Douluo: Pretend Tang Sect elders are angry at Tang San

Chapter 151 Some Thoughts

In fact, from a structural point of view, it is mainly reflected in the sense of design. Tudou is a network writer with a poor sense of design.

This is not scolding him, most Internet writers are like this, simply speaking, they write wherever they think of.

In comparison, Tang San's sense of design is actually slightly better than Tudou.

Maybe the third young master of the Tang family is a very badass person himself, as you can probably tell by looking at the protagonists in their works.

Most of Xiao Yan, Lin Dong and others are upright and awe-inspiring, no matter what kind of monsters and evil spirits they are, they can defeat them with all their strength, and leapfrog battles mainly rely on various cheats (Buddha's wrath lotus, devouring ancestral talisman, etc.)
Tang San, Zhou Weiqing and the like are more chicken thieves (Zhou Weiqing is the most obvious), although they also have a lot of tricks in leapfrog battles, but they mainly rely on brains and tactics, such as Tang San vs. Own).

This actually reflects the style of their creators and their works.

Back to the question of design sense.

Tudou's biggest flaw or routine is the collapse of the combat power system. Go to a place to find a boss to cap the level of this combat power stage, put pressure on the protagonist to survive and let the protagonist clear the boss and enter the next instance.The most powerful person in the Warcraft Mountains is the head of the mercenary group, who is still a fighting master in his tens of years.

When it comes to Jia Ma Empire, the top ten masters are a bunch of Dou Kings, and several Dou Emperors are the top of the sky, Yunshan is the top, and they are one-star Dou Zong.

After finishing the work, we will create a black corner domain, which is known as the most irregular place in the whole continent. The most violent black list in it is a Douhuang who entered Canaan College, a bunch of little demon girls from the outer courtyard, the captain of the law enforcement team, etc. Bai Shan, I don't know why I had to wait for Xiao Yan to go back before entering the inner courtyard at the same time (isn't this thing selected once a year? You are so awesome, you should go in early), oh yes, the boss of the Black Horn Region, from Canaan College The captain of the law enforcement team is a big fighter.

As expected, there is a leaderboard after entering the inner court, the most powerful of which is a Dou Ling peak, the Great Elder is the ceiling of strength at this stage, and he is also a Dou Zong.

Then Xiao Yan had a [-]-[-] fight with Liu Qing with great effort, and then entered the Zangbao Pavilion and touched a Xuan-level fighting skill to come out. . .You just think about whether Man Tianchi, the dean of their academy, is a semi-saint or a member of the eight ancient clans. . .He has established a monster academy known as the whole continent, and even went to corners like Utan City to recruit students. The source of recruited students and the resources in his hands are just such a thing. . .

When Xiao Yan arrives at Douwang and returns to Jiama, I personally think this is the beginning of the collapse of the combat power system.Tudou found out that the protagonist was fighting king at the age of 20, so those top ten masters of Jiama seem to be completely not enough to watch (I hope you can still remember those old "Ten Masters" fighting kings who followed Furukawa to the desert to find different fires ), so they forcibly pulled out their combat power, and the Yunlanzong was helped by the Soul Palace, and several Douhuangs emerged (before that, the Douhuangs of the Jiama Empire were like rare animals)
Not much to say in the middle, after killing Yunshan, Xiao Yan became the Douhuang again, and returned to the Heijiao domain, now he can be the king and hegemony, right?The few old men on the black list were not enough to watch, but unexpectedly, a new force was formed, the boss was a Dou Zong, and he dominated Xiao Yan.

This one kills the boss, back to the Jia Ma Empire, the sky has changed again, Dou Zong has become a Chinese cabbage again, what kind of little doctor, three major forces, the strongest power in Izumo is the 6-star Dou Zong, Hey, I remember that Jia Lao, the strongest in Jiama, tried his best and failed to break through, right?Did Yunshan join the Douzong because of the opening of the Soul Palace?Izumo originally had a [-]-[-] relationship with Kama?

Jiama and Heijiaoyu have played badly, and a new place called Zhongzhou is immediately created here. What else is there? One palace, one tower, two sects, three valleys and Sifang Pavilion.

Well, first of all, Xiao Yan broke through the bottleneck of Dou Huang, who had troubled Yunshan and Jia Lao all his life, after taking a bath, and met the boss of Fenglei Pavilion. It turns out that the famous powerful boss in Zhongzhou is a three-star Dou Zun.

Then, Xiao Yan found that he had grown up like a cheater in the past few years. What a strange fire, his skyrocketed to more than ten stars, and the young people in Zhongzhou just picked up a young man who was similar to him.

Canaan Academy, the most powerful monster academy in the whole continent, is nothing more than that.

The latter kind of collapse of combat power is normal. In short, you can see that when Xiao Yan goes to a place, there will be a group of young people who are at the same level as him to practice or pretend to be aggressive, and then there will be a few old monsters who are against him. One level higher, not much, just one level, it can neither kill him nor pressure him to improve.

The latter is nothing, after all, you are an old monster, the problem is that you, Xiao Yan, have eaten so many natural treasures and so many different fires to open cheats, and the other young people just rushed away?Jialao, Yunshan, and Su Qian can't break through the bottleneck in a lifetime, you Xiao Yan encounters a lot of opportunities to break through, but how can Dou Zun become a Chinese cabbage with young people (emphasis added)?
So "Fights Break Sphere" is completely a single-view novel. The protagonist is about to hit someone, and a young man who is about the same size as Xiao Yan or half taller than him is caught, and then he is beaten up by Xiao Yan to pretend to be forced. The protagonist wants to grow up. He made an old monster a few stars taller than him and beat the protagonist, then Xiao Yan endured the humiliation and broke through with one hand to destroy the old monster, and then changed to another scene, a young man (about the same level as him), an old man Monsters (strength ceiling at this stage).

Is this structure good? It’s actually pretty good. The scene can be changed infinitely. As long as the combat power system is still in Tudou, you can keep writing (it’s probably because the combat power system of the Dou Shi-Dou Sheng set before is not addictive, and Tudou is still there.) If you don’t make Nine Ranks in the middle of Dou Zun, and add a half-sage to continue to add the plot, in fact, you add a new realm between Dou Zun and Dou Sheng...)
But this structure is the most taboo backtracking.

As soon as you look back, your combat power system becomes a joke, and your tail without a sense of design can be seen at a glance.

The one I re-read recently was about Xun'er's coming-of-age ceremony, and Gu Qingyang revealed that the family crest was the ninth rank, saying that this was "the opportunity" to enter the Dou Sheng.

Gu Qingyang is 30 years old, and already a nine-star Dou Zun... I thought about it, and I thought about Jialao, Yunshan and the old gatekeepers of Canaan College...

Then I thought about it later, when the decisive battle was over, the sky was full of fighting saints...

If you compare it with "Douluo Continent", it is probably that Tang San and the others finally rose to Contra (the second-to-last level) after training in Sea God, but a dozen young people suddenly appeared from some unknown force, all of them It's Contra...

It was even worse when Xiao Yan broke through to Dou Sheng... The Dou Sheng from various forces came out... You said that there were so many Dou Sheng in your own family. Back then, a few of you had never seen the relic of a Dou Sheng. It seems like a bloody fight?
Yao Lao broke through to be a half-sage, and he was invited by the ancient clan, and it was also a space trade fair. At this time, there was no one from other forces. I really thought that the half-sage was so awesome...

There is also the boss of the Sifang Pavilion, the three-star Dou Zun, who is famous in Zhongzhou... It is not as good as a puppet in Xiao Yan's hand later.

Speaking of this Dou Zun puppet... Jia Lao, Yun Shan, and Su Qian cursed and quit the live broadcast room.

So here you can't figure out the relationship between age and strength at all...

On the other hand, "Douluo Dalu" is actually pretty good.

After the three young masters set the level 1-100 level, they can probably figure out the corresponding relationship between age and strength. The Shrek Seven Monsters are the Seven Monsters, and there will be a bunch of monsters whose age and strength are similar to theirs out of nowhere... ...The distribution of countries and forces is also very clear. The first three sects have about 2 Titled Douluo per person, the lower four sects only have Contra, and the two empires each have one titled Douluo. Only the system of the Wuhun Palace is relatively broken. More than a dozen Title Douluo.

But after all, it's late, so it can be forgiven. (Looking at it this way, I really have a double standard...but I also said that the three young ones are better than potatoes)
The structure of the three young masters in the early stage is relatively clear.And San Shao is good at using old people, unlike Tudou who occasionally takes out a talented newcomer to challenge the protagonist, San Shao likes to use those few people repeatedly, and very much follows the training speed he originally set, so Huo Wu, Yu Tianheng No matter how they catch up, they can't catch up with the seven monsters. There are only seven monsters in the seven monsters. There are no new talents to challenge them. After they pass level 60, they are basically old men.

I remember that when Xiao Yan had just eaten three thousand flames and broke through to the peak of Douzong, a young master of Tianmingzong who was also a peak Douzong suddenly appeared and proposed to challenge Xiao Yan. I was speechless at that time... Although Tudou explained That buddy is a fake genius who relies on exercises or something...but he appeared as a sandbag to show how awesome the protagonist is after breaking through...

"Douluo Dalu" lacks a lot of young people who appear out of nowhere, and the structure will be much better. It also shows that San Shao has more or less designed it before starting to write.

In fact, there is only one thing I want to express, and that is that the world view of the Douluo series makes me feel sick when I study it deeply.Just like in the real world, if you question why the second and third generations get more opportunities than ordinary people, they may say, how can you compare with the hard work of my generations in ten years, and I have not violated the rules, but If you think about it carefully, you will find that the rules are made by themselves, they are both athletes and referees.

Although in the world of the Great Master, the boy who slayed the dragon also became a dragon, but in the world of fighting and fighting, they exchanged a few lives for his accumulation from generation to generation.

In fact, what makes me most desperate is that no matter what the world is, almost every young man becomes a dragon after slaying a dragon. They break the old world and take over the new world logically. They will reproduce, grow stronger, and slowly To fully control the ascending channel, I hope to share it within my own circle.

But the vast majority of people outside the circle have appeals, and the number of people with appeals will gradually increase, and the way they express their appeals will gradually become more intense, and eventually they will stand up and overthrow everything, it seems like fate.

I haven't seen a perfect solution to this strange circle in many novels, and I don't seem to have seen it in reality either.

The difference between Douluo Dalu and Dou Po Cang Qiong is actually the difference in writing style between Tang Jiasan Shao and Tiancan Tudou.We will not discuss their writing style here, the horror of potatoes is so hot recently.

In my opinion, the biggest difference between them is their worldview. As they are all fantasy worlds, they represent the two mainstream viewpoints of the fantasy world, and they have their own audiences in the real world.

From the Douluo Continent to the later Douluo Empire series, San Shao tends to describe their truth, goodness and beauty in the description of character style.

It even feels a bit facial.

The protagonist goes out to a poor or wealthy family, with a clear distinction between good and evil, good teachers, and friends who are united and friendly.

It is almost certain that they must represent the party of justice. If they are transformed and have more literary value, I think they can be used as reading materials for cultivating moral values.

Especially when it came to Peerless Tang Sect, this feeling became more and more intense.

But I still don't like this style. The biggest reason is a sense of fate. When he was in Douluo, Tang San was first favored by the main god, which determined his supreme status. No matter how hard the villain struggles, it won't help.When it came to Peerless Tang Sect, Huo Yuhao was taken by Tang San at the very beginning, and he didn't need to look any further to know that he would defy the sky.

But what I didn't expect was that he would be so heaven-defying. He was valued by the strongest of the top schools as soon as he left the house, and he was almost trained as an heir. Those soul beasts that had lived for hundreds of thousands of years kept leaning on him. Not reluctantly.I heard that Tang San's son was the main character in Legend of the Dragon King from the very beginning, so I don't want to watch it after seeing this.

Because it makes me feel hopeless that the first generation made it to the top through their own efforts and opportunities, and their friends and descendants deservedly occupy the best positions.The second generation was favored and supported by the first generation, and he was not muddy, so he reached almost the same level as the first generation.

The third generation is the descendants of the first generation. They are destined to be the strongest by nature. With the escort of the first and second generations, it is impossible for them not to stand shoulder to shoulder with their predecessors.In the setting of the novel, the god position is certain, and success must be achieved through inheritance and transfer, which is equivalent to being controlled by some people, and his partner in the second part is more or less related to Tang San's friends.

It is better to say that the second generation is selected by the second generation.This is more frightening than any of the solidified viewpoints currently being discussed. Fate is directly determined by others, and any struggle is useless.

In contrast, Doupa represents another style.As long as you work hard and have opportunities, you can break your destiny and climb to the top, although the chances are very small and it may not be you.We can understand that in every era, there are people who were born in humble beginnings, but some people have made this leap.The conditions required for this leap and the things to pay are different for everyone, but hope is there.

Because of this, the characters in Tudou's works often rely on their own efforts, although there will definitely be an enlightenment teacher in the early stage.But we still saw his growth.

The best example is Xiao Yan and Lin Dong, their growth trajectory is exactly the same.Their biggest characteristic is that there is no distinction between good and bad. No one can use modern morality to evaluate them. They are like heroes in history.Killing and stealing goods is not uncommon. They are now in prison, but in that world this is their only way.

Each of them has a selfish side, following the principle that no one can do what they want, and the world will destroy the earth, and at most dedicate their love to the people around them. is especially evident at the time.

Douluo represents the ideal side of this world, and Dou Po represents the realistic side of this world to a certain extent.

Just like a person who is moved, he dedicates his life to others, and most of us can only watch in front of us and take good care of the people we care about.

(End of this chapter)