At the Beginning of Death, Turned into a Red Ghost!

　　Seeing the two come out, Xia Chuan Zhenliang's eyes suddenly lit up.

　　He hurriedly greeted the two of them.

　　"Good morning, it's so cold!"

　　When Zhishi saw Zhenliang, he immediately greeted him with a smile.

　　Seeing this, Yicheng also nodded towards Xia Chuan Zhenliang.

　　"morning!"

　　The three converged, and then walked towards the school.

　　There was a transfer student beside Yi Cheng today, which also attracted the attention of many people.

　　Tomoyo around Isumu is very attractive.

　　Usually when the two of them went to school, they were already very attractive.

　　But now Yicheng has another one by his side, not to mention it.

　　Some guys even whispered about it.

　　Facing the discussions of these guys, Yicheng simply chose to ignore it.

　　He walked towards the school with Chise so calmly.

　　After the noon class was over, it was time for the afternoon activity time to start.

　　The recovered Kasumigaoka Shiyu came to the activity classroom.

　　As soon as she came in, she stared straight at Yi Cheng.

　　Seeing her gaze, Yi Cheng said directly:

　　"Rewrite it!"

　　"Unqualified."

　　"There are some things you didn't handle well."

　　"It didn't meet my request either."

　　"It's too awkward to write, it's not smooth at all."

　　"Also, there are too many typos."

　　"The logic is also not clear enough."

　　As soon as Yicheng opened his mouth, he started to talk about some problems of the novel.

　　When everyone heard Yi Cheng's words, their faces suddenly became stunned.

　　Are there so many questions?

　　It's true that there are many typos, but they didn't realize what Izumi said.

　　And Shiyu of the Hill of Xia also frowned.

　　"So many questions?"

　　She didn't believe it.

　　I am fortunate enough to spend so much energy writing things.

　　To be rewritten?

　　For a time, Kasumigaoka Shiyu's mentality changed slightly.

　　Isumi nodded.

　　"if not?"

　　"You must have fallen asleep when you wrote this."

　　"I haven't even seen it myself."

　　"If you don't believe it, you can read it yourself."

　　"Tell you, that guy feels a little awkward to read."

　　"A person who hasn't read a novel would say that, do you think there's anything wrong with what you've written?"

　　Itumi pointed to Ritsu Tanaka.

　　Backhand tossed the pot out.

　　Well, these were discovered by Ritsu Tanaka.

　　Xiazhiqiu Shiyu frowned upon hearing this.

　　Her eyes turned to Ritsu Tanaka.

　　Ritsu Tanaka, who was bewildered, noticed Kasumigaoka Shiyu's gaze.

　　She stood up immediately.

　　"Just bean sacks!!"

　　"Hey, hey, Izumi-kun, I think you're framing me."

　　She was so pissed.

　　This guy, how did you dump this pot on her.

　　Seeing Shiyu of Kasumigaoka's somewhat unhappy gaze, she instantly understood what this fellow Izumi was thinking.

　　When Yicheng heard her words, he immediately smiled.

　　"I'm not lying, you did say so yesterday."

　　"It was a bit awkward to read, and then I looked at it yesterday and it was really awkward."

　　"A lot of things are not written down."

　　"Well, so, rewrite!"

　　(Ask for flowers, ask for a monthly pass, ask for a reward.).

Chapter 74

　　Xiazhiqiu Shiyu fell silent.

　　She didn't mean to blame Tanaka Ritsu.

　　Yicheng is right, since someone who has never read novels would find it awkward to read.

　　So what else does she have to say?

　　In other words, this rewrite is necessary.

　　Thinking of this, she frowned suddenly.

　　He glanced at Ritsu Tanaka who was about to quarrel with Isumu.

　　She suppressed the restlessness in her heart and continued to ask:

　　"Can you tell me more about it?"

　　"I want to figure out what I wrote wrong!"

　　The current Kasumigaoka Shiyu is very calm.

　　The typo will not be mentioned for the time being.

　　After she wrote the novel yesterday, she really hadn't read it.

　　So don't know the situation.

　　Now that Yicheng has read it, he has pointed out a lot of problems.

　　But there are specific issues that she wants to figure out.

　　Only in this way can the novel be written better.

　　Seeing that she didn't have a seizure, Yicheng nodded immediately.

　　Then he opened his mouth to say some of the deficiencies in the novel.

　　After listening to what Icheng said, Kasumigaoka Shiyu silently wrote it down.

　　Then I remembered the things I wrote in my mind.

　　It turned out that Yicheng was right on many issues.

　　It was indeed her problem.

　　Although she didn't reread it.

　　But the general plot is still in her mind.

　　Plus what I wrote in a dizzy yesterday.

　　Seems like a problem?

　　Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu fell into deep thought.

　　Seeing her like this, Yicheng continued:

　　"Take it back and rewrite it."

　　"It doesn't matter if you don't want to, I'll find someone else to write it."

　　She is not the only writer.

　　Kasumi Hill Shiyu nodded.

　　"I see."

　　"I'll go back and change."

　　She didn't refute, but just sat down and read her novel seriously.

　　I don't know what she was thinking.