Confession: I am a fat otaku. Why am I crying when a monster comes?

Contents of this article

1. Review of the major female characters (many pictures)

2. Plot summary

3. Author's talk, questions and answers, and heartfelt talk

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Thank you readers for your support!

The beginning of this book is actually very ordinary, and even has some toxic points. This is why many new readers give bad reviews without reading much.

Many books fall apart at the end, but the author is the type who gradually gets better and better. The quality becomes more stable as the book goes on. This is obvious to all.

So the author often asks for good reviews from everyone, because he doesn't want new readers to abandon the book because of the flaws in the beginning.

Here is another wave of requests, please give some good reviews!

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Let's start with the main text!

Let's talk about the major female protagonists first.

1. Su Jinyu (Xiao Qi)

One of the three major female protagonists set at the beginning of this book.

Absolutely the main wife!

The first appearance of the real person was the first guild gathering.

Little rich woman, long black hair, girlish, top temperament and appearance, simple and cute, jealous, easy to coax.

The female boss of the guild "Shanhe Yong'an", Chen Nian's close-fitting little cotton jacket, will help deal with various matters, one of the earliest people to follow Chen Nian.

Ability: flying sword, ten thousand swords, etc.

Godhead: Jiu Tian Xuan Nu (Taoist saint)

Key plot point: During the first "blood moon disaster", she was almost killed by the twin demons and was saved by the male protagonist.

In the camp battle, she went to the border with Chen Nian and met the exiled immortal Li Taibai. Later, she learned swordsmanship from him and her combat power increased greatly.

Author's brief comment: The male protagonist's white moonlight, will definitely be completely conquered in the later stage, with an exclusive story line, everyone rest assured!

Discussion floor.

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2. Zhao Yixue

Concept map

One of the three major female protagonists, conquered.

Personality: paranoid, yandere, possessive, expressionless and pragmatic

Abilities: ice, moonlight, heart-moon secrets

Godhood: Chang'e

Special relationship with the male protagonist: Heart-moon mark, both will be moved on the full moon night.

Key plot points: Visiting the Chang'e Temple with the male protagonist in the Lost Continent, obtaining the Chang'e Godhood, and fighting against Tian Long with her body when the male protagonist fought Tian Long, almost dying.

Author's brief comment: I saw a comment saying that I don't like Zhao Yixue. In fact, this kind of paranoid girl has one advantage. Even if the whole world abandons you, she will stand by you and she will regard your life as more important than her own.

Discussion post.

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3. Ye Hongling

One of the three major female protagonists, a queen-like character.

Keywords: red hair and red eyes, big, black stockings, loves to tease Chen Nian, has a tingling voice, high IQ, good at scheming, top figure

Ability: Fire

Godhood: Suzaku

Pet: Young Suzaku (Xiao Zhu)

Key plot points: Chen Nian accompanied her to the Fire Eye Abyss, unable to withstand the burning of the red light column, Chen Nian rushed in to protect him, and then Ye Hongling hugged him and kissed him, turning lust into strength.

Chen Nian gave her the Suzaku godhood, looked at the light, and Ye Hongling kissed him.

The two went to find Suzaku together, obtained Suzaku blood and the little Suzaku egg, and gave birth to the little Suzaku.

Author's brief comment: No man doesn't like black stockings.

Discussion post.

4. Princess of the Ancient Country, Gu Qingyue

Princess of the Ancient Country in the Lost World

Keywords: love the people, kind, ambitious, want a love, stunning, palace fighting expert

[We can have polygamy openly here, this princess will be the main wife, I can also help you manage the backyard]

Goddess: Wushan Goddess

Ability: can change appearance at will

Key plot: She was selected as a sacrifice to the mountain god by drawing lots, and learned through the Taoist master's calculation that her "ideal husband" is a reformer of the world rules, holding a night-light pearl that never goes out, so she found Chen Nian, and the two had a false seven-day love through a transaction.

In the end, Chen Nian killed the mountain god and saved her.

Afterwards, the camp war ended, and she had sex with Chen Nian in Wushan, and obtained the Wushan Goddess Goddess Goddess.

Lines: A person's life is very short, I just want to use the limited time to love someone and pursue a dream; if I had never seen the sun, I could have endured the darkness.

Author's comment: Although it is an urban novel, it cannot be without a female protagonist in ancient costume!

Discussion Forum.

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5. Sakura Uezawa

Today I spent a long time to get a picture of Sakura Uezawa, which can only be described as perfect!

It fits her name and her divinity, and it is a loss that cannot be seen!

Keywords: petite, slender, gentle, speaks softly, likes to imitate other girls' behavior to euphemistically express his jealousy

ps: Don't say underage or adult when you see the picture, all pictures are generated by AI and do not represent the actual character.

Chennian postA maid who can kill, cook, and warm the bed! She can also wear a maid outfit!

She secretly likes Chen Nian but is too shy to express it. Her wish is to stay with Chen Nian forever.

Ability: Ninja, Weapon: Kunai

Godhead: Kaguya (the beauty ceiling of the Sakura Country myth)

Key plot: After her brother Uezawa Shiki was "judged", she came to Longguo and asked Chen Nian to save her brother. Chen Nian said that you should serve me first, so she embarked on the road of no return as a personal maid.

Later, she was rejected by Chen Nian and returned to Sakura Country in despair. On the day of the trial, she fought desperately and fell into a desperate situation.

At this time, Chen Nian took action and rescued the two people by himself. In order to avoid being hunted down by Sakura Country, she stayed with Chen Nian.

In the battle of Shenyaojing, she obtained the divine nature of Kaguya and sacrificed herself to save Chen Nian who was contaminated by the immortal blood (cough cough...

Author's brief comment: Ying is gentle and obedient, and she doesn't speak too loudly. Who doesn't love such a Sakura girl? Anyway, the author loves her.

Discussion post.

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6. Tang Rou

Are there any pictures of Tang Rou? It seems that there are none. Now find one...

Tang Rou: Boss, what are you waiting for? Get on the bus!

Do you feel like a female secretary?

Keywords: female secretary, foodie, nanny, lively, lying flat, social animal worker, never fat

Abilities: treatment, buff, vine-related

Divine nature: God of Spring

Key plot: The first time was during the "Blood Moon Disaster" war, she helped Chen Nian, and the second time was when she received an invitation Joined the guild, but was deceived and taken to a guild of the rich second generation. Chen Nian happened to be there, so he strongly protected her and invited her to join the guild.

Because they lived in the same city, she naturally became Chen Nian's secretary to handle real chores. Later, she went to the hospital to help Tang Rou awaken the godhood "Spring God".

Author's brief comment: In the author's pre-design, Tang Rou was actually a female supporting role, but her role unknowingly increased, and her role as a "tool man" was actually more than some female protagonists.

However, I feel that Tang Rou's current position is quite interesting. Although she can be upgraded to the female protagonist, she will still maintain a [secretary x boss] relationship with the male protagonist in the short term.

Discussion post.

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7. Tamamonomae

Keywords: thousand-year fox demon, silver hair, nine-tailed, Jade feet, nice legs, charming, with ears and tail, cunning, likes to watch the fun, just interesting

Abilities: Fox Dream, Charm, Mirror Flower and Water Moon, etc....

Main body: Nine-tailed Demon Fox

Key plot: Shen Yao Jingzhong is attracted by Chen Nian's ability and makes a deal with him. The real purpose is to use Chen Nian to seize the immortal blood and use Qingna to reshape the immortal body, but the immortal blood was forced to be drunk by Chen Nian. Later, Chen Nian promised to help her find the sealed body.

Ampere Qingming returned to kill Tamamonomae, and finally Chen Nian won the battle against Qingming.

I have an inexplicable feeling for Chen Nian in my heart.

Author's brief comment: As a nine-tailed demon fox control, the author has put a lot of effort into shaping Tamamonomae.

The intersection between her and the male protagonist is not a simple relationship of who saved whom and who fell in love with whom.

And It started with a "trade".

But behind this deal, Tamamonomae had another purpose. In the end, she wanted to reshape her body, which also reflected her cunning and scheming.

As she and the male protagonist traded and helped each other many times, the two got to know each other better, and then they would have a deeper relationship.

This subtle relationship progress is quite interesting. In my eyes, this is the process of conquering the nine-tailed fox. It is tangled and complicated, but it is very interesting to watch. After all, the thousand-year-old fox demon is not the silly and sweet Su Jinyu.

Discussion floor.

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8. Haruna

Haruna is a supporting actress, not the heroine.

Keywords: shy, useless shrine maiden, why are you all using me QAQ

She is a shrine maiden in the Onmyoji of the God Demon Kyo, serving Kaguya-hime.

When she was a child, her whole family was killed by Crow Tengu, and her heart was swallowed. It was Tamamonomae who saved her and used a fox tail as a price to become her heart.

From now on, there is a sense of shared perception between the two.

Author's comment: Although she is a female supporting role, she shares perception with Tamamonomae, and may become a bridge for Chen Nian and Tamamonomae to go further in the future. If Tamamonomae is captured, she will probably be a maidservant...

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9. Tsuchimikado

Keywords: Lolita, Onmyoji, Genius, Tsundere, Little Foodie

Ability: Onmyoji

I won't talk about the plot, I just finished writing it.

Rika, a modern Onmyoji with top talent, has abilities that are not awakened by transcendence, but by practicing Onmyoji.

Not only does she have the Onmyoji Eyes, she also got the Scroll of Twelve Forbidden Techniques left by Ampere Harumi.Author's comment: Lihua is a very special character. She is the first person in modern times who has extraordinary powers without "awakening" (there will be others in the future)

Her talent is undoubtedly top-notch, and she can only be said to be very strong, one of the powerful forces in the future!

As for her relationship with Chen Nian, it is currently similar to the feeling of "bad friends". She likes Tang Rou, her sister, very much, but she calls Chen Nian a bad guy every time she sees him.

But when Chen Nian is in trouble, she will still help him. This kind of relationship is still very interesting.

When she grows up, it is possible that she will be promoted to the heroine.

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Due to the restrictions on posting pictures, I will not post pictures later.

10. Alan

Supporting actress, not many scenes, currently a member of Shanhe Yongan

Keywords: blonde and blue-eyed mixed-race, purple is very charming

Ability: water ability

Godhead: River God

Plot: Originally the president of Bi Hai, she had a conflict with the guild and was rescued by Chen Nian, who helped her obtain the godhead of the river god and then took her to join the guild

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11. Ning Ziqing

The male protagonist's non-blood-related sister, supporting actress

Not many scenes, occasionally appears, cute type, keyword "JK girl"

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12. Zi Nan

Supporting actress, Xiao Qi's best friend, was killed and absorbed by Chen Nian's "Four Beasts", and currently became Chen Nian's summoned beast

Ability: Necromancer

She used her ability to help Chen Nian subdue the Undead Bone Dragon, and the Four Beasts that appear in the future are basically Undead Bone Dragons

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12. Qin Yu

Keywords: singer, fake girlfriend

Author's comment: I know many people have inexplicable feelings for this character. Although she is very ordinary, she is the first female character that the protagonist meets, and people often comment that they want to see her role.

In fact, in the author's original plan, she was a passing heroine, and basically didn't have much role after the transition period.

In fact, through the previous introduction, you can also feel that the current heroines or those who become heroines are mostly distinctive in character, extraordinary in ability, and have their own plot lines.

One of the author's criteria for writing heroines is not to write pure vases, she must have a role.

So if Qin Yu is to be promoted to a heroine in the future, it must take a lot of plot to reshape her, and then have a dedicated plot to sublimate.

Are there many readers who like Qin Yu? I remember that she hardly had many roles.... Post it here so that I can see.

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There are also missed comments here.

Finally, as the plot progresses, there will definitely be new heroines.

The review of female characters ends.

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Plot review.

1. The first big plot is the "Blood Moon Disaster" chapter.

BOSS: Twin Demons.

After Chen Nian finished the frontal battlefield, he found that the other twin demon was on Xiao Qi's side, so he rushed to support him, saved Xiao Qi at the critical moment, and killed the demon.

It was here that Chen Nian first came into contact with the "divine gene" and possessed the godhood.

2. The second big plot, the battle of the Sky Demon Island

BOSS: Trickster Demon, Deep Sea Demon

The Trickster Demon is at the top of the Sky Demon Island Tower, and if people want to see him, they must step by step from the outer island to the inner island, and then climb the tower.

Of course, this plot also has obstacles, that is, everyone is divided into a "small island", and if the small island is destroyed, they will lose their qualifications.

If all the small islands are destroyed, the Sky Demon Island will sink.

In the end, Chen Nian entered the Sky Demon Tower, and the rest of his companions helped him clear the way along the way, hit the Sky Demon Tower, and defeated the Trickster Demon with difficulty.

Unexpectedly, the trickster summoned the deep sea demon again, and Chen Nian used "Zhu Rong" to kill him instantly and won.

3. The third big plot, the battle of Tianlong in the Lost Continent.

After the battle of Tianmo Island, the world gate on the island opened, and people could pass through it to enter another plane, the Lost Continent.

The plot of the Lost Continent can be said to be the most carefully designed part of the book.

There are multiple lines intertwined in it, as complicated as a spider web.

There are battles between guilds of various countries, fighting for national fortune and national honor.

There is also the princess's emotional line.

The mountain god sacrifice line in the dungeon.

Alan's guild conflict line.

The "black disaster" that enveloped the world, and the final boss Tianlong are also a line.

There is also the invasion of the dungeon by other countries, and the battle line between Shangze Zhishu and the protagonist.

So many story lines intertwined together, and finally formed this big copy.

And it also buried the foreshadowing of the destruction of the gods, etc.

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It is also in this plot that the author played a trick, inserting a copy of a fantasy novel into an urban novel.

Writing like this is very risky!

If it fails, the book will be over, and a large number of readers will abandon the book.

WriteWell, it actually doesn't bring anything. It's just a high-risk, low-return writing style.

The storyline of Gu Qingyue was written under this kind of pressure.

But the author still tried it. Fortunately, I happened to have experience in writing fantasy fairy tales.

At least this plot was written complete and interesting.

In the end, the protagonist took the artifact mountain axe and killed Tianlong, allowing the people of the underground city to see the sun again and come to the ground to build a new home.

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I feel that the character of Gu Qingyue is written alive.

Especially when writing about the "contradiction" in her heart.

She is not afraid of death or being sacrificed, but she is reluctant to leave Chen Nian. She wants to live and stay with him more (Chapter 183

The author believes that "contradiction" is the true human nature. People cannot be perfect and cannot have only a beautiful side.

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4. The fourth big plot, the battle to save the Shangze brothers and sisters in Sakura Country

This plot is not as complicated as the above, just enjoy it!

By the way, it reflects the hero's character of valuing friendship. If others help him, he will remember it in his heart, and finally get a maid.

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5. The fifth big plot, the battle of the camps

BOSS: Tianlong level, beast god

In this plot, Su Jinyu and Chen Nian act together, find the ancient forbidden area at the border of the lost continent, and meet the old man guarding the forbidden area "Li Bai".

Xiao Qi and Chen Nian both gained something here. Xiao Qi learned Li Bai's sword, and Chen Nian understood Li Bai's poems.

Finally, Li Bai chanted "The Great Peng rises with the wind one day, soaring up to 90,000 miles", and left gracefully.

Xiao Qi went back to support, and Chen Nian went into the East Desert alone to fight the Beast God.

At the end of the battle, Chen Nian borrowed Li Bai's wine and defeated the Beast God with a "Jiang Jinjiu".

From then on, he learned to use Li Bai's poems as one of the means of fighting.

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6. After the dragon disaster, Suzaku and other minor transitional events, we came to the sixth major plot.

Shen Yao Jing!

This major plot is also intricate and multi-line, comparable to the Lost Continent.

Although everyone has just finished reading it, the author is still here to help everyone sort it out.

First First, the demon king is about to revive. The white camp wants to stop the demon king from reviving, while the black camp wants to revive the demon king.

This leads to the battle line between the two camps.

In the Haruna line, Haruna's family was killed by Crow Tengu, and then she was saved by Tamamonomae. In the end, she got her revenge and redemption.

In the Uezawa Sakura line, she wanted to become stronger, so she kept working hard, and finally got the divinity of Kaguya, and helped Chen Nian as she wished, proving her worth.

Uezawa Ueki and Hanyu Hayabusa fought for the second time. This time, Uezawa, who had his arm broken, came back strongly, killed Hanyu, met his sister again, and realized self-redemption.

In the Kaguya line, Kaguya is the god who protects the white camp. Shuten Douji wanted to pursue her a thousand years ago. She was afraid of Shuten Douji, so after learning about Chen Nian's ability, she wanted to bet on Chen Nian.

In the Tamamonomae line, Tamamonomae and Chen Nian made a deal to deliberately revive Shuten Douji and then kill him to get the immortal blood.

Chen Nian agreed to Tamamonomae and finally defeated Shuten Douji with difficulty and obtained the immortal blood.

The plot should have ended here...

However, Tamamonomae's conspiracy was seen through by Chen Nian. Her ultimate goal was to use Haruna as a container to get an immortal body, so a reversal occurred.

Chen Nian cheated Tamamonomae, but promised to help her find her body, so Tamamonomae followed Chen Nian to the real world.

Ampere Haruaki was revived.

Here Chen Nian's classmate, Yang Wei's line, was introduced again.

Tsuchimura, a modern Onmyoji, Rika's line.

It just happened to be connected with the previous plot. Yang Wei's archaeological team discovered the seal of the demon sword Murasame, which happened to be guarded by the Tsuchimikado family.

The strongest Onmyoji Ampere Haruaki came and it was another big battle.

Everyone just finished watching this battle, so I won't review it.

Yang Wei redeems himself, and Lihua's values ​​are impacted, and she takes the initiative to help Chen Nian.

But the villain Ampere Qingming also has a love line!

He has hated demons since he was a child, but his mother is also a fox demon. Qingming's father saved this fox demon, and the fox demon fell in love with his father in order to repay his gratitude and gave birth to Qingming.

But after Qingming found out, he killed his mother with his own hands. His value to demons is that demons must die.

Before he died, after the battle with Chen Nian, he may have figured it out that not all demons are bad, at least the mother who was gentle and caring for him might be a good demon.

That's why he passed the twelve forbidden scrolls to Lihua.

[Scoring session: Which of the above plots do you like? Full score of 10]

Plot summary:

Writing a big plot is extremely brain-burning, and in the process of foreshadowingIn the novel, it cannot be too boring. Even if there is a foreshadowing, it must be interesting and interesting to attract readers.

Too difficult!

The question is, do readers like straightforward and refreshing plots, or more complicated plots that need to be laid out?

The next plot has not been thought of yet. The plot is suggested to be here, so that the author can copy the book reviews to save some brains!

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Question and answer.

Q: Yang Jian is too weak, can he change his godhood?

A: Yang Jian is not weak, and his strength has nothing to do with his godhood. The main godhood will not change, but the protagonist can obtain other godhood abilities (such as Li Bai's poems)

Q: Why are all the gods dead?

A: In the disaster, there are demons, Tianlong, and higher and more powerful beings. If they want to occupy a plane, they must first kill the gods of this plane.

So the gods in the Lost Continent (Dragon Country Mythology) and the God Demon Capital (Sakura Country Mythology) were all destroyed, and only a few weak ones survived.

Q: Which ones will be collected?

A: Those with detailed appearance descriptions, exclusive plot lines, and good interactions with the protagonist will be collected.

I will skip the unimportant female characters because I can't write enough, or I will write some emotional lines for the supporting characters.

Q: Will it be finished?

A: It's only a few words, it's still early

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The heartfelt part.

I haven't asked for any rewards so far. Most of the requests are good reviews. I just don't want the book to be buried by the bad reviews in the beginning.

But the writing in the beginning is really average, otherwise it wouldn't be less than 9 points, alas!

9 points is my only wish.

If you have time, come and follow the update more often, which is the greatest support for the author. Thank you!

Today's miscellaneous talk is 6,000 words. Although it is not the main text, the author spent an afternoon sorting and collecting it to finish it.

I will update it as usual tomorrow.

See you tomorrow!