God Descends the Second Element

　　 In ancient times, Liu Xiahui could not sit in her arms. Wang Hao thought he could not reach that level. But after seeing the peaceful eyes of the true white, the impetuosity in his heart disappeared like a stranger, leaving only a touch of warmth.

　　 Facing the temptation in front of him, between the beasts and the beasts, Wang Hao finally failed to choose to transform into a wolf, so he quietly appreciated the manuscript in his hand.

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　　 After five minutes passed, Wang Hao's expression became weird after reading the white manuscript quietly, and he finally understood why the manuscript would be rejected as Shiina Makiro's world-class painter.

　　 "You should know the reason yourself."

　　 Putting down the manuscript, Wang Hao asked straightforwardly, believing that Shiina Mashiro knew this question himself.

　　 "Well, the plot is really boring..."

　　 Lost nodded, just as Wang Hao thought, Shiina Mashiro knew the reason for a long time. From the beginning to now, he has submitted articles many times, but no one passed. Iida Ayano also raised such questions.

　　 Although Shiina Mashiro lacks common sense, she still has her own opinions in her heart. Even geniuses will have the same things as ordinary people.

　　 "The plot is really boring, it can be said that it is completely brainless. There are so many things that people don't understand. It can make readers crazy."

　　Wang Hao is outspoken, since he has decided to teach Zhenbai to learn manga, he should clearly point out the defect to the other party.

"Ok…"

　　 Shiina Mashiro only said this sentence, and his mood was obviously lowered. It is unbearable to criticize a girl in this way. Using white lies will only make Mashiro go further and further on the wrong path, so Wang Hao decided to tell the truth.

"First of all, let’s talk about the style of painting. You have made every character too perfect, and you can hardly find any flaws. Any passerby can match the protagonist’s appearance. The most important thing is that the character’s personality is too peaceful. ! Not only the male protagonist has a peaceful personality, but other characters including the male protagonist's rivals have become popular. Although this is only a cartoon, it is really boring due to the same setting of all the characters' personalities."

The character of the protagonist of the comics is too important. No matter what the characters in the comics are, they have their own unique personalities, such as optimism, black belly, arrogant, passionate, etc. It is the unique personality that gives the character’s soul and allows readers to be more Clearly understand the nature of manga.

　　 However, Shiina Mashiro's manga has a setting that is impossible to see in other manga. All the characters have the same personality, and it is impossible to reflect the strong personal charm of the manga characters.

　　 The tone of voice paused, and he got up from the chair, Wang Hao walked to the other side of the bed and sat down, just facing each other, he could look directly at Shiina Zhenbai, and continued to speak.

"Then there is the most important plot. Your comic content is simply despising everyone! After all, a love rival appears. Why did he disappear inexplicably just after he appeared on the stage? Even the cute pet dog is not let go, is it? Because it is a pet of a rival in love, should it disappear as a matter of course?! And please don't underestimate love, there is no love in the world that is so smooth that you can't imagine it, even if it is fictional, it is impossible!"

　　 Wang Hao said what he wanted to say in one breath, and noticed that his tone was a little agitated, but Zhenbai was so innocent in the plot that he disappointed him.

As a manga artist, Shiina Mashiro can be said to be not even a newcomer in other aspects except for the painter. If divided into four test papers, he will not hesitate to give the painter a full 100 points, as for the other three. Zhangjuanzi is absolutely no exception, all scores are zero.

　　 On a comprehensive average, an average of 60 points per subject can be regarded as a just-qualified cartoonist. On average, Zhenbai has only 25 points per subject. These scores are all obtained by painting skills.

　　 really disappointed him, but Wang Hao did not continue to criticize, after all, Zhenbai still lacks a lot of life experience in life, and it is almost a blank sheet of paper with no trace.

"I am sorry."

　　 Shiina Mashiro's current voice is still as flat as water, and it's hard to find the loss if you don't listen carefully.

　　 But Wang Hao still noticed, and sighed softly. It seems that what he said just now was a bit too much.

　　 "Don't worry about the aspects I mentioned just now, and I will teach you slowly."

　　 The reason why Wang Hao said the shortcomings just now is to make Zhenbai aware of the shortcomings of a cartoonist, but it seems that I have noticed these a long time ago, and he is very pleased that he has not refuted it.

　　 On the other hand, Shiina is really a genius painter after all, but he does not have a hint of arrogance.

　　 "Then please teach me how to shape the character, and how to create the plot, please!"

　　 really white raised his low head, with a serious expression on his small face, and asked earnestly.

　　 "Hmm, even if you suddenly say that..."

　　 Wang Hao said with some embarrassment, the teaching just now really needs to be implemented, he didn't know where to start for a while, and suddenly it was obviously impossible for Zhenbai to restore common sense.

All cartoonists have come here one step at a time, and it is impossible for Wang Hao to reap success without paying. He has made changes to the five centimeters per second and Dragon Ball. Starting from setting the goal of creating a two-dimensional empire, he began to work hard. Work silently.

　　 For example, there are a lot of related materials in the room. They are all co-produced books related to games, manga, and animation. When he is free, he often reads it, and now he has come into contact with a lot of new knowledge.

　　 The topic is a bit too far off, but what I want to express is that it takes time and effort to get closer to the goal.

　　Many people in the comics world are now respected as "teachers". They basically start from other people's comic assistants. After doing this for several years, they gradually learn all kinds of knowledge before they try to make their debut.

　　 Wait... Comic assistant? !

"I currently have a work that is very suitable for real white. It is a work I am creating. The name is "Five Centimeters Per Second". Your painting style is fully up to the requirements. Just follow the plot development above to draw, so that you can accumulate some experience! What do you think?"

　　Wang Hao clapped his hands excitedly, and the beautiful and touching style of painting created by Zhenbai last time has made him unforgettable.

At the beginning, he never thought about giving comics to five centimeters per second, because it is difficult to express the touching in a novel with pictures at a speed of five centimeters per second, especially as a comic, it is even more difficult as a comic, which requires a cartoonist's style to the extreme, so He gave up the idea, or never thought about it at all.

　　 But "Five Centimeters Per Second" seems to be a tailor-made work for Shiina Masaki. With the majestic style of painting and the gloomy plot, Wang Hao's eyes have already seen the ending...