A middle school cartoonist

Although showing affection and spreading dog food can stimulate Uncle Tintin on the side of his assistant and give Makoto Takahashi a lot of [pleasurable] experience, a certain middle-level cartoonist is still very credible... So since Makoto Takahashi accepted it It comes from the commission from the editor of the weekly magazine, so after completing the manga manuscript every day, it is only natural to take time to teach Mashiro Shoujo about changing careers as a cartoonist!

Looking at Makoto Takahashi who was observing his manga manuscript, although the Mashiro girl still kept an expressionless expression, she was actually very nervous... Although the Mashiro girl held Sorata boy's hand tightly and wanted to She used this to divert her attention and relieve her nervousness. However, whenever she saw Makoto Takahashi frowning, the Mashiro girl would grab Sorata boy's hand and subconsciously squeeze it tightly...

Therefore, for Sorata boy at this moment, he is probably experiencing the legendary feeling of "pain and happiness"!

"Hmm... the plot of the manga always feels a bit strange..." Looking at the manga manuscript provided by Mashiro Shoujo, Takahashi Makoto held his chin and muttered in a low voice, "Although I understand the general plot, but... I always feel... The plot jumps are a bit exaggerated!”

"Right, right? Uncle, you think so too, right?" Sorata's eyes flashed, and his face seemed to have a smile of "I finally found an organization." "In the comic on the previous page, the heroine was still with the second male lead. The fight was intense, but on the next page of the comic, the heroine and the hero fell in love directly...Eh? Why are you looking at me with that strange look, did I say something wrong, uncle? "

"Boy, the reason why you can't read Mashiro Shoujo's manga is simply because, boy, you don't understand people's hearts at all!" Makoto Takahashi looked at Sorata boy sympathetically and pointed at the manga manuscript in his hand slowly Said, "Mashiro Shoujo just omits some boring processes... According to the professional terminology of the game, Mashiro Shoujo's comic plot is actually to completely abandon the side plot, go directly to the main plot, and skip the leapfrog and fight monsters. model!"

"Yeah!" Regarding Takahashi Makoto's comment, the Mashiro girl seemed to have found a soulmate. A glimmer of expectation flashed in her eyes. The hair on her head shook, and she complained to the Sorata boy who had entered a [speechless] state. Get up, "Sata... doesn't understand people's hearts!"

"...I don't understand people's hearts. I'm so sorry!" Sorata boy, who was criticized by two cartoonists one after another, suddenly felt bad...

The manga of Mashiro Shoujo is actually not coherent in terms of plot, and the rhythm of the plot develops too fast, or the jump is too strong! For a qualified story, in addition to the main line of the entire story, one or several plot branches are also needed to pave the way... And Mashiro Shoujo's comics not only lack a large number of branch plots to fill in, but even just Even the main plot lacks details...

"As for the plot that Mashiro Shoujo has not drawn in the manga, as an observer of the manga, you need to put yourself into the character, and then use your imagination to fill in the missing parts of the manga plot... To put it simply, you want to see To understand Mashiro Shoujo’s comics, you must have strong brainstorming skills!” Appeared! The proud skill of a certain middle-class cartoonist [serious nonsense] appears again! "So boy, it's not that Mashiro Shoujo's comics are not exciting, but that most ordinary people simply don't have the ability to understand them. Do you understand?"

"But comics like that... comics like that..." Can comics that require readers to figure out the plot really be serialized... After seeing the somewhat disappointed look in the girl next to him, Sorata boy decided to say what he said Swallowed it back again!

"So if Mashiro Shoujo's manga wants to be serialized..." Makoto Takahashi looked at Sorata boy's hesitation, and a smile called "pleasure" appeared on his face. He did not point out Sorata boy's goodwill, but borrowed it. The machine changed the topic, "First we need to fill in the plots that have been deliberately hidden! As for how to fill them in..."

"Please tell me, uncle in the white coat!" The real white girl's eyes lit up, and she stared at Makoto Takahashi with her eyes wide open. There was a strong tendency of "If you don't tell me, I will launch a death gaze on you"!

"Girl, do you know the so-called [equivalent exchange]? Just as you are now a world-class painter, the reason why you are able to achieve such an achievement is not only because of your own talent, but more importantly, because of you He gave up the childhood that normal humans should have since he was a child, and devoted himself to practicing painting in the studio..." After Makoto Takahashi's eyes wandered between the girl and the boy in front of him for a moment, he finally settled on the girl, "I want to get No matter what, you must pay a corresponding price... This world is so fair and so unfair!"

"The price?" The Mashiro girl tilted her head and thought for a moment, then asked nervously, "What do I have to give up?"

"If you want to serialize comics and become a cartoonist... is that the most important thing for you now?"

Just after Makoto Takahashi asked this question, Uncle Tintin, who was watching the whole process, instantly felt a chill... Because of the smile on Makoto Takahashi's face at this moment, Uncle Tintin said that he had seen it before, and could even say It's... unforgettable!

When the comic "Clannd" was serialized, Makoto Takahashi proposed to change the plot of Shio from warm to sad. At that time, Miss Ueno Aoi, who was still an assistant to Fenghuangyuan Kyouma, had argued with Makoto Takahashi for this... At that time, Makoto Takahashi also showed the same smile as now, and then teased Miss Ueno Aoi while stubbornly drawing the plot of Shio that made countless readers cry!

At this moment, after seeing Makoto Takahashi showing such a smile again, Uncle Ding Ding felt a little sympathetic to the boy and girl who were facing a certain evil middle school cartoonist at the moment... Miss Ueno Aoi's situation of being played with by various ways to the point of collapse is expected to befall the boy and girl again!

Uncle Ding Ding also took advantage of the conversation between the few people to quickly read the comics of Mashiro Girl... The situation is just as Makoto Takahashi said. In addition to the amazing painting skills of Mashiro Girl, the comic plot itself has many flaws!

How to guide Mashiro to revise... Since reading the comic manuscript, Uncle Ding Ding has also been thinking about it!

However, after seeing the smile on Makoto Takahashi's face that was called [joy], Uncle Ding Ding instantly understood... Should we say that he is worthy of being the assistant of a certain chuuni cartoonist?

"Although I feel that doing this is a bit unfair to these two children, but..." Uncle Ding Ding secretly observed Makoto Takahashi, and after hesitating for a long time, he still gave up and reminded the boy and girl to be careful of a certain chuuni cartoonist... In addition to the worry that [disturbing the joy of a certain chuuni cartoonist will lead to misfortune], Uncle Ding Ding also vaguely guessed Makoto Takahashi's intention! "I hope that the means used by Cheng later... will not be too exaggerated!"

Although it is true to say so, even Uncle Ding Ding, who made a prayer, knows that for Makoto Takahashi, whose face is full of [joy] smiles at the moment...

This hope did not exist from the beginning!