The lady is so cute

Supplementary Notes to Chapter 71

Supplementary Notes to Chapter 71 (for a better understanding of some characters)
It has been more than a month since I wrote it, and I would like to explain some issues here.

The reason why it is posted in the main volume is that almost no readers will read it when it is posted in the work-related section. In addition, readers who read the Q version seem to not be able to see the content of the work-related volume.

[-]. Many readers said that the protagonist is too aggrieved, and the author has also received feedback on this point.

How should I put it, we are newcomers, and we are not good at dealing with that kind of conflict (that is, when someone bullies you and you immediately bully back.) Please forgive me, I can only say that we should try our best to pay attention to this kind of problem.

Originally, I also wanted to write a pretentious and slapstick article, but I didn't want to read it myself after writing it.

[-]. Regarding the issue of the maid, I think it should be a problem of poor viewing angle.

Because I haven't read many online novels, especially in the past two years, I may have misunderstood the deviation of the reader's perspective, and I may have misunderstood the reader's sense of involvement.

Readers who often watch anime may be closer to my perspective.

This should be the reason why some people think this role is okay, while others find it disgusting.

Those who don't watch anime may think that this maid is 'too arrogant' and discriminates against the protagonist.

Readers who have watched anime may know or understand that in anime, this type of character is generally a small obstacle at first, and then serves as an assist or even a role in the harem of the protagonist in the later stage.

In a sense, it has the attributes of arrogance.

Some readers told me that they look forward to seeing the maid show the protagonist a fat ci with a look of disgust (ahem, we are serious people, enough is enough), this kind of contrast is often an interesting point.

But it seems that it is not suitable to have such a role in web novels, and many people can't accept it?

It may be easier to accept if she is brought into the perspective of the protagonist's harem. Of course, it is very likely that we have not grasped the strength and proportion.

Well, anyway, the role of this kind of role will be cut as much as possible in the future without affecting the original outline too much. It can be regarded as a pitfall for the new author.

[-]. The classification is light novels, so the hostility will not be as heavy as fantasy novels on cultivating immortals. We can't write the kind that reveals killing intent in every chapter, and we don't want to write it.

The label has invincible text, but there is no fighting, so readers who are not used to it can give up.

Fourth, the first volume is more like an introduction, leading to the story the author really wants to tell.

Some foreshadowing of the later plots are also buried in it, although I don't know if it will be used when writing later. (After all, we are rookies)

It has the label of invincible literature, but we have given up the advantage of pretending to be cool because we want to write novels that combine love.

Otherwise, I would vote for the fantasy fairy tale category instead of light novels. (The key is that we don't know how to write cool texts, and we don't know how to write them)
[-]. Regarding the update, due to various reasons, the update speed has not increased in the past few days and only a minimum update can be guaranteed every day.

that's all.

Recently, I am also trying to learn some techniques for writing pretense and slapping faces. Do you have any novels that are cool and reasonable in writing pretense and slapping faces? Please recommend them so that the author can learn.

Readers who have read light novels in the true sense must be unaccustomed to reading this book, after all, some plots may seem to them to be disgusting plots of the protagonist.

So please forgive me, the author will try to reduce this perception.

Finally, the author tries to tell a story that can satisfy you.

(End of this chapter)

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