Qin Xi's Rebirth Daily

Chapter 22 One Thing That Makes You Regret
Soon it was Sunday night again, "Qin Xi, this time the teacher assigned you to write an article titled "One Thing That Made You Regret", your writing must be in the top 10, w(?Д?)w~ ", the tablemate Yao Xinping opened her eyes wide and exclaimed. "Qin Xi, Qin Xi, you are so amazing! How did you think of writing like this? Look at what you wrote, uh, how should I put it, there is no word "regret" throughout the article, but you can feel it throughout the article. That kind of regret. Through the comparison of the daily life before and after the loss of the puppy, and thinking of it from time to time, I deeply integrated my regret into it, regretting that I heard the dog’s wailing sound at that time, but thought it was an auditory hallucination , but didn’t go out to have a look, and was stolen or killed in the end.”

O(∩_∩)O~~Qin Xi was also very happy when he heard the praise from his tablemate.But thinking that I have already been a person in two lifetimes, this is also what I should do. After all, I also graduated from a university in my previous life, although I was only a science student in my second degree.

But other people don't know this, so they have to find a good excuse.Just come to whatever you think about.No, I immediately heard an inquiry from my deskmate: "Qin Xi, do you have any good ways to help with writing?"

Qin Xi couldn't, so he had to use some methods he had seen online in his previous life, and combined his current study habits to make up: "Read more articles, not limited to textbooks, composition books, etc., accumulate more good words and sentences, and think more about what others wrote. What are the main aspects of good writing, good writing skills, or good intentions... Of course, if it’s just like this, I forget most of it after reading it, so I often recall what I learned today at noon or before going to bed at night This is how I study now." Qin Xi thought to himself, this is not a lie, I am studying like this now, but well, this accumulation should not be effective so quickly, but this cannot be told the truth. Otherwise, it can be said that it is because I have lived two lifetimes and both graduated from college, so my writing skills are relatively good! !It's impossible to think about, okay! !And these methods are commonly used by everyone, and they are also useful, but they are not made up to deceive people, ╭(╯^╰)╮Qin Xi thought a little arrogantly.

After listening to Qin Xi's words, Yao Xinping thought carefully that her deskmate did often read extracurricular books, and occasionally copied something. As for whether she recalled this incident before the break, Yao Xinping said that you thought I was a member of her mind, How could this be known.But based on the above two points alone, Yao Xinping still felt quite credible.

"Ring, ring, ring..." The class bell rang, Qin Xi put away the manuscript paper that was handed back by her deskmate, and began to listen carefully to the class...

Soon it was Friday, and Qin Xi was a little anxious. He didn't know how well Liang Bing had completed the task. Based on Liang Bing's level in his previous life, if he went out to work and read a lot to accumulate knowledge, this time he got the teacher's support. The chances of praise are even greater.However, if you think about it, it's impossible. You can tell from the fact that her Chinese performance in the last monthly exam was not very good. /(ㄒoㄒ)/~~ Do we have to wait until next week, no, next week, or even next week. /(ㄒoㄒ)/~~ Thinking about Liang Bing's level, Qin Xi became even more hopeless.

After Liang Bing finished writing, she felt that it was not good. She was a little troubled and didn't know how to change it for the better. After thinking for a long time, she still couldn't think of a way.Liang Bing also knew that his writing skills were limited, and it was difficult for him to be appreciated by his teachers.If you ask someone to write it for you, many people will be happy to help you with your current popularity.But for this system task, it must be written by yourself, at least it must be a major participant.

"Jingyun, take a look at what I wrote, and give me some advice after reading it, please!"

Good idea, Liang Bing heard the conversation of the students next to him.I understand that the completion of system tasks is actually not required to be completed by myself, and the main participation is also possible.In this way, it can be modified according to the opinions of people who have read it, and it will definitely be much better than writing it alone.But it will be handed in this afternoon, alas :-(, why didn’t I think of this method earlier, well, now only a few people have provided comments and revisions.

Liang Bing showed it to several people one after another, and everyone gave some suggestions, but they still felt that it was not enough.But there's no way, it's Friday and there's no time.At noon, I took the revised article back to the dormitory, planning to re-copy the revised article without taking a lunch break today.But during the lunch break, I saw Qin Xi in the dormitory, and thought that maybe one more person would make the article more perfect, and the chance of getting the teacher's praise would be higher. .

ヾ(o???)?ヾQin Xi suppressed the excitement in his heart, and gave Liang Bing a thumbs up. If he modified it based on other people's opinions, it would only be a matter of time before he got the teacher's praise, but he wouldn't be disappointed like only Liang Bing wrote it himself. to hope.

Qin Xi took the manuscript paper with trembling fingers. He was excited to help Liang Bing get the teacher's praise as soon as possible, but also worried that Liang Bing's own articles would be terrible.

"Qin Xi, what's wrong with your hand, why are you shaking so much?"

"Uh, (⊙﹏⊙)b is fine, I wrote too much this morning, I'm tired! Hehe, I'm tired!" Qin Xi didn't want to talk to Liang Bing about other things. After all, too much talk will lead to failure, so he immediately looked through it. After looking carefully, think about it again.

Judging from the experience of reading countless articles in the future, Qin Xi still knows that if this article is written in chronological order, it will fall into the cliché, mainly because it is not attractive.In addition, the article itself is not well-written, and it is even less attractive.So, after careful consideration, I felt that if I used flashbacks to write, at least it would be relatively new in terms of article structure and writing. Few people use this method to write now.In this way, if no one uses this structure to write in this competition, then there is still hope for the teacher's praise.

Hearing Qin Xi's suggestion, Liang Bing also read the articles in a different order, and found that it was indeed much better than before. Liang Bing was both excited and nervous. After all, it was much better this way. The top 10 O(∩_∩)O~~, but I am still nervous. After all, I still write mainly by myself, and my level is limited. The chances of working for nothing are higher. I am afraid that this task will have to wait until next week. Finished well after next week.After all, where is my writing level?

Qin Xi, I don't know that Liang Bing is so pessimistic, but if I know it, it's not surprising. After all, Liang Bing reads less, so I may not understand these things deeply. I don't understand that teachers are not just praising people who are good in the whole article, they are also good at discovering Good aspects of students, such as poor writing of articles, but good writing.Therefore, Qin Xi is a little confident about the only bright spot in Liang Bing's article - using flashbacks to write. If other people in the class did not use this method, then Qin Xi would be even more confident.

(End of this chapter)