Comprehensive Manga: Beating Mai Sakurajima at the Beginning

"Yukishita-senpai!"

"Sister Shiyu!"

After the two nodded in greeting, Yukinoshita Yukino introduced Kasumigaoka Shiyu, and the two members, Yagami Sora and Yubihama Yui, came.

Of course, there are also the responsibilities of the Ministry of Service.

"I'm here this time, as long as I want to ask you for help, look at the novel I wrote, what is the problem!"

Kasumigaoka Shiyu took out a stack of papers.

On the home page, there are six 66 words written in big letters - love metronome.

"Is Shiyu-senpai's novels delivered to other literary clubs or libraries?"

Yukinoshita Yukino took the paper and asked aloud.

"Yes, it has been published on the Shelling Library, but the response has not been very good!"

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu nodded with a sad expression on his face.

She wrote this novel with great effort.

But the audience doesn't seem to buy it, and the results have been unsatisfactory.

"The editor of the library didn't give some advice to the senior?"

Yukinoshita Yukino looked at Shiyu of Kasumigaoka with doubts in her eyes.

It stands to reason that the opinions given by editors should be more professional than theirs.

"There is no human rights in the street!"

Kasumi Hill Shiyu faintly uttered a sentence.

Yukinoshita Yukino and Yubihama Yui were instantly stunned, and they didn't understand what she was saying.

And Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu also reacted, this is not an industry insider, and immediately explained: "Because the results of this book are not very good, so the editor did not give any advice, just asked me to open a new book!"

Saying this, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's cheeks flushed red, and she seemed to be a little guilty.

The results of this novel of hers cannot be considered good, it can only be described as poor, so the editors are not optimistic, let her finish it as soon as possible and prepare for the next one.

But this book was written with all her heart, and she was unwilling to just give up.

So I came to the Ministry of Service to see if I could get any unexpected gains.

Now speaking of this group of younger brothers and sisters, it is inevitable that there will be some high points.

after all.

She, Shiyu of the Hill of Xia, is also a person who wants to save face.

And this high level, it is natural to feel a little guilty.

"Is that so? Shiyu-senpai, I don't have much research on novels, especially in the aspect of publishing, so I may be able to help you only by correcting some words and phrases.

! "

Yukinoshita Yukino looked at Kasumigaoka Shiyu seriously.

For a novel to become a bestseller, it is not easy to do.

"It doesn't matter, you read it, and if you can give some opinions, I'm enough!"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was a little disappointed in his heart, but on the surface, he didn't show it.

While reading Kasumigaoka Shiyu's novel under Yukinoshita, Yubihama Yui was pulling on the corner of Ye Shenkong's clothes and asked in a low voice, "Kora-kun, what do you mean by hitting the street?"

"Falling on the street, that is... people who are knocking down on the street!"

Ye Shenkong's ability to split words and make sentences is also not weak.

"Then why does this senior Shiyu say that she is throwing herself on the street? Does she often throw herself on the street?"

Yuihama Yui's eyes were full of curiosity.

Perhaps at this moment, in her mind, she was imagining the situation in which Shiyu of Kasumigaoka fell on the street.

"right!"

"Every day, if you hit nine hundred and ninety-nine, you can become a god!"

Ye Shenkong looked back at Kasumigaoka Shi with a smile.

"God"

"Kong Kong, do you mean pilgrimage when you say bashing on the street?"

Yuhiba Yui became more and more confused.

"Sister Yubihama, don't listen to his nonsense, throwing on the street means... failure!"

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu on the side heard the conversation between Ye Shenkong and the two, and couldn't help but explain out loud.

She was afraid that after a while, Ye Shenkong would fool Yubihama Yui into being unable to find Bei.

"Brother Ye Shen, from your appearance, it seems that you have a certain understanding of novels. Why don't you take a look at the novels of senior sister and evaluate it?"