Become a Passerby Heroine

Chapter 87: A female character with a soul

Although Ye Hai’s wife, Li Mengyao, supported her husband to try the new way of portraying female characters, that is, to portray the male character according to the way her husband originally portrayed the male character, and then insisted that it was a female character. If the original male character was a handsome guy, then She insists that she is a big beauty, but in terms of character, they are not very different.

   can support the support, she still asks her husband to show her the content of the writing before updating, so as to avoid the description of female characters with hot eyes.

"My recent writing status is very good, especially when portraying the character [Yu Shengfan]'Yu Shengfan', I feel like I am in the writing, as if I saw her appear in front of me with my own eyes, playing that one. The game called "Eternal War"! I can no longer write her exaggeratedly, falsely, because she is real! She is a very interesting girl, because she is alone and loves the game, even for the game Proficient in multiple languages, she also likes to talk non-stop while playing games..." Ye Hai said to his wife excitedly when he handed the archived manuscript to his wife for review.

Li Mengyao saw Ye Hai’s look as if he hadn’t come out of the world under her pen. She couldn’t help but believe it, because Ye Hai had been in a state of "inspiration bursting" many times before. Whenever he was in that state, the code word The speed and efficiency are very high!

   Even the text quality has been improved. Ye Hai, who was originally better than male character portrayals and game screens, looks more lifelike in his character portrayals, and the sense of picture can make readers be there!

If the text written by Rosemary in a normal state is at the level of a god, then Rosemary in the state of "inspiration bursts", the text he wrote is at the highest **** level, which can easily arouse readers’ emotions and make The reader is immersed in the world he has outlined!

   Ye Hai also gave it to his wife Li Mengyao about the release of the manuscript, and then plunged into writing again. He wanted to write more while he was in good condition.

Li Mengyao also had a great sense of anticipation, and finally read the archived manuscript in one go, and then couldn't help but said to his crackling husband: "Are there any more? Is there any more? Not enough! I really want to see Lin Fenghe Tang Yongkai discovered that [Ye Yu Sheng Annoyed] turned out to be the story of a peerless beauty who once made them unable to move their eyes. I really look forward to their reaction..."

The only response to her was Ye Hai’s very rhythmic code words. Seeing her husband working so hard, a trace of tenderness also appeared on her face. She began to read the archived manuscript again, and was ready to change it for her husband. Typos.

   What surprised her was that there was not a single typo in this 10,000-character manuscript!

   is amazing!

   Really all in one go!

But what made her more gratified was actually her husband’s subsequent shaping of the female character "Yu Shengfan". She originally thought that this almost ostentatious Marisu character was hopeless and could not be liked by readers anymore, but After reading the archived manuscript, she found this character very interesting!

Originally, the character image of "Yu Shengfan" was very empty and pale, and it seemed perfect, but in fact it was very fake. The behavior of driving a luxury car to an Internet cafe can be sprayed by readers who are more sensible and unable to find Bei. Forced explanations can only fool the readers, but when Yu Shengfan’s true character characteristics are revealed, this "Internet addicted girl" who loves games and is addicted to PK seems to be kind and so vivid...

And her cuteness is undoubtedly her unstoppable mouth, which of course is reflected in the game, it is the text bubble that almost always stays on her head and will not disappear. If this kind of person appears in reality, If you appear as an opponent when playing games, you will definitely hate this guy who likes to keep BB and ridicule, but appearing in the book, it seems that "talking" and "poisonous tongue" have become cute attributes, especially for readers. After we saw the follow-up plot, we found that this guy is likely to become the protagonist's teammate.

Readers who have substituted for the protagonist Lin Feng will have a natural favorability score of +20 for the role of the protagonist’s camp, plus the role of "Yu Shengfan" does not look like a pig teammate. Her operating skills are so powerful, even She hasn't revealed her full strength yet. If she can join forces with Lin Feng, how powerful will the "Glory Team" be in the future?

All in all, the follow-up portrayal of "Yu Shengfan" in the content of the manuscript has further improved the sense of expectation of the whole work, because the follow-up portrayal is so wonderful that everyone even subconsciously forgets the beginning. The description of the spicy eyes can only remember her identity as the chaebol eldest, and the setting of proficient in multiple languages. This is simply convenient for her to compete with other countries' e-sports teams in the future~www.readwn.com ~Spit, taunt, and mess up to your heart's content!

This Yu Shengfan is just a troublesome girl who pulls up hatred to stabilize it. In this way, it will obviously make the plot more exciting and exciting. Yu Shengfan can be responsible for pulling hatred, and wash away the lead and personality. Lin Feng, who is steady and calm, likes to hide his edge, is specially responsible for output, slaps, and occasionally reveals his edge and pretends to be a force. Isn't it beautiful?

   One is the mouth-strong king, and the other is the strongest king. Together, the picture is so beautiful that I can’t bear to see it!

In fact, setting "Yu Shengfan" to be a lonely girl without any friends is to imply that readers, once she becomes a recognized friend of hers, she will definitely stab at her friends. If "Yu Shengfan" is regarded as a friend A man’s words do not violate peace at all. A man with such a "lone wolf" character can turn a "lone wolf" into a "loyal dog" who can become his friend. This kind of routine is common in novels. And readers just eat this set.

Obviously, Ye Hai has already used the way of portraying male characters on "Yu Shengfan". He no longer regards "Yu Shengfan" as an optional little supporting role, but an important supporting role. He didn’t even notice that the setting of this character was actually not made by him, but he believed that it was a product of his inspiration. Anyway, he himself was very satisfied with this character, and extremely preferred him to write it first. For such a female character with feelings, he thinks he has finally portrayed a female character with a soul!

   Regardless of whether the reader is satisfied or not, he must write it like this!

   No one can stop the creators who have been "on the top"!

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