Big Bang of Faith

Chapter 156 Popularize the essence of Xiaobaiwen to the great gods (the third update, please subscribe)
Now Liu Bei, if you really want to say it, his writing skills are not necessarily better than these great writers...

After all, he's not writing himself right now.

These classics are just carried over by him.

However, in his previous life, after experiencing countless times of rushing to the street, his vision was still...

For the works of great gods, he thinks he is still qualified to comment.

Thinking of this, he took the lead in opening a book called "Star Fantasy Sword God"...

This work was written by a squirrel named Riding a Pig.

He took a look at Tiansheng Literature's comments on this great god...

"The squirrel riding a pig is a god-level writer of Tiansheng literature, with strong writing skills, and his works are widely sought after by readers for their delicate description and close to reality!"

And this "Star Fantasy Sword God" is obviously his transformational work.

Liu Bei opened it and took a look. This Star Fantasy Sword God obviously borrowed some of the cultivation settings in "Gone with the Wind" in the setting of the power system.

The whole work, the general content, is a story of a young man who joined the sect and continued to grow...

Liu Bei took a look at it. The writing power of this great master is really strong.

A lot of scenes and fights... are also very delicately described. In addition, the emotional entanglement between the male protagonist and the two female protagonists is also written with flesh and blood...

However, the results of this work are tepid.

Liu Bei shook his head just after reading the first few chapters.

These writing methods are not too big a problem in urban writing, and even these emotional entanglements can be regarded as advantages.

After all, online literature in this world is not well developed, and it is more like works that have been eliminated from traditional literature.

It is not surprising that these styles are placed in traditional literature.

Many readers are also accustomed to reading such works.

However, after the transformation, this great god still uses his original rhythm... It's no different from changing a skin.

A comprehension style, fanciful novel, not to mention the slow pace, not to mention the fact that there is no pretense, but the key point is that the two heroine candidates are all grinding, and I can't bear it...

Then, he opened the work of another author named Mi Chong.

This is also an old-fashioned author who writes urban texts. His urban works are more romantic...

But Liu Bei took a look at his new book, it was like another world, the copycat edition of Zhu Xian...

This kind of romantic fairy tale, once written, is a very popular book, but once it is not written well, it will be so bad that it can't be worse.

Sure enough, he took a look at it, and the rice bug's new book almost rushed to grandma's house...

Even, many people directly sprayed him in the book review area, and the godhead has fallen...

As for the works of several other people, Liu Bei looked at them, and they were basically the same.

Liu Bei even felt a little sympathetic to these writers.

In fact, many of their works are still above the standard...

But because of the recovery of spiritual energy, he had to transform...

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"Bai Da, how are you doing?"

Seeing Liu Bei reappeared in the group, everyone couldn't help but become eager.

"Yes, Bai Da, give us some pointers, let us learn a bit!"

"That is, if Bai Dan can teach us how to write online articles, I will explode women's clothing photos in the group..."

It was Michong who spoke, and the moment she spoke, the crowd instantly booed.

"By the way, Michong, haven't you always said that you are a girl? What's the point of showing women's clothes?"

"That's right, why don't you blow up two uniform photos, maybe Bai Da likes this tune?"

"You want to die, don't you, be careful I will expose your black history..."

Looking at the chats in the group, Liu Bei was also surprised.

Unexpectedly, in this world, there are also girls who often mix with men, and it seems that they were doing well before?

No wonder it rushed to the street after the transformation.

Female writers often mix with men, and they just happened to encounter spiritual revival, so they had to transform, and their luck was bad enough.

Seeing that the group had finally calmed down, he said in the group: "Well, if I really want to explain to you how to write online articles systematically, I can't explain it, so I'd like to talk about it. This work!"

"Bai Da gave a lecture, and took a small notebook to take notes!"

"Bench!"

"sofa!"

In the group, they lined up in an instant.

Liu Bei didn't bother, and started to comment directly.

"First of all, let's talk about the advantages of several works. Obviously, the writing styles of several of them are all passable, and the plot is also arranged in a twists and turns... To be honest, let me write, I am not as good as you!"

"Bai Da is too modest!"

"That's right, now that you say you are number two, who dares to admit that you are number one..."

Seeing everyone's speech, Liu Bei shook his head and did not agree.

"Everyone listen to me first!"

Speaking of this, he continued in the group: "Don't you all think that these are really advantages?"

Seeing Liu Bei speak, everyone was stunned.

"Isn't that an advantage?"

"Yeah, could it be that good writing and plot twists are not good points, so what are good points..."

Seeing everyone's speeches, Liu Bei didn't hold back, but said directly:

"These situations are indeed considered advantages in traditional literature, but now, we must first understand, who is our readership group?"

"Obviously, with the recovery of spiritual energy, countless people began to read our works, but we have to understand one thing, these readers did not have much reading habits before!"

"If you don't write more clearly, they won't understand at all, understand?"

"Although, most of them don't have much appreciation ability, but they are the current mainstream readers. When we write, we must consider their ability to accept!"

Speaking of this, Liu Bei gave an example and said: "Take Mi Chong's The Prodigal Son Swordsman as an example. There are too many gorgeous words and phrases, old bookworms may think it is good-looking, but new readers, after a glance, will only read it. I think 'Wow, that's amazing...', and then, there's no more!"

"Didn't the readers think that the more powerful the better?" Mi Chong asked subconsciously in the group.

"It's not like that!"

Liu Bei shook his head, and continued: "Although everyone thinks that your writing is amazing, but everyone is here to make it easy. You make people unable to understand, so who will read it!"

"There is also Squirrel's Star Fantasy Sword God. The same problem, new readers, are all here to make it easy. You arrange such a twists and turns and mind-boggling plot. People just look at it and scare them away..."

In fact, Xiaobaiwen in the previous life began to become popular after the mobile Internet was opened, and a large number of Xiaobai readers flooded in.

But in this world, because of the recovery of spiritual energy and the intervention of the state, many novice readers also poured in.

Liu Bei's point is not nonsense.

"Could it be that Bai Da meant that we should try our best to write the text as white as possible?"

Everyone felt a little incredible!

"Indeed it is!"

Liu Bei gave an affirmative answer, and said in the group: "The specific situation, specific analysis, but one thing is clear, and for a long time to come, readers should prefer this kind of plain text... "

"Then, how to write the text well!"

Liu Bei smiled, and then said in the group: "Speaking of which, I'm afraid everyone has some feelings. Let's use my book "Dragon Snake" as an example. Everyone said, why the urban background in the early stage was obviously not favored by everyone? , but the popularity exploded instead?"

"Just because it's cool, the feeling is cool, and it makes readers enjoy it, so everyone can ignore the doubts about the background setting..."

Seeing Liu Bei's explanation, Wuhen was a little puzzled and said, "Bai Da, do you mean that for the sake of fun, you can even give up some rationality?"

"Wuhen got to the point. Indeed, sometimes when you are writing, you obviously want to write better, but you will feel that writing like this is unreasonable or something..."

"However, in my opinion, there is no need to worry about this at all. How many readers of online articles still remember what you wrote earlier, I am afraid that even the author himself can't remember it. Therefore, as long as it is reasonable or not There are too many flaws, basically some concessions can be made..."

"For example, let's talk about the urban literature you are good at. To be reasonable, do you all want to give the protagonist an opportunity, and then let the protagonist earn money step by step, start a company, develop power, and subdue beautiful women..."

"Although this is reasonable, the process is too long, and most readers probably don't have the patience for such a long time..."

"Then what do you think Bai Da should do?" Everyone asked subconsciously.

"Isn't that simple?" Liu Bei said indifferently: "How can it be fun? Think about it, if you are the protagonist in the book, how can it be fun?"

"Win 500 million by buying a lottery ticket?" Someone asked incredulously.

"Winning a lottery ticket is really cool, but why don't you want to let the protagonist suddenly get 500 million instead of 5000 million? Isn't 5000 million more exciting than 500 million?"

"5000 million is not enough, how about [-] million?"

"50 million is not good enough, [-] billion is not good..."

"It's cool, but it's too unreasonable. How could it be 50 billion..." Everyone retorted subconsciously.

"I also think that 50 billion is not cool enough, why not let the protagonist directly inherit 500 billion, 5000 billion, [-] trillion..."

Seeing everyone with a stunned expression, Liu Bei couldn't help saying:
"Think about it, if you are the protagonist in your book, suddenly, there is an extra five trillion yuan in your bank card, this money is absolutely legal, and you can spend it as you like, are you happy?"

"It's cool, since it's cool, why don't you write like this?"

Everyone was stunned...

"Ding, from..."

"Ding, from..."

Looking at the faith value that suddenly appeared in the background, Liu Bei was not satisfied.

Where is this? This kind of setting is just a setting of a godly novel that was badly written by everyone in the previous life. It is not even a genre...

PS: This chapter is about [-] words, a bit late, everyone forgive me, don't wait for the fourth update, it may be very late.

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