Battle of Ascension

Hello, author here,

This is my first attempt to make a novel and my purpose becoming author is to earn money from my hobby, I know money is a taboo thing, but I will be honest to you guys here ^^. As this is my first attempt maybe you will find many plot holes or mistakes, excuse me for that mistakes and you can leave a review of my novel's shortcomings in the review section, so I can improve for my self (I hope it's a constructive review not like "........" or "This is trash, don't read ..." and so on ) ^^ I can not improve if you leave a review like that as I am a new author and new author is tend to make mistake, but you guys can help me to improve by leaving a constructive review or critic.

For the grammar, I know my grammar is suck particularly for the first volume. As English is not my native language, I am creating the chapter with my language first before translated it to English with the help of Machine Translation, afterward I edit the chapter (For the first 38 chapters).

But now, I am used to write in English directly, maybe the grammar became better a bit but you guys the one who can judge for that as it's impossible for me to judge it.

Also, you can ask if you have some thing that you don't understand, of course it's only till for the latest chapter not for spoiler.

Maybe, at first you guys will think the mc is idiot but it's character development.

A bit spoiler here if you not yet read the story.

The mc was pampered as he was the only child in his family, so basically he is a spoiled child, yet suddenly world changed as the battle of ascension began. Of course, the mc need to adapt first for the current world as he was spoiled child before and what he want always been granted by his family. as I am a new author so the explanation is vague in the story not the detailed one, so many of you misunderstand and take the mc as idiot.

I want to explain further but it will be to much spoiler for a new reader, You can ask me later in the comment section of this chapter by mention me ^^