Become a Passerby Heroine

"I'll take a look at the ending first, and give you time to think about it." Zhao Youyue replied again.

In fact, Zhao Youyue's temper comes and goes fast, and she always maintains a saint-like calmness, which is her style.

She didn't bother to ask Han Leng why he wanted to hide it in the first place. Didn't Su Li pretend to be a male cartoonist in the first place.

According to Su Li, her work is masculine. In order to get along with male readers and listen to their unreserved opinions, she finds it useful to pretend to be a male creator.

And youth romance novels, of course, have many female readers. Han Leng pretends to be a female author, and it seems that there is nothing wrong with it. If he reveals his identity at the beginning, Zhao Youyue may not be so serious about giving opinions.

However, it is really unclear whether "April is Really Beautiful" is masculine or feminine. It should be masculine in nature. See how happy the male protagonist is, has perfect first love, and has a longing goddess to pay for him...

Zhao Youyue is actually a very tolerant girl. Probably only the person who cares the most can make her angry. For example, her Tsundere Mama Wanghua is really so angry that she wants to run away from home!

Han Leng obviously hasn't reached this level yet.

But she can't just let her go, there must be punishment for wrongdoing.

Zhao Youyue saw the finale sent by Han Leng. Although she has already experienced it once in the world of works, it is also very interesting to watch what she does in the world of works by reading text.

There is one place that Han Leng has always admired, and that is his writing style. He is naturally sensitive to words, and the sentences he writes can often be self-contained quotations.

Otherwise, why is "April Really Beautiful" again called "April is your perfect composition"?

There are even loyal fans who have excerpted the wonderful sentences in it and produced the classic quotations of Lengzi——

"My world is silent and can't accommodate others." This is the psychology of the male protagonist in the early stage, but Chu Luoxun's music makes his world full of beautiful music again.

"Everyone has a city in their heart, and you will hide in when you want to escape. Some people hide for a long time, some hide for a short time, but I have never gone out... this is me A city in my heart, a ruin in the eyes of other people." This was obviously the male protagonist who had a psychological shadow at first, but later he finally walked out with the help of Chu Luoxun.

"Many people’s sorrows just want to show everyone that they are sad. In fact, no one in this world can understand the sorrow of another person."

"Compared to those who try to suppress the world with a loud voice, the people who let the whole world quiet down and listen to you quietly are more terrifying." When Han Leng wrote this sentence, it was Miss Zhao that came to mind.

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The writing style of youth novels, in fact, the more charming, the better. It is not an online article. Its selling points are "pretend to be slapped on the face" and "killing monsters to upgrade". Even its plot is not a selling point. Throughout all youth novels, the true plot is There are few wonderful things, and its real selling point is actually a feeling and a resonance! So sometimes the more hypocritical the writing, the more readers like it.

If a youth novel can make you sigh, make you miss, and even make you suddenly sad, then it will succeed!

And this of course requires those sentences with texture, which can be used in the full score composition.

Because Zhao Youyue lacks this kind of literary talent, she naturally appreciates Han Leng's literary talent. Reading his articles, you can really read slowly one word at a time, because it is a kind of enjoyment.

Zhao Youyue almost finished watching the finale in one breath. The part about Chu Luoxun perfectly restored what she did in the world of works. She had no opinion, it was perfect, and the quality of the text reached its peak!

But the ending of the hero and heroine made her frown.

Although Zhao Youyue is not very good at in-depth analysis of articles, she can also see that although the male protagonist Gu Yuan still loves the female protagonist, and is gentle and considerate to the female protagonist, he seems to be treating his relatives, and he treats Chu Luo. Kaoru's deep nostalgia has been revealed through the last small details, making it as if his favorite is Chu Luoxun.

This is definitely misleading!

Zhao Youyue has experienced everything in the world of work. She knows best that Gu Yuan’s true love is Lin Meiyue, but when Han Leng writes this way, the problem is instantly complicated, and what Han Leng writes is what happened in the world of work... …

Is this the horror of literati? The same thing, using different words to write, write more in some places, and ignore it in some places, turns out to have two meanings!

This is the so-called spring and autumn brushwork.

In addition, the ending seems to imply that one day Lin Meiyue will accept Chu Luoxun's gift and become a "genius composer", and the truth will come to light!

This is even more inconsistent with Zhao Youyue’s expectations. As Chu Luoxun’s true body, she is willing to make Lin Meiyue. She hopes that Lin Meiyue will pass the better, and hopes to make up for Lin Meiyue’s lack of talent in music, and hope that she can also become in the eyes of others. A genius, in this case ~www.readwn.com~ She and Gu Yuan should be more suitable.

According to Zhao Youyue's idea, this matter should not be exposed for a lifetime, even if Lin Meiyue "creates" no famous song in the future, it can be used to cover up after the peak period.

But once this matter is exposed, Lin Meiyue will definitely be ruined, right?

And Gu Yuan certainly couldn't tolerate Lin Meiyue's possession of Chu Luoxun's works, and the beautiful relationship between the two might even be broken!

Even if Chu Luoxun died, she seemed to be the culprit of the relationship between the male and female protagonist...

Thinking about it this way, Zhao Youyue, a senior Lin Meiyue Party, would of course be very upset, because she simply hoped that the hero and the host would come together and be in harmony and love for a lifetime.

However, because Han Leng deliberately "learned nothing" in some places, Chu Luoxun was suspected of being a "Little San", and Lin Meiyue calmly took possession of Chu Luoxun's original song for love, which seemed to be "Bi Chi".

Zhao Youyue didn't really think much before, but now she discovered the sinister intentions of this guy Han Leng!

The ending seems very happy, but in fact, if you think about it a little bit, you will understand that the future of the hero and the hero is hard to say!

She immediately sent a message to Han Leng, bluntly saying that the ending was inappropriate. If the other party were still Lengzi, then she would definitely be more tactful...

But Han Cooling replied faster. He said that it is okay for women to admit their mistakes, but let him change the ending, there is no way!

"I don't understand, why do you always favor Gu Yuan and Lin Meiyue, you have been like this from the beginning! Does Chu Luoxun deserve to suffer?"

Han Leng angered Miss Zhao for his beloved Chu goddess!

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