Destroy The Fantasyworld With Science

Hello there Ladies and Gentlemen. I realized a few things over the course of the past few weeks concerning this book. There were quite a few things I messed up even in the beginning which caused a lot of problems in the long run. A few problems that appeared were:

- Most importantly a lack of challenge in the later chapters, no threat, tension and action.

- A lack of motivation for the main character to progress

- No clear goal to strive towards

- The world travel in and of itself

Due to these reasons I will try to write a completely different fanfiction with more or less the same update schedule. I teased it before in a few chapters but the new one is named "The Unwilling Sailor".

I will post the first few chapters in a few hours under that name. I thank you for reading so far and your patience. I hope that I learned a lot from this book which will improve the writing quality of the next one. I hope you can forgive me for dropping this and I hope to see you again in my new novel.

I hope you have a wonderful week,

Your Beggar_Genesis