Comprehensive: Akashi’s Youth Story

Seijuro Akaji was stunned when he heard Shiina Mahaku’s words, and immediately laughed

“Please be sure to let me see it if you can”

Although I said before that I would read her manga when Shiina Mahaku serialized, but now the girl’s expectant gaze, Akaji Seijuro thought it was better to take a look

Shiina Mahaku nodded heavily, then took Seijuro Akaji’s hand and went back to the house

More than ten minutes later, Seijuro Akaji held the manuscript in both hands and frowned slightly

To be honest, Shiina Mahaku’s painting skills are perfect

But the problem is in the plot. This plot is very routine in shoujo manga, but because it is conventional, it is difficult to stand out among the works that are appreciated by newcomers

“How?”

Seijuro Akaji was a little hesitant to point out the problem, but he was afraid that he would not understand what he said according to Mahaku’s nature

This girl is a genius immersed in the world of painting, and she may not know anything other than painting

And it’s almost time to deliver the manuscript, and it should be too late to change it now

Sighing inwardly, Seijuro Akaji said

“To be honest, it’s a little ordinary”

Shiina was stunned

“Ordinary?”

“Yes, the comic routines you draw are too cookie-cutter, the only thing that stands out is the image of the characters, and it is difficult to win awards based on this”

“。。。”

Shiina Mahaku’s excitement from the beginning to the loss visible to the naked eye now made Seijuro Akaji a little unbearable, but the words have already been spoken, and he still has to continue

“Girls’ comics are facing readers who yearn for romantic love or aestheticism, or all comics that like love, comics are constantly improving, your comics are old-fashioned plots that existed in the last century, and the characters you draw are different, very beautiful, and they are also very special in the entire shoujo comics

Your editor should also know this, probably so as not to dampen your self-confidence, and of course it is not impossible to win the award, luck or works of the same period are not comparable to yours.”

“That.”

Shiina Mahaku said in confusion

“So what should I do? Ah Zheng”

“It’s up to you to think for yourself, it’s your own work

What I can tell you is that the biggest difference between comics and art paintings is the way to express feelings, and comics have additional text in addition to drawings, so they are easier to understand than art paintings

Think about what kind of story you want to describe, and what kind of person you want to turn the characters you draw into, whether it’s a shonen manga or a shoujo manga, these are the basics of the manga.”

Shiina Shinhaku nodded in understanding, and then went back to the room with his manuscript

Seijuro Akaji leaned back on the sofa and sighed heavily

“Isn’t it. It’s a bit too much, but it’s better not to say that?”

He now wondered if he was right to use this method against Shiina Mahaku

Di Di Di

Seijuro Akaji’s mobile phone rang at this time, and LINE received a new message, which turned out to be sent by Shiina Mahaku

“Thank you, Ah Zheng”

Seijuro Akaji was stunned for a moment, and then revealed a smile

“It seems that I think too much, she is not so fragile

Well, make a rich lunch, and take her out for a walk in the afternoon.”

After lunch, Seijuro Akaji helps Shiina Mahaku change his clothes, and the two leave home together

On the way to the bus stop, Shiina asked Mahaku

“Where are we going?”

Seijuro Akaji took out his phone and opened an interface for Shiina Mahaku to see

“There is a manga exhibition event at the gymnasium in Miyagi Prefecture today, so let’s check it out”

“Comic Con?”

“Haven’t you been?”

“Hmm”

Shiina Mahaku nodded very obediently, and Seijuro Akaji smiled

“That’s where some anime lovers mingle, and there are also manga authors who sell their works there, and I think it might help you a little”

Shiina’s eyes lit up

“Going to”

Seijuro Akaji looked at the excited Shiina Mahaku and smiled bitterly

“We’re on our way right now.”

In less than half an hour, Seijuro Akaji and the two arrived at the location of the manga exhibition, and the venue was very large, so although there were many people, it was not too dense

Seijuro Akaji said with a little surprise

“The scale of this comic convention is not small, I thought it was just a small comic exhibition”

“Ah Zheng, where are the comics?”

Shiina Mahaku tugged on Seijuro Akaji’s sleeve, and Seijuro Akaji smiled helplessly

“Don’t worry, I’m also here for the first time, let’s look for it together”

“Uh-huh”

The two wandered around this comic book and asked someone, with the fanfiction area in the innermost

Seijuro Akaji prevented him from getting separated from Shiina Mahaku and took the girl’s hand and walked together, Shiina Mahaku looked at his hand that was held a little dumbfounded

The hand holding her was very warm, giving her an unparalleled sense of reassurance

“I’m sorry, there are a lot of people in front, don’t be crowded and scattered, if you feel unacceptable, grab my clothes”

Seijuro Akaji turned around and said, Shiina Mahaku shook his head slightly, but instead held Seijuro Akaji’s hand

Seijuro Akaji was stunned, and then showed a smile, under the protection of Seijuro Akaji, Shiina Mahaku did not even receive any touches to reach the manga section of the manga exhibition

When he arrived at his destination, Seijuro Akaji let go of his hand, and Shiina Mahaku felt a sense of loss in his heart, but then he was attracted by the various fanfics in the various booths in front of him

Then, she locked one of the stalls and walked over

Seijuro Akaji narrowed his eyes slightly, and when he saw the color change behind the cover of the manga, he quickly ran over and grabbed Shiina Mahaku

“Wait, Mahaku, that kind of comic as a reference or forget it”

“Why?”

Shiina Shinhaku tilted his head and asked curiously

Seijuro Akaji looked at that booth, that manga with afterlight. Eighteen forbidden

Can’t let Mahaku be tainted by this kind of manga, otherwise her mother can’t explain it, and suddenly Seijuro Akaji feels that it is a wrong decision to bring Shiina Mahaku to the manga. He should have thought there would be that kind of thing here

It’s a mistake.

“Ahem, that… That kind of comic has no reference value for you, and even seriously affects your level, no need to read it, you want to read the kind of serious storytelling comics! ”

Seijuro Akaji deliberately accentuated the two words of seriousness, and Shiina Mahaku seemed to understand the same and nodded his little head

He breathed a sigh of relief, and at the same time wiped the sweat from his forehead rarely

It’s dangerous.

“Why are you here?”

“Huh?”