God Descends the Second Element

　　Meet Xia Shizi? From the usual chats of He Xia Shizi, Wang Hao can already judge that the other party must be a character like Yamato Nadeshiko in reality.

　　 is not only gentle to others, she must also be a goddess who exudes a literary girlish air.

　　 suddenly wanted to meet such a girl, he didn't know how to respond for a while.

　　 This should be true, right? !

Kasumi Shiko is different from Shiina Shinairo. The former was originally a genius writer, and what he said was rationally thought. Although the latter is a world-class genius, his brain's thinking is also different from ordinary people. It should be said to be innocent and straightforward, or without scheming. What?

　　 But suddenly I got an appointment or something, which really caught people off guard. Indeed, the two sides have known each other online for a while...

　　 Just because the other party's short sentence is enough to make him think about it.

　　 Poor Wang Hao has normal attributes in other aspects, only the emotional aspect can compete with Zhen Bai, or even surpass it a bit.

　　 He dared to pack his votes. He was single for 18 years in his previous life, and he has been single for 16 years after being reborn in this world. Together, he has been single for 34 years, and he has been single for 34 years! !

　　 can be regarded as sad for those who hear it, tears for those who see it.

　　【Xia Shizi: What's wrong? Doesn't Haojun don't want to meet me? (sad)】

　　What a joke! How is it possible not to make an appointment? !

　　Even Wang Hao, who was not emotionally slow, found that the opportunity to get out of the order was right in front of him, and there was only one thing to do.

　　 Make an appointment, make an appointment! !

　　 [God Lord: Nothing like that, but suddenly I want to meet Xia Shizi, and I am a little overwhelmed with joy. I don’t know how to face Xia Shizi, because I’m a person...]

In the end, Wang Hao’s hidden inferiority complex slowly emerged. He was always a cool person in his previous life, but he was actually very lonely. After unable to make friends, he gradually began to feel inferiority. .

　　 Even when I came here to recognize all kinds of people, I still couldn't eliminate the inferiority complex.

　　【Xia Shizi: So what about this? I don't hate Haojun's place, because I have also experienced it. 】

　　 Upon seeing this text, Wang Hao was suddenly touched, and at the same time he felt a sense of guilt.

　　 [God: I’m sorry, but reminds you of bad memories. 】

　　 Unexpectedly, Xia Shizi, who had always been considerate, had such a lonely past. He began to regret why he had to say more.

　　【Xia Shizi: I am very happy to learn more about Haojun. And compared to this, now I still think of a secret sign to meet. 】

　　 [God: Do you still need a password when you meet? 】

　　Wang Hao knew that Xia Shizi deliberately broke the topic, and he didn't want to continue talking about those heavy past events. He was already embarrassed enough just now, and he must have left a bad impression on the other party...

　　【Xia Shizi: Of course, don’t you think there is a demeanor of an agent? I hope Haojun can think of a handsome signal. 】

Eh! Let me think about it? !

　　 Many clips flashed in his mind. He remembered the secret codes used by the agents in the movie to communicate. They were indeed mysterious and handsome.

　　Is it the same for ordinary offline parties? Wang Hao has never participated in an offline party, so naturally he is not clear.

　　 The code should be used to prevent the embarrassment of the wrong person, but I always feel something is wrong, it feels weird...

　　 He could think of a lot of the secret codes, and one of the most impressive classic secret codes was even more unforgettable. He subconsciously typed and sent it with both hands.

　　 [God Lord: When we met, we used "the king to cover the earth tiger, the river demon in the pagoda town" as the code. You said the first sentence, how about the last sentence? 】

　　Wait for him to come back to his senses, only to notice the full of the second-year aura of this sentence, and cover his face with a headache with his left hand. Wouldn't he be regarded as a second-year boy?

　　 Unfortunately, there is no withdrawal function, so I can only watch the messages sent in the past.

[Xia Shizi: Haojun is really very literary. I have read the novel called '5 cm per second'. Although it is only a short chapter, the kind of writing makes me involuntarily immersed in it, and I look forward to it more and more. The plot behind. 】

　　 Why did you forget the business?

　　Wang Hao was startled slightly. The reason why he logged into Penguin was to tell Xia Shizi what he thought of the'Love Metronome'.

　　 calmed down for a while, and objectively posted his evaluation of the'Love Metronome'.

　　 [God Lord: No, teacher Xia Shizi is amazing. I also went to read the "Love Metronome" today. It gave me a great feeling, but I felt that I lacked important things. 】

　　【Xia Shizi: Really? I hope Haojun can tell me the truest opinion. 】

[Divine Master: Simply put, you lack routines in the novel. By the end of the first volume, the plot development is obviously beginning to be unstable. Because the relationship between the hero and the protagonist develops too smoothly, it will be difficult for the readers to be moved next. After all, what you wrote It is a love novel. 】

　　 These views are entirely his own. In his previous life, Wang Hao had also been a writer for many years. Although he was still on the street, he still had this vision.

　　【Xia Shizi: Then I should add some... routines to the novel? But I don’t know what to do...]

　　 If other writers tell him that he can't make routines, Wang Hao will definitely spit it out. If Xia Shizi says, he chooses to believe it.

　　 There are two reasons. One is because the other party has just come into contact with writing~www.readwn.com~ The writing style is still in finalization, and he did not choose another path to follow suit; the second reason is, do you need any reason to believe in your friends?

　　 can't do routines? It's okay, let me teach you step by step. For Wang Hao, this kind of thing is pretty commonplace.

　　 [God Lord: According to the type of novel you write, I think we should add an enduring routine, although it looks very old, but it does not hinder the reader's love, that is, the hero saves the beauty.

　　 The lack of twists and turns of love is too plain, the male protagonist should go through various tests, and finally defeat the boss and the female protagonist together, which increases the reader's interest in reading. 】

　　【Xia Shizi: So that's it, it did stabilize the plot development and create more exciting stories, thank you! 】

　　 The addition of routines was something she had never thought of before, perhaps because most of the works are now full of the same routines, and Xia Shizi rejects these instinctively.

　　'Love Metronome' is precisely because of this, with the first volume, it attracted many readers. It is considered a clear stream in the light novel world, but it is a love light novel in the final analysis.

　　 Heroes to save the United States seems to be a very old routine, but most of the successful light novels in love are basically used.

　　 The key lies in how the author perfectly integrates into the routine. Although it is the first time for Xia Shizi to write a novel, she was reminded by Wang Hao and is confident to create a better story for everyone.

ps: Thanks to the book friend "Lone Pity You Banyue" for the 200 rewards. I gave the first reward in this book, which gave the author a feeling of recognition. Because of school, it may be updated late today. But the author will definitely complete the two more in return.

　　 I also want to thank other book friends for their support to the author. It’s really nice to meet you.