Black tech predators

Chapter 117 Testimonials, Summary and Outlook (readers must read!)

Coincidentally, this month is this year's college entrance examination, and for Zhao Ling, the nearly two free public updates are a long assessment. On June 6, that is, tomorrow Friday at 14:[-] noon, it will be officially launched. It means that the results of this book are about to be released, and the first order results are very important.

Zhaoling is anxious and looking forward to it now, with a thousand words in her heart, and she has considered writing some words about selling miserables and begging for a subscription, but after thinking about it, forget it, as long as she is a reader who pays for VIP and likes this story, she will definitely subscribe , Qidian Chinese website has been open for 20 years. The big readers who read books are basically old bookworms. I guess they read a lot of testimonials and so on. Zhaoling doesn’t write any fancy things. Write down what's on your mind.

Zhaoling believes that readers have discerning eyes, as long as they write chapters and stories that satisfy readers, they will subscribe and buy it.

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According to the title, it was put on the shelves, and the next is the testimonials. First of all, I would like to thank all readers and friends who collected, voted for recommendations, and gave rewards during the free public period.

As of the main data of "Black Technology Raptors" before it was put on the shelves, 124 chapters have been updated, with a total of about 33 words, a total of about 10 recommendation votes, and about 3.7 favorites. As of the update of this chapter, 197 readers have tipped during the free period For this book, the amount of rewards varies. The highest "Brother Dangwu" accumulates 15000 starting coins, and the lowest tipping amount is 100 starting coins.

These data are not cold, but represent the full love of every reader. Chaoji thanks every reader and friend who has collected this book, voted for recommendations, and given rewards or other support.

This is the greatest support and affirmation for Zhaoling. Zhaoling has already handed in the test paper, and each reader will evaluate and score tomorrow's first book.

Finally, I would like to thank the Yuewen Group platform and thank you for editing the expedition.

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The next thing is the update issue after it was put on the shelves. If there was no moth about the platform rectification and reform some time ago, Zhao Ling estimated that there are hundreds of chapters in the manuscript. During that time, I was really worried about writing, frantically changing the article, and saving the manuscript. Changed, deleted at least 30 chapters, I feel so distressed, I almost doubt my life.

But there is no way, river crabs are force majeure.

During that time, there was no way to save manuscripts, and a lot of them were deleted, plus the plot was adjusted.The chapters that have been updated have also been revised in retrospect, and even "The Travels of the Umbrella Holder" is no longer there. What a beautiful lyrical prose, everyone agrees~~cough cough cough...

Closer to home, Zhaoling still has some manuscripts left, so I also thought that there will definitely be a wave of explosions on the day it goes on the shelves.

Guaranteed 7 updates tomorrow, don't get me wrong, I didn't imply anything, I just simply prefer the number 7...

Then there are other rules for adding changes. Zhaoling decided to include all data in the adding sequence, so that it is easy to trigger the number of adding changes. It will be updated on the basis of the guaranteed 2 updates the next day.

First of all, the first order results will be added. If the first order exceeds 3000, 1 update will be added. On this basis, every accumulated 1000 will add 1 update, and so on, so everyone must subscribe, especially the first order. The first order results will come out the next day in Zhaoling The update will be reported to everyone, and will also be reported to everyone in the group. You can also search the starting point data network in Du Niang, enter the title of the book to view the first book score, this is third-party data, not very accurate, generally false than the real score High, but about the same.

The following update rules are always valid, and the data meets the update requirements and will be updated the next day.

as follows:

①Addition of recommendation tickets: In the future, the cumulative number of recommendation tickets will be 1 plus 1 update every week, and every 5 recommendations will be added with 1 update, and so on. Four or five chapters can be updated here every week. The key is that the recommendation votes do not cost money and will be refreshed every day, so please continue to vote for this book.

②Monthly ticket change: every time 200 tickets are reached, the change will be added, and so on, with no cap.

③ Add rewards: one hall master adds 1 update, and one alliance master adds 5 updates. As for Bai Yinmeng, forget it, the hall masters are all hanging... Regarding rewards and updates, I am ashamed of Zhaoling's appeal to me, but I feel a little bit No idea, I didn’t want to set this rule at first, but if there is a large reward, it will have to be changed. In short, it depends on fate. I also thought about plans such as crowd-funding and crowd-funding alliances, but it’s still true. My own charisma has no bottom, let's see fate.

Regarding the update after it is put on the shelves, let’s do this for the time being. If you have better ideas, you can join the private chat in the group, or leave a message in the APP book review area.

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Returning to this book, the title has already typed the word summary, which is to make a summary of the content during the free period of the book.

The current score of this book has surpassed Zhaoling's last two books. I am very happy, which shows that there is progress.

However, many problems were still found. The shortcoming of the last two books was that the character description was weak. After thinking about it for a long time after finishing the book, I found that in the middle and late stages of writing, the protagonist had no fierce conflicts due to the lack of opponents, and the plot was as flat as water. The ups and downs and collisions give people the feeling of being tasteless and a pity to discard, and they give up after a long time.

To put it bluntly, the portrayal of the villain is not in place, and the hero has no opponent, so there is no goal to surpass, which leads to the invincibility of the hero in the middle and late stages, especially in the later stage, and then readers continue to pass away, and the performance declines.

This is a summary of some of the shortcomings of the previous book.

Therefore, in the book "Black Technology Raptors", the improvement that Zhao Ling most desires is to be able to surpass the previous book in terms of characterization, so that the shortcomings of the previous book will not happen in this book.

However, because of trying to put more energy into the characterization, it also caused problems in the updated content during the public period. The typical character "Meng Na", the younger sister of the male patron Gu Cheng, has been criticized a lot.

The second is that the plots of "Mengna" and "E-sports" are mostly unpleasant.

Here, Zhao Ling would like to thank everyone for your comments and messages. It is precisely because of these meaningful comments and interactions that we can quickly see the shortcomings, so that we can make timely adjustments in the early stage, reduce the content in this area, and strive for perfection.

When the book was opened, the role of Mona was actually arranged to appear in the first five chapters, but after thinking about it, this role will only play a role in the middle and late stages, and it is obviously not appropriate to appear too many characters in the early stage, too complicated foreshadowing, Zhao Ling does not have such a strong writing skills.

Then we should maximize our strengths and avoid weaknesses. The main line in the early stage must be clear, because readers will not have so much patience to watch you lay the groundwork. There are too many characters in the early stage and readers will not be able to remember them. Instead, the precious words of the early chapters and the prime time for readers to read will be wasted.

Therefore, the role of "Meng Na" was adjusted to appear after twenty or so chapters. I vaguely remember seeing some readers commenting on the chapter saying, "The younger sister of the pig's feet is really miserable, and she came out so late" 2333...

But even with some adjustments, there are still problems exposed in the follow-up update content, that is, the plot of "e-sports" appeared, which almost messed up the primary and secondary. Fortunately, the readers gave immediate feedback and pulled it back. The plots about e-sports competitions in the seventh and eighth chapters are deleted and adjusted in time, otherwise I will be self-satisfied, thank you again.

As you may have guessed, Zhao Ling may be affected by the shortcomings of the previous book, and subjectively always wanted to portray more characters besides the protagonist, so she unconsciously arranged some foreshadowing plots for the role of "Meng Na" Serve for the mid-term stage to play a role.

The result may have been counterproductive, the writing did not satisfy everyone, and received most of the criticisms, but it was precisely because of these criticisms that Zhaoling was able to adjust in time. then break.

During the period, a wave of single-chapter "seeks for help" left messages from readers, which was a huge help.

Zhaoling got inspiration from it, and now she has found a better follow-up arrangement for the role of "Meng Na", which can be well combined with the main plot, that is, "black technology". As for the details, I will not spoil it.

The 33-word content during the public period, the big problems should be the above, and there must be some problems that have not been discovered. There is no doubt about this. If you find it, please point it out.

But some force majeure problems are irresistible for Zhaoling. After all, river crabs are irresistible existences. For example, this seemingly obvious BUG means that the protagonist is becoming more and more important. The people above will not come out to meet the protagonist to show their importance to the protagonist. .

After the meeting, Hexie will come to see you right away...

The above is a summary of the public period of this book.

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Finally, let me talk about the outlook.

Readers in the group may know that, yes, Zhao Ling has actually started to conceive and gradually improve the next book since the book was updated.

The next book is the sequel to "Black Technology Raptors", which follows a world view and background structure.

After Zhaoling completes the update task of "Black Technology Raptors" every day, she basically spends about an hour or half an hour conceiving the sequel and new book.

Let's start with "Black Technology Raptors". The name is indeed a bit "sand sculpture". There is no way, all the good titles have been taken up, but this is not the point.

Old readers who have followed the last two books should know, or readers who read black science and technology articles should also know that as long as these novels are released on the earth, nine out of ten books will collapse.

"Super Technology Giant" collapsed when it came out of the earth, which also caused "Almighty Technology Giant" to stay on the earth due to sequelae, and it ended hastily after flying out.

As for "Black Technology Raptors", what is certain now is that it will definitely go to the stars and seas in the later stage. With the previous two lessons, Zhaoling thinks that she is fully prepared and confident this time.

However, it is still very cautious, because of this there will be a sequel to the predator.

We will wait and see if we can write what Zhao Ling thinks in his heart, but Zhao Ling really wants to start from the book Predators and write a story with a grand background, starting from the cradle of the earth, and going all the way to the stars and seas. During this period, human civilization was upgraded from a planetary-level civilization to a star-level civilization amid mutual disputes and civilization progress.

Therefore, "Black Technology Raptors" will come out of the earth, but the main frame of the whole world background is still unfolded in the solar system, mainly based on the stories of conflicts and disputes within human beings during the initial pioneering period of stepping out of the cradle of the earth and entering the great voyage of the universe. The hole is related black technology.

Although it is jumping from the frame of the earth to the frame of the solar system, here is a quote from Da Liu's "Three-Body" novel, I don't remember the specifics, it roughly means that "the fish that landed are no longer fish, and the human beings who have entered space Not human anymore."

Therefore, from the earth to the expansion of the entire solar system, for human beings, the environment has undergone earth-shaking changes. For human beings, everything in the future is unknown. Because it has a strong deterrent force, it can ensure mutual destruction, thus becoming a product of balance that both sides dare not launch a full-scale war at will.

But what about the space age?I am on Earth, and you are on Mars. This deterrent and balancing effect may disappear. What will you find in that context...?
So these are the things that make Zhaoling very excited. It can be said that this story is the longest conceived by Zhaoling and the most fully prepared. It can even be said that the first two books are a pathfinder for this. After all They all died on the road, this time continue to sprint!

Zhaoling knows that everyone may think that this kind of world view is too small, and it will still be in the solar system in the later period.Understand, after all, there are so many books at the starting point, and all the big readers are basically old bookworms. The background that is the most exciting at present is the background of the multidimensional universe. Don’t mean to say that the background is grand if you don’t create a multiverse, at least it is known. The universe, the Milky Way is still a starting point, the solar system is just a novice village...(*^▽^*)
Well, Zhao Ling also admits that he can't rule out the sequelae caused by GG before leaving the earth, but it may not be a bad thing.

I don’t know if everyone has the same feeling, that is, the general black science and technology literature has always been confined to the earth, it seems that the structure is too small, but blindly going out of the earth to the universe, it is easy to collapse, because everything is strange, substitute Feelings have plummeted, fewer and fewer people are chasing after, and there are too few authors who can write brilliantly. Zhaoling doesn't think she is part of that small group of authors.

But what if zoomed in to the solar system?Do you think it is still acceptable?Everyone knows about at least eight major planets, major satellites, and asteroid belts.

At the same time, the layout is no longer limited to a small planet, and it can be regarded as entering the space age. To Mars and the like, these planets will expand their territory and colonize, and the sense of substitution will not drop suddenly.

After everyone generally accepts the background structure in the book and gets familiar with it, then follow up with the sequel, from space to deep space...

Based on such considerations, Zhaoling decided to locate the world view of "Black Tech Giants" in the solar system, and based on this, tell the story of human civilization from planetary civilization to stellar civilization. The specific plot will not be spoiled. Already, everyone, please look forward to it!
If there is no accident, the content planned in the heart can be fully presented smoothly, the length of "Black Technology Raptors" is about 300 million to 350 million words, so Zhao Ling has to say here, everyone's subscription support is super critical, To a large extent, it determines where the story will eventually lead, which is very, very important.

After all, there is no way to avoid the real problem. Zhaoling herself has to rely on the manuscript fee to make a living, and she has parents, and she has... TMD hasn’t been released yet (o(╥﹏╥)o), and the heart-wrenching EB needs to earn money to make ends meet Ah, these are very real and have to face problems, and full of unpredictability.

Back to the topic and tell the story itself.

Seeing that the overall framework of "Black Technology Raptors" has already been understood, Zhao Ling feels that he can't elaborate further, and any further details will be serious spoilers.

The reason why the framework of "Black Technology Raptors" was revealed before it was put on the shelves is to tell everyone what kind of story Zhaoling is going to write, and whether this story happens to be your favorite.

Well, seeing now must be very clear to every reader. If this is the story you are really looking forward to, then you can rest assured to subscribe in the future, and listen to Zhaoling tell this story, and finally You won't be disappointed either.

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A little mention of the sequel at the end. The title of the book is to be determined. The sequel is still being conceived slowly at night. After the predators finish the book, the sequel will be uploaded seamlessly. Not surprisingly, it will be next year. It’s early.

So even if you only spend an hour or even half an hour a day to conceive, it is completely sufficient. In short, there is no rush, and stability is the last word. The current focus is definitely on the big crocodile. is false.

Taking the sequel as an example, the book Big Crocodile can now be said to be enriching the world view and background structure for the sequel, which is equivalent to having a complete and solid underlying structure. The major events in the book Big Crocodile will also affect the sequel. The background world view pattern, since it is a story in the same world background, the influence is actually mutual. Sometimes an inspiration emerges from the conception of the sequel can also drive the improvement of the later outline of the big crocodile, and the benefits can also be felt.

At present, the few main characters of the sequel have been identified, the new core setting, and the rough worldview background framework have been further refined.

And the chronicle that is compiling the background of the world, that is, the Spring and Autumn strokes are edited and recorded in the order of the timeline to record some major historical events. In the end, only [-] to [-]% may be introduced into the main text of the sequel, and the rest will be ignored. The ultimate purpose of the chronicle is still It is to better serve the plot itself, and conflicts with the plot will naturally be cut off decisively.

Anyway, there is plenty of time to conceive and perfect slowly, it is too early to talk about the sequel, please stay tuned.

Let's just say this, the testimonials on the shelf are long enough, and Zhao Ling doesn't know how many people read this seriously, and those who read it will deduct a chapter from this paragraph?
Finally, everyone remember to vote. The rules for adding updates will be counted from now on. Tomorrow Friday at 7:1.3 noon, there will be a minimum guarantee of 8 updates. This week’s recommendation votes are almost 12, which is up to the standard. Tomorrow, 1.5 updates will be locked in advance, and it will be available at 9:[-] on the day If it exceeds [-] before, there will be [-] changes. Other data such as rewards will be measured according to the above standards.

that's all!

(End of this chapter)