Late at night, please give me half a cigarette

Chapter 273
Separated from Wang Yuetong, I went to the director.

At this time, the director was with the editor, and was discussing the temporarily added plot. I politely knocked on the door and went in. Then I told the director that I have some small opinions on the temporary script that I just received today. I want to talk to the director.

The director said that you came at the right time, and discuss with us what kind of shooting method is better for this scene.

The screenwriter is actually very young, not much older than me. When she saw me coming to find the director, she had a moment of surprise on her face, but she quickly covered it up by averting her eyes.

"If you have any ideas, you can tell us." The director looked at me very casually and said.

"Director, I think this scene is well added. Although it's between the supporting actors, it can fully show the cruelty of fighting openly and secretly in the harem and framing each other from the side." Holding the script in my hand, I first affirmed this The scenes added after the paragraph, I think only after affirmation, the later opinions will be easier to accept.

If I said as soon as I entered the room that there was no comparison at all in this scene, and that it had no meaning other than superfluous, I think not only the screenwriter, but even the director would be disgusted.

After all, when the assistant director gave me the script and told me that today is a temporary scene, it means that the director has passed the script.

After listening to my words, the director nodded his head slightly to show that he agrees with my words. It can be seen that he agreed to join this scene at the beginning, and he also wanted to express this aspect.

"But after reading the script, I feel that there is only one thing that is wrong." I looked at the director and said with some embarrassment, and then looked at the screenwriter with eyes full of humility, indicating that I really came to discuss the plot itself. I have no idea.

"Talk about it." The director said, then patted the chair next to the table, "Come on, sit down and talk."

Because I was wearing a costume, it was not so convenient to move, so I carefully sat down on the table and said to the director seriously: "The intrigue added in the front of the script, hit An Dou, even face-to-face conflicts, and quarrels. I think the scenes are very enjoyable, fierce and not divided into equal parts, so that the audience will especially want to see how the "justice" side defeats the "evil" side when watching, but the second half of the script, it is It ended with a slap on the side of 'justice'. This is a bit unreasonable..."

"But in a harem battle, it is never possible for the 'justice' side you said to win, so what is there to watch? There will always be times of defeat. But as you said, the audience's position on the protagonist is It’s very firm, so everyone doesn’t want to see the main character being defeated, so this kind of defeat must be reflected in the supporting characters, which is why I added such a scene.” As soon as I finished speaking, editing began I can't wait to express her point of view, so as to block what I want to say later.

"The 'righteous' side can lose, they can be framed, or they can be calculated, but like now, they are slapped in the face without saying a word, and they endure it with humility. I feel that it is completely out of line with this character setting. Already." I looked at the editor and calmly explained my point of view to her.

"According to the direction of the previous script, this character is a very pungent person with a straightforward personality. When she enters and leaves the harem, she is favored by the emperor, but because of this, she is hated and used by various frame-ups. Then once the heroine After accidentally saving her once, she sincerely treats the heroine like her own sister, protecting and helping the heroine everywhere, and will be the most powerful assistant for the heroine to ascend to the position of the harem master in the future. Could it be possible for a person like me to swallow his anger after being deliberately provocative and slapped? Moreover, the two supporting roles have the same status, and the supporting role I played is more favored by the emperor. No matter how you look at it, it is unreasonable Yes, it also violates the character of the character, and the audience will not feel happy after watching it."

After carefully analyzing my thoughts, I immediately changed back to that humble expression, and then asked the director if my analysis was right.

The director nodded and said that my analysis was very good, or that he actually had this consideration, so he was discussing with the screenwriter to see how to change the script in the second half to make it more reasonable.

The screenwriter obviously didn't really want to change it, but he couldn't give a reason not to change it, so he could only reluctantly say that it would take time to modify the script and let her think about it.

I can't give her time to think about it. If she thinks it over and writes a plot without loopholes, then my slap is doomed to be in vain.

"Actually, I personally think that this scene is well written, and there is no need to spend a lot of effort to modify it. Sometimes the modified content is not as good as the original version." I hurriedly stopped her, "So I thought, can I On the basis of the original plot, how about adding a little more content?"

"Add a little more?" The screenwriter thought for a while and said, "If you add more, the plot will appear to be particularly procrastinated, so I deliberately stayed on this slap..."

"But judging from the character of this character, she really won't swallow her anger after being slapped." I looked at the editor helplessly.

"Then if it were you, how do you think your character would react?" The director suddenly turned his head and asked me.

This question seemed sudden, but I just wanted to hear my first reaction, so I didn't even think about it, and said directly: "Of course I slap her back, and then warned her, and turned around and left in her astonishment and shock." .”

"Very good! It's exactly the same as mine." After speaking, the director turned his head and said to the screenwriter, "Let's add such a short plot later, it must be short and don't have too much nonsense, remember to feel dragged .”

Although the screenwriter was very reluctant, he added the following plot very quickly, and then re-distributed the new script to the hands of the actors.

I turned it over, and there was no change at all at the front, the only change was at the end.

When filming, I noticed that Wang Yuetong's expression was still very smug, as if she hadn't been affected by the script changes at all, but judging by her personality, if she found out that the script had been changed, she would definitely not be what she is now A smug look.

So I guess, she didn't read the revised script at all.

This is very interesting. I don’t know what kind of expression she will have when she gets slapped by me in the end?

(End of this chapter)