darkest personality
Chapter 132.
Chapter 132.
"This seems to be the Dao talisman attached to the coffin in the ancestral hall! This symbol in the sky should be one of those Dao talismans?"
If there is no change in perspective, this crucial clue may not be discovered until Bai Ye has watched all the scenes and plots. According to the development of the plot, it is very likely that there will be a process of transforming the female ghost behind the scenes.
"One of Xiuniang's souls is sealed in the sky. Even if she absorbs all seven souls, she on the ground will not be able to achieve harmony between yin and yang, and will not be able to recover her self-awareness. She will only become more ferocious."
"Her three souls and seven souls must be returned to their positions to be considered a success."
At this moment, the light of the [Third-person remote control] in his hand retracted, and Bai Ye's high-altitude bird's-eye view quickly shrank back, returning to the No.1 perspective.
Not far ahead, the outline of the back door of the tulou can already be seen.
"You are finally here, I have been waiting for you for a long time."
When Bai Ye led the female ghost under the south gate of the earth building, the "hidden" plot was triggered again, Shui Sheng walked out from the dark side, and the female ghost immediately changed back to the appearance of a "village girl".
The storyline of this episode is about to unfold...
"I have roughly figured out the escape method of this scene now, and I can watch or not watch the next plot."
It is not difficult to guess the future plot. It is nothing more than that the two who eloped are caught.
"Now that the female ghost is confined to this area, I can go to the coffin to check."
Bai Ye had a hunch that if he could completely liberate Xiu Niang and free her from the fate of being dominated, it might greatly change the background story of this scene, and maybe he could still meet the ghost Xi'E and Painted Skin Ghost. 'master'.
But doing so may cause unexpected situations. However, only by boldly trying to change everything can it be possible to reap huge benefits.
It took a few minutes for Bai Ye to return from the outermost ring of the tulou to the central ancestral hall of the tulou.
Everything here is as usual, with four running water mats placed on the circular square, white and red lanterns hanging under the eaves of the houses on both sides, happy characters pasted on the gates, and paper money and red paper flying all over the sky.
The lamps and candles in the ancestral hall were extinguished, and it was a mess. Paper figurines and horses were scattered all over the place. The cover of the big brown-red coffin was forcefully lifted, and the yellow and purple talisman paper was pasted on the lower part of the coffin.
With the improvement of Xiuniang's "lonely ghost" ability, many ghosts appeared here. They were either the guests who came to the wedding, sitting on the water mat to eat and drink, or the servants of the Chen family who were in charge of the wedding, dressed festively, Some set off firecrackers, some served dishes, and some played musical instruments...
Bai Ye passed through the ghost, walked straight into the ancestral hall, and looked inside the coffin. The corpses of the bride and groom were still lying in the coffin. Their faces were stiff and pale, and their expressions were peaceful, as if they were asleep.
The ghost of the bridegroom was standing next to the coffin, coughing in a suppressed voice, holding a wine glass in his hand, and kept muttering: "Have a drink, it's okay, just have a drink..."
But just after drinking the wine in his hand, he suddenly began to slap his chest continuously, his eyes widened, he let out an extremely violent cough, and then fell straight on the ground.
Tuberculosis in ancient times was equivalent to tuberculosis today. It is easy to treat this small disease in 2065, but in ancient times when medical technology was backward, it could basically be regarded as terminally ill.
The tuberculosis ghost bridegroom in front of him was already terminally ill, and his condition worsened after drinking, causing endless pain.
"Won't it just die like that?"
The ghost next to him turned a blind eye to the groom's painful cough, and did not help, but kept a stiff smile on his face, holding a glass of wine in his hand, and the repeater seemed to say auspicious words and words of persuasion.
The groom's father, that is, Mr. Chen from Chenjiabao, was sitting on the grand master's chair, watching all this happen with a smile, and the scene seemed rather strange.
"This groom is quite sad."
Bai Ye ignored the ghosts, squatted down next to the coffin, and began to check the Dao talisman attached to it.
"Did the groom die at the wedding? So what will be held at the beginning is just the wedding, not the ghost marriage we see now."
"From this point of view, even if the groom died, Mr. Chen did not intend to let Xiuniang go. Maybe...he asked Xiuniang to bury his son so that his son would not be a single dog under the nine springs?"
It's really... Father's love is like a mountain!
The Dao Talisman on the coffin is not difficult to identify. Dao Talismans of the same color have the same marks painted on them. The mark in the sky that blocks the 'soul' of Xiu Niang corresponds to the purple Dao Talisman in front of him.
"How can it be lifted? To tear off all the Dao Talismans?"
Bai Ye tried to tear off a purple Dao talisman, but there was no system prompt, but the Dao talisman in his hand suddenly ignited spontaneously.
In just a few seconds, this Purple Dao Talisman was burned to black ashes and flew away with the wind.
Bai Ye looked up at the sky, vaguely feeling that Xiu Niang's 'soul' seemed a little closer to the ground.
"It seems to be useful."
So he continued to tear the purple Taoist talisman on the coffin, but did not touch the yellow Taoist talisman.
A total of 9 purple talismans and 9 yellow talismans were pasted on the coffin. Every time Bai Ye tore off a purple talisman, the 'soul' in the sky would fall down a short distance.
When the 9 talismans were completely torn off and burned into black ashes, the pale green phantom bound in the air seemed to be a bird that had escaped from its cage. Flying in one direction...
At the same time, in the direction of the north gate of the earth building, after Ding Ri put the last A into the card slot, the altar in front of him made a roaring sound like rolling boulders, and the blue light flickered twice before going out. The wisp of blue wisp of will-o'-the-wisp's 'spirit' immediately flew out.
——The player 'O Dingri K' lifted the seal of the altar and released the 'spirit' of Xiuniang.
"Success!"
Ding Ri waved his fist excitedly, and quickly bent down to pick up the last sealing bead that fell from the altar.
"In this way, I have exactly 41 sealing beads, and I can exchange for another invisibility talisman."
He switched to the teammate interface to check, and found that under Bai Ye's avatar, he was still in a healthy state, and his health was not even deducted at all.
"Great God Bai Yebai is really powerful. He was able to hold the female ghost for such a long time without any damage."
……
When the last ray of 'soul' and 'spirit' converged on the embroidered lady at the south gate of the tulou, the female ghost turned into a cyan streamer and flew towards the ancestral hall.
On the streets of the tulou, a gust of wind blew out of nowhere, and all the translucent ghosts looked up at the female ghost flying over their heads, and gradually faded and disappeared.
In the ancestral hall of the earth building, a blue light landed, and the ghost Xiu Niang stood in front of her corpse, looked at Bai Ye with her eyes, and said in a tone full of resentment:
"I watched Brother Shuisheng being beaten to death by Master Chen's slaves. From that moment on, my heart died with Brother Shuisheng."
"The young master of the Chen family got sick from drinking and died. I thought they would let me go...but Master Chen thought that since I was engaged to his son, I should go with my husband. He asked me to give his son Sacrifice, and form a pair of ghost marriage with his son..."
Xiu Niang continued in a faint voice: "I am desperate, in order not to be humiliated, I can only choose to commit suicide."
"While the guards were not paying attention, I pierced my neck with the tailor scissors secretly hidden on my body, and stabbed wounds one after another. Blood was flowing, tears were also flowing, and there was pain from the wound, but the pain came from the wound. This kind of pain is not even one ten-thousandth of what I feel in my heart."
"After this, I didn't know what happened to me. The lost consciousness suddenly came back again. I stood beside my dead body and quietly watched those ugly people carry my dead body into the coffin. I touched up my makeup and let me lie in the coffin with the dead ghost husband who didn't even say a word, at that moment... I felt the endless anger in my chest."
"I hate, apart from hate, I have lost all other emotions... I hate everyone here, I hate Master Chen and his servants the most, and this hatred also gives me a unique power .”
"I picked up the scissors I used to kill myself, and killed the culprit, Mr. Chen... When the scissors pierced into his heart and took his life away, my hatred not only did not diminish, but even more so. It has increased a lot, and more resentment filled my heart, making me want to kill. I turned around and saw the expressions of fear and fear on those people's faces. I screamed at them, and there was only one belief left in my mind, Kill them all! Kill everyone here! They all have to die!"
After Xiu Niang said this, she slowly closed her eyes, with tears sliding down her eyelids.
"Just like that, the more people I kill, the stronger the hatred in me, and the stronger the power becomes. I don't know what happened to me. I have completely lost control and become a Heinous murderer."
Xiu Niang covered her face with her hands and began to cry.
"It was you who saved me, thank you, thank you."
After crying for a while, she raised her head again and looked at Bai Ye.
"The seal of the earth building has been lifted after you rescued me. Now, you and your partners can leave here at any time."
"Do you know why you became what you are now?"
Bai Ye asked in a deep voice, Xiu Niang is definitely the best choice for players to dig out the hidden story behind this scene.
"I only know that someone cast a spell to turn me into this. He is a ghost master who is good at refining ghosts. Ghost Xi'E and Painted Skin Ghost are both his subordinates, and they obey him. Others... I don't know much about it. "
'Ghost master? ! '
Bai Ye frowned slightly.
'From the title, it sounds like this is a very powerful guy, and all the demons and ghosts obey him, it is likely to be similar to the existence of the Great Demon King. '
"Then what are your plans next? If you stay here, you will be captured by that ghost master sooner or later, right?"
Xiu Niang said with a miserable expression: "I have done too many sins, hell will not take me in, I can only stay in the sun as a lonely ghost, but if I stay in the sun for too long, my soul will be scattered, and I will never be reborn... Beep..."
As she spoke, she began to cry again.
"Is there no other way?"
Xiu Niang just shook her head without answering.
"No! Xiuniang! There is another way, you won't be out of your wits."
At this moment, Shui Sheng in ghost form suddenly appeared out of thin air.
"Brother Shuisheng!"
When Xiu Niang saw this, she immediately showed joy, and trot forward to throw herself into Shui Sheng's arms.
But suddenly a faint golden light bloomed from Shui Sheng's body, and the golden light blocked the two ghosts, preventing them from approaching.
"why?"
Xiu Niang showed a confused expression, and tried to approach Shuisheng again, but was still bounced away by the golden light.
"It's useless, my soul has been restricted by an expert, and I can't contact you. After seeing you for the last time, I will leave here forever and go to a distant place."
Shuisheng controlled his emotions, and continued with a choked voice:
"Xiu Niang, do you still remember the bead I gave you?"
"The last time I went to sea, I met an old fairy on the sea. He said that he had calculated the doom of both of us, and gave me a bead, saying that the bead can help you at a critical time. I think... now you should It's what he calls a critical moment."
"Bead...that bead has been carried by me all the time."
A flash of panic flashed in Xiu Niang's eyes, she quickly looked at her corpse lying on the ground, and then looked at Bai Ye with a pleading look.
Bai Ye understood what she meant, went forward and searched Xiu Niang's body twice, and found a shiny bead the size of a baby's fist from inside her sleeve.
- found in the item...
——You got [Canghai Moon Pearl Has Tears]
【The moon and pearl in the sea have tears】
[Type: Rare props]
[Special effects: Send soul, store a soul in the bead, so that it will not be lost. 】
[Can you bring out the scene: yes]
【Load: 5】
[Remarks: Lantian Rinuanyu smokes. 】
'I really want to understand a little bit about the final reward of the 'hidden' mission. '
When Bai Ye saw this bead, his eyes lit up.
"Brother, from now on... Xiuniang will be entrusted to you."
Shui Sheng turned his head to look at Yanbai Ye, and then turned to look at Xiu Niang beside him: "You store your soul in this bead, and you can avoid being dissolved by the yang energy of the world until your soul is scattered."
……
……
Hmm... It feels more and more complicated, and the chapters are beyond the outline. I chose to end this story strategically. By the way, it is a small (cou) general (zi) conclusion (shu) of the first 30 words:
Everyone should have discovered that the story I am currently writing is based on the latest asymmetric confrontation game "Soul Chip", known as the Republic of China version of Dead by Daylight (the game is on Steam, the price is not expensive).
However, because this article was added temporarily (the purpose is to catch the heat, it seems to have some effect now), I started writing this article almost immediately after the last article was written, and I prepared the outline and details very inadequate.
This leads to several serious problems in this story:
1. The player character has a serious sense of disconnection.
In terms of portraying the characters in this book, I have always written very badly and contradictoryly. It may be better than the previous book, but it is only a little bit better, and it still needs a long time to temper.
Because I want to portray some more interesting and novel characters, but what I write is not a normal type of online game, but a more serious online game with fear and killing as the selling point. The characters written too mischievously will make readers I feel that the play is serious, and there are at least 30 mistakes made in the first 3W of this book.
2. The setting of the storyline is too lengthy.
At present, the structure setting of this story is not neat, because the outline is not well planned, and some settings are added in the middle, including wanting to introduce Xiuniang’s tragic life experience to everyone. Now from the effect, this is obviously The thankless behavior also distorted the direction of the whole story. Obviously, as long as the altar is cracked according to the normal game pattern, he can escape.
Looking at the first 30 words, I feel that the most neatly written article is the first novice teaching, although the plot is still very naive in the eyes of many old-fashioned readers, and the second article "Chain Saw" is the most satisfying, I think I used this story to achieve some subtle irony. However, this writing method does not meet the standards of online writing, and it is not refreshing to read, so... I will not try it again in the future.
Next, briefly introduce the next story.
The next story will take over from the first "Teaching for Novices" at the beginning, telling the story of Rick Jones looking for the protagonist to investigate a sewer ghoul incident together. Friends who know "Cthulhu Mythos" should have read Love Craftsman The next story is based on the famous "Pickman's Model".
After experiencing the failure of this article, I will write more carefully and meticulously, and strive to build a complete and beautiful story for everyone, please continue to support me!Thanks!
……
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(End of this chapter)
"This seems to be the Dao talisman attached to the coffin in the ancestral hall! This symbol in the sky should be one of those Dao talismans?"
If there is no change in perspective, this crucial clue may not be discovered until Bai Ye has watched all the scenes and plots. According to the development of the plot, it is very likely that there will be a process of transforming the female ghost behind the scenes.
"One of Xiuniang's souls is sealed in the sky. Even if she absorbs all seven souls, she on the ground will not be able to achieve harmony between yin and yang, and will not be able to recover her self-awareness. She will only become more ferocious."
"Her three souls and seven souls must be returned to their positions to be considered a success."
At this moment, the light of the [Third-person remote control] in his hand retracted, and Bai Ye's high-altitude bird's-eye view quickly shrank back, returning to the No.1 perspective.
Not far ahead, the outline of the back door of the tulou can already be seen.
"You are finally here, I have been waiting for you for a long time."
When Bai Ye led the female ghost under the south gate of the earth building, the "hidden" plot was triggered again, Shui Sheng walked out from the dark side, and the female ghost immediately changed back to the appearance of a "village girl".
The storyline of this episode is about to unfold...
"I have roughly figured out the escape method of this scene now, and I can watch or not watch the next plot."
It is not difficult to guess the future plot. It is nothing more than that the two who eloped are caught.
"Now that the female ghost is confined to this area, I can go to the coffin to check."
Bai Ye had a hunch that if he could completely liberate Xiu Niang and free her from the fate of being dominated, it might greatly change the background story of this scene, and maybe he could still meet the ghost Xi'E and Painted Skin Ghost. 'master'.
But doing so may cause unexpected situations. However, only by boldly trying to change everything can it be possible to reap huge benefits.
It took a few minutes for Bai Ye to return from the outermost ring of the tulou to the central ancestral hall of the tulou.
Everything here is as usual, with four running water mats placed on the circular square, white and red lanterns hanging under the eaves of the houses on both sides, happy characters pasted on the gates, and paper money and red paper flying all over the sky.
The lamps and candles in the ancestral hall were extinguished, and it was a mess. Paper figurines and horses were scattered all over the place. The cover of the big brown-red coffin was forcefully lifted, and the yellow and purple talisman paper was pasted on the lower part of the coffin.
With the improvement of Xiuniang's "lonely ghost" ability, many ghosts appeared here. They were either the guests who came to the wedding, sitting on the water mat to eat and drink, or the servants of the Chen family who were in charge of the wedding, dressed festively, Some set off firecrackers, some served dishes, and some played musical instruments...
Bai Ye passed through the ghost, walked straight into the ancestral hall, and looked inside the coffin. The corpses of the bride and groom were still lying in the coffin. Their faces were stiff and pale, and their expressions were peaceful, as if they were asleep.
The ghost of the bridegroom was standing next to the coffin, coughing in a suppressed voice, holding a wine glass in his hand, and kept muttering: "Have a drink, it's okay, just have a drink..."
But just after drinking the wine in his hand, he suddenly began to slap his chest continuously, his eyes widened, he let out an extremely violent cough, and then fell straight on the ground.
Tuberculosis in ancient times was equivalent to tuberculosis today. It is easy to treat this small disease in 2065, but in ancient times when medical technology was backward, it could basically be regarded as terminally ill.
The tuberculosis ghost bridegroom in front of him was already terminally ill, and his condition worsened after drinking, causing endless pain.
"Won't it just die like that?"
The ghost next to him turned a blind eye to the groom's painful cough, and did not help, but kept a stiff smile on his face, holding a glass of wine in his hand, and the repeater seemed to say auspicious words and words of persuasion.
The groom's father, that is, Mr. Chen from Chenjiabao, was sitting on the grand master's chair, watching all this happen with a smile, and the scene seemed rather strange.
"This groom is quite sad."
Bai Ye ignored the ghosts, squatted down next to the coffin, and began to check the Dao talisman attached to it.
"Did the groom die at the wedding? So what will be held at the beginning is just the wedding, not the ghost marriage we see now."
"From this point of view, even if the groom died, Mr. Chen did not intend to let Xiuniang go. Maybe...he asked Xiuniang to bury his son so that his son would not be a single dog under the nine springs?"
It's really... Father's love is like a mountain!
The Dao Talisman on the coffin is not difficult to identify. Dao Talismans of the same color have the same marks painted on them. The mark in the sky that blocks the 'soul' of Xiu Niang corresponds to the purple Dao Talisman in front of him.
"How can it be lifted? To tear off all the Dao Talismans?"
Bai Ye tried to tear off a purple Dao talisman, but there was no system prompt, but the Dao talisman in his hand suddenly ignited spontaneously.
In just a few seconds, this Purple Dao Talisman was burned to black ashes and flew away with the wind.
Bai Ye looked up at the sky, vaguely feeling that Xiu Niang's 'soul' seemed a little closer to the ground.
"It seems to be useful."
So he continued to tear the purple Taoist talisman on the coffin, but did not touch the yellow Taoist talisman.
A total of 9 purple talismans and 9 yellow talismans were pasted on the coffin. Every time Bai Ye tore off a purple talisman, the 'soul' in the sky would fall down a short distance.
When the 9 talismans were completely torn off and burned into black ashes, the pale green phantom bound in the air seemed to be a bird that had escaped from its cage. Flying in one direction...
At the same time, in the direction of the north gate of the earth building, after Ding Ri put the last A into the card slot, the altar in front of him made a roaring sound like rolling boulders, and the blue light flickered twice before going out. The wisp of blue wisp of will-o'-the-wisp's 'spirit' immediately flew out.
——The player 'O Dingri K' lifted the seal of the altar and released the 'spirit' of Xiuniang.
"Success!"
Ding Ri waved his fist excitedly, and quickly bent down to pick up the last sealing bead that fell from the altar.
"In this way, I have exactly 41 sealing beads, and I can exchange for another invisibility talisman."
He switched to the teammate interface to check, and found that under Bai Ye's avatar, he was still in a healthy state, and his health was not even deducted at all.
"Great God Bai Yebai is really powerful. He was able to hold the female ghost for such a long time without any damage."
……
When the last ray of 'soul' and 'spirit' converged on the embroidered lady at the south gate of the tulou, the female ghost turned into a cyan streamer and flew towards the ancestral hall.
On the streets of the tulou, a gust of wind blew out of nowhere, and all the translucent ghosts looked up at the female ghost flying over their heads, and gradually faded and disappeared.
In the ancestral hall of the earth building, a blue light landed, and the ghost Xiu Niang stood in front of her corpse, looked at Bai Ye with her eyes, and said in a tone full of resentment:
"I watched Brother Shuisheng being beaten to death by Master Chen's slaves. From that moment on, my heart died with Brother Shuisheng."
"The young master of the Chen family got sick from drinking and died. I thought they would let me go...but Master Chen thought that since I was engaged to his son, I should go with my husband. He asked me to give his son Sacrifice, and form a pair of ghost marriage with his son..."
Xiu Niang continued in a faint voice: "I am desperate, in order not to be humiliated, I can only choose to commit suicide."
"While the guards were not paying attention, I pierced my neck with the tailor scissors secretly hidden on my body, and stabbed wounds one after another. Blood was flowing, tears were also flowing, and there was pain from the wound, but the pain came from the wound. This kind of pain is not even one ten-thousandth of what I feel in my heart."
"After this, I didn't know what happened to me. The lost consciousness suddenly came back again. I stood beside my dead body and quietly watched those ugly people carry my dead body into the coffin. I touched up my makeup and let me lie in the coffin with the dead ghost husband who didn't even say a word, at that moment... I felt the endless anger in my chest."
"I hate, apart from hate, I have lost all other emotions... I hate everyone here, I hate Master Chen and his servants the most, and this hatred also gives me a unique power .”
"I picked up the scissors I used to kill myself, and killed the culprit, Mr. Chen... When the scissors pierced into his heart and took his life away, my hatred not only did not diminish, but even more so. It has increased a lot, and more resentment filled my heart, making me want to kill. I turned around and saw the expressions of fear and fear on those people's faces. I screamed at them, and there was only one belief left in my mind, Kill them all! Kill everyone here! They all have to die!"
After Xiu Niang said this, she slowly closed her eyes, with tears sliding down her eyelids.
"Just like that, the more people I kill, the stronger the hatred in me, and the stronger the power becomes. I don't know what happened to me. I have completely lost control and become a Heinous murderer."
Xiu Niang covered her face with her hands and began to cry.
"It was you who saved me, thank you, thank you."
After crying for a while, she raised her head again and looked at Bai Ye.
"The seal of the earth building has been lifted after you rescued me. Now, you and your partners can leave here at any time."
"Do you know why you became what you are now?"
Bai Ye asked in a deep voice, Xiu Niang is definitely the best choice for players to dig out the hidden story behind this scene.
"I only know that someone cast a spell to turn me into this. He is a ghost master who is good at refining ghosts. Ghost Xi'E and Painted Skin Ghost are both his subordinates, and they obey him. Others... I don't know much about it. "
'Ghost master? ! '
Bai Ye frowned slightly.
'From the title, it sounds like this is a very powerful guy, and all the demons and ghosts obey him, it is likely to be similar to the existence of the Great Demon King. '
"Then what are your plans next? If you stay here, you will be captured by that ghost master sooner or later, right?"
Xiu Niang said with a miserable expression: "I have done too many sins, hell will not take me in, I can only stay in the sun as a lonely ghost, but if I stay in the sun for too long, my soul will be scattered, and I will never be reborn... Beep..."
As she spoke, she began to cry again.
"Is there no other way?"
Xiu Niang just shook her head without answering.
"No! Xiuniang! There is another way, you won't be out of your wits."
At this moment, Shui Sheng in ghost form suddenly appeared out of thin air.
"Brother Shuisheng!"
When Xiu Niang saw this, she immediately showed joy, and trot forward to throw herself into Shui Sheng's arms.
But suddenly a faint golden light bloomed from Shui Sheng's body, and the golden light blocked the two ghosts, preventing them from approaching.
"why?"
Xiu Niang showed a confused expression, and tried to approach Shuisheng again, but was still bounced away by the golden light.
"It's useless, my soul has been restricted by an expert, and I can't contact you. After seeing you for the last time, I will leave here forever and go to a distant place."
Shuisheng controlled his emotions, and continued with a choked voice:
"Xiu Niang, do you still remember the bead I gave you?"
"The last time I went to sea, I met an old fairy on the sea. He said that he had calculated the doom of both of us, and gave me a bead, saying that the bead can help you at a critical time. I think... now you should It's what he calls a critical moment."
"Bead...that bead has been carried by me all the time."
A flash of panic flashed in Xiu Niang's eyes, she quickly looked at her corpse lying on the ground, and then looked at Bai Ye with a pleading look.
Bai Ye understood what she meant, went forward and searched Xiu Niang's body twice, and found a shiny bead the size of a baby's fist from inside her sleeve.
- found in the item...
——You got [Canghai Moon Pearl Has Tears]
【The moon and pearl in the sea have tears】
[Type: Rare props]
[Special effects: Send soul, store a soul in the bead, so that it will not be lost. 】
[Can you bring out the scene: yes]
【Load: 5】
[Remarks: Lantian Rinuanyu smokes. 】
'I really want to understand a little bit about the final reward of the 'hidden' mission. '
When Bai Ye saw this bead, his eyes lit up.
"Brother, from now on... Xiuniang will be entrusted to you."
Shui Sheng turned his head to look at Yanbai Ye, and then turned to look at Xiu Niang beside him: "You store your soul in this bead, and you can avoid being dissolved by the yang energy of the world until your soul is scattered."
……
……
Hmm... It feels more and more complicated, and the chapters are beyond the outline. I chose to end this story strategically. By the way, it is a small (cou) general (zi) conclusion (shu) of the first 30 words:
Everyone should have discovered that the story I am currently writing is based on the latest asymmetric confrontation game "Soul Chip", known as the Republic of China version of Dead by Daylight (the game is on Steam, the price is not expensive).
However, because this article was added temporarily (the purpose is to catch the heat, it seems to have some effect now), I started writing this article almost immediately after the last article was written, and I prepared the outline and details very inadequate.
This leads to several serious problems in this story:
1. The player character has a serious sense of disconnection.
In terms of portraying the characters in this book, I have always written very badly and contradictoryly. It may be better than the previous book, but it is only a little bit better, and it still needs a long time to temper.
Because I want to portray some more interesting and novel characters, but what I write is not a normal type of online game, but a more serious online game with fear and killing as the selling point. The characters written too mischievously will make readers I feel that the play is serious, and there are at least 30 mistakes made in the first 3W of this book.
2. The setting of the storyline is too lengthy.
At present, the structure setting of this story is not neat, because the outline is not well planned, and some settings are added in the middle, including wanting to introduce Xiuniang’s tragic life experience to everyone. Now from the effect, this is obviously The thankless behavior also distorted the direction of the whole story. Obviously, as long as the altar is cracked according to the normal game pattern, he can escape.
Looking at the first 30 words, I feel that the most neatly written article is the first novice teaching, although the plot is still very naive in the eyes of many old-fashioned readers, and the second article "Chain Saw" is the most satisfying, I think I used this story to achieve some subtle irony. However, this writing method does not meet the standards of online writing, and it is not refreshing to read, so... I will not try it again in the future.
Next, briefly introduce the next story.
The next story will take over from the first "Teaching for Novices" at the beginning, telling the story of Rick Jones looking for the protagonist to investigate a sewer ghoul incident together. Friends who know "Cthulhu Mythos" should have read Love Craftsman The next story is based on the famous "Pickman's Model".
After experiencing the failure of this article, I will write more carefully and meticulously, and strive to build a complete and beautiful story for everyone, please continue to support me!Thanks!
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2 in 1 chapters!
Thanks to 'Frost Night Zero' and 'BJ Hippo God' for their rewards!Thanks to the book friends 20170519221619118, 0118 in the rain, and the past-solo for their rewards.Ask for collection, please recommend tickets~
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