Great Teacher's Youth Story

　　She remembered that when she came in, she opened the window with her own hands, but at this time, the window was closed, so it goes without saying that there are only two people in this classroom.

　　After thinking about this, even Yukino's eyes softened.

　　"Oh? You're awake~!"

　　At this time, Hachiman also found that Yukino had woken up, and immediately said hello.

　　"Ok!"

　　Yukino couldn't help but nodded at Hachiman.

　　"Hello!"

　　At this moment, Yui's voice sounded, and then Yui appeared in the service department.

　　"Hello, Yui!"

　　Yukino also greeted Yui.

　　Soon, Zaimokuza also appeared in the service department, and then sat across from the three of Yawata.

　　Even at this time, Zaimokuza has a strong self-confidence, obviously in his own works, and he doesn't know where his self-confidence comes from.

　　"Okay, I'm ready, let's start your evaluation!" Zai Muza was looking forward to it, and he was already looking forward to the full praise.

　　Where did this guy get his confidence from?

　　"So... who's coming first?"

　　Hachiman looked at Yukino and Yui and asked.

　　"I'll come first!"

　　Xuenuo said, she was no longer vomiting unpleasantly.

　　"Row!"

　　Hachiman nodded in agreement.

　　"Classmate Zaimuzuo, I just want to say about your novel. I don't understand it at all. After reading it once, I have absolutely no idea what story you are telling!"

　　Yukino started to slap the wooden seat!

　　"' ‖ Swish!"

　　Zaimuza's face turned pale, but Yukino continued!

　　"And what is the thing on the first few pages? Is this the setting? Then why is the setting so long? Shouldn't it be in the story at the beginning? With such a long setting, not many people will be willing to read it. ...

　　That's okay, the key is that there are still so many mistakes, even typos, why are there so many sentence errors?And the development of the plot is completely inexplicable. One second is still learning, and the next second is invincible...

　　So, although I'm not a professional editor, but at my level, this work really cannot be recognized by me, and I don't think it can be published! "

　　At this time, Yukino made a merciless criticism.

　　(do Li Zhao)

　　"..."

　　After being criticized by Xuenai, the fat man Zaimuzuo couldn't help sitting on the ground. There was no way to refute it. There was no way. Xuenai's aura was too strong, and he didn't dare to. There is the slightest objection.

　　"Okay, I'm done, how about you? Do you have any opinions?" Yukino breathed a sigh of relief, then looked at Hachiman and Yui.

　　"Hachiman!!!"

　　At this moment, the fat man Zaigiza looked at Hachiman with tears in his eyes, with an expression that I needed comfort.

　　Hachiman couldn't help but feel embarrassed looking at Zaimiza's expression, but...you can't make him praise him against his will, but he can't make Zaimiza hit too hard!

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Chapter 331 The Fat Man Who Was Hit (1/3)

　　Hachiman phrased the language, after all, it is impossible to let Zaimiza suffer too much!

　　"That... Zaimuza, where did you plagiarize your novel?"

　　Hachiman couldn't help but asked with a smile.

　　He was looking forward to the Zaigiza of Yawata, but at this time, after hearing what Yawata said, his whole body turned white.

　　"Woooooo!!!"

　　Even if he was as strong as a wooden seat, at this time, he couldn't help crying, which was really shocking.

　　Seeing Zaimuza in the fake cry, Hachiman became speechless, and couldn't help but look at Yui, "That... Yui, what's your evaluation?"

　　"Ah! Me!"

　　Yui never thought that Hachiman would mention her, she knew that she was hiding to the side on purpose, just hoping not to notice her!After all, she was different from Hachiman Yukino last night, and she didn't even watch it!

　　"That... Yui, you didn't even watch it, did you? Last night?" Hachiman asked with a black belly.

　　"That...hahaha!"

　　After hearing Hachiman's question, Yui couldn't help laughing awkwardly, "That... I originally read it, but who knows, after reading this novel, I fell asleep directly, so there is no way... …”

　　"Crack! 393"

　　After hearing Yui's words, Zaimokuza, who had been hit hard in the first place, could not help but suffer an even greater blow, and his heart was broken!

　　"Woooooo! It's too bullying!"

　　This guy, Zaimuzuo, is crying like a [-] jin fat man, no...he is a [-] jin fat man!

　　"Alright! Alright! Don't get hit too hard, Zaimokuza!"

　　After seeing this, Hachiman couldn't help but look at Zaimiza seriously.

　　"Jaimiza, do you really want to write a novel?" At this time, Hachiman couldn't help looking at Zaimiza seriously and asked.

　　"Of course it is!"

　　At this time, Zaimokuza couldn't help but get serious, "I really want to write novels!"

　　"Then... what's the reason?" Hachiman asked, looking at Zaimiza.

　　"If it is why, then there is only one reason, and that is..."

　　At this moment, Zaigiza stood up, and that tall (fat) body stood in front of the three of Yawata.

　　"That's... I want to write the world in my heart, the story!"

　　"Enough is enough, then the rest... is that you need to work hard! Zaimiza!" Yawata looked at Zaimiza seriously and said, "For a person with a dream, no one can ignore, what you need now, It is to learn the language well, at least to learn the grammar, and then learn to tell stories...

　　You should read more of other people's novels, see how they write, and then imitate their writing style, and then write your own story, of course, this is just the basics, the specific... depends on the story itself It's not attractive anymore, this depends on you! At this time, Hachiman looked at Zaimiza seriously and said.

　　"Hachiman!"

　　After hearing this, Zaimiza couldn't help but be moved, and looked at Hachiman with emotion. Sure enough, this is his brother!

　　"As this guy said, since you have a dream, no one will ignore it. For your dream, we will help you, at least... As a reader, I believe we can help you!" At this time, I couldn't help but smile. Those who work hard will not be hated.

　　"Really... thank you so much!"

　　Zaimuzuo bowed, and then took his manuscript. He wanted to revise it carefully, and then show it to them after he was done.

　　"Huh, another commission completed!"

　　Yukino sighed in relief as she looked at Zaimokuza who was leaving.

　　"But this guy... It can be said that it is a long-term entrustment. At least during this period of high martial arts, he is also busy!" Hachiman shook his head.

　　"Next time... Next time I will definitely watch it carefully!" Yui also vowed.

　　"Hahahahaha!"

　　General Wu Gao's efficiency is still very fast, but on the second day, the school sports department came up with a game plan, and after obtaining the consent, it notified all the students of the school.

　　"The total Wugao Tennis Singles Competition is open to men and women. The winner will be rewarded with a two-day trip to Hokkaido for two people? All meals and lodging?"

　　After seeing this, all the people were excited, especially for the students, it was a great attraction!

　　"The game starts next Monday, ends on Friday, and then you can travel to Hokkaido on Saturday and Sunday. It's just perfect! Participate, must participate!"

　　At this time, all the students were excited and wanted to participate.

　　"So...for this tennis match, all of you can participate. Of course, if you want to win, it's not an easy thing, so those who participate should register with the monitor!"

　　Jing Kawai stood on the podium, and then looked at the students in the classroom, and immediately laughed, and when he left, he also gave Hachiman a look.

　　"Really, it was said that I would participate!" Hachiman couldn't help but feel helpless.

　　"Hachiman, will you participate?"

　　At this moment, Ayaka Totsuka who was in front of Hachiman suddenly turned around and looked at Hachiman expectantly and asked.

　　"Totsuka!"

　　Hachiman was also surprised, but did not expect the little angel Caijia to ask himself.

　　"I decided to participate. After all, I am also very interested in the two-day tour of Hokkaido!" Hachiman nodded.

　　"That's it! That's great!"

　　Cai Jia couldn't help but feel happy after hearing this.

　　"This is... what are you happy about?" Hachiman couldn't help but be speechless, wondering why the little angel was so happy.

　　Yumiko next to her, at this time, after hearing the conversation between Yawata and Saika, she couldn't help but have an idea in her heart.

　　"Maybe... this is an opportunity!"

　　During the get out of class, Yumiko appeared in front of Hachiman while others went to sign up.

　　"Hey, dead fisheye bastard!"

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Chapter 332 Yumiko Who Walked into a Trap