Become a dramatist from today

The person paying attention to Huang Baiyou at the scene was not only Guo Xing beside him, but also Wu Zinan whose eyes were glued to his eyes. However, compared with the shock in the former's eyes, the latter's eyes were more to watch the fun.

"Bai You, what do you think? If your opinion is immature, you can just talk about any problems." Li Cang had a good attitude, "Lao Xia and we are all here, so we can take this opportunity to have a good discussion."

"There is a problem, and I need to trouble Teacher Xia and Director Li." Huang Baiyou said calmly. He never felt that there was a problem and he needed to ask a teacher to treat him as an inferior person, because it was difficult to know where he had problems.

"Then let me first give you a little analysis of the characters, and leave the questions I want to ask later.

"His father Lin Zhennan was one of the four great masters in martial arts. However, the Lin family was destroyed by the Qingcheng people led by Yu Canghai. This proved that the Fuwei Escort Agency was not able to handle the situation. It also reflected Lin Pingzhi's poor martial arts talent and the fact that he was too well protected by his parents.

"Lin Pingzhi is innocent and kind-hearted, smart but very limited, and more gullible. I think there are four important turning points in the character.

"The first turning point was in scene 72. Lin Pingzhi, who noticed something was wrong with the Songshan Sect and Zuo Lengchan, wanted to escape overnight, but in this episode he accidentally killed someone. The innocence in his heart was wiped out, but his kindness remained. .

"The second turning point was in scene 309. He was originally feeling guilty for having wronged Linghu Chong and was surrounded by men in black. Linghu Chong took action boldly and doubted the "Evil Sword Manual" used by Linghu Chong. [Senior Brother, the sword you use Fa, could it be the Lin family's sword manual to ward off evil?] I thought this line was a question, but Lin Pingzhi was not sure. It wasn't until a masked man in black took the sword manual from his hand later that everyone concluded that it was Linghu Chong who had done it, and felt guilty Feelings and doubts instantly turned into anger, and this turn weakened the kindness in his heart.

"The third turning point occurred when he found out the truth and reconciled with Linghu Chong, only to discover that the master he had always respected most, Yue Buqun, actually knew the complete evil sword technique, and his belief in others collapsed.

"The last turning point is from scenes 854 to 913. Lin Pingzhi, who practiced swordsmanship in the palace, was blackmailed and killed Yue Lingshan in a duel with Linghu Chong. His master's wife Ning Zhongze also committed suicide, knowing that the two people who were best to him directly Or he died indirectly because of himself, and Lin Pingzhi became crazy after all.

"My understanding is that Lin Pingzhi was gradually forced from an innocent young hero to a demon because of his sword skills. The above is just my humble opinion. I also ask Teacher Xia for advice."

Huang Baiyou is eloquent. Compared with the 50,000-word analysis, which is just a product of simplification and simplification, it can be said that it is already very contained. There are seven growth milestones and fifteen "what if" branches, none of which are mentioned.

Don't be too high-profile, Huang Baiyou thought to himself, but this unscripted and fluent understanding had already silenced the scene. Li Cang's face was full of surprise. What a good guy.

Screenwriter Lao Xia originally had no expectations for the "least good at acting" person in the crew, but he had to read through the script many times to gain this understanding.

Wu Zinan slightly raised his left neck, feeling a little sore, but the physical pain had long been covered by the shock of the soul. Compared with Huang Baiyou, isn't it the difference between primary school students' reading comprehension and college students' reading comprehension? !

The interesting part is that before Huang Baiyou opened his mouth, his analysis like a primary school student was the best in the audience.

Guo Xing, who was beside him, came to his senses and murmured to himself, "It's really a bit much."

"It seems Bai You has studied the script carefully. I think it's good. Lao Xia, what do you think?" Director Li Cang spoke up to break the silence.

"I feel like there's no problem..." Lao Xia paused and unconsciously learned Gao Zi's mantra that he had teased before, "That's it, that's it."

"As long as you did your homework correctly." Huang Baiyou continued: "I have some doubts about a small part of the script. In scene 254, Lin Pingzhi questioned Master Yue Buqun. Here, Teacher Xia wanted to temporarily show that he is not afraid of power. Subjective? But at that time, his master was his only support, and Jun Zijian’s fame and superb martial arts had always been the object of his admiration."

"Before he discovered that his master could ward off evil spirits, Lin Pingzhi said 16 words of admiration like 'Master has profound internal skills' and 'Master's swordsmanship can reach the gods'. In the 368th scene, Yue Lingshan just said [Xiao Linzi, I have ward off evil sword recipes] Dad...], was interrupted by Lin Pingzhi, he absolutely believed in the master."

"Based on the script, before the third turning point, Lin Pingzhi's master is not a powerful one, but a reliance one. Teacher Xia, is there something wrong with the questioning here?"

Although the logic of the plot is poor, if Huang Baiyou doesn't look at it from God's perspective, the logic in other places is self-consistent. Only this place is inconsistent.

Lao Xia listened and took the script from the side. The other party came immediately. He had to flip through the script to find the passage to discuss.

He wrote the outline of the script, but the overall content was handed over to two anonymous screenwriter apprentices. Finally, it was revised according to the requirements of the investors. The standards were simple. It must have "love that cannot be achieved", "love deeply", and "Love triangle".

"So Teacher Huang, how do you think this line should be changed?" After reading the script, Lao Xia couldn't remember his thoughts when he wrote this line.

"[Master has considered it carefully], I think Lin Pingzhi should respond like this."

Huang Baiyou expressed his thoughts, "Yue Buqun is a very sophisticated man. What he said was to deliberately test whether Lin Pingzhi was easy to control, so he later asked Ning Zhongze to teach Huashan's advanced swordsmanship. In the script I didn’t write what the sword technique is, so I guess it’s the Nineteen Styles of the Jade Girl Sword.”

"This martial arts is mostly learned by women. Among men, only Feng Qingyang can learn it. The sword moves are complicated. If you are extremely accomplished, you can restrain thousands of sword techniques. This requires a high level of martial arts talent. As I said just now, Lin Pingzhi has no talent, so Yue Buqun's purpose is obvious. On the one hand, he rewards obedience, but on the other hand, he doesn't want Lin Pingzhi to be too strong and out of control."

Damn it, can it still be so reasonable? Lao Xia's expression showed approval, but his heart was racing. For the first time, he felt that the script put together by several people was quite reasonable.

"Very good! Completely dig out the deep meaning buried in my script!" The shameless people in the industry wanted to be thick-skinned, so Lao Xia continued: "Teacher Bao, what do you think of Teacher Huang's analysis?"

Teacher Bao is the middle-aged actor Bao Ying who plays the role of the gentleman Jian Yue Buqun. Hearing this, he stood up and said, "Teacher Xia's analysis of Yue Buqun, the head of Huashan Mountain, coincides with mine. I also feel that Yue Buqun intentionally treated Lin in the early stage. PUA Ping has achieved his goal of obtaining the "Evil Sword Book"."

Director Li Cang heard this and immediately decided to change the script here, and changed the advanced swordsmanship that did not appear in the play to "Nineteen Styles of the Jade Girl Sword". Reasonable, so fucking reasonable.

"Isn't this person memorized all his lines?" This terrifying thought flashed through Guo Xing's mind, and he felt grateful. If she got up behind Huang Baiyou, the pressure would be quite high.

Immediately afterwards, other core actors also stood up to express their feelings about the characters, but with the yellow and white beads in front, it seemed a bit dull.

The reading meeting lasted for three hours, and everyone called Huang Baiyou Teacher Huang. No matter how the performance went in the future, sufficient preparation beforehand was worthy of respect.

"Have you recorded everything?" Li Cang asked the photographer.

“The entire reading session was recorded,” the assistant director responded.

"That's okay." Li Cang nodded. All the crew will film the reading meeting and then edit a few paragraphs to use as promotional materials.