A middle school cartoonist

Although the content of this episode of the comic "One Punch Man" far exceeded Yoshida's expectations, whether it was amazement or emotion, Yoshida, after a brief absence of consciousness, still did not forget to continue to fulfill his duties as the editor-in-chief and carefully observe the next content of the comic!

Even though there are many things I want to say to Makoto Takahashi, even though there are many questions I want to ask a certain chuuni cartoonist... But now the first task is naturally to read the comic manuscript in my hand as the editor-in-chief!

And...

Looking up at Makoto Takahashi who was carefully completing the comic manuscript, Yoshida felt that if he made a sound or did anything to disturb a certain chuuni cartoonist at this time, he would definitely get a strange experience like [S that life cannot bear]!

"The painting skills shown in this episode really surprised me... But..."

But this does not mean that the content of this episode is really flawless... At least in Yoshida's opinion, the plot of this episode is too normal compared to the shocking painting style, right?

Especially when he saw that after Genos was knocked away by the Asura Rhinoceros Beetle in the comics, Saitama took over the battle and fought on behalf of his disciple, Yoshida's brows began to gather worry!

After using all means to fight a gorgeous battle, Genos still couldn't defeat the Asura Rhinoceros Beetle, but was beaten half-crippled... But according to the previous serialization of the comic "One Punch Man", when Genos, as a disciple, couldn't defeat the opponent, then the next plot development should be the turn of Saitama to show his power and kill the Asura Rhinoceros Beetle with one punch!

Although he hasn't read the rest of the comics, Yoshida is sure that the next plot development of this comic should be like this!

This is not that Yoshida suddenly awakened and realized some innate magical power of [Great Prophecy] or [Seeing the Future]... but as long as the readers who have been following the serialization of the comic "One Punch Man" for a while, they can probably guess the next plot development of this comic, right?

But in fact, the reason why Yoshida did not continue to look through the comics was because he was the editor-in-chief of a certain middle school manga artist at the moment, and suddenly realized the biggest problem of the comic "One Punch Man"... No, it should be the biggest flaw!

First, the [monsters] appeared and began to wreak havoc or kill; then the famous or unknown [heroes] appeared, showing their personalities through the plots in the comics while fighting with the monsters; then either the [monsters] crushed the [heroes] head-on with their powerful strength, or the [monsters] defeated the [heroes] who could have defeated them with all kinds of despicable means; finally, the scene developed to an extremely dangerous moment, and the bald Saitama teacher would appear at the critical moment, and solve the [monsters] that troubled the heroes with one punch, turning the tide, and completing the important task of saving mankind or protecting the world!

If only part of the plot of the comic "One Punch Man" is like this, Yoshida may not think there is anything wrong with it. After all, this routine of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger still looks very exciting... But if the whole comic is like this, Yoshida thinks that this comic will soon make readers lose interest!

After all, for most readers, the reason why comics are interesting is largely due to readers' expectations and speculations about unknown plots! If readers can already guess how the comic will develop next, or speculate on the direction of the comic plot... then what else can attract people to this comic?

"It's rare that Cheng has shown his unprecedented superb painting skills in this comic... But unfortunately..." Yoshida sighed silently, looked up at Takahashi Cheng who had already completed the so-called [ritual] and entered the [manga artist mode], and said helplessly in his heart, "... It seems that I need to have a good talk with Cheng about this issue later!"

"Oh oh... I feel it! I feel it! This breath that makes my soul addicted..." Takahashi Cheng, who had just finished the comic draft seriously, looked up at Yoshida and suddenly Then he let out an unusually strange laugh, "Is the [pleasure] event really about to happen? Oh my, my beloved cat, I am looking forward to how you will make me feel [pleasure] next! Hahahaha..."

"Tsk..."

Why not just not tell this guy Cheng anything and let this comic continue to be serialized until its popularity drops to a level that is unbearable to watch and then it is directly cut off... Yoshida, the editor who just gathered his mind, thought so after curling his lips in dissatisfaction! !

"Hmm, eyes full of murderous intent, and a soul full of humiliation and unwillingness... My beloved cat, I can now be sure that today is definitely a good day for a great harvest of [pleasure]!" The rampage of words did not stop, but became more and more excessive... But in the same way, Takahashi Makoto did not stop the brush in his hand, and continued to quickly complete the comic draft!

"Tsk! If I could beat him... If I could beat him..." At this time, all Yoshida can do is just mutter to himself, right?

As for following the traditional approach of "Just smile at this time"... Yoshida is really worried whether he can leave Takahashi Makoto's house safely today!

"Oh? My beloved cat, if you have the will to kill, you should also be prepared to be killed! So..." In response to Yoshida's mumbling, Takahashi Makoto raised his head and looked at Yoshida, with a dangerous smile on his face, "Have you written your suicide note?"

"...By the way, I just saw this, right? The content after that is..." Whether he is shameless or a coward, Yoshida wisely did not continue the dangerous topic with Takahashi Makoto! On the one hand, Yoshida did not want to disturb the work of a certain chuunibyou cartoonist, on the other hand... cough cough, everyone understands!

After quietly reading the remaining comics in his hand, and waiting for Makoto Takahashi to finish the comics that should be completed today, he talked with a middle school cartoonist about the problems and defects of the comic "One Punch Man". Finally, after figuring out Makoto Takahashi's ideas, he found a way to solve the problems and defects of the comic "One Punch Man"...

Originally, Yoshida planned this way...Originally, Yoshida planned this way, which was correct...

"Eh? This, this, this..." Unfortunately, Yoshida's previous fantasy plan was broken by himself...

And the reason why Yoshida made such an exclamation was naturally because he saw a very incredible plot in this episode of the comic "One Punch Man"!

That's why Mr. Saitama is bald...Ahem, no, it should be the secret of Mr. Saitama's transformation from [an ordinary office worker] to [a superman who is so powerful that any monster can be killed with one punch]!