The girl took a deep breath and returned to her usual dignified elegance.
"Hello, senior, I'm Uchida Asami, a freshman in the Faculty of Letters, I'm really sorry."
Sagawa Yan was taken aback, Uchida Asami?Isn't that the senior who likes Kudo Shinichi.
He took a closer look at the girl, she was elegant and beautiful. It was indeed very similar to the animation, but much more beautiful.
Could it be that the real person is more beautiful than the animation, Sagawa Yan thinks about the Xiaolan he met, and the garden seems to be like this.
"Senior?"
Uchida Asami wondered.
Judging from her behavior just now, it seems that she is not as well-behaved as she seems...
"It's nothing, I'm a sophomore in the School of Mathematics, Sagawa Yan, please give me more advice."
"Then Sagawa-senpai, I have nothing to do. I'll go first."
Miss Mamei tried to show off.
"Don't be in such a hurry, what is this, can I look at it?" Sagawa said without waiting for Mami to react, and directly pulled out the top manuscript.
"Senior!"
At this time, Mami also tried to keep her quiet side, trying to stop the 'senior' by whispering softly.
But Sagawa Yan directly read the words above, "The handsome black-haired boy lying on the grass suddenly opened his eyes..."
"Don't read it!"
Finally, Miss Mamei couldn't maintain her usual elegance and shouted while trying to grab the manuscript paper back with both hands.
Sagawa Yan relied on his height and arm length to dodge left and right while holding the manuscript, "Why are you so embarrassed."
Uchida Mami's small mouth bulged, "Damn!"
"I can't help it, you rude guy is nothing more than a savage who is taller than me, you are not fully evolved!"
"Oh, you're more real than you were just now."
Sagawa said with sincerity and sincerity.
"What are you thinking about?"
Mami was gasping for breath by Sagawa Yan, and kept patting her chest with her hand, "I'll say it again, give me back my things!"
"From the perspective of your writing, it's already pretty good, but isn't the plot a bit old-fashioned? Besides, the handsome protagonist is well described. After all, the readers are all as handsome as the protagonist."
(Thank you readers for your great enthusiasm. The author’s manuscripts have been successfully used up. Next, I have to save them again. I will remember them and pay them back slowly. Now I owe 5000 flowers, 10 updates of the October ticket, and work hard. The author of the word Junliu)
Chapter 19 Pointing Works
Mami's attention shifted when she mentioned her own work. She put her arms around her, "You still understand literature? I think you haven't even read The Old Man and the Sea, right?"
"Image, your elegant image just now is gone."
Sagawa Yan found that he liked to tease Miss Mamei. Maybe she was too dignified and elegant, and she couldn't help but want to see what was behind this elegance.
"you!"
Uchida Asami gasped again.
Sagawa Yan knew that he had to come up with something real, otherwise the girl in front of him might really have to leave without caring.
Although literature and sociology were looked down upon by the Xueba system, there were still some. lv0's literature combined with his own knowledge from the previous life was more than enough to teach the girl in front of him.
"Hugo, Dante, have you read all of Goethe's works? Let me, the mathematics department, tell you the problems in your works."
Sagawa Yan re-read the three words of the mathematics department with a bad heart.
"First of all, you didn't understand the positioning of your work. You have no problem imitating everyone in the text, but while imitating Master Haruki Murakami, you also tried to add the style of Master Yasunari Kawabata, and in the end it became a four-dimensional difference."
"I want to write the criticality of serious literature, but write handsome men and beautiful heroines to please young readers, but the result can only be unpleasant on both sides."
Mami was stimulated by this merciless comment, but she couldn't help but admit that the other party was right. She, who is often praised by everyone for her usual works, didn't think about this problem at all.
Just like the lemon pie he made himself, he was pointed out once again unceremoniously, but compared with Kudo junior, this guy is much more hateful!
She hated the itching teeth and wanted to hear the other party continue to talk. Only by knowing the problem can the problem be solved.
But that damned guy suddenly stopped talking! !
"Hey, why don't you keep talking?"
Mami asked.
"You have to ask politely, or it will be gone."
This guy is really annoying!
"Please, you, okay, okay, point, point!"
she asked word by word.
"Cough cough, for your sincerity's sake." He looked at Mami's eyes that were about to get angry, and quickly continued.
"Another problem with your works is that the plot is old-fashioned, and old is not a problem. Those people are also old bottles of new wine, but the master has enough experience and knowledge to write works that contain profound understanding and emotion. You don't have any of these. I suggest to write Order light novels or something, and challenge traditional literature after the age of 30."
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