A City of Infinite Winners in One's Life

"Then what should I call you, Lord God? If I call you that way outside, I will be regarded as a middle-aged person with an abnormal mind, and you will be regarded as a lunatic." Xiazhi Qiu Shiyu said calmly.

"Uh... this is a problem, and I always feel that when you call me Lord God, you must be mocking me in your heart."

"This is nothing." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu turned his head away.

"Hey...you have the ability to look into my eyes and talk..." Li Wei didn't know what to do anymore. Could it be that Senior Sister is the legendary Tucao?Li Wei could feel the stinging pain of the needle piercing the skin with every word, and even if he complained, the poisonous tongue is not cute at all!

"If you are really a nerd, can you make me a best-selling romance novelist?" As if thinking of something, Kasumigaoka Shiyu turned her head and said.

"Eh? I don't seem to be able to help you with this wish, because I am a person who can't tell stories. In this regard, I may only be able to help you." Li Wei quickly waved his hand and said that he couldn't do it, writing novels or something. Just forgive him.

"Then let's just destroy the United States..." Kasumigaoka Shiyu expressed an even more excessive wish.

"I'm not Diablo! And if I destroy any country, I will be targeted! It is very likely that I will be forcibly kicked out of this world at that time!" Li Wei wanted to go crazy, and the legend is cute Why is the soft senior sister like this, his illusion is completely shattered!

"Cut...the god of weak chicken..." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu turned his head again, and Li Wei felt that he had been pierced by a thousand arrows.Not cute at all!

"I am subject to many restrictions now, but! The future of me is limitless. Thirty years in Hedong and thirty years in Hexi, don't bully the poor!" Li Wei pointed to Shiyu's delicate nose, but Li Wei said. Before she could finish speaking, she was interrupted again.

"Oh, I've also read this novel. It seems to be a WEB novel from Huaxia. It seems to be called Fighting Breaking the Sky. You should change the sentence to be new. And if you are a god, then the concept of time It will definitely be different from ordinary people, and I will automatically multiply this time by thirty times."

"If you don't complain, I will die!"

"Because it's very interesting to complain about gods. Although Neon claims to be eight million gods, it's the first time I've seen a lively god, so I'm a little excited, please forgive me." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu said indifferently.

"Forget it... You still treat me like an ordinary person..." Li Wei felt that his eloquence urgently needed to be strengthened, and he was spit out.

Chapter 066. Creativity is a Big Problem

"No, no, it's too literary. What you want to write is light novels, not serious literature. This paragraph needs to be rewritten. How can there be such a tangled hero, it's too weak." Li Wei pointed out He said with a piece of text on the computer, feeling that it was not clear, so he directly grabbed the mouse and selected all the text that needed to be modified.

"Eh? Isn't this kind of herbivorous male protagonist popular now? Why are you so disgusted by Li Wei?" Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu said with some puzzlement, she felt that she wrote a pretty good paragraph, and when Li Wei came here, she directly was criticized for nothing.

"Because the neon society has long since been saved, that's why those abandoned houses like this kind of unwilling male protagonist, if you are in the position of the heroine, would you really like such an indecisive guy? ? And to be honest, this new book is really not creative. Although the story is well told, it is too old-fashioned. The traditional adventure stories of the brave are no longer popular. "Magic City"? That kind of work that is completely anti-routine is really powerful." As an audience, Li Wei, from the perspective of a bystander, directly pointed out the shortcomings of Shiyu of Xia Zhiqiu, now she is just a A novice in the literary world, the mistakes made are quite low-level, so a "big guy" with more than [-] novels like Li Wei still has enough experience to guide her, and what Li Wei said is not nonsense. , but it is indeed the case, so Shiyu of the Hill of Xia also had to accept Li Wei's opinion.

She continued to busy typing on the computer. The novel was not written by speaking, but by writing. Only by writing more, would there be progress.As a newcomer, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu has written less than 100 million words in total so far. For an online writer, if he has not written 100 million words, he may not even be able to get started. Novels not only rely on creativity, but also It depends on the perseverance of the author.

However, to Li Wei's satisfaction, Shiyu's perseverance is very good. Although she will be criticized by him from time to time, but in less than ten minutes, she can adjust herself and start to struggle again. It's a rare quality for a girl.

Li Wei was exercising his alchemy. A mass of indeterminate plastic floated on his palm, gradually turning into a human shape. The liquid plastic man jumped onto the table and began to dance Jiangnan style under Li Wei's remote control. , The funny movements of the plastic villain made Shiyu of Kasumigaoka unable to concentrate.

"Is this magic?" she asked curiously.

"Yes, no. This is alchemy, and it focuses on the principle of equivalent exchange. Like the Druids, it is independent of the magic system. Magic requires the manipulation of magic power that is free from the world, while alchemy is independent of the magic system. It needs more powerful mental power... Uh, what's the use of telling you this, anyway, you can't learn it now." Li Wei reacted, and he actually talked about mysterious mechanics in a daily episode. It's super sick.

"Eh? Why can't I learn? Is it because I'm a girl?" Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's sharp eyes despised Li Wei.

"Of course not... The amount of knowledge required for esotericism is really too great. It is very difficult to have that kind of knowledge at your age. Isn't there an old saying that a [-]-year-old unmarried otaku can become a Great magician. This is not nonsense. It involves sacrifice and equivalent exchange in mysticism. It is feasible to exchange power at the expense of one's own marriage, so the FFF group actually exists. ." Li Wei went off topic as he spoke, but his "nonsense" benefited Xiazhiqiu Shiyu a lot, and even moved the computer to Li Wei's side and began to record what Li Wei said.

"Eh? What are you doing? Are you still not serious about typing?" Li Wei looked at the words on the computer screen, which were all kinds of mysticism knowledge that he said at will. "What are you recording this for?"

"This is creativity, and it is my unique creativity, because you are a god, what you said must be reasonable, I want to use this as a material to write a novel about gods, you are the prototype. "Xiazhiqiu Shiyu rarely complained about Li Wei, and the excited look on her face made Li Wei think that she must have not taken medicine today.

"What about the outline of the story? A novel based on gods..." Li Wei felt that this idea was not bad. If it was written well, it might make her famous.However, the Bunko version is still forgot, the current strength of Kasumigaoka Shiyu is still to stay on the WEB book station honestly.

"I've already thought about it. A novelist who was on the street wanted a colorful life because he made a wish to the gods, so the gods appeared in person, and then the daily story of the novelist and the gods' bloody battle started like this! By the way, Mention, the gods and gods are so cute and black and straight to eat loli!" Kasumi Hill Shiyu quickly wiped the saliva from the corner of his mouth.Li Wei felt extremely chills, he felt that something was missing from him, was it a matter of integrity?

Li Wei felt that the so-called cute black long straight stuttering loli, the prototype must be himself, especially Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's eyes are a bit wrong now, Li Wei quickly hit her head with a hand knife, so that she can stop delusional exit from the status.

"It hurts so much, what are you doing!" Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu protested, covering her head.

"This is divine punishment for blasphemy/blasphemy, it's a good thing I didn't strike you with lightning..." Li Wei said with a sigh. "But the idea is good. You can try to write it. If you can pass my level, it will not be a big problem even if you submit it to the library."

"Eh? Is it really possible? If I go to the library book with my current strength, maybe I will be rejected again..." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu said somewhat unconfidently.

"It's nothing like that, you are very strong. I have read the original manuscript you submitted to the library. To be honest, the writing is as old as an old man with rich life experience, but the story is so boring that I want to sleep, so I insisted on reading three [-] characters, I can't stand it anymore, there is nothing new at all. But this time your creativity is good. If you describe the daily life of the gods, I can help a lot. At least I know some common sense of the gods. If it comes out, it's still interesting, and if it is matched with a suitable plot, I think your book can't be popular, but it's not a problem to become famous." Li Wei didn't talk nonsense, but the idea is really good, especially Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's old and abnormal writing style, as long as he can write the characters alive, a small fire will definitely not be a problem.

Chapter 067. Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's decisive work!

"Hey... That's amazing, then after my novels become famous, I'll have to ask Lord God for the game!" Kasumigaoka Shiyu folded her hands together with a pitiful look on her face.

"Hey... will you respect me only at this time..." Li Wei wants to complain that his attitude can change, but the old saying is indeed often said that a girl's heart is the sky in June, and it can be changed. Change.

"If it's the world view of the new book, it seems to be very interesting to make, a huge sandbox world. A game like The Elder Scrolls? But then again, what about your outline? Even the outline has not been completed, what do you want me to do? Trust you?" Li Weixu raised his eyes and looked at Shiyu of Xiazhiqiu like a fox.

"Um...that...this...I'll finish the outline right away..." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu sighed, and went back to the table to continue coding.She felt that she was going to be supernatural this time. With the guidance of an "expert", she had avoided several fatal mistakes in a row. It was the first time that she had written so smoothly, which was a surprise to her. A very rare thing.However, unlike the grass-fed waste wood light novels, her goal is to write a protagonist with the same characteristics as Kamijou Touma, so she knows that she has to work harder.

"Speaking of which, Shi Yu, you are about to enter your second year of high school, and you still have enough time to write a novel. You are really fighting for your life." Li Wei knew how hard it was for high school students in Neon, and Under such circumstances, Shiyu of Kasumigaoka can still insist on writing novels, which is really not an easy task.

"I'm confident in this case. Although I'm not a genius, I have completed all the courses in high school. Although it is still difficult to enter the East University, I have no problem with other universities. Just take the test." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu said without raising her head, her slender hands pressed quickly on the keyboard, like a pair of dancing elves, light and graceful.

Li Wei was a little speechless. He said that many high school students would vomit blood.Somewhat different from the anime, the real Neon high school homework is notoriously heavy, and it is even worse than the Great Celestial Dynasty, and Neon's morbid society has zero tolerance for poor students. The term of the law of the weak is explained incisively and vividly.

Time is passing little by little, and Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's writing ability no longer needs any breakthrough in technique, and that is not realistic. Her current writing style can only be changed from quantitative to qualitative.Li Wei revised her manuscript more than [-] times. A very interesting novel was formed little by little with the efforts of the two of them. It took almost half a month to finally finish the entire content of the first volume. , the number of words has reached the common standard of [-] words.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu leaned her tired body against the back of the chair, stretched out a great deal, and hummed a cat-like sound in her mouth. She put her already numb fingers on the back of her head. "A certain delicious and lazy God, proofreading!"

"Presumptuous! What is delicious and lazy, this is called enjoying life!" Li Wei, who was reading comics on Shiyu's chuang, said conditioned reflexively. He sat up and put down the comics in his hand. Although the world of "Passerby Girl" is terribly similar to Li Wei's original world, there are also some works that do not overlap. For example, the comics he is reading now are such products.

"Let's take a look at what else needs to be revised. I feel like I'm exhausted. It's the first time I found out that writing a novel would be so tiring." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu sighed. Usually, her coding speed is very fast. However, under Li Wei's high requirements, many of the paragraphs she wrote would be underlined as failing, and then she had to start revising, which was very frustrating, and revising novels was more tiring than writing novels.

Li Wei pushed Shiyu of Xiazhiqiu aside and began to review the manuscript of the novel. This time, even with his nitpicking, he could no longer find faults.However, Li Wei's reading speed is very fast. It only took more than ten minutes to read the latest [-] words. Her progress is obvious. The content of the latest [-] words is basically the same as that of the outline, and there is no need to re-sculpt. detail.

The heroine of the story is a novelist who rushes to the street. Although she has a rich imagination, writing a novel is not enough to write a novel with a rich imagination, so the heroine rushes to the street gorgeously.Li Wei feels that the plot is very serious. No matter how you look at it, it seems that Shiyu of Xiazhiqiu is using herself as a template to describe it, but because of this, the description of the heroine is very accurate, and it can be called flesh and blood. There is no problem in the traditional literary world, and it is simply invincible to write light novels.The content of the first volume is not much. After all, Shiyu of the Hill of Xia is very good at water. Li Wei can be fascinated by writing a warm little daily life, let alone an ordinary dead house. After reading her novel, Li Wei There is even an idea of ​​wanting a well-behaved and sensible loli god.The character of Loli God has been revised a lot under Li Wei's protest, from being arrogant and poisonous to being a clever and sensible girl who has no common sense of life in the human world. Li Wei will never admit that he is a reference to " Kona Kamui in "The Dragon Maid of the Xiaolin Family" made this character design!

But children, those who are too lively are all bear children, those who are too sensible and too gloomy, Kang Na's kind is just right, Li Wei feels that she is also a young girl, and Kang Na is more adorable than Piccolo Demon King Miaopasdu To be more powerful, it is somewhat similar to the heroine Kafu Chino of Dot Rabbit.This character set Li Wei and Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu discussed for two days before making a final decision, and modified it with Kangna Kamui as a model to get the cute attributes of the young goddess.The world of the passer-by heroine does not yet have the work "The Dragon Maid of the Xiaolin Family", but Li Wei also does not plan to reproduce this work in this world, because Wen Chao Gong said that it is not only shameful but also stupid. He has the ability to create his own originality Ah, what kind of hero is plagiarism.But there are too many idiots/competitors across the world to be copywriters, and Li Wei's map cannon has a slightly wider range of damage.

chapter 068. the completion of the first volume