. It was the first time for him to see fish alive. He stared at it in silence. After a while, Snowman streched one of his paws toward the fish bowl. He tried to take the fish out, but failed. He sat down next to the fish bowl and thought of a way. He began to drink the water in the fish bowl. At last he drank up the water and turned over the fish bowl. The fish jumped out. Snowman was very excited and happy. He did not eat it but played with it.
Such is my baby cat Snowman, with a pink nose, paws that look like snowballs and practical jokes in his brain. Do you feel deeply attached to him as I do?

The author's interesting brushstrokes make the image of a cute kitten "Snowman" come alive on the paper.You can feel the author's deep feelings for this kitten between the lines.The author made detailed observations on "Snowman" during his time with "Snowman", so the writing is specific, vivid, vivid and lifelike, and fully expresses the characteristics of "Snowman".

Road and Friend
There is a road which leads to my village. It isn't too long or too wide, but it is very important for me. I have walked along it for 9 years with a special friend.
He is my uncle s son. We grew up together. I m two months older than him, but he is much taller. One day 9 years ago, we were sent along this road to a school by father. would happen between us.
Together, we went down the road to school and then back home. Together, we played, ran, rode our bikes, even when it rained or was windy. Day after day, year after year, on the road a great friendship was built between us, very beautiful and clean.
But what wasn't all, there was another side to it. During those years, we were not only friends, brothers and classmates, but also competitors.
In school, we always did well in examinations. However, most of the time, his result was better.
When we rode on the road again, I felt his wheels turned more quickly than mine. In fact, they were the same. I became sad and angry. In my heart, I yelled at myself, "Why are you always a failure?" no! I wouldn't be slower than him. I would beat him, but I needed to work hard
The sun is always brighter after the rain. I got better results in exams. Although I didn't beat my competitor, I beat myself and made great progress.
When we were on the road again, I rode faster and faster. I didn't believe I would be a failure forever.
In fact, I must thank him. If not for him, I don't think I could have had so much faith in myself or won such good results.
9years ago, along that road, there were only a few small trees; today they have grown taller and stronger. In the shade of these, we finally parted for different schools. I m sad. But our competition hasn't stopped, he will be my competitor forever.
The road belongs to both of us, but it gets longer and longer, and our wheels will go faster and faster.
The content of this article is rich, the language is fluent, and the expression conforms to the idiomatic usage of English.The use of metaphor is also the success of this article.

Growth Rings
I like surveying tree rings. The rings, large or small, clear or vague, record the life of a tree. Sometimes, I think not only the trees but also all the people in the world, have rings of their own. their own rings.
Of course, I have rings of my own. They are growing and changing all the time.
If you look at the rings very carefully, you will find that the first rings aren't very clear. They represent my childhood. It was a time which was full of laughter and happiness, and without any worries. Because of this, the rings seem to be a little vague.
——They indicate naivety.
As I grew up day by day, I became a pupil in primary school, and then a middle school student. During that time, I changed a lot. I knew I was no longer a little girl, I liked to see the world with my own eyes. I learned knowledge eagerly. I was trying my best to perfect myself. School life also made me more sensible. I remember one day, I had a quarrel with a classmate of mine. At first, I got very angry. But then , when I knew that I had also made some mistakes, I said sorry to her bravely. So I think the rings of that period became clearer and clearer.
——They indicate growth.
Later, I entered senior middle school. Life became so different that I couldn't fit at first. So, I wasn't so happy as before. I know I ma senior school student now. Even though studying is very hard, I still have confidence . I m trying my best to get along with my friends. I mustn t be angry at little things. I ve learned to pardon. I will continue to go forward.
——It shows Ive grown up.
Now, I realize that life can t be smooth all the time. You must face either success of failure. It sa long process. From naivety to youth, to grownup, everything will be recorded like the rings of a tree.
So let s cheer up and go on struggling to make our rings better and better.
Through the observation of "annual rings", the author of this article uses "annual rings" as a metaphor to set off and reflect the carefreeness of children, teenagers' exploration of the world and desire for knowledge, as well as their own confusion in adolescence, and finally rediscovered efforts The direction expresses the theme of this paper.The idea of ​​the article is novel, the layers are clear, and the transition is natural. Although the original text is still lacking in words and expressions, the language is relatively fluent.If you can make a little more specific description of the future vision, echoing the beginning, the structure of the full text will be more complete.In addition, the author also needs to master more vocabulary. Take the last sentence of the article ".to make our rings better and better" as an example. If it is changed to "to make our rings more and more mature", it is not related to "annual ring". Is the theme more relevant?

Going Home
Every day, when all the lessons are over, you can see everybody in the classroom laughing and talking freely. That may be the happiest time of the day. Why? Because it is time to go home.
Home does not only mean the house you live in, it also embodies your happiness, your sadness, your childhood and your growth. At home you can do anything you like. You needn't worry about what others think of your behavior. Play pingpong if you like, wear strange clothes if you like, write some poems if you like, sing loudly if you like, sit on the floor watching TV if you like, because it is YOUR home.
Your home may not be pretty, but it must be lovely. Your home may not be modern, but it must be comfortable. So you can see, if you are a small boat, home is your harbor.
Every afternoon when I am on my way home, I always think about something exciting. For example, a great meal, delicious steaks, fried chicken, potato chips, a cup of coffee and so on. Every night at home, after a comfortable bath , I d lie in the sofa with a cup of black coffee in my hand, and talk with my parents. I really enjoy the warm feeling very much!

Last summer, I went to my aunt s for holiday. She lived by the seaside. Though the sea was quite magnificent, I couldn't enjoy myself. I didn't eat enough, because there wasn't the wonderful steak cooked by my mother. couldn't get to sleep easily, because my toy bear was not in my arms. All in all, I missed my mother, my father, my piano, my flute, my toy bear, my Mickey Mouse, my beautiful flowers, my bed, my shoes. I missed my home!

On Sundays, when I open my eyes in the morning, I can see the sun shining on the pillow, turning it into a golden handkerchief. Then I get up, have breakfast, and do some exercises. Reading is my favorite pasttime, so I usually spend whole morning on it. In fact, I think that everything I do at home is exciting and joyful.
In my memory, Mommy is always smiling. She always told me, “Smile at everybody, then everybody, including yourself, will feel warm.” She loves me, and gives me a home full of love. I think that if one day I become a young mother of a little girl, I will also make a warm home for her with my love, just like my mother has done for me.
Everybody loves their parents, and everybody loves their home. No matter how far away one is from his home, he will go back in the end. There is a good proverb, "Gold house, silver house, none can compare with my own house ". It's quite true.
Home is a shelter for everyone, a castle built brick by brick full of love.As the author said, you can do whatever you want at home, as long as you want.Drinking a cup of strong coffee and chatting with family members, home will always bring us an infinite warm feeling, no matter where we are, home will always be the sustenance of our hearts.The author writes fluently, uses English relatively freely, and makes good use of parallel sentences to strengthen the tone.But be aware that it will be monotonous if you use it too much.

A Beautiful Rose
I planted a rose in front of my house last November. I was eager to see it bloom so I watered it almost every day. The rose grew quickly.
Spring has come. The rose plant is has grown much taller. Many green leaves have come out together with some buds. One Sunday morning while I was watering the plant, I was surprised to see a red rose blooming. It seemed as if it were a beautiful shy girl selflessly giving out fragrance, with which I was intoxicated. “Oh, that is great!” I cried out to my brother. “Come to see what is happening.” He ran up to me. “How nice it is !” he said, “I can hardly believe my eyes!”

In the afternoon when I returned home after visiting a friend. I went to see the rose again. To my astonishment, the beautiful flower was not there. Tears came to my eyes. my brother. "It was I who picked the flower," He replied in a low voice. I could hardly believe my ears. "Isn't there anything else better worth doing than picking the rose for fun?" I shouted at him. " But, but"He chocked with sob.
I left my brother and went upstairs angrily. Through a window, I caught sight of a blind girl near my house holding a red rose and smelling it with a smile. I suddenly realized what had happened.
I rushed downstairs. Holding my brother's hands, I said, "I m sorry. I have wronged you." "Never mind," He said, "blind people also need beauty and love. We should do what we can to help them .”With the words, we went to the blind girl together.
There are many changes in the sentence structure of the full text, and the wording is more objective and accurate. The roses and the flower growers' love for flowers are particularly well written.Some language problems in the article are worthy of attention:

(1) November last year (and November this year has not yet arrived) can generally be said to be last November, not in November last year.

(2) When flower buds and flower buds grow out, use come out instead of come up.

(3) A naughty boy must have picked it can also be changed to It must be a naughty boy who have picked it. The emphatic structure of "It be+that".

Bamboo
I began to like bamboo at the first sight of it, because I was deeply impressed by its lifeforce.
Last summer, I made a trip to the Muogan Mountains. Located in Zhejiang Province, the Muogan Mountains is famous for bamboo. Because of this, the mountain is a tourist attraction in summer.
A vast amount of bamboo stands straight on the mountains. In the scorching summer, high bamboo plants with their slim leaves stand still, hiding the villas. However, towards the evening, they sway in the gentle evening breeze with their slender leaves brushing the roofs and walls of the houses. Their shade makes the temperature in the house much lower than that outside. People can do whatever they feel like doing in the cool house without sweating. This side effect of the bamboo creates an ideal place for people who dislike hot weather.
During my stay in Muogan, I paid a visit to a local “Bamboo Exhibition.” I was surprised when I entered the hall which was a world of bamboo products. The items on display, from shelters to utensils, were all made of bamboo. They displayed all species of bamboo that exist in the world. There was a bamboo house with bamboo chairs and tables, beautiful and comfortable. What struck me most was a pair of handmade bamboo lamps. One was a lifelike dragon and the other an uprising phoenix . Thousands of strips of bamboo no thicker than hair shaped the dragon and phoenix. During my visit, I came to know why people use bamboo in their life. It can stand hardship and resist rotting.
I like bamboo most importantly because the high, straight plant represents a spirit of strong will, never losing heart. If it were ever weakminded, how could tender young bamboo shoots break the hard layers of earth and dirt? Whenever I meet with difficulties, I always think of bamboo which gives me courage and strength to overcome the difficulties.
The article first vividly describes the appearance of bamboo from static and dynamic aspects, and then describes the various uses of bamboo through the introduction of the bamboo exhibition, and highlights the character of bamboo in the last paragraph.The wording in the full text is accurate and there are no major grammatical errors.Some language problems in the article are worthy of attention:

(1) At the first sight of sth. It has the meaning of "seeing something at first sight (just how)", so the predicate adds begin to echo it.

(2) in the house is used as a post-attributive to modify the temperature, and in the more than structure, the two to be compared are required to be consistent in grammatical components, so outside should be preceded by that to replace the temperature, so that outside also becomes The post-attributive of that can be compared.

(3) on display is a postfix attribute of item.

A Night of Late Autumn
That night of late autumn was cool, I think. So I went out with an agitated heart and walked on the path.
It was misty on the autumn night. Everything before me became hazy. The hazy lights from the windows of the distant buildings looked like the eyes of sleepy men. The hazy pavilions lay there as if they were floating in the air. The hazy trees and grass made me feel that I was in a fairyland. The hazy autumn night was very beautiful.
Everything was hazy, except the moon hanging in the sky. She is a kind mother, I thought, giving bright light to the earth, and the child of the earth feels gently comfortable. The moon light was so bright that it turned everything silver, which made me feel that I was floating in the air.
Suddenly, a wild cat ran across the grassland by the roadside. It stopped to run round to look at me. Its body dissolved in the darkness, but its green eyes stared at me all the time. As I came nearer, it ran away quickly and disappeared into the darkness.
A couple by the roadside were whispering. On this quiet night, they were enjoying their romantic love. At that time, a piece of cloud came to cover the moon as if to give the young people a peaceful veil.
It was now deep into the night. On my way home, I found the street lamps pulling my shadow long. In the distance, there were faint sounds of singing.
On this night of autumn, I no longer felt agitated, and made my way home with a quiet mind.
This is a lyrical descriptive essay, written very contagiously.The author firmly grasps the misty and hazy characteristics of the late autumn night, and writes about the surrounding scenery.The most outstanding stroke is the wild cat that suddenly appeared in the description of the silence, which makes the whole static picture come alive immediately.In addition, while describing the autumn night, the author also inserts some just-right comments from time to time, which adds a lot of color to the article.Some language problems in the article are worthy of attention:

(1) The author of the first sentence wants to say that autumn night makes people cool, and the second sentence uses agitate, so the beginning of the second sentence so should not be used.

(2) The action of give bright light is to show that The moon is a kind mother. It cannot be paralleled with the previous sentence as a predicate, and it is better to use a non-predicate verb. Autumn, My Favorite Season Of the four seasons in the year, I like autumn best. It s doubtless that there are many lovable things in the year round. Some people may appreciate the sprouts of spring, the thunderstorm of summer, or the snowflakes of winter. I, too, value these presents of the nature very much. Autumn, however is the soul of the year in my opinion.
Clearly, autumn is the season of foliage. There are leaves of so many colors that no painter has enough pigments to paint them, and that no author has enough words to describe them. This wonder can only be credited to the nature. attracted by the beauty of the colorful leaves. Even a single leaf has a lot of hues. Is it green, brown, yellow, or red? I just cannot tell the definite colour. When held against the shining sun, the yellow leaf itself is shining like gold.
The high blue sky is another charm of autumn. It seems like a wise old man, calm and highspirited, and is always generous with pleasant sunshine and clear weather.
Those leaves and the blue sky, though arousing my love for autumn, are still not the dearest characteristics of the season. The leaves are fragile and will fall one day. And sometimes in other seasons, the sky may be clearer, in the summer after a shower, for example. But no other season is comparable to the autumn in terms of its “wisdom”. It benefits people with not only the harvest but also the magnificent scene. It really shows the intellect of the nature.
We human beings also have the spirit of the autumn. Have you ever seen old people doing morning exercises? In spite of their old age and fragile bodies, they are still active and industrious. They are to the society what beautiful leaves of the autumn to the nature. I am really moved by them. I really love autumn.
This is a rather lyrical descriptive article. The author writes from the autumn leaves to the autumn sky, and then points out that the most beautiful thing in autumn is its "mature wisdom". depth.It can also be seen from the choice of words and the use of sentence patterns that the author has a good foundation in the English language, such as: appreciate, hue, be credited to, They are to the society what beautiful leaves of the autumn to the nature, etc.

The Best Picture in My Eyes
In my room, there is a picture entitled “Feeding the birds” on the wall. Though its painter is unknown to us, in my view it s the best picture I ve ever seen.
Though the picture is named "Feeding the birds", we only see a woman sitting on a chair with three little girls seated opposite her. The girl in the middle is opening her mouth to a spoon of food the lady is giving. The other two girls are looking at the spoon. In the picture there is also a hen with some chicks walking around them. The whole picture makes people feel peaceful and tends to imagine.
Suppose the painter s purpose is to remind us of something that is worth remembering. Just like feeding birds, our parents give us not only food to eat, clothes to wear, but endless love as well. Bathed in their love, we grow up little By little. When we are in trouble, they always help us as much as possible though our willful temperature often hurts them. When we make progress in our studies, they always congratulate us happily as if they themselves succeeded. Parents love can t be expressed by words. We should do our best to repay it.
From a painting to the love of parents, the writing is relatively natural and smooth, and the description of the pictures is carried out in order of position, highlighting the key points, and orderly.

A Starlit Night
Night has fallen. The moon hangs quietly in the sky. All the stars emit their soft and soothing light. Birds have gone back to their nests.
This beautiful scenery reminded me of the old days spent with my grandmother in a small town. On hot evenings, we would usually stay outdoors for a long time. I lay on the bamboo bed under the stars with a big fan in my hand, listening to my grandmother tell me all kinds of legendary stories. The most unforgettable one was about Niulang and Zhinü. It was a charming love story, though at that time I could not understand all this. I always raised my head, hoping to point out which was Star Niulang and which was Star Zhinü among the thousands, but I failed.
My grandmother died many years ago, but whenever I took at the sky, I will remember her.
The author of this article starts from two aspects. On the one hand, he describes the night scene, and on the other hand, he expresses his recollection of the past by describing what happened at night.The description of the article is detailed, vivid, and very appealing, allowing readers to feel a peaceful and peaceful atmosphere of life.

An Early Morning Walk in the Park
Last Sunday I woke up at 6:00 in the morning. I got up quickly and opened the window. It was a fine day. The sun had just risen, shining brilliantly. Everything seemed to be covered with a large piece of golden silk. Occasionally I could hear some birds singing in the trees. It was so fine. I decided to go for a walk in the park near my home. I walked all the way to the park.
When arriving at the park, I found there were so many people there. Some adults were doing morning exercises; some old people were doing Taijiquan; some were playing chess; some were talking about their birds cheerfully with the caged birds hung on some banches.
I walked around the park. To my delight, I found two classmates were talking with two foreigners in English in the northwest corner of the park. Then I joined them in talking. We had a free talk for half an hour, and then said" Goodbye” to one another.
On my way home, I thought walking in the park in the morning could make one happy and healthy.
The first paragraph of the article explained the time, place and people, and described the morning scene outside the window; the second and third paragraphs described what they saw and heard in the park: some were doing morning exercises, some were doing Tai Chi, some were Some were playing chess, some were playing and talking about birds, and to "I"'s surprise, there were two students in the park who were talking in English with two foreigners, and "I" happily participated in their conversation; the last paragraph wrote The feeling of "I" going for a walk in the park.In short, the author has made a specific and vivid description of the different activities, behaviors and "I" psychology of different characters in the park, a specific place.

The sentences in the text are full of changes.In addition to some general simple sentences, the author used the present participle phrases as accompanying adverbials in many places, such as the shining brilliantly in the fourth sentence of the first paragraph The sun had just risen, shining brilliantly.The last two participle phrases in the last sentence of the paragraph: I walked all the way to the park, breathing the fresh air, feeling very happy.The author uses some compound sentences in other paragraphs.These changeable sentence patterns make the article read fresh and natural, just like the beautiful scene seen in the park in the morning, it is unforgettable.

In the fifth sentence of the first paragraph of the article, Everything seemed to be covered with a large piece of golden silk. It used a metaphor in the rhetorical technique.Here it means: the sun is rising, the golden light is shining, and everything is shining like a layer of golden silk veil.Appropriate use of some figures of speech in the text can increase the expressive effect of the language.

In the Examination Room
When I, as one of the monitors, got to the examination room the other day, all the examinees were already there. There were still ten minutes before we monitors gave them papers. I sensed that the atmosphere was frozen. It seemed that an important event would soon happen, and the future of the examinees would be determined at that very moment. Some sat there, looking worried; some looking confident; some looking tired and nervous with their eyes surrounded by two big black circles. From this glance, I could make out that they must have stayed up very late in preparing for today's examination.
Soon the bell broke the silence.
The examination papers were handed out to them. They quickly glanced over the questions and, at the same time, made their choice. Some sighed with great relief, some smiled, while some scratched their heads savagely. At my rate, most of them lost not a second to start working.
Soon, the room was drowned in the noise of scratching paper and of regular breathing.
The bell rang again and all papers were handed in. All the examinees streamed out of the room, busily exchanging their opinions and their results. Some talked loudly, wearing triumphant smiles on their faces while others made low voices, looking defeated.
In chronological order, the author describes the atmosphere in the examination room before the examination and the state of the candidates; the reaction of the candidates after the test papers are handed out, the situation in the test room during the test, and the behavior of the candidates after the test papers are returned.The focus of the article is on the expressions and behaviors of candidates, whether they are happy or worried, nervous or confident, etc. By exaggerating this focus, the author writes the main characteristics of the specific place of the examination room: the examination room is a place for candidates to compete, and the examination room Like a battlefield.

There are two metaphors used in the text.In the third sentence of the first paragraph, the atmosphere was frozen.In the fourth paragraph, the room was drowned in the noise. These two metaphors are used appropriately to highlight the unique tension in the examination room.

Three places in the article use the contrast method, that is, the first paragraph compares the different states of the candidates before the high school entrance examination, the third paragraph compares the different reactions of the candidates after the test papers are issued, and the last paragraph describes the different behaviors of the candidates when they leave the examination room.The comparison of these three places successfully portrays the different psychological activities of different candidates in the same examination room.

Shanghai at Night
Shanghai is one of the most beautiful large cities in the world. It is also a beautiful seaport which attracts tourists from all parts of the world. Many people visit it during the day, but the scenery at night is wonderful.
When the moon rises, the gentle soft lights shine over the sea, stars twinkle all night, which look like the attendants of the beautiful queen—the moon. Many boats and ships go across the sea and leave silver lines behind them in the water that ripples along.
At night Shanghai is covered with so many electric lights that look like those decorated light in Christmas trees. And the lights are also reflected in the water. In the clear sky the bright moon seems like a big one. light makes Shanghai very beautiful.
Shanghai is a beautiful city in the day but even more wonderful at night.
This article vividly and vividly depicts a beautiful night scene of Shanghai.The first paragraph briefly introduces Shanghai, a beautiful international metropolis.Then, the author described the charming night scenes of Shanghai in different time and environments, such as the fall of night, the beginning of the lanterns, and the brilliant lights and stars in chronological order; the author did not make a general description, but described the most typical night scene - the moon , Starlight, lanterns, and busy ships on the sea are depicted.

This article uses rhetorical techniques such as comparison and metaphor to highlight the central content and render the main plot.The comparison between the last sentence of the first paragraph and the last paragraph shows that the night in Shanghai is more beautiful than the daytime; the first sentence of the third paragraph compares the lanterns in Shanghai to the decorative lights on the Christmas tree, which is pleasing to the eye.The appropriate use of rhetorical techniques in the descriptive text makes the language vivid, vivid and prominent, leaving a deep impression on the readers.

My mother
The person I love best in the world is my mother. Like many other Chinese women, my mother is diligent. She works in a supermarket. Because of her work, she often goes home very late at night.
Mother is very kind. At home, she treats my father kindly. She cares for me willingly. She treats my grandmother as if she were her own mother. So my grandma loves her. Besides, she gets along well with her neighbors and colleagues. When they have difficulties, she is always ready to lend them a helpful hand. Therefore she is loved and respected in our neighborhood and in her shop.
Not only a qualified mother, but also a good tutor on my life s road is she. She always warns us: "Study while you study. Play while you play. Then you can be useful to society in the future." What a good piece of advice it is! I'll keep it in my mind forever.
Such is my mother—ordinary but great!

The author of this article uses the direct description method to describe the mother from three aspects.First write about the professionalism of the mother, then write about her respecting the old and loving the young, and finally write about the mother's guidance to "me" on the road of life.At the same time, the author uses other people's views on the described characters to set off the characters indirectly, so as to make the images of the characters more vivid and full.

The first sentence of the third paragraph of this article is an inverted sentence, emphasizing the part of a good tutor on my life s road after but also.This is also the central sentence of this paragraph, which shows that "my" mother is not only a qualified mother like many other mothers, but also "my" mother is different. She is also an excellent guide on "my" life path.

Our Bedroom
Our bedroom is on the fifth floor of the Second Dormitory Building. It is a mediumsize room about six meters long and three meters wide. The walls are milk white and the ceiling is light yellow. Facing the south, it has a large window. Beneath it there is a painted radiator for heating the room in the winter time. At the right corner there is a blue door. Next to it stands a tall shelf on which we put our suitcases. Beside the shelf, there is a row of hooks for us to hang on our school bags and jackets. Against the walls stand the beds for four of us. Each bed is covered with brightcoloured bedsheet. In the middle of the room, there are four sets of chairs and desks. such a way that we can sit and write on them. We put our books and stationery on them. Above the desks there are two lights which make the room very bright at night. On the whole, it is a pleasant and comfortable room.
The above description of the dormitory is like the lens of a camera focusing on the walls, ceiling, windows, shelves by the door, tables and chairs in the bed room by the wall, and the electric lights on the upper part of the room in sequence, making it clear at a glance after reading.Such a detailed and orderly description is related to the transition elements of more than ten table positions and locations in the text.They represent new information or expounding objects for each sentence of the article.The description of the article is carried out with these transition words representing new information or places appearing in sequence.

Busy Street in the Morning
If you live on the street, a busy scene appears before your eyes every morning when you happen to open your window.
You can see a lot of people rushing by, pupils to school, workers and cadres to work and housewives to markets.
In the street, the police are busy guiding the traffic. All kinds of traffic are traveling up and down on their own ways.
You can also hear sorts of noises, such as the school bells, shouting from people, and mothers calling their children etc.
Morning is the busiest time of the day.
The author skillfully combined what he saw and heard, so that the audio-visual description constituted a colorful and vivid picture.In the second paragraph, a rushing by leads to the scene of people of different occupations rushing for different purposes in the same morning, avoiding the repeated use of verbs and making the sentences concise.The sequence of several sounds in the third paragraph further concretizes the busy and noisy streets.The last sentence of the question echoes from the beginning to the end.

Autumn
Perhaps autumn is the most pleasant season of the year. The weather is neither too hot nor too cold. It is the best time for going on a trip.
Last Sunday we went to the countryside. There was golden wheat all over the fields. Large and colorful apples and pears were hanging on the trees. We could see some peasants were busy getting in the crops in the fields, and others were picking fruit under the trees. All the baskets were full of lovely fruit. It was also the fruit of the peasants labor. "No pains, no gains." What a beautiful picture it was! It seemed as if we were wandering in a wonderful world!

I love autumn. I love the harvest time.
Reading this English travel note is like seeing a living sketch.The author organically combines the objective description with the subjective description, and after the objective description of the scenery first far away and then near, first abstract and then concrete, he then focuses on the emotional description of people in an atmosphere.The two blend with each other, the primary and secondary are distinct, and the details are appropriate, so that the scenery and characters in the pen form a picture that resonates with readers.

An Interesting Class
The bell for the composition class was ringing and all the students had taken seats, waiting for the teacher. Several minutes passed, but the teacher didn't appear. The boys and girls began to wonder what had happened to her. Some students began to talk , and some took out other books. Some even made a noise, which grew louder and louder.
About twenty minutes later, the door opened and Miss Li came in at last. No apology was made.
At this moment, Miss Li picked up a piece of chalk, wrote “Teacher is late.” on the blackboard and said that was the topic for the composition.
What an interesting composition class!

This article describes an interesting composition class by skillfully setting up suspense.The use of accompanying adverbials and attributive clauses in the article reflects the author's good language quality.

An Unforgettable Poem Contest
To commemorate the 100th anniversary of the birth of Zhou Enlai, our school held an inspiring poem contest on March 5.
Before the contest, I was rather nervous. The ball was packed with people. But when I stood on the rostrum, I was too deeply moved to feel nervous. All the people there were filled with love and respect for the great leader.
I learned a lot from the contest. Premier Zhou always cared for the people and served the people heart and soul. As students, only by working hard, can we build our motherland into a powerful country?

This is a typical three-paragraph essay.Write "purpose" in the first paragraph, "competition process" in the second paragraph, and "feelings" in the third paragraph. The second and third paragraphs are all to illustrate the theme that this competition is inspiring.

I Were the Headmaster
I were the headmaster, just wait and see, I will turn our school into a beautiful garden.
At this moment, there are only a few flower beds. That s not enough. When summer comes, we feel so hot that we can t play any sport on the playground. So I am going to grow more flowers. Some of them will be put beneath the windows, others around the playground, even outside the school gate.
We have two playgrounds. One of them will be left for play. The other one will be used for rest. I will plant many trees around the ground, aprictos in the west, pear trees in the south, pomegrantate trees in the east, and persimmon trees in the north.
When spring is here, our school will be red and green all over. Look! The red apricot blossoms are out. The pear blossoms, small and white, clean and bright, cover the trees like snow. And the pomegranate blossoms are like balls of fire. In autumn, the persimmon trees will be green with leaves. feel tired and need a rest after class, they can sit under the trees. How nice!

I will also set up all kinds of groups for students. For example, maths group, English group, art group, computer group, and so on. Our library will get more useful and helpful books.
I will set up two letter boxes. One is for suggestions. Two heads are better than one. I think it can help our school get better and better. The other one will be named “Yi Xiu Box”, used for answering difficult questions.
In addition, I will set an example of learning from the merits of other headmasters and teachers. I hope the students will have confidence in me, and really like the school.
The author of this article draws a picture of the campus landscape under his "class", which is specific, vivid and colorful. Although it belongs to personal imagination, it is very in line with the requirements of today's quality education situation.From a literary point of view, it should be noted that the description should be accurate.

How Should We Communicate
A few weeks ago, a great change happened to my family: my parents finally realized how lacking in technology we were and decided to install the Interent. My younger brother and sisters were enjoyed. The fact that a wealth of information was now available at the click of a mouse wasn't what excited them, though, it was the realization that along with the Internet came the bonus of having America Online's Instant Messenger.
Our lives have changed. Instead of reading books or playing outside, my brother and sisters are constantly glued to our computer, “chatting” with their friends and acquaintances. The other night, while I was doing research on the Web, my younger sister demanded that I let her use the computer, saying she had to “make plans”. “Why not make a few phone calls?”

"But, Ali," she said, "there are some people you don't just call."

Situations like this annoying me. Why form relationships online? Don ta person s facial expressions, emotions and tone of voice make up a big part of his or her personality? When I see the TV commercial with the girl saying, “I love having Instant Messenger, it lets me be myself,” I wonder how someone can be herself while hiding behind a computer screen. When did teenagers become so shallow that they can t show their personalities in face to face conversation?

I hope our overly technical society can return to the old forms of communication —talking in person or on the phone. While I still get the “You ve got to be kidding me” look from my brother and sisters when I say email instead of IM , I m glad that for me, the personal computer is not a place to form shallow relationships, but one of education and information.
In today's society, the network has extended to thousands of households.For teenagers, online life has slowly become a part of real life.How to treat young people's communication on the Internet is an issue that has attracted more and more attention in the Internet age.The author of this article saw anxiety in his own sister.

The author begins with the decision to install a dedicated Internet connection at home, much to the delight of his younger siblings.But the author pointed out that what they are happy about is not that they can look up information, but that they can use AOL instant messaging service and chat online to make friends.Then the author said that the younger brothers and sisters indulged in making friends online all day long, expressing their dissatisfaction with this superficial way of communication.He believes that people should not use personal computers as a tool for communication. Communication should be done in person or by telephone. Computers are tools for obtaining education and information.

When writing such an argumentative article, it is recommended that you give more examples to express your point of view, which will be more convincing.In this article, if the author can find out the disadvantages of his so-called superficial communication, it will support his argument even more.

Sun Shines Joy into Student's Life
Come wind, rain or shine—whatever the weather—there are crowds of students at school. Some hate school and think it is too boring(冬的)to bear! But others love it. They realize school is an enjoyable place where they can find fun.
Ordinary things like sunrise and sunset may not have moved us for a long time. This is because we are becoming so foolish that we don t even take a little time to enjoy them. God gives us great presents, but most of us refuse them. No wonder so many people are unhappy.
The chance to be happy doesn t always exist, but sometimes it comes knocking on our doors.
Once, I made it my daily duty to open the door of my classroom. Some people think this is hard work, and it is. But I look at it in another way.
During the busy term, few get the chance to feel the sunrise. But I do. When I get to school in the morning, the moon and a few stars are still shining in the sky. A small number of lights are turned on and the school is silent.I like the atmosphere.After opening the door,I usually have to wait for some time before a second classmate enters the classroom.So,I wait outside on the balcony(balcony)and look far into the distance,waiting for the miracle (miracle)—the sunrise.
I see the bottom of the sky turn bright and the new sun appear bit by bit until full sunlight spills across the land. I feel excited by the view, and a little sorry that my poor classmates miss such an exciting moment.
But they think schooldays are boring.
When school finishes it s usually already six o clock. Most of my classmates leave as quickly as possible, as if they will die if they stay a little longer. Someone s singing aloud, another s laughing, and someone else is eating in a hurry .
I don't follow them, sometimes I stay till there are only two or three students left. The noisy students finally disappear, I guess it must be a relief for the school.
Once more, I stand on the balcony and look into the distance, waiting for another miracle—the sunset. I see the sun lose its shine and silently disappear behind the horizon. The campus regains its silence. The atmosphere is really wonderful.
Sunrise, sunset—some people don t value the simple pleasures in life. I am lucky to have the chance to enjoy them on schooldays.
When possession becomes a habit, we forget to cherish it.The author has a heartfelt feeling in the ordinary campus life: as long as you experience it with your heart, everything will become delicious.The language of this article is vivid, the thinking is clear, the writing style is fluent and full of philosophy.

The Atmosphere of a Temple
The first time I stepped into the temple, my brain suddenly became blank at the mysterious atmosphere, Quietness overwhelmed the big hollow hall as if the spirit was burning. A column of light smoke was continuously rising from a big copper jar. Some reverent pilgrims were kneeling before the statues which represented the spirit, whispering their wishes or quietly asking for help. Beside the copper jar, there was a little monk, continuously tapping a sculptured wooden head with a short stick.
The atmosphere was so solemn and so mysterious that I forgot all that I had prepared to do.
This short text describes the mysterious and serene atmosphere of the incense-filled temple.The author is good at combining his own feelings with the impression obtained through careful observation, and the connection is natural and seamless.For example, at the beginning, I wrote about the mysterious atmosphere in the temple, and then expressed my feelings: my mind was blank; at the end, I wrote that the atmosphere was so solemn, solemn, mysterious and peaceful, that the author expressed such emotion: I forgot the purpose of coming here !

The author of the article observes life meticulously and uses pen to practice.The article is short and exquisite, straight to the point, and goes deep step by step, making people feel like they are on the scene.

The words and sentences in the text are appropriate and concise, for example: my brain suddenly became blank at; quietness overwhelmed the big hollow hall as if; the atmosphere was so that I forgot, etc.
Beauty
Helen Keller once said, "The best and the most beautiful things in life cannot be seen or even touched, they must be felt with the heart."

Often, even for those of us who are sighted, beauty is elusive and hard to defined. For me, beauty is what I always seek to experience and understand. Every day, everywhere I go, wherever my eyes light, there I see beauty in China, often in traditional forms, but even more often in modern ones.
As I go about my daily life, I see rows of trees lining the streets, I see the indescribable beauty of the rough dark branches of them, outlined(etched) against the deep green of their abundant leaves. Beautiful, you say. And I agree. As I walk through the city on my way to school, I look up at yet another skyscraper under construction, wrapped in a cocoon of bamboo poles. Glass and bamboo, artificial and natural, old and new. Beauty!

When I go to the park, I am almost overcome with the beauty that surrounds me. There are the traditional forms of happy families flying blue, red and yellow kites, and the softer glory of a dragonfly hovering over the lake.
At the temple I am again overwhelmed. I step inside and relax into the calming quiet. I breathe in the sweet fragrance of incense, and walk forward into a mist of smoke, a world beyond and within the everyday. I walk on further.In the distance, I behold colorful ads and steaming cars, with jazz vaguely heard.
Before me, a map of China carved into the mountainside. A map of China carved into the wrinkles of grandmother s cheek as she lovingly cuddles granddaughter, whose own smooth cheek will soon be scuplted into the face of China s future.
Calligraphy and Kodak. Bicycles and Beamers. Glue pots and computers. China. Beauty!

Through the understanding of beauty, this article leads people to walk into life, experience life, and feel the beauty of life.The writing style of the article is fluent and beautiful, the structure is compact, the context is coherent, and the language is decent and profound.Although there are not many gorgeous words, it unexpectedly has a sense of tranquility and realism, making people feel as if they are in the scene.

The Beauty of My Hometown
I am strongly gifted with the rural feeling. I love the beauties of nature. For some time I lived in a cottage, which faces a lawn that extends like a huge carpet of vivid green.
Behind the cottage slim bamboo is swaying in the breeze, and before the cottage lies a fine and soft lawn with colorful wild flowers and quiet pools dotted about. In the pools fish are roaming about freely. Woodbine crawls over the walls, hanging its blossoms about .Around the cottage holly is providerly planted, to cheat winter of its dullness, and to throw an appearance of green summer to cheer the cold house.
Looking out of the window, I can see clumps of tall trees here and there, heaping up piles of rich green leaves in the air, the magnificence of groves, and woodland glades, with deer trooping in silent herds across them, hares bounding away to coverts, or pheasant birds suddenly bursting open their wings, a crystal stream winding its way into a glassy lake, reflecting the trembling trees, with yellow leaves sleeping in the midst, and at whiles I catch sight of an old temple or some still statues, grown green and damp with age, giving an air of classic holiness to retirement.
If ever love, as poets sing, delights to visit a cottage, it must be my cottage.
This is a masterpiece of scenery writing.The author of the article has exquisite brushwork, gorgeous writing, clear and clear, euphemistic and touching.

The article is divided into three levels.The first level expresses the author's deep love and nostalgia for nature, and mentions that Zeng Xiao lived in the countryside.The second layer depicts the natural scenery around the cottage, which is full of poetic connotation in content and poetic rhythm in form.Its freshness, softness, magnificence, simplicity and elegance, colorfulness, stillness in movement, and movement in stillness are all presented to readers.The scenery is written from near to far, and there is emotion between the lines. It seems that you can hear the sound of gurgling water, smell the quiet fragrance of flowers, and see the leisurely fish in the water.The third layer, the last sentence, is a poem, which is placed at the end of the article to deepen the theme.How could such a beautiful place not be favored by the god of love!
Many forms of non-predicate verbs are used in the article, such as in the second and third paragraphs, to achieve a concise and vivid effect.The third paragraph uses a lot of parallelism to enhance the momentum of the article.Anthropomorphic writing can be seen everywhere in the text, such as cheat winter of; winding its way; trembling trees; leaves sleeping; lovedelights to visit, etc.
Weekend Life in the USA
In the USA Monday is the beginning of the workweek. It is the day most Americans like least. It is not surprising then that the day they like most is Saturday. Saturday is the end of the workweek. It is the beginning of the weekend.
Life is different on the weekend in the USA. Most Americans take care of their houses, cars or gardens. They sleep late in the morning. They enjoy the feeling that the time seems to move more slowly. The week is for things you have to do. The weekend is for things you want to do. Some people may get in a car and go for a drive in the country. In a town in Indiana there is a Saturday night custom called “cruising”. Cruising means to spend the evening driving your car slowly up and down the town s main street. People have a cruising talk from car to car. They exchange greetings, jokes and friendly insults. Cruising is the most popular in small towns where there is not much else to do. They like to take part in a sports activity outdoors. And on Saturday night they might go to a public eating place or a cinema.
Anything and everything can happen on Saturday night. People go dancing; they visit friends and parties. They drink too much. They sleep, watch TV, and so on.
Many people spend the Saturday night at home with friends. They have dinner together. Maybe they watch a movie on a video cassette rocorder. Half the Americans would be glad to trade a paid workday for an extra day of free time. The only thing wrong With the weekend, the Americans think, is that it does not last longer.
This article describes the way Americans spend their weekends.Much of the ink is devoted to descriptions of the peculiar ways that some small towns, such as a small town in Indiana, spend their weekends.Driving on the street on Saturday evening, the drivers greeted each other, talked and laughed, and even insulted each other friendly. It was very impressive, and how different it was from the way of spending weekends in other places!

A lot of contrastive sentences are used in the article, for example: Monday is the beginning of the workweek.Saturday is the beginning of the weekend.The week is for things you have to do.The weekend is for things you want to do. Jane is right.When describing the American way of spending weekends, it highlights its uniqueness, and the language is concise and catchy.The article ends with American humor.

Success with Foreign Guest
The other day, my father told me that one of his foreign friends, who comes from Scotland (Scotland), was coming to visit us. I became nervous at once. Should I talk to him in English?

"He can speak Chinese," said my father. "So it's a good chance for you to practice your spoken English."

"What?" I was excited, but at the same time worried. Excited, because it was a great chance to improve my English and an unforgettable experience. Worried, because I had never talked to a foreigner before.
My English was very poor.When I talked to other people in English, I got nervous about my grammar and could not speak fluently(fluently).The worst thing was that when I spoke,I felt everybody was looking at me.And if I made many mistakes, I thought I would be laughed at. I really lacked the confidence to speak English.
Well, the foreigner, Derec, finally arrived. He was friendly and polite, just like an English gentleman who lived in the 19th century. But, friendly as he was, I was still very nervous.
I can t remember what we talked about. But I remember that whatever he asked me, I could only answer yes or no. I was so embarrassed (awkward).
But Derec was very nice. He tried to speak slowly and use simple words to make me understand. Little by little, I began to relax and make sentences. I forgot to worry about my grammar and everything else. I just said what I was thinking .And I felt so happy because the gentleman understood me and nodded with a smile.I bet there were lots of mistakes in my sentences,but I didn't care any more.
So, when you talk to a foreigner, just speak out. As for things like grammar, please throw them away. The only thing that matters is that you believe your English is the best.
The author's writing style is fluent, the language is concise, and with real feelings, he tells us the "secret" of speaking English, which can play a very good role in communication and education for students.

Sea Gulls
When you are traveling by ship in a sea, you can often see sea gulls rise and fall.Sometimes the silence of the sea is broken by the loud call of a sea gull.The other sea gulls follow its call.This often happens when they are fighting to get some delicious food.
Along the shore, sea gulls are helpful to the cleaners who clean the beaches.The sea gulls gulp down potato chips and scraps of bread.And because they like insects,they clean away lots of crawly things.Sea gulls also help clean harbors.They Fly slowly in the air over the water and swoop down to pick up some floating things, such as popcorn, vegetables, or dead fish.
In fact, sea gulls are not cleaning up. They re only finding something to eat. They eat all day as long as food can be found. They eat so much just to stay alive because they fly great distance almost every day.
Sea gulls can fly many miles without stopping. They can fly from one country to another with a short rest here and there.
They sweep and swoop like paper airplanes. When they glide, they seem to be sliding down invisible slides up in the air. Others float in great circles with their wings spreading wide. Some just seem to be sitting in the air, almost unmoving, like a kite on a still day.
Sea gulls are good at swimming, too. The skin between their toes makes them have webbed feet like ducks.
Sea gulls stay on the surface of the water sometimes. It s because they want to have a rest after long trips.
The author of this article describes the cuteness of seagulls from four aspects: it brings vitality to the too quiet sea; it is an indispensable environmental guardian of the sea;

From visual description to auditory description and then to visual description, this article depicts a vibrant sea beauty for readers.There are objective descriptions and impressionistic descriptions, and the combination of the two is seamless.When writing about the flying posture of seagulls, I used many very vivid metaphors, such as: sweep and swoop like paper airpplanes; seem to be sliding down invisible slides up in the air; seem to be sitting in the air,. like a kite on a still day.

The transition of this article is natural, the words are expressive and elegant, and the brush strokes are delicate, especially the connection is handled very well.The expressiveness of words is reflected in the use of no less than eight expressions in the word "fei": rise, fall, swoop, sweep, glide, slide, float, sit.

My Favorite Song
The song I enjoy the most is Yesterday Once More. It is an old song. But for me, there are no other songs that can match it.
Each time I listen to it, I imagine a wonderful scene in my mind: A pretty girl was listening to the radio when she was young, with a smile on her face. As time passes by, she is no longer young. She sits down again before the radio, which once brought her happiness, recalling those happy times she had.
When I am tired of doing homework, I like to put on my earsphones and preses the “play” button of the recorder. Then the nice melody comes to my ears again: “When I was young, I d listened to the radio, waiting for my favorite songs”A sort of feeling comes to my mind, and I think that I should cherish today’s happiness of being young.
We all know that yesterday can never come again. However, music can often bring the nicest memories into our hearts. I believe that I will always love this song until I m old. When I m old, I ll listen to this song and recall the pleasant imagines of a boy listening to his favorite songs many years ago. It will be just like yesterday coming back once more.
Recalling something is a special experience.Sometimes it is very nice,while sometimes it makes you very sad.We all wish to come back to those good times,but it is impossible.All we can do is to keep them carefully in the book of life, just like beautiful bookmarks.
A classic old song "Yesterday Reappeared" gave the author a sense of life, realizing that while remembering the past, we should cherish the present time.The writing style is fresh, full of charm, and the philosophy is profound, which makes people have endless aftertaste after reading.

When Will It Stop
After The World Trade Center were destroyed by terrorist attack on September 11th, 2001, the USA began to object to the terrorist activities. In the past years, the USA and Afghanistan and Iraq have broken out two wars. And the one with Iraq was even more ruinous. It appears to us that what the USA have done is just for human s peace. But in actual fact, it just asks for it s own benefit under the words that they were against the terrorist activities. And I think the USA and England have a war with Iraq just on the purpose that they demand more oil. As a result, Japan also send its army to Iraq now, for the same reason. But they only said that they are against the terrorist activities. The more they are against it, the more terrorist activities the world suffers. They are destroying the world's peace. Therefore, when should the action against terrorist activities stop? I m looking forward to this day, which is wished to come as early as possible.
The author boldly discusses the international situation and puts forward his own opinions. It cannot but be said that he is a middle school student with thought and courage.The content of the article is complete, the organization is clear, and the point of view is clear, which shows that the author has a strong ability to control language.The perspective of considering the problem is also worthy of our reference.It is an excellent argumentative essay with pertinent argumentation on the topic and well-analyzed analysis.

Happiness Is for Everyone
I always hear people say: "Oh, I m bad luck. Look at Mr Zhang—he is a millionaire. Look at Mrs Li—her husband is a manager. Then look at me—what am I?"

If you are like these people, please listen to this story.
Three middle school classmates—Mr Zhang, Mrs Li and Mr Wu, meet after ten years. They talk about their lives.
Mr Zhang is a big company manager. He always eats out at expensive restaurant with other business people. He is used to delicious food. But he misses the simple things, like rice and dumplings.
Mrs Li buys a car, but she has little spare time to feel the rain.
Mr Wu owns a big house the size of a palace. But now he wants to live in the countryside.
So, don't envy other people because happiness is always nearby.
When you fall down in physical education class, your friends will help you up. When you study hard for a test and sweat, your parents will be behind you giving you a breeze. When you get good scores , your friends will greet you. When you do the wrong thing, your teacher will correct and help you. You cannot say you are bad luck.
Instead, life is like a revolving door, when it closes, it also opens. So long as you take every chance you get, you can be a happy and lucky person.
This is a philosophical essay.The arguments are clear, logical and intriguing.The language is fluent and the details are appropriate.The text is not only filled with the sweetness of happiness, but also soaked in the light of passion.This is the success of the article, which penetrates the hearts of readers and is worthy of study and appreciation by students.

Something to Look Forward to
Little Children look forward to the arrival of Spring Festival, grownups to that of planting rice. As a child, I couldn't understand what the elders hoped for. But Spring Festival was really fascinating, for it meant the richest food as well as a lot of fun. As soon as the festival was over, I dreamed another one and wished time flew as fast as possible.
Days spent in expectation come and go very fast. Very soon I finished primary school and went to junior and senior middle school. With even more desire for many more things: for graduation with honors, for a good job, for a successful career, for a happy family Climbing the upward steps of hope, I had become a fully grown man before I was aware of it, a busy breadwinner with a family on my hands.
A day without hope would be unimaginably pale.There must be something to look forward to each day to brighten one's life and keep it out of shadows.To a person cherishing hopes every morning rises a new sun.Even if it is a fantasy or an illusion, as long as it shows a ray of hope, it still urges you on in pursuit of that little sparkle without letting up.
Deprived of moisture content, soil turns into desert. Deprived of hope, what is there left to a person? A small hope sustains a person for a day, a great one for a life time. Human beings cannot do without something to look forward to.
The author talks about his childhood expectations in the article, and as he grows older, the contents of the hopes become more colorful. At the end of the article, he reveals a philosophy of life: life without hope is colorless, tasteless, bleak, and there is hope A life full of sunshine and vitality.The author expresses his yearning and strong desire for a better life.The point of view of the article is correct, and it also reflects the positive attitude and optimistic character of the author, which is contagious.The article closely follows the theme and truly embodies the characteristics of prose: the form is scattered but the spirit is not scattered, it is indeed a masterpiece.

Beijing in My Eyes
When I was a small child I once came to Beijing. But at that time I was very young and I only stayed there for a short time, so that trip only made me curious about this city. As time goes by, I really hope to take a good look at this city.Fortunately, this summer I had the opportunity to go to Beijing again.I stayed in Beijing for two weeks.Great changes have taken place there.
Beijing in my eyes is becoming more and more beautiful. When you walk along the street, you will see lots of flowers and trees. The air is fresh, the sun is shining and all are fine and nice.
Beijing in my eyes is becoming more and more modern. The traffic is busy but in good order. A lot of magnificent buildings have been put up. There is so much modern equipment in the office. Because of that, people work much more efficiently that before.
Beijing in my eyes is becoming much richer. People are well dressed and there are so many beautiful cars running in the streets, and lots of drivers are women! In the department stores and supermarkets, there are so many colorful goods. People rush here and there to buy them.
Beijing in my eyes is becoming more and more energetic.People work in a high spirit from day to night and this gives this city more energy.It is a city that seems to have no night.Old people in this city are especially active.They get up early, and do morning exercises, enjoying a happy and healthy life.
I hope I will have another chance to come here again and see more changes of Beijing with my own eyes.
I love Beijing. I hope it will be getting more beautiful and modern.
I love Beijing
(End of this chapter)