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Chapter 873 Perfect, challenge!
Anyone who is familiar with Li Feiyu knows how serious he is when he reads comics, one time is enough to find out the mistakes in the comics, and if he is interested, he will find out all the shortcomings directly.

And now after watching it three times, it is only the fourth time that I start to find shortcomings, which is enough to explain many things.

Now you can see that Li Feiyu's eyes are about to pop out, and his eyes are shining. This is obviously a rhythm of interest, and he still looks very interested.

"Huh, this manga is really a challenge. I want to find the shortcomings. This is the time to test my skills. However, although this newcomer manga is evil, but hey, I can still find the shortcomings. It's just that I couldn't hold it just now. That's all, just look at my full strength now!"

Li Feiyu was overjoyed, but when he looked at it again this time, his expression was extremely solemn. It took a long time to look at a painting, and it took no less time than creating a cartoon. This is also a senior member of the Feiyang Forum. Venomous snakes, what is admirable is that they sincerely treat the comics with potential with a pious attitude, and this comic obviously makes Li Feiyu extremely excited. He has to read it carefully and find out all the faults!

"The name "Yanhuanglong Group" seems to be heard before, but no matter what, I still found it. Well, the first point is that the style of painting is very mature, and the protagonist is extremely eye-catching and very aura, but such a The brilliance of some important people is a little lacking, and the whole has caused a slight sense of disobedience. If it goes on for a long time, it will cause a great disharmony. This is the first shortcoming!"

"Huh, it's really a challenge, but I like it!"

Li Feiyu, it took him more than 40 minutes to identify the first shortcoming. Adding the previous words, it was more than two hours. Obviously this is extremely surprising. Seriously, it is impossible to spend so long!

"The second shortcoming is the handling of the lines. There are some minor flaws, such as the protagonist's nose and the layout of the protagonist's facial features. These flaws have no overall impact, but they have an impact on the protagonist's aura. The lines It looks a little bit rigid, doesn't fit the identity of the protagonist, and also slightly loses its proper characteristics!"

"third……"

"fourth……"

Li Feiyu was getting more and more excited. Finding a shortcoming made him feel as if he had won a lottery. He was so excited, but at this time Li Feiyu frowned: "It seems that these few shortcomings are gone, and I can't find them anymore. , but how is this possible? Generally speaking, internationally renowned manga masters cannot reach this level. Even the well-received Dragon Ball and other manga, although they have a master-level or even surpassed reputation, their shortcomings are at least There are no fewer than ten, but this manga actually only has four, how is it possible, did I overlook something?"

Immediately; Li Feiyu looked carefully again, with extremely critical eyes, but after an hour, he still only identified these four shortcomings, and it was difficult to find them again.

"It's not scientific!"

Li Feiyu frowned, but after casually glanced at the time on the computer, he exclaimed: "Damn, it's past one o'clock in the morning, and I actually read ten hours of comics, just like this, and it's still It’s just picking out four shortcomings, which is a bit of an insult to Li Feiyu’s combat effectiveness, if not, I will continue to look for it!”

But maybe it's because of his strength, or maybe it's because this cartoon has indeed reached the level of an international master, making it impossible for Li Feiyu to start. After a long time, he sat on the chair in a decadent way: "This is impossible, It's impossible...but!"

Immediately, Li Feiyu became excited again: "If this comic is really a newcomer's, then there is no doubt that Yanhuang Kingdom has a new comic star. This is a big event in the entire comic world!"

"No, I can't find it. It doesn't mean others can't. I'll get rid of my brother tomorrow. This guy is a senior poisonous snake. His vision is much better than mine, and he is also a street cartoonist. This is not an ordinary cartoonist. Comparable, so be it, and do this after getting up early and going to work tomorrow!"

At that moment, Li Feiyu immediately copied and pasted the comments he saved in the document into the comments, then took a look, only the floor occupied by the author, and the floor he commented on, frowned and said: "The forum is not popular these days. It’s a lot, even the poisonous snake is not enthusiastic, if there was such a manga in the past, the number of comments would have exceeded ten, and now there are no other replies, alas!”

Li Feiyu sighed, but he didn't think about it any more, he only thought about finding his senior brother tomorrow.

At this time, Li Feiyu's post had just been posted, and Fei Yu, one of the administrators, discovered it. He was also extremely worried about the Feiyang Forum these days. After all, the impact of the Diwo Forum on them was too great. It made him feel extremely worried.

"Well, it seems that someone has commented, that kid Li Feiyu?"

While speaking, Fei Yu clicked to enter the comment post. He clicked to follow Feiyang's extremely professional poisonous snakes. He could know the latest news immediately, so he soon entered the comment post. middle.

"Four shortcomings, gone? This doesn't look like Li Feiyu's style!"

There was surprise in Fei Yu's eyes: "Could it be that even Li Feiyu has lost confidence in the forum and is a little disappointed in his identity as a poisonous snake?"

"No, it's absolutely impossible, well, then read this cartoon!"

While speaking, Fei Yu pulled back to the main building of the post, and even after reading it, like Li Feiyu, he is also extremely obsessed with manga in his heart. As long as he wants to read the comment post, he will definitely take it seriously. After reading it, I will make poisonous snake comments according to whether I like it or not.

Of course, when commenting, he will change into a vest. After all, he is one of Feiyang's three administrators. If he is in battle, he will inevitably be criticized.

"The writing is very good, and the narration is very clear about what I want. This author is not ordinary!"

Nodding his head, Fei Yu immediately read the manga. The first glance gave him a feeling of astonishment.

"This, how is this possible? Could it be that a top master of this manga approved the vest to go into battle? Could it be that a master has released a new work, but..."

Fei Yu suddenly didn't have the time to think about it, because the manga had already attracted his attention. From the appearance of the main character, to the second act, and the third act, he was amazed by each manga. Feeling, and the attraction to him is also increasing.

Unlike Li Feiyu, who is only a master of comments, Feiyu himself is also a cartoonist. Although he is not very famous, he is no longer a small cartoonist, but a cartoonist who can be fixed in a magazine serial. Fame, of course, is to know the creation of comics, and it is extremely difficult to make a little progress. A cartoon can basically show the skill of the cartoonist.

Obviously, Fei Yu doesn't think that this manga can be drawn by a newcomer. Without the ability to grasp manga, and without strong confidence in himself, it is impossible to do this at all. Moreover, this style of painting is too mature and attractive. The force is simply too great.

"Perfect!"

After Fei Yu finished reading it, he couldn't help admiring, and murmured to himself: "Since the manga was sent to Feiyang, we will definitely come to Feiyang according to its characteristics. That's for sure, the poisonous snake. It is the best manga I have seen so far, it can be called perfect, surpassing the top masters, but there must still be some shortcomings, Li Feiyu found four shortcomings, it seems that he is not not trying his best!"

A spark flashed in Fei Yu's eyes. First, he directly used the administrator privileges to add precision to the top of this cartoon, highlight the settings, and at the same time, after hesitating for a while, he sent a broadcast message directly. This is the way to quit the administrator. account, entered his vest account, the vest is called Yumo, this is his special alias, and people in the forum generally know it well.

"Let me challenge the difficulty now. Li Feiyu found four, then let's see if I can find five. I don't know which country's top master has made a breakthrough. He actually created this kind of comics. The most important thing is to be recognized by others." It leaked out!"

Fei Yu knew that his previous operation was suspected of taking risks, but after all, the forum was only neutral, as long as others dared to upload, they naturally didn't have to deal with it before an official announcement was made. You can advertise it.

"Phew, maybe this will be an opportunity for Feiyang to rise. Feiyang's characteristics have always been our belief. This time, let us use Feiyang's poisonous snake to challenge this perfect work. Presumably a true master will not Narrow-minded, even..."

After thinking of this, his eyes shone with light, and he copied the manga directly, and then made an astonishing decision - cut off the Internet!
Apparently he wanted to stay overnight undisturbed to make comments, Fei Yu obviously took out a challenge posture, the spark of faith in his heart was flickering, obviously able to challenge the cartoonist in his mind who surpassed the top masters, for him It is also an honor to say.

Although it is a verbal challenge, it is not a competition of manga skills!
"call!"

For the first time, just like Li Feiyu, he was completely attracted by the comics, but he was very fast in customer service, and managed to get himself into the state of commenting, bit by bit, analyzing the first scene of the comic...

(End of this chapter)