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Chapter 159 System crash (fourth update)
Seeing this sentence, people from all walks of life in the online literary world had mixed feelings.
Baiyi Qingcheng's ten-million-dollar reward for creativity in opening the book turned into a sentence: "It's raining, and your mother told you to go home and collect your clothes."
Very kind and humorous, but it was this sentence that made countless people feel convinced. Feather fans and towels were used, and the oars and oars were wiped out in ashes while talking and laughing - this kind of gesture is called the bearing of a king.
After suppressing the shock just now, countless people finally saw the long-awaited first chapter of "Coiling Dragon" - "Morning in a Small Town".
"Wushan Town is an ordinary town in the Finlai Kingdom, the first mountain range of the Magnolia Continent and west of the Warcraft Mountains.
The morning sun is rising, and the small town of Wushan Town still has a cool air in the morning, but almost all the residents in the town have already come out to start work. Even the six or seven-year-old children have almost all gotten up and started. Traditional morning exercise.
In the open space to the east of Wushan Town, the warm morning sunlight shines through the big trees next to the open space, leaving mottled light spots on the open space.
I saw a large group of children, and I estimated there were about one or two hundred.
This group of children was divided into three teams. Each team was lined up in several rows. The children stood quietly in the open space with serious expressions. The children in the northernmost group of this group of children were about six to eight years old. The group in the middle is about nine to twelve years old, and the southernmost group is a group of teenagers between thirteen and sixteen years old..."
This is the opening shot of the first chapter of "Coiling Dragon", which is full of visuals.
Moreover, Luoyang wrote a total of 9,000 words in this chapter. It is a big chapter. The world view, early stage classification, and overall structure of "Panlong" are also directly disclosed. At the same time, Luoyang also throws out in the first chapter One of the core cool points in "Panlong" is the four ultimate warriors!
When many people saw this paragraph, their eyes lit up, and a strong sense of anticipation emerged that even they themselves were unaware of.
"On our continent, there were four ultimate warriors thousands of years ago. These four ultimate warriors all had strength comparable to that of giant dragons. They could roam among millions of soldiers alone and easily defeat enemy generals. Head! These four ultimate warriors are the Dragon Blood Warrior, the Purple Flame Warrior, the Tiger Pattern Warrior and the Undead Warrior!"
"There are nine levels of warriors. I, a sixth-level warrior, can easily smash boulders and kick down trees! And the ninth-level warrior is probably the strongest in our Kingdom of Finlay."
This is the world of the strong. This thing belongs to the new world created by Bai Yiqingcheng. The mysterious veil has been unveiled amid thousands of calls.
The strong man who can cross mountains and seas, the legendary sanctuary, and the four powerful ultimate warriors... Countless readers, and even staff in the online literary world, were surprised after reading the first chapter of "Coiling Dragon" Discover--
I was originally indifferent to the so-called Western fantasy, but I was actually looking forward to the plot of "Coiling Dragon"!
This sense of expectation puzzles many people. They didn't expect that such a Western world would not make people boring.
"It's not the kind of mercenary adventure fantasy. It's a very interesting beginning. The image of Lin Lei is very full. It seems that I have to keep reading."
"Yeah, that's not right. The first chapter of Allure in White Clothes obviously didn't write anything interesting. Why am I looking forward to the following plot?"
"I'm not very interested in the Western fantasy genre, so I just came here to take a look at it for Bai Da's sake, and I found out that it's quite interesting? What the hell?"
"When I just read the first paragraph, I almost gave up the book. Bai Da's writing style has deteriorated so much that it makes people feel distressed. However, when I read on, I found that this kind of writing style matches such The story is so unexpectedly touching! ”
Even some professionals who have been writing online articles for many years feel strange: "Why on earth is it that I am very interested in the plot even though there is no conflict or twist in it? Where does this expectation come from?"
"Brilliant, really brilliant!" Some great writers who came with a learning attitude suddenly saw the subtlety of the first chapter of "Coiling Dragon" after studying it.
"The protagonist is a child with unlimited growth potential. In the first chapter, Bai Da made this Lin Lei flesh and blood. Although the writing is a bit dull, the spirit of self-improvement can be seen from the back of the paper!"
"Although it is a Western fantasy, the protagonist Lin Lei created by Bai Da makes readers feel deeply involved!"
"Immediately afterwards, Bai Da described the abilities of strong men in the article. Once you become a high-level warrior, you can have the ability to break mountains and stones. This will make readers instantly think that the protagonist works so hard and his talent seems to be very good. It looks like he will almost certainly have this ability in the future, how majestic it will be!”
"This is the sense of immersion created by Bai Da, which aroused everyone's expectations. At this moment, Bai Da released another shocking news, that is, the four ultimate warriors in mainland legends!"
"In general, writing like this in novels must be a sign of something. Does this mean that the protagonist may be one of the four ultimate warriors, or... In short, at this time, the reader's own imagination creates a huge sense of expectation for himself. ! This makes me want to see the following plot immediately after reading the first chapter! ”
The subtleties are not difficult to study, just like the principles of some things are very simple, but you can't do it yourself.
Even if someone studies Baiyi Qingcheng's works thoroughly, they still can't write a work that surpasses him. But at this time, there is no time to think more, so the best thing to do is to read the next chapter first!
At this time, no matter what purpose the readers came with, they clicked on the next chapter of "Coiling Dragon" with infinite expectations.
However, after a difficult refresh of the web page, the novel page of the website suddenly turned around, and a sentence appeared in the center of the screen...
"Dear users, I'm sorry, because the current traffic of visitors to Baiyi Qingcheng's new book "Coiling Dragon" is too high, which exceeds the system's capacity, causing the website system to crash. The backend staff are undergoing emergency repairs and will complete the upgrade in the short term. We apologize for the inconvenience caused..."
The page is white and the system crashed! !
The background is still being repaired urgently, please forgive me...
I understand your sister! Can you make people enjoy reading books?
Facing this scene, readers from all over the world vomited three liters of blood.
Do you want to play like this? We just want to read Bai Da’s new book...
As a result, you made a rain of red envelopes for 20 minutes and made everyone wait for most of the day. Now your backend crashes and the entire website is out of order. It’s going crazy! !
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