Fantasy System

Chapter 460: We are still good friends without doing anything.

“The story is an author who once wrote a comic story, and transformed into a light novel writer. Although he started to write a light novel with a little score, he later failed, and was taken over by his companion. He finally helped his companion at the comic festival. The ranking of the first place, understand the direction of his writing?"

In the spacious and bright living room, sitting on the sofa in the hands of Yingli pear, holding a manuscript with a contemptuous look to Xia Zhiqiu Shi Yu asked: "Are you sure this is not a true portrayal of your heart?"

Xia Zhiqiu Shi Yu took a long hair and stood in front of Yingli Pear. Indifferently said: "Only the brain circuit of Zecun will be my inner portrayal. The story and reality of anime are different. Do you Like Alice, are you really the one who is loved by the father all the time?"

"you!"

A pear table of Yingli pear stood up and dissatisfied and snorted: "I thought that what kind of plot will you write about Xia Shizi? I didn't expect it to be such a simple plot? How can such a story compare with thousands of lives? Murakami's short story?"

"It’s better to write than someone can't write it?" Xia Zhiqiu Yu Yu dissatisfied.

"I am so good at some of the original plots, and you can write such a story!" Yingli pear was not too good to insert the waist.

This time, Mu Fan did not refute Yingli Pear. Instead, he put down the manuscript and said seriously: "It is true that only such a plot seems to be a bit difficult to win the Qianshou Village."

If you can make a short story, there are many memories in Mufan. For example, the past "Your Name" and "Shaping of Sound" are very good plots, but this time he did not choose to write. Out of these plots. ”

Because the flow of copying books is not always the first, only the powerful one is the king.

It’s true that the world may be almost impeccable in the scripts of Xin Haicheng and Hayao Miyazaki. They can’t help but want tears and feel deeply, but they can’t say that they are very good. No one can surpass him in a parallel world.

Not to mention others, the bald head Wu Ke, who once knew the B1 production team, might write a good script.

Just like the "Accelerating the World" and "Blessings for the Better World" that Mufan copied from the book, although the sales volume is good, there are still some difficulties in surpassing the Qianshou Village.

Perhaps it is not impossible for Qianshou Village to be enlisted in such a world. It is not impossible to write a short story to become a script that transcends Xinhaicheng.

But Xia Zhiqiu Shi Yu really came to this step with her talent. If she said, her sister has just stepped into the university. Her writing novels are very powerful and potential.

Therefore, Mu Fan planned that he would not participate in the revision of a comic book. The whole story was all handled by the school sister alone.

After that, Mu Fan smiled and added: "I guess the comic story of the sister is not the only one?"

Xia Zhiqiu’s poems shined in front of him, and they came together in front of Mufan. The long and narrow beauty, the hair hanging on the shoulders, staring at Mufan’s eyes, smirked: “Sure enough, it’s a younger brother, you can see it. Yes, this is just an outline. The real story needs to be written through the syllabus. The short story is that it doesn't need so many spur lines to fill in. As long as the main line is integrated, the writing and sentences are quite meaningful. It’s okay to be impressed."

Wen Yu's soft voice made Mu Fan's spirit shocked. He looked up and saw the face of the school sister. The face of the school sister was very delicate. The snowy face contained no trace of impurities, fresh and refined, beautiful. .

Because the school sister looked down at her in the chair, a few soft hairs happened to fall on the tip of Mufan's nose. The fragrance of the girl mixed in the hair came, which made Mufan's heart beat faster. Up, his face was reddish and bowed, but he happened to see the two peaks of the school sister's tight clothes. Even under the cover of the underwear, you can still see the perfect contour of the snow. color.

Seeing that Mu Fan did not speak for a long time, Xia Zhiqiu Shi Yu’s eyes narrowed and stunned, and realized that what Mu Fan had just seen, the pretty face smashed a blush, and blamed: “Study brother, Lust....."

Listening to this, Mu Fanzhen’s coughing and reasoning, the thing just happened is completely force majeure, but he also looked at it anyway, and then he could not change this fact. He could only apologize and smile. The topic said: "Sister, we only have four days left, or let's talk about the new story! If you get the first place in this short comic, you have the chance to make a movie."

Originally, I saw that Xia Zhiqiu’s poet Yu, who was fascinated by Mufan’s, was somewhat unhappy. Yingli pear immediately rushed to say: “Yes, let’s tell the story soon.”

Seeing that Mu Fan didn't want to continue on the topic just now, Xia Zhiqiu Yu Yu could only take out a printed manuscript from the cupboard and put it on the table: "This is all the story about the short story novel."

Due to the tight time, Mu Fan and Ying Li pear read it carefully.

In Mu Fan’s view, all the plots are much more exciting than the outline. After all, the outline is only an overview of the plot. The same outline is placed in the hands of the author of the Great God and the hands of ordinary authors will write two completely different styles. And the charm, this is the gap between the authors.

Xia Zhiqiu Shi Yu wrote a textual author of the Manga Festival [Mu Fan] and [Pears] who grew up together, and finally failed in the finals of the comics festival. The story of the ending.

Because of the failure, the online comic book readers who had expected for their three-person group saw that the consensus discussion on the Internet was a rainy day for the text of the novel, and they left them despite the retention of Mufan and pear.

Half a month later, Yi Zhiyu submitted the electric shock library to become the author of the shock library. Although the first book had some achievements, because the online expectations were too high, she could not figure out how to write the second book. .

Helpless, she met her former companion again, hoping she would return to the studio to re-write the comics and tell her that she always believed in her text and never resent her because of the last failure.

I can't go back to the rain, but I don't plan to go back. I want to prove her talent with light novels and prove her strength.

After the end of the first book, she was looking for the writing method of the second book. She looked at the comments on the Internet, sorted out the fault of the book, and wrote in the way that the readers thought, the way others expected. The second book, in the end, failed, and even all the readers who loved her became disgusted from love, and even the editors no longer pay attention to her.

The rainy heart has fallen from the highest expectation point and has become the biggest disappointment from the expectation of the second book before it was destroyed by the readers.

At this moment, she remembered the failure of the companion comics festival a few years ago, and the irony on the Internet. She was disheartened. She felt that her only writing would betray her, and she decided to go to the river in the room for a few days. Ending my useless life, it happened that my companion was going to find her at this moment. I saw this scene and desperately jumped into the deep water river to rescue her.

The next step is the very inspirational plot. In the enlightenment of the companions and the comfort of the persuasion, as well as a few short stories of the ball and happy, the rain decided to help the companions to fulfill their wishes and began to carefully write a short text. Because the comic festival is about to begin, the text of the three days of rain and sleep is finally finished before the comic festival. The three people worked together for three days and finally finished the short comics.

And they also defeated the team that defeated the team that won the first time, and finally got the best text. In the interview, she said that she wanted to get the first heart of the comic festival, and now Only after understanding the importance of the partners, she was successful with her companionship, because she was not alone. The whole story changed from the original repression to the mutual encouragement of the companions. Inspirational story.

Moreover, when interviewing a male companion, the male companion said that the reason why he helped the rain was because his relatives and friends who wanted to be cartoonists when he was a child did not support him. Only the school’s rain has always encouraged him. Let him go this step, and he also wants to complete the ideal of rain at this time.

When I heard this, I was moved by tears in the rain, and finally got the courage to confess with the male companion who had been helping her in the interview.

The male companion also extended her hand to her: "I have a love for you since I was a child..."

In the end, the two people came together because of love, and with the love color that people yearn for, the story ends....

"and many more!"

Looking at the whole story, suddenly a dissatisfied cry came, Mu Fan and Xia Zhiqiu Yu Yu went back, only to see the English pear pear "啪" put the text on the table, biting the teeth beautiful Xia Xia Qiu Shiyu, uncomfortable said: "Is this yy a bit too much, the three people in the studio, because of what has been doing things all the rain can get love, that has been silent to help Murfan There is not a few words in the "Pears" that are in the rain!"

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