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Chapter 457 Losing to Zhang Fan is No Shame

It’s okay, it’s okay, Zhang Fan is a game player, and if he plays games well, his hand speed must be fast, so typing is indeed more advantageous than himself.

But it doesn't mean that he writes quickly and well!
After all, writing a novel is not playing a game, you just need to be quick and have something in your mind!
Su Yaya felt that she still had a chance of winning, after all, she was very satisfied with her work.

"How is it? Not as many as I have written?"

Zhang Fan looked smugly, looked back at Su Yaya, glanced at her computer screen, and found that there were only a few more than 1000 characters on it.

This girl's clumsy typing was so slow, Zhang Fan was not surprised.

After a glance, the style of writing is still the same as before, still the pretentious Mary Suwen.

"Hmph! I admit that your hand speed is faster than mine."

"But mass-produced things are not as expensive as manual ones, and speed and quality are not directly proportional."

Su Yaya snorted coldly. Although she glanced at Zhang Fan's novel and felt that it was indeed well written, she was still very confident in what she wrote.

"Then send it to your editor for a look, the outcome is not decided by us."

"Anyway, I have already won the hand speed, and you are still too far behind me."

Zhang Fan said triumphantly, feeling that the outcome is already clear.

"Hmph, I'll send it to the editor now!"

As Su Yaya said, she opened the chat software and sent a message to the editor.

Su Yaya: Editor, please help me to see, which of the two beginnings is better?

Soon the other party replied.

Lin Jingjing: Are you finally willing to open a new book?
At this time, in the mobile office building in Donghai, a woman wearing glasses and full of intellectual temperament sighed at the computer screen.

She is the editor of Singularity Fiction.com. Recently, the performance of the website is not good, and a large number of new books need to be signed.

So I saw Su Yaya's article that day, and the title should be pretty good, so I signed it for her directly, but I didn't expect the result to be so bad.

It wasn't until she opened Su Yaya's book and took a look at it two days ago that she finally knew where the problem was.

This Su Yaya doesn't know how to write a book at all!
What are these things?It's a mess, it feels like a junior high school student playing around.

Lin Jingjing also hinted to Su Yaya many times, hurry up and stop writing like this, or start a new book, this is a waste of resources.

But this girl didn't seem to understand what she was talking about at all.

Resolutely going his own way, taking a slanted sword, and updating 20 words in one breath.

Although her typing speed is slow, she does seem to be working hard.

But what I wrote is really unsightly, and there is nothing I can do now.

No matter how she said it, she couldn't listen to it. She didn't expect a new beginning to be sent suddenly today.Lin Jingjing thought that Su Yaya was going to open a new book, but after a closer look, it was still the same as before...

"Oh, I don't even know what to say about her."

"Any junior high school student can write better than her. What the hell is this?"

Lin Jingjing suddenly felt as big as a cow, but she was professional, so she decided to read the more than 1000 words.

Because there are not many, just glance at it and read it.

After reading it, Lin Jingjing let out a long breath, as if the torture was over.

"How should I tell this girl? It's too direct, won't it be a little hurtful?"

Lin Jingjing was also very embarrassed, she really wanted to tell this Su Yaya that if you have no talent, you should stop writing novels and find another way out!

Don't torture me, I won't make things difficult for you, please let me go!

When I was about to send a message to Su Yaya, I suddenly saw another article.

"Hey, is this style of writing different?"

Lin Jingjing is also a senior editor, so she could tell at first glance that this should not be written by Su Yaya.

After looking it over carefully, I found it quite interesting!
Although the mood at the beginning is very low, but the writing is very in place, which perfectly makes up for that vacancy.

The more it reads, the more interesting it becomes. After reading the first five hundred characters, it gets better and better. Lin Jingjing has also read countless books.

She has read all kinds of books, good and bad, so she will naturally feel some aesthetic fatigue.But she felt that this novel gave her the desire to continue reading.

As a senior editor, she felt that this book might become a hit!

Immediately, Lin Jingjing became excited. After all, if she published a book with achievements, she could get a high commission, and she also hoped to see better works appear.

Lin Jingjing: Did you write the second article?

Soon she replied to Su Yaya's message, wanting to confirm whether it was written by Su Yaya.

But I already have the answer in my heart, this style of writing is definitely not Su Yaya's.

But I don't know why she sent it to herself. I haven't figured out the situation yet, so it's better to ask others first.

Su Yaya, who was waiting for a reply, kept staring at her phone while several of them were having lunch.

"Why are you staring at your phone all the time?"

Tuantuan looked up at Su Yaya, feeling that Yaya was a little strange today.

The food Zhang Fan cooks is so delicious, they usually rush to eat it, but today Su Yaya didn't seem to have any appetite, so she didn't try to grab it from her, and she felt a little boring eating in groups.

"She's waiting for the editor to reply to her message."

Zhang Fan said with a smile, thinking that the editor may have been too lazy to talk to Su Yaya because he hasn't responded to the news yet.

"It's back!"

Su Yaya looked at the phone excitedly, but frowned.

"She asked about your book, she will definitely criticize you!"

Su Yaya felt a little lost in her heart, but she felt that she couldn't lose in terms of momentum.

She still responded to the message first.

Su Yaya: I wrote the first editorial, what do you think?
Soon Lin Jingjing replied helplessly.

Lin Jingjing: Sister, you should stop writing books and forget about being an editor.

Lin Jingjing: I know you may like these very much, but what you wrote is really bad...

Lin Jingjing: Don't blame my sister for speaking harshly. If you don't get rewards for your hard work, that's the most uncomfortable thing.

Seeing the news that the editor came back, Su Yaya really spit out a mouthful of rice.

"I have no talent? I'm not suitable for writing novels?"

"Hmph! What nonsense."

Su Yaya was so angry that she yelled, and she felt 1 unwilling.

"By the way, don't make trouble for others, you should practice more, you do have big mistakes in many places."

Zhang Fan sighed slightly. Although he didn't want to hurt the girl's self-confidence, she still had to find the right direction. She didn't realize the existence of the problem now, and this was the most deadly thing.

Such aimless efforts, like a headless chicken, will definitely not be rewarded.

Although it is not bad for the money, but I have not been able to get anything, and there will definitely be problems with my mentality.

(End of this chapter)