Reacting in time the King of Heroes activated his [Meteor] and covered himself with his golden aura while dodging Sirzechs' attacks at high speed.

While dodging the attacks, Gilgamesh quickly extended his hand creating dozens of swords of light and rained them down on Sirzechs.

But before they even hit Sirzechs they were destroyed by the aura of the Crimson Maou.

Gilgamesh's shock that his attack was stopped so easily meant that he could not react to the next attack.

Gilgamesh stopped in midair as she watched surprised by what was occurring, his entire surroundings were covered by an immense cloak created of [Power of Destruction] surrounding him.

"I really can't beat you in speed, so all I need to do is prevent any chance of escape."

Sirzechs announced in victory as he watched all his power contain Gilgamesh.

Gilgamesh knew that there was no way he could escape at that moment, even with his top speed he would still be affected by the [Power of Destruction] and not even his [Susanoo] could protect him from all that energy.

Seeing this, Gilgamesh could only smile.

"To think that I would be driven to this" Gilgamesh said calmly as he watched the [Power of Destruction] surround him.

"Now is the end, King of Heroes. You have lost."

With his announcement, Sirzechs strengthened his power with an even greater amount of his [Demonic Power].

Even as Sirzechs' power began to advance, piercing Gilgamesh's aura to annihilate him, all the King of Heroes did was laugh.

"Do you really think you can beat me with that alone Sirzechs?" asked Gilgamesh sarcastically.

Even though Sirzechs' destructive aura was almost crashing into Gilgamesh's body, he didn't seem to mind.

"If you have a card up your sleeve feel free to use it."

Similarly Sirzechs replied sarcastically.

"If you insist so much" Gilgamesh said with a laugh.

While Gilgamesh's body was totally consumed by the [Power of Destruction] Sirzechs only heard two words.

"Balance Breaker"

With these single words Sirzechs then was able to realize that Gilgamesh had never taken him seriously.

And only now would he fight with everything.

Sirzechs' eyes turned to the sky and the Maou had a vision of huge storm clouds covering the entire region, the earth trembled as giant gale force winds raged through the entire region.

The sea was churning and violently invading the land, huge tornadoes with power to sweep away entire cities became mundane as quantities so large they couldn't even be counted appeared.

From the storm clouds, immense lightning strikes fell upon the earth annihilating entire mountains as if they were made of nothing but paper, torrential rains fell with such intensity that even the most trained of warriors could barely move due to the pressure.

Sirzechs can only safely stay in his place thanks to expanding his aura of [Power of Destruction].

And turning his gaze to the source of this, Sirzechs saw a small light shining just at the center of all the power he had used to annihilate Gilgamesh.

"Vanish darkness"

The moment the voice proclaimed all the darkness created by Sirzechs had been dispelled.

The Crimson Maou stared in disbelief as he saw his power dissipated as if it were nothing.

And at the center of it all was Gilgamesh.

But the King of Heroes looked totally different than before.

His hair had literally become golden flames as it swayed in the wind, tattoos in the form of blue lightning bolts appeared as they marked his body. Gilgamesh's clothing that was most peculiar, half of it looked like boiling magma, red and black energy covering it, while the other half glowed in an icy blue hue and every second seemed to change taking the form of different elements, Gilgamesh's crimson eyes glowed with tiny flecks of red, blue, green, brown, yellow, white and black as these colors surrounded his irises. Behind Gilgamesh were seven pairs of wings, each pair taking the form of an element such as Fire, Water, Wind, Lightning, Earth, Shadows and Light.

It could not be said that Gilgamesh controlled the elements of nature.

He had literally become a personified Avatar of every single element in existence.

"I see. So this monstrous power is your Balance Breaker."

Sirzechs voice no longer came out firmly, but trembled with fear at the power he was feeling.

At this Gilgamesh merante smiled.

"Yes, it has been quite a while since I used this Balance Breaker, the true power of my [Zenith Tempest], the [Wrath of Heaven]" Gilgamesh announced his new form.

Gilgamesh's Balance Breaker had been announced to the world, the Balance Breaker of the [Zenith Tempest]; [Wrath of Heaven] the [Wrath of Heaven].

Seeing the power of his enemy, Sirzechs grasped his hand as dozens of deep, condensed spheres of [Power of Destruction] advanced against Gilgamesh.

Each of those spheres had the power to erase even a high-level deity, and with that amount even a member of the Top 10 could be killed.

But Gilgamesh didn't even move when he saw the attack coming towards him, all he did was narrow his eyes.

And in the next second dozens of huge bolts of lightning fell from the sky crashing into each of the spheres.

And to Sirzechs' perplexity the lightning annihilated the spheres as if it were nothing and continued to advance against Sirzechs who was forced to dodge.

The Crimson Maou began to run across the battlefield while dodging all the attacks he could, yet the rain of lightning continued to fall on him without so much as a miss.

Seeing the futility of his ranged attacks, 12 bat wings sprouted from Sirzechs back as he flew into the sky. Wings with claws sharp enough to cut through steel outlined by the crimson power of destruction were interrupted by a golden barrier as a fist crackling with Bael's characteristic power was caught in a white aura.

Sirzechs' fist fortified with his [Power of Destruction] had been completely stopped by Gilgamesh with a single hand.

An intense sacred aura, created from the [White God Slayer Magic] covered the body of the King of Heroes.

The [Power of Destruction], although it was capable of erasing anything, was demonic in nature and, as such, faltered when it met its polar opposite, the Sacred Light, and in such quantities, absolute ruin was paralyzed. The [Power of Destruction] attacked violently in defiance of the Sacred Aura that protected its enemy.

Yet a wall of pure kinetic energy flew from him, hurling Satan across the battlefield.

"Is this the best the strongest of Satans can offer?" Gilgamesh asked disappointedly.

Lightning exploded from Sirzechs' fingers, infused with [Power of Destruction], and flashed toward him.

The lightning flowed through him coalescing in his outstretched hand. Lightning was a great offensive element, as it had incredible speed and penetrating power.

Gilgamesh didn't even move, he let Sirzechs' lightning strike him.

Strengthened by the [Power of Destruction] Lightning pierced the arm of the King of Heroes, tearing it off.

Sirzechs' eyes widened at seeing Gilgamesh unresponsive, but he soon understood why.

Gilgamesh's destroyed arm soon regenerated as flames emerged from the wound and formed a new arm.

"You won't get by on this alone," Gilgamesh said scornfully.

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Some useful information. #1 English is not even close to my main language, so don't expect good grammar, just something readable. #2 This fanfic, it's just something to pass the time, so I don't expect anything at the level of paid writers. #3 If you did not like the fanfic, just remove from your library. #4 Yes, the protagonist is not how you want him to be, and if you're feeling bad, write your own fanfic.

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if you like Mc reincarnation who doesn't become himself and instead becomes a simp gilgamesh complex then this is for you. all good ideas at first but turn bad when MC is corrupted with gilgamesh's memory and it becomes like him instead. i wonder why so many 5 star spam reviews on webnovel do you guys have bad taste?. I'm going to guess there will be "hey guys this is a fanfic" thought, it's a cliché.

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I have to say he who was able to kill a high class devil in just an hour was evenly matched after 9 year of training i don't see the reason why he should have system when you will nerf him. At the same time if he really even worked i am not taking about working hard he should be able to fight with Sairoge just because of his bloodline. I am just going to see how much you will nerf him. I don't even find any real review. Because everyone is so interested on Gil.

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It's alright but a bit boring due to the usual op infinite wealth and system store combo. Don't bother with the first 15 chapters nothing relevant happens. Most of the story in the first 15 chapters consist of stats and skill spams, even then every few chapters they occur again there is no sense of game related progression as a result and makes that story mechanic look like an eyesore taking away time from the story. Neither does the mc decide to become a devil and make his own peerage which is arguably the only unique selling point of the DXD series, as every other selling point is done in other fandoms and much better. If you aren't or don't become a devil in DxD, it's like becoming a television guide maker in the world of pokemon after choosing to reincarnate there. DxD is like pokemon with people, you got a limited team size and you challenge the rating games together. That's essentially a Pokemon league setting with your captured pokemon. The other aspects are the usual DBZ type encounters that grand you an uphill struggle against ever more powerful oppnents and fight to watch each time... Thirdly is the ecchi harem component. Simply put, this fic doesn't make use of the three selling points of the DxD series, nor does it make use of the other selling points introduced in a meaningful manner. Its like watching a humor less one punch man series, ft an unbeatable gamer and little to no emotional anything. That's fine for many, but it is why I rate the story the was I did.

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It's wasn't great at start but it's was pretty much Okey. But more it goes the worst it gets. Because in the latest chapters, author just like that *forget* some information and just like that start to follow Canon and make nonsense. Retarted nonsense out of this novel. Nothing new, I can handle it... No that's not even a mine problem. Oh no. In the latest chapter out prideful and mighty mc that like to imitate King of heroes catch a serious illness. Bipolarity. And my God, in one second this guy be a gilgamesh in another dumb chuni teenager - well done. Brilliant just brilliant. P. S. Some guys was pointing out in comments that author doesn't have ideas - and yep, that is the case. Because after those comments chapters become even worse. A fitting end for imitation like mc.

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Author of this Fanfic, I hereby tell you that continue this Fanfic. Don't be discouraged because some people tell you it is bad or you have many mistakes, etc. Make them your stepping stone for improvement, many people always feel discouraged if this happens. So always acknowledge what people say about your mistake, and improve yourself from this mistake.

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Sorry to be blunt, but isn't this fan-fiction too overrated? I mean, it's decent, but in my opinion, it isn't that good to be in the top 10. The MC in the early chapters have some kinda personality disorder where in one moment he says he's ruthless but in the next moment, he spares his enemy. The grammar isn't even that good. He even got editors and stuff that doesn't really change anything about the writing quality. Regarding what I think of the story development, I didn't even get past chapter 60, so I don't know about that. All of this is only my opinion as a reader. For those fans of this fan-fiction that got triggered by this review, I'm sorry, but I can only see this as a decent fan-fic and not at the level to be in the top 10.

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Gilgamesh in DxD, nice concept and potential, but Big oof. Sadly Disappointed with the fight scene. The writing style is the big downside of this novel, author decide to overdetailed some useless information(Author can just use auxiliary chapters, but decide to infodump useless information on the chapter), but left the other scene(especially battle scene) with minimal effort, feels like reading diary. There's also some confusing word that doesn't make sense, and some inconsistency like skill name (ex: Devil Slayer of Lightning, then Lightning Devil Slayer). This is not about grammar anymore, more of the laziness of not proof reading it carefully before posting the chapter

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Author of this Fanfic, I hereby tell you that continue this Fanfic. Don't be discouraged because some people tell you it is bad or you have many mistakes, etc. Make them your stepping stone for improvement, many people always feel discouraged if this happens. So always acknowledge what people say about your mistake, and improve yourself from this mistake.

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I don't Know why this is even in the Top rated novels, it just seems kinda physically impossible considering what I read. The world building and some attention to details is decent but the Characters and Developments are infuriating. The pronouns for most times are ok but the Grammer is horrendous and most of the passages are butchered or outright copy-paste from other novels. The MC is Gilgamesh in Name only, his actions and though process scream underdeveloped and in a honest sense Beta, for ex. in 75ish chapter his girl is almost murdered by a priest who didn't want to continue the conversation and suddenly wants to speak after seeing mc and some powerful foes and what does he do? He welcomes him Inside and isn't even mad!!! That's my rant and opinion. If you want to read it my recommendation will be a big fat no.

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