Embers Ad Infinitum

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The fourth "Emperor" mainly has two meanings. The first is to represent the last words of the former "Early City" Emperor Aure, which is also the main task of the "Old Tune Team"; the other is to refer to "power", which refers to The rights of "city" change.

In addition, I am also trying to use different characters to represent different musical instruments. They come from all directions and converge into the most intense movement. Then they go away and leave one by one. Only the instrument representing the protagonist pulls out the residual sound and renders it. Feel lonely.

This writing method inevitably requires new characters, good shaping, and progressive characterization of the original characters.

To this end, I wrote the arrogant "priest", the general Fukas with the appearance of a lion and a fox in the heart, the Zhanaka who is compassionate, Galoran who is comfortable with the situation, the ambitious Gaius, the Asus who is addicted to desire, for Zeng Duo, who runs away from home, waits, waits.

At the same time, Xiao Hong ignited his courage, and Old Han understood the meaning of a lover, Xiao Bai’s complete presentation of the past and present determination, Da Bai began to face his fears, and Shang Jian Yao took another step on the road to mental illness. After taking a solid step, Lao Ge slowly learned the meaning of the word emotional intelligence, which belonged to the development trajectory of the characters, and made their image more hierarchical.

At this point, I feel that I have achieved the intended purpose.

The main problem lies in six points:

First, I first arrived in a big place, and it is a place for long-term activities. I am always accustomed to cutting in from some corners to show the characters here, the cultural customs here, and then bring out the characters little by little. Delineating events little by little, which leads to a slower pace in the early stage. For some friends, the reading experience may not be very good.

The second is also the rhythm. I said in this book that there are upgrades, but I will try to weaken the upgrade’s help to the rhythm. Therefore, throughout the whole book, Shang Jianyao has only improved once. From the expectation that he will become stronger, I look forward to it. From the perspective of more varied readers, such a rhythm is indeed not very friendly. For this reason, when I first made the setting, I made "props" similar to magical items, hoping to reflect the changes through the acquisition and consumption of the props, so that the focus of the story can be more focused on the advancement of the plot.

The third is fighting. How should I say it? Every fight involving the awakened consumes my brain power. It is more difficult than writing fist and magic, so it is easy to be polarized: when certain abilities are the first When I first appeared, in order to prevent everyone from being confused, I would definitely explain it completely, and the fight would be verbose, suitable for watching at a stretch, and I don’t have the ability to write so much at one stretch; when certain abilities have been For the second or even third time, when the focus is on fighting wits and courage, the effect is not bad, both interesting and intense.

The fourth is the lack of tension. When the main character never dies, the tension of the story is indeed a bit difficult to create, and without tension, it is not exciting enough and there is no big climax. To solve this problem, you can't die for the dead. You will naturally die when you **** it. Later, I will try to use "failure" to create a corresponding atmosphere. In other words, not every task can be successful.

Fifth, the power change of the "First City". Because the protagonist group is only playing soy sauce on the edge~www.readwn.com~, I use it more as a stage for eliciting more and setting deeper secrets and shaping characters. It is not a trigger point for a climax, which forms a certain dislocation with readers' expectations.

Sixth, it dragged too long on some suspenseful settings, which resulted in not enough shocking feeling when decrypting.

The above is the summary of the fourth part. The fifth part is "Heroes", named after Beethoven's Third Symphony. From the name, you should be able to guess that the fifth part will contain the "Salvation Army" related content.

Okay, it’s the time I’m most looking forward to asking for leave. Well, today is Saturday. It’s already a shift, so it doesn’t count. Please take Sunday, Monday, Tuesday and Wednesday mornings for three and a half days, and resume at 7pm next Wednesday. renew.

Think about it carefully, I was supposed to take a half-day off on Sunday, but it was put in the total leave, which is equivalent to only taking three days. You made a profit, but I lost it! (Mr. Ma's face)

Fortunately, since a single chapter has been issued, wouldn’t it be a waste not to ask for a ticket?

Ask for a monthly pass!