Culture Conquers Foreign Worlds

"The plot of the original novel has nothing to do with it except for the hasty ending."

"The key lies in the characterization and the details of the plot. Su's personality needs to fit her identity. She is a thief, but the sordid living environment does not deceive her kindness. It is because of this that Maude will fall in love with her. This woman who takes care of herself with all her heart."

"Maud was never an innocent and ignorant eldest lady. In order to escape the control of her uncle, the gentleman planned this conspiracy to send Su into the lunatic asylum. The gentleman's plan was seen through from the beginning, so he had no choice but to cooperate with Maud. All the conspiracies were designed by Aunt Sachsby, who deliberately let the gentleman come into contact with Maude."

"No one thought that Maude and Sue would have feelings for each other..."

Harvey closed the original novel of "The City of Thorns," closed his eyes and meditated, his sensitive thoughts quickly clarified the key to the novel.

The plot of "City of Thorns" is divided into three parts. The first part is about the life experience of the heroine Su, and the second part is the life experience of the heroine Maude. The third part runs through the whole text. Sue, Maud, and the gentleman are just pawns in Aunt Sachsby's plan. Aunt Sachsby is Maud's biological mother, and Sue was originally the one who should be the eldest lady.

At the request of Su’s mother, Aunt Sachsby dropped the two children. Su’s mother promised to give the two children half of the property. Now, Aunt Sachsby is preparing to sacrifice for more than ten years for the sake of wealth and her daughter Maude. Su, get that part of Su’s property in his hands

"The first and second parts of the plot of the novel are excellent, especially at the turning point of the plot, when Su was taken into the lunatic asylum by the wife of a gentleman. Then re-watch her and Su's experience with Maude's vision, and you will find what she is doing. Everything she did was justified and well-founded. Maude knew about this plan from the beginning, but even so, she still fell in love with Su who took care of herself wholeheartedly, so she would ask Su again and again on the night she was preparing to escape. Don't marry a gentleman. If Sue even said no word at the time, then Maude might be soft-hearted and give up the whole plan."

"As the third part of the first and second part of the plot, we will reveal all the truth, including the real life experience between Su and Maud..."

Harvey thought hard and integrated all the clues about "City of Thorns" in his mind. "City of Thorns" is just like "Frozen" because the plot in the middle part of the story is so wonderful that it is so good. The ending seemed hasty and mediocre.

"It shouldn't be that way, and it should end in such a hurry." Harvey muttered with his hands in his arms.

There is nothing wrong with the plot setting of "City of Thorns". In the first and second parts, you can see the foreshadowing of the third part of the plot, but perhaps the TV screenwriter is too focused on the first and second parts of the filming to ignore the third part. Part of the impact, the third part of the plot itself is based on the reversal of the first and second parts.

"The third part should reflect the attitude of the two protagonists in joking with their fate. Perhaps other plots can be arranged. For example, Maude lives in Su’s room and finds Su’s diary. The diary says that Su faces this. The struggle of the second plan and the concern for the aunt can be linked to the story of Maude knowing that the aunt is his biological mother to increase the tension of the plot, and thus truly experience everything that Su needs to consider."

"But if you add this story, one of the key settings in the novel will be ineffective. Su is set to be ignorant. Because of this, it is not discovered that the books in the collection of Maude and that uncle are some filthy banned books. ···"

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Harvey brought the novel manuscript of the second volume of "Dark Age" to the publishing house of Puland. This is not the first time Harvey has been here, but when he came here last time, the publishing house of Puland has not been approved by Cromwell. Acquired by the Chamber of Commerce.

It can be seen that the Cromwell Chamber of Commerce has also worked hard. The entire four-story building has been bought. The name of the publishing house is hung at the front entrance. There are constant staff rushing in and out. Harvey just walked in. , The front desk woman in professional attire smiled brightly at him.

"Hello, I want to find Mr. Puran Garcia."

The female at the front desk was taken aback, bowed politely and asked: "Sir, do you have an appointment?"

Harvey was also taken aback, laughed and shook his head, speaking of it because he hadn't appeared in the press very much, and the image in the "Count of Monte Cristo" Phantom was very different. So far, many people do not know what Harvey really looks like.

Although the female at the front desk did not recognize it, another front desk in charge of reception knew about Harvey, and hurriedly pulled her sleeves and said something in her ear.

The face of the receptionist experienced a brief stiff expression, and he quickly bowed apologetically: "Mr. Adrian, I'm sorry I didn't recognize you. Mr. Garcia is in the office on the fourth floor. I will take you there now."

"Thank you, no, I should be able to find it myself." Harvey smiled politely, and went to the side of the lobby to find an old elevator. The elevator was surrounded by iron fences, a bit similar to the simple elevator used on construction sites. , The floor and handrails are carved with delicate and complex patterns, which will not give people a simple feeling.

After finding Pulan’s office, Harvey handed him the manuscript of the second volume of "Dark Ages". Pulan is now also very colorful. The black suit he wears is a custom-made suit from the Cromwell Chamber of Commerce, and his hair is neatly combed. Perhaps because of age, it looks like the aristocratic class of the new era.

Seeing the manuscript of the second volume of "Dark Age" that Harvey handed over, he looked stunned. After he took it over, he flipped through and complained in surprise: "Harvey, I thought you focused on making the "Frozen" phantom. Well, I have to admit that the Phantom did a good job."

Harvey smiled and said, "It doesn't take much effort to write a novel, how about you here?"

Pulan smiled complacently: "As you can see, newspapers and publications are developing very smoothly. By the way~www.readwn.com~Earl Henrietta of Norton has agreed to sell us an affiliated publishing house. The scale is not large, the second volume of "Dark Age" is just right, and it can help me open up Norton's market and win a lot of popularity."

"That's good, I'll go back first. If there is any problem with the novel, please call me at any time."

"Then I don't want to keep it. I waited for the second volume of "Dark Age" for several months. If I can't satisfy me, I will definitely come to my door as soon as possible." With a knowing smile, he himself is regarded as one of Harvey's book fans. He is not too old, and his taste for novels is biased towards innovation. He especially likes "Dark Age". He has read the outline of the novel, and that's why Will be more looking forward to the next content.

The first volume of "Dark Age" can only be said to be exquisite and interesting. From the second volume onwards, it truly depicts a magnificent heroic epic. He is extremely looking forward to the plot in the outline shown in Harvey's pen.

Harvey left the office with a meaningful chuckle. Without Pulan's visit, Harvey himself would come here again in a few days, but he was not Harvey Adrian at that time.

"City of Thorns" doesn't need those exquisite and complicated illustrations, you can submit it directly after you finish writing it.