Harry Potter – Approaching the Magic World

Joanne is a talented person, like the Lady Rowling in Jon's memory, this girl does have a very powerful innate talent in literature.

It’s just that the lady in Jon’s memory, she completed the long masterpiece "Harry Potter" by herself without knowing nothing about the magic world, and now Joanne is next to Jon. , Have a practical understanding of Wizarding World.

In the book created under this circumstance, some of the content in it should be better than the content in Jon's memory.

Jon can’t remember in the original book. The first chapter describes the description of Professor Dumbledore and McGonagall when the boy who survived the catastrophe was introduced eleven years ago, and what the conversation between them said. Jon doesn't remember very clearly, he just remembers the Deluminator and the cat crouching on the corner, and Hagrid riding a motorcycle from the sky.

Then there is nothing. Jon could remember not many things. Of course, he picked the main spells and plot notes, followed by the big story plots and characters, and finally was the memory.

Jon originally thought that he would remember a lot of specific descriptions when he reached Privet Road, just like when he went to Ollivander a year ago, he was in the store and recalled the classic description .

Can't remember the content of the books I have read. There may be many explanations for this kind of thing, or it is because the loss of time has consumed Jon's spirit, or the things of new student occupy his memory space , Even after Helga changed his outlook on the world several times, he began to gradually forget those things related to the past.

There are too many explanations to talk about.

In the final analysis, it is always because those things are no longer important.

The world seems to be the same world, there is no change, the sun will still rise, and rays of light will be dropped over the garden, illuminating the copper nameplate inlaid on the wall in front of the house;

Everyone in the house goes out to work day after day.

Every night is exactly the same, except that they go to the room to sleep after eating, occasionally watch TV, and occasionally relax with their lover .

Only the photos hanging on the fireplace show the passing of time and the growth and aging of people.

Time is like this.

"Our life is actually spent in such a time."

Jon completed today's magic exercise-just Occlumency and Legilimens to himself, Then he opened the door.

Nine o'clock is neither early nor late. When Jon went downstairs, Joanne had already prepared bread and milk for him, and she collated the manuscript on the table by herself.

There are not many finished manuscripts. After reading the thoughts on the first chapter of Jon's new edition, Joanne was inspired, and she spilled several pages of paper, all of which were completed last night and this morning.

"Are you up? Come over for dinner, and take a look at the content of this chapter by the way."

Joanne greeted, and Jon walked over obediently.

There is no major problem with the previous content of the first chapter. According to Jon, it was introduced from the Dursley family, emphasizing Mr. and Mrs. Dursley’s antipathy and conflicts with the magic world, as well as the wizard. Our celebration.

"I think you can add a little bit of content here. I think if you want to portray the character of Dumbledore, then you can actually put some effort on his clothes. Your MI0 file should There are photos of Dumbledore, right?"

"Yes, but there are, but I don’t think this is a good thing. After all, Mr. Dumbledore’s strength is our unimaginable, I’m worried..."

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"Don't worry about this, I will find a time to bring this matter up to Mr. Dumbledore, and find a way to get him to agree with our plan-in fact, this plan originally helped Dumbledore's ideas.

But until then, your writing should be kept confidential. Except for the Chief-In-Charge of MI0, it’s best not to spread it out. The same should be said to the person from Ministry of Magic. , Just talk about your First Layer meaning, don’t let him perceive the deeper meaning.

And, didn’t I tell you before, the main character in your story should be our'difficulty Immortal boy' instead of Dumbledore. If you write too much Dumbledore, will it be a bit overwhelming?"

"But this is not appropriate. You don't want me to write you into the story. I can Accept, but according to what you said, Mr. Dumbledore has high hopes for Harry Potter, then he will definitely pay attention to Harry Potter. If this is the case, how can we reduce his content, but also reflect his ability and attitude towards Harry? How about Harry Potter’s care? Without this guide, how would Harry Potter’s growth behave?"

"Misery will help people grow, and so does responsibility."

Jon drank A mouthful of milk: "The content of the first two chapters is mainly to explain the cause and course of Harry Potter's life here. This book faces the muggle society rather than the Wizard Society. You should understand what I mean."

Joanne is nodded, she certainly understands what Jon means. The muggle society’s yearning for mysterious power will make them interested in this wizard at first, and nothing is more like a person who grew up in a muggle family The young wizard can give people a sense of substitution-if the young wizard's experience is miserable, then sympathy will be more able to bring people into the role quickly.

This is a technique commonly used when writing fairy tales. It gives readers a more comfortable reading experience by giving the protagonist a miserable life go with a better future. There is only one problem.

"According to this line of thinking, our description of Harry Potter’s childhood is completely exaggerated to deal with it, but it can’t take too long, right?"

"Of course, you have to know that although literary creation can be a little fictional, Harry Potter is a wizard after all, and a wizard with super prestige. We cannot describe too much about his tragic childhood, which would ruin him. Wizard’s image in the hearts of the public, just write a little bit to make him be pityed. You should be able to grasp this scale, right?"

Of course Joanne has this ability, or in other words, the text itself has this ability. , Only according to the writer's own writing habits and application of techniques, it seems a little different.

She was about to write down and start revising her notes when the doorbell rang suddenly.

Jon put down the cup and was about to open the door when Joanne had stood up over there.

"Let me go."

She glanced at Jon and asked:

"Who will come so early?"

Jon also glanced at the envelope on the side of the coffee table, slightly smiled.

"Yes, our guest has arrived."