A Father In Marvel
61 Rewrite
Hello readers, fans and reasonably angry commenters.
It took a while to come to this conclusion so let me apologise for the delay, I'm sorry but I will be cutting this story short.
It was around last July that I began writing on a whim to practice the father-daughter interactions and try my hand in describing the wholesome cuteness of children.
It was most definitely a success at the beginning but I slowly felt at a loss It diverted into focusing on being cool and seeing what women would fall for him.
Another reason was that it bothered me how many unnecessary plots I had, like the lack of interaction with Frank Castle or the two elderly couple I named randomly making it seem like sub-characters.
I also jumped on to the relationship boat way too fast. Though love admittedly can spur from a short time of knowing one another.
The creation of Sonya and Charlotte deemed useless when the harem should consist of Marvel Characters. I will look for characters that have a similar personality to balance things out. Like storm as
Charlotte replacement as they both have that cool and collected air to them. Sonya I think was just another Jennifer(She-Hulk) in all honesty
I do want the Mc to have two daughters but they should contrasting personalities, unlike the current two loud cheeky girls. Although I love them dearly.
I officially announce the death Of Rose Hunt And Chloe Hunt. . . A moment of silence please. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Thank you back to topic
Powers needs a change, I like the one punch man ability but it lacks the flexibility of Martial Arts that is seen in other anime. He's still gonna be stupid OP but with flexibility. Haki most likely
Last but not least I want a more slice of life so I thought of having the new timeline be just before or after the events of the New York Invasion.
So all these changes will happen in a novel that is similar but better.
Find authorized novels in Webnovel,faster updates, better experience,Please click www.readwn.com for visiting.
It's still a Marvel fanfic with a more slice life.
I will announce its first chapter through here with its novel name for you to find. I recommend leaving this in your library as I will shamelessly say that it's a good read.
It will take me few days, see you soon
It took a while to come to this conclusion so let me apologise for the delay, I'm sorry but I will be cutting this story short.
It was around last July that I began writing on a whim to practice the father-daughter interactions and try my hand in describing the wholesome cuteness of children.
It was most definitely a success at the beginning but I slowly felt at a loss It diverted into focusing on being cool and seeing what women would fall for him.
Another reason was that it bothered me how many unnecessary plots I had, like the lack of interaction with Frank Castle or the two elderly couple I named randomly making it seem like sub-characters.
I also jumped on to the relationship boat way too fast. Though love admittedly can spur from a short time of knowing one another.
The creation of Sonya and Charlotte deemed useless when the harem should consist of Marvel Characters. I will look for characters that have a similar personality to balance things out. Like storm as
Charlotte replacement as they both have that cool and collected air to them. Sonya I think was just another Jennifer(She-Hulk) in all honesty
I do want the Mc to have two daughters but they should contrasting personalities, unlike the current two loud cheeky girls. Although I love them dearly.
I officially announce the death Of Rose Hunt And Chloe Hunt. . . A moment of silence please. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Thank you back to topic
Powers needs a change, I like the one punch man ability but it lacks the flexibility of Martial Arts that is seen in other anime. He's still gonna be stupid OP but with flexibility. Haki most likely
Last but not least I want a more slice of life so I thought of having the new timeline be just before or after the events of the New York Invasion.
So all these changes will happen in a novel that is similar but better.
Find authorized novels in Webnovel,faster updates, better experience,Please click www.readwn.com for visiting.
It's still a Marvel fanfic with a more slice life.
I will announce its first chapter through here with its novel name for you to find. I recommend leaving this in your library as I will shamelessly say that it's a good read.
It will take me few days, see you soon
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