Zerg evolution road

Chapter 617 "The Cute Lord is Invincible"

The new book has already started to be released, and this bug is about to come to an end.

I know that many friends in the book "Zerg Evolution Road" are looking forward to his growth.

However, maybe Juzi didn’t plan well, and the bugs collapsed in the later stage. I didn’t find a few pitfalls, and the more I wrote later, the more I crashed, I simply added an extra protagonist.

This is my major mistake. I shouldn't have written it like this. I have led myself into a ditch and failed everyone's expectations.

The Zerg is a race with a different evolutionary method. It may be a problem set by me, which caused it to show an invincible posture after a little growth.

However, everyone should know that if a book is invincible, then his journey is coming to an end.

Therefore, Orange is here to say sorry to everyone, "Zerg Evolution Road" has become a sea of ​​water.

Here, Tangerine lists some of its own shortcomings:

1. I didn’t have a clear outline and settings. I just thought about it while writing, and saved it in a document, so that it was too messy and I couldn’t find it myself, which made it a bit overwhelming in the middle and later stages.

2. The description of creatures is not detailed enough, and it is not described carefully from the front and side, which leads to a little fuzziness when reading.

3. The pace is too fast in the early stage, and the speed can be slowed down a little when developing on the planet, but it is very slow in the middle stage, and the connection between the context and the context is somewhat confusing.

4. The battle mode of the Zerg is a bit chaotic. When fighting, the methods adopted are not satisfactory, and there are always some deviations in terms of quantity and strength.

5. My own writing skills. I like creatures very much, but large-scale biological integration operations require multi-angle descriptions, and Zerg's descriptions during battles are too sloppy.

6. Use characters indiscriminately. There are too many characters in the worm. As a result, I can hardly find them when I look for them later, and I often forget the names of the characters.

7. The characters are not outstanding enough. There are a few accidents that often occur, and the other supporting characters feel like passers-by, and they are not well set.

8. The background of the story, using the Kardashev civilization index, I almost couldn't hold back, and it was quite dragging the plot.

9. As far as the level of the universe is concerned, the understanding is not detailed enough, and many things should not be described in that way, but in order to clearly divide, some unnecessary factors have been added on their own initiative.

10. I attach great importance to the evaluation of book friends, but sometimes I don't think about it properly.

In fact, there are still many, many shortcomings in this book. I understand and want to correct them.

However, in the back, I really couldn't hold back anymore, and I was stuck to death.

Moreover, many small characters who were supposed to appear in the early stage did not appear, and I was afraid of those with many foreshadowings.

Sorry again, Zerg was going to kill it years ago.

The new book "Moe Lord Invincible" has been released. It is also a biological novel and a farming style novel.

It will be different in terms of biological description, and it is more divided according to the order, family, genera and species.

In addition, "Moe Lord Invincible" is not published in Two-dimensional, because its setting is a bit inconsistent with science fiction, and there are fantasy creatures.

To put it bluntly, he is a sci-fi love letter in a two-dimensional cloak.

Finally, I hope everyone can host the new book a lot.

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