Just became a beast, someone built a sect on my hill

Chapter 140 Staged Summary ([-])

Alas... time flies so fast, in a blink of an eye, another month is over.

This volume has also come to an end.

After all, Baiyin is a self-disciplined author, and it is still the same. Let me summarize the gains and losses of this month.

Since the last summary,

Silver thinks the effect is pretty good.

In this month's creation, I also did some targeted exercises.

It is a small improvement.

Although the road ahead is still far away, we have taken a small step.

Maybe it doesn't show too much in the story, but Baiyin's control over the text is clearer in terms of self-feeling.

If it used to be a ball of thread that was twisted together, making people confused, but now, at least it is found where the thread ends are... not easy.

For this alone, all the suffering and despair this month are nothing...

Worth it.

It doesn't matter if the results are not ideal, as the strength improves, the results will come sooner or later!

Well, without much gossip, complaining that Baiyin hasn't learned yet, let's get down to business.

One, rhythm switching.

Bai Yin felt quite satisfied with the few small plots this month.

Foreshadowing, climax, ending... These things of succession and transition are more sufficient.

Through deliberate practice,

The structure of each plot point is a little more optimized than the previous two volumes.

Looking back at the first two volumes, it actually has the meaning of "writing wherever I think of it".

For the concept of foreshadowing and climax, it is not enough.

Of course, in addition to foreshadowing and climax, the final ending is also very important, and it is also a refreshing process of sublimation.

It's a pity that in the end, Baiyin still didn't meet the most basic requirements this time and needs to be strengthened.

Second, writing power.

Bai Yin has considered the term "writing strength".

After all, it is a very hazy concept.

Many friends who have just entered the online literature circle, including when Bai Yin first wrote his first book, probably think it is...writing.

Now, however, Silver sees things a little differently.

It is not so much the writing style as it is the writing power.

It's the ability to tell a story!
It is the ability of text output!

It is a methodology of expression!
Good writing is a bonus item, but it is by no means the main item for a good or bad web article.

Give a chestnut,

Web articles pay attention to the sense of substitution.

The sense of substitution refers to giving readers an immersive feeling, and then generating various emotions such as love, hatred, and hatred for the story.

And good writing power can make it easier for readers to substitute into it.

Good writing, but not necessarily.

In fact, if the writing is too gorgeous, it will increase this threshold.

(Of course, good writing is better, dog head saves life)

In the first two volumes, Baiyin would often encounter the lack of vocabulary, or the confusion that could not be described.

At this time, it is reflected in the gap in writing skills.

To put it simply, it is the picture imagined in the mind, which cannot be realized with words.

As a result, the expression is not accurate enough, nor refined enough, and may even be biased.

And during this month's creative process, Bai Yin's biggest feeling is.

The number of times this happens has decreased a lot.

Although it still happens from time to time, I can think of some ways to outline it in words as much as possible.

To give another example,
For example, if a piece of torn paper is placed in the past, it can only be expressed as a piece of torn paper.

And now, we can choose to add some modifications.

Simple but not simple modification.

Such as how the paper was torn, how many pieces it was torn into, whether it was torn into pieces or not, and the torn pieces of paper were irregular.

Or, you can also add some states... Fragmented paper flowers slowly fell to the ground, floated forward for a short distance, and then stopped.

In this way, the description will be clearer and the sense of substitution will be more real, right?

Haha, it's a bit self-promotional.

It seems that the child has made a little progress, so he asks for praise from his parents...

But it's true,
In the creative industry, every reader, every audience, as long as they are willing to watch, they are the parents of the creator.

Three, the main line.

This point was also mentioned in the previous summary.

Although this month did not meet expectations, but some efforts were made.

For example, the foreshadowing of "Battle Robot", the task of "Occupy Sign-in", the construction of Xiaolin Mountain, etc., each silver has been dug down.

Creation is like this, I want to think about it... But when it comes to code words, it is really not easy to integrate these things into the lines.

Well, take your time.

Haha, racking my brains, I only found these three small improvements. Compared with the shortcomings, they are really not too small...

Now that I've finished boasting myself,
Then, next, it is time for Baiyin to review himself with his friends.

In this issue, since there are three improvements, then...let's also review...the three questions first...

A steady flow of water can be regarded as giving yourself a little confidence.

One, the bottleneck.

The friends who can catch up here should have some feelings.

The quality of this month's update is actually not very good, whether it's the update time disorder, or the occasional absence of leave.

One is because the recommendation is too weak, resulting in unsatisfactory results.

Another reason is also because... silver has entered a bottleneck period.

Before "The Beast", Bai Yin was rarely able to write 30 words.

There is only one book, and that is still for the sake of full attendance, so I can't count it.

Therefore, to a certain extent, 30 characters is the first time for Silver.

Fortunately, the first blood was taken by you... Cough cough, why is it a bit weird...

Therefore, recently, every code word will have some jams, which is not as smooth as the previous two volumes.

Sometimes, sitting in front of the computer for half a day, I can't hold back the words, but I can write randomly... After all, there are many readers. Bai Yin can be sorry for himself, but he can't be sorry for the readers.

At present, silver still does not know how to solve it, how to break through this bottleneck?
The protagonist in the book has cheats and gold fingers, but silver... no, so he can only boil it slowly and polish it slowly.

If you have the right to be a poor horse, you will never give up the merits.

Come on, Ollie!

Second, the structure.

Well, it's the overall structure.

Fiction has always been poorly structured.

Take the latest volume as an example,
The first two "Twelve Kingdom Demon Cultivators" sneaked into Xiaolin Mountain, and then there was a big climax that was laid out, that is, Jiang Xiaofan survived the thunder disaster, and then Wuyin Huanglong Mountain System.

How to put it, from a small point of view, the architecture is okay, but overall, the structure is not so beautiful.

Feeling a little up and down.

The length before and after the story always feels a bit awkward.

In the new volume, this problem should be improved, and it is also one of the main improvement goals of the next volume of Silver.

Three, portray.

A story is always inseparable from characters.

Therefore, characterization has always been the top priority of the author.

It is also the top priority for readers!

We like "30 years in Hedong, 30 years in Hexi, don't bully the young and poor", Ye Xiu who "comes back, takes glory as the battlefield, and aims for the championship", and also likes "good at choking people, witty and passionate" Lu Shu.

It can be said that every best-selling book has one or more characters with their own highlights.

The success of character image portrayal lies in the influence they stay in our minds.

Even if there are some villains, such as the girlfriend's Amon, right, in Bai Yin's heart, he is still cute, glorious, and touching.

As for Bai Yin, he also hopes to... portray and outline such a moving character.

But the fact is that so far, the characters in Baiyin's pen are still at the stage of paper man and tool man.

Human nature is beautiful, complex, and never one-sided.

It is really difficult to describe it.

Harm, and come on.

Well, this summary will come to an end first.

It's good to have a simple chat with my friends every month.

The mood is also a little more comfortable, and there is a clearer positioning of one's own strength.

A new volume starts now.

Oh, right.

Update at night. . .

(End of this chapter)