Elf Invasion: I live broadcast popular science Pokémon

The plot of Frozen Bird, Super Evolution, and even Giratina has almost entered the final stage, so I asked for a day off.

Last month's monthly ticket owes one chapter, plus the leave owed, it should be five chapters (I'm definitely not mistaken), it's still the old rule, it's not over at the end of the month, red envelopes are given out in the group, the tentative amount is 388.

Finally, let’s talk about the story of mega evolution.

The comment on the chapter of Geng Gui mega evolution can be said to be the most commented one I have made in recent months. When I first wrote this chapter, I didn't expect everyone's reaction to be so great.

Looking back, it was indeed my problem, but if the content of those two chapters were published together, it should not cause everyone's reaction to be so intense.

Another point is that there are some problems with my plot structure arrangement.

My initial arrangement was to allow Chen Mo's battles in the Ice World to be broadcast live to the real world outside.

If you are a book friend who is familiar with me, you probably know that I will try my best to arrange the rationality of the live broadcast, that is, why the protagonist can start the live broadcast in this place.

For example, in the ancient ruins of Zekrom in the Evergreen Forest, and in the subsequent trip to the secret world of the tree of the beginning of the world, I have given an explanation of why the live broadcast was possible. It was because the world of the secret world was in line with the real world at that time. Part of it is integrated into the real world, so it can receive live signals from the earth.

So the plot is the same.

At the beginning, the shell of the Ice Egg didn't show the picture, so why did the protagonist have a picture after entering? This must be a point of doubt, so I raised this question through the perspective of Emperor Yan and the perspective of the live broadcast room. As for what the reason is, quite a lot of foreshadowing has been laid in the book, so I won't go into details.

All in all, after solving the problem of being able to broadcast live, the 4,000 words in that chapter have already taken up one-third of the content.

In the further development of the plot, the protagonist asked Geng Gui and Frozen Bird to fight one-on-one.

I think so, I personally think so, the strength of Geng Gui, the strength discovered by Frozen Bird before, is obvious to all the audience in the live broadcast room, so the protagonist let Geng Gui and Frozen Bird single out, they naturally There will definitely be doubts in my heart.

How can Geng Gui single out against Frozen Bird?

Then I can use this question and the action of the protagonist to turn the perspective to Manxing, and then pull out the mega evolution smoothly.

At this point, the next step is the shocking part.

The birth of new things will always cause shock. This is a great refreshing feeling for me when I read books, and I will naturally keep this habit when I write books.

but.

Different from the traditional elf travel novels or urban elf novels, in the world Chen Mo lives in, he has only been in contact with elves for two years, not to mention the evolution of mega, and the popular science of the protagonist before, which one is not brand new to them Stuff, so the shock caused by the mega evolution has a certain limit on their side. In addition, they have gone through science popularization in the secret realm before, so the main perspective must not be placed on their side.

Therefore, legendary elves like Suicune, who are influenced by the traditional evolutionary relationship, became the main objects of shock.

With this description, the 4,000 words of chapter 406 are basically over.

Some book friends said that you are too watery, but I personally think that the description of the atmosphere is very important, and it is impossible for me to abbreviate it to the beginning of the battle.

Furthermore.

Why did you choose to break the chapter at that place? It's very simple. From the content of the next chapter, everyone can see that even if Geng Gui mega evolved, in fact, normal one-on-one can't beat Frozen Bird. Plus, Geng Gui The ghost's request to take the initiative to fight is to draw out Giratina's backhand. Therefore, the first appearance of Super Geng Ghost is destined to suffer some deflation.

but.

After all, it is a new form, and it is impossible for the new form of Kamen Rider to be deflated as soon as he transforms. Therefore, after the break from that chapter, the arrangement of the next chapter just allows Super Geng Gui to show its highlights, and then it is almost the same, and then Let Super Geng Gui be deflated and draw out Giratina's backhand.

This is a matter of my arrangement, which makes everyone look uncomfortable.

But I also have my difficulties, after all, the plot structure of this book is like this.

The protagonist Chen Mo is different from the protagonists of traditional elves. The environment he faces is an environment without an alliance of elves. Just like what a book friend said before, the protagonist Chen Mo has no strong rivals, no seniors, and no need to participate in any competitions. When he chose to take out the mega evolution to fight, it must be against a strong enemy. Naturally, it is impossible to kill the opponent in a single chapter like a normal elf game, causing shock.

certainly.

If I look back, there are actually many things that can be improved in this plot. For example, I set the strength of Frozen Bird too strong. If I lowered the strength of Frozen Bird a little bit and set it as a super Gengar The range that can defeat it, in fact, there will not be so many problems, but I was a little too hasty in order to lead out the slate and cause Giratina.

Sorry, my question has brought you a bad viewing experience.

In addition, to answer another question from everyone, several book friends in the book review area said that the style of this book has changed compared with the previous ones.

Um.

how to say.

In fact, your feelings are fine.

The early style of this book is mainly based on the combination of daily life and science popularization, but at this stage of the protagonist, it is definitely not possible to simply mix science popularization with daily life. , another self and many other things.

certainly.

This is also caused by my lack of writing skills. If my writing skills are good enough, I can also pass some transitions to ease everyone's perception of this.

Alas, all in all, I'm sorry, this wave seems to have lost some follow-up, uncomfortable...

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Some reflections from Franz Kafka, the ultimate suture freak