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Tatyana then became stern and used her aura on Yasenia, making her feel like the world was pressing on her. Tatyana scolded her. "Then that is even worse! Why the hell didn't you use your tail during the fight? Is that long tail of yours just to fuck!? I've been teaching you since you were little to use it and ingrained that into you, but you are beginning to use it less and less in battles. Yasenia, I'm honestly disappointed in your battle performance."

Yasenia began sweating and fumbled with her hands, her tail curling under her, but she didn't lose eye contact. Even if she had to look at her mother's angry face, which was honestly terrifying, she didn't want to disappoint her further with a half-assed disposition.

Tatyana noticed this and appreciated it. However, this won't make her scold her less fiercely and continue pressuring her with her aura, making Yasenia slightly tremble.

Andrea also didn't interrupt and instead listened closely, the same as she did in the tournament. Andrea wanted to remember Tatyana's advice toward Yasenia and guide Yasenia later if Tatyana wasn't around for whatever reason. She didn't want her dear dragoness getting weaker; instead, she wished Yasenia was the strongest so she could be out of harm's way.

Tatyana put their battle in a reproduction device, and they saw it together. She didn't say anything in the beginning since Andrea and Yasenia were just playing around slightly. However, the moment Andrea stopped being thrown flying and started sliding, Tatyana looked at Yasenia and asked, "Explain to me what you could have done."

Yasenia was still nervous over her mother's anger, but she answered with a steady tone, "I could have grabbed Andrea's leg with my tail as I swung my sword."

Tatyana nodded, "At least you haven't forgotten about that long thing above your ass!"

Then, she continued reproducing and asked Yasenia in each exchange what she could have done to finish Andrea off. After going over the fight once, it was Tatyana's turn to dissect it.

At first, when Yasenia was speaking, Andrea thought that she would have been in severe danger and lost rather easily with some moves she pointed out.

However, only when Tatyana began speaking did Andrea realize that the only reason she could even fight back was that Yasenia almost completely forgot to use her tail.

Tatyana pointed out more than 300 different chances for Yasenia to win the match if she had used her tail. And this was only at punctual moments! If she had been using it from the beginning and through the whole battle, Tatyana pointed out that Andrea would have lost in just two minutes.

Yasenia had her shoulders hunched, and she was biting her lips, frustrated at herself, as Tatyana pointed at the overwhelming amount of mistakes she made. However, she didn't lose eye contact, not even once, and listened to everything Tatyana said, absorbing it as a sponge did with water.

One hour later, Tatyana finished her analysis. Being under Tatyana's pressure for so much time had made Yasenia perspire crazily and had her hair damp and body quite wet, showing quite an alluring sight. Andrea couldn't help but steal some glances at her.

Tatyana looked at Yasenia and walked to her side with an indifferent face. Yasenia tensed, but Tatyana dissipated her aura and smiled, tiptoeing to pat her head. Yasenia felt relief washing over her, and her legs buckled, falling into Tatyana's embrace. Tatyana caressed her damp black hair and said, "Since you could maintain eye contact all this while, I can see that this wasn't because you are slacking in tempering or your will is decreasing. Remember, little treasure, use everything you have in a fight, whether it is considered dirty, underhanded, or cowardly. The winner is the only one that can smile and see tomorrow's sunrise."

Yasenia nodded and snuggled closer. These, from time to time, reprimands were hard to take because Tatyana was extremely strict and always pressured her to her limits. However, all of what Tatyana said was extremely rational and were things that were inside her ability to perform.

Tatyana didn't nitpick but analyzed her mistakes very deeply. Moreover, she always used her aura to make her experience true aura pressure when doing this, making it mentally exhausting.

However, Yasenia didn't complain; she welcomed these from time to time scoldings. She knew that they were for her own good, and she knew that Tatyana was right about what she told her. If she thought that Tatyana was wrong about something, Yasenia didn't fear speaking out, and Tatyana always listened to her.

Elder Irina spoke, "I've observed how the sword channels your energy through its energy veins and formations, and it is impressive, to say the least. I'm not confident in creating a better way to do it. The energy circulation is optimized to a very high degree and amplifies your energy release. Moreover, its energy usage efficiency is extremely high, approaching the 100%..."

Yasenia and the others nodded as they heard the details. The day passed like this, and Yasenia, Andrea, and Tatyana returned home when the sky began darkening. Since reached quite late, Yasenia went to the kitchen to prepare something for dinner and clear her mind a bit. She found doing things for her dears relaxing and always did things like these after working hard into something.

Tatyana went to the study she had in this house to clear some work that had accumulated through the afternoon while she accompanied Yasenia.

Meanwhile, Andrea went to the living room and saw all the other girls there. Andrea said in her deep and clear voice, "We are back~."

Angel and the others greeted Andrea, and Evelyn asked, "Where is Yasenia?"

Andrea said, "In the kitchen, do you need her for something?"

Angel stood up and ran toward the kitchen. Evelyn shook her head, "I was just curious. How was your day, Andrea?"

Andrea chuckled and recounted everything. Cecile nodded and said, "It is good that there is nothing wrong with that sword. I've read that too powerful things are more often than not dangerous."

Andrea said, "Well, master still has to investigate further, but I was really surprised seeing the sword be able to damaging master…."

Kali said, "It must have been quite dangerous. Thankfully, the headmistress was there to mitigate the explosion for both of you."

Evelyn was more curious about what Tatyana told Yasenia that she did wrong during the fight, so she asked a little more. Andrea took out a device and showed the conversation. The maids behind looked closely and assimilated everything Tatyana said. Anna and Eve were also there, paying 100% attention to the recording.

Midway through the video, Yasenia returned with a clingy Angel and Tatyana. The dinner was floating around them. Yasenia dramatically said, "Is hearing mom bashing me so interesting~? How cruel of all of you! Taking joy in my disgrace!"

They chuckled and continued watching it while eating dinner. Yasenia had Kali on her lap. From time to time, she liked feeding her while spoiling her. Angel giggled, "Yasenia looks so cute when she is frightened. Look at her tail!"

They focused on it and saw it curled like a chameleon's tail. Some chuckles escaped their mouth. Yasenia bit Kali's neck playfully when she heard her laugh and said seductively, "Even honey is laughing~? Tonight, I'm going to punish you~."

Kali blushed; she still wasn't accustomed to Yasenia's voice when she whispered sensually. Her mellow but sightly deep voice always made her tingle pleasantly. Moreover, thinking about what Yasenia told her, she was actually a little expectant to see what this "punishment" would be.

Being together for almost two months already, Kali understood that Yasenia's will when speaking about actual punishment for all of them was as strong as common paper against a fire cultivator. It seemed that their dragoness could only pamper them with all her might and was unable to punish them properly!

Dinner ended, and Yasenia went to cultivate. The more she advanced in cultivation and the stronger her mind got, Yasenia felt closer to the [Connection with the Sun] realm. Furthermore, lately, she had a feeling that she was approaching something. The more her comprehension ability developed, the clearer she perceived this feeling. She was awakening something, and she didn't know what that was.

Yasenia ended her cultivation session and began her night tour. This time, she decided to go to Kali's room first, even if she normally reserves her for last, because she wants to be somewhat clearheaded when having sex with Cecile. If she wasn't clearheaded, Yasenia feared that tomorrow morning Cecile would be with a child in her stomach.

The reason she went to Cecile first was to go to Kali right after being emptied by Cecile. Today was the day she decided to take a step forward in their relationship, so she wanted to be as aware of Kali's mood as possible. Yasenia decided to begin little sexual plays with Kali, like touching each other privates and deepening their skin-to-skin relationship. 'Yesterday night, she was comfortable touching the tail in its sexual mode… Today she will begin to milk me from my tail~ I also hope she shows me a little of her naked body… I haven't seen more than her arms, calves, and collarbone….'

Yasenia chuckled and thought, 'Well, if she doesn't want to show me, it doesn't matter. I can afford to take it slow with honey so that I can get closer to her carefully. Her fear for pleasure has also lessened quite a bit after our lovely sessions together. Who would have known that I would begin such a prude relationship after all I did with my other dears, hahaha.'

Flora saw Yasenia approaching and bowed with a smile, "I hope you are doing great tonight, young miss."

Yasenia hugged Flora and said, "Tonight, I'm going to try to advance my relationship with Kali, be attentive and do not fear interrupting us if you think I'm doing something wrong."

Flora asked, "Doesn't young miss mind me spying in your intimacy?"

Yasenia said, "I rather you are attentive and look over us so that you can interfere if something bad begins happening to Kali. Moreover, you have seen everything about me that you had to. You had even cleaned my privates before! What would I be against by now?"

Flora chuckled and said, "Then, this maid will do everything she can to help you have an enjoyable evening with miss Kali." Yasenia nodded with a smile and went toward the door.

At the same time, Kali was daydreaming about what they would do tonight. 'Will she kiss me while lying on top of me? I really like her body pressing me down… Or maybe… Will I be on top again? I-It was s-so embarrassing when Yasenia told me to act more d-d-dominant…'

Kali then heard knocks on the door and looked doubtful toward it. 'Doesn't she normally come two hours later? Maybe it is Flora-.'

"It is me, honey~. I've come to deliver punishment~."

Hearing that mellow and rich voice, she knew it was Yasenia. She stood up and went toward the door. Kali took a deep breath and then opened it.

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Well, I deleted my previous review because of two important things. My update schedule will be every day at 20:30 GMT+7 until further notice. The second point is that I didn't give my novel 5 stars and that is blasphemy, Why did you just think I'm shameless? I'm not, I totally didn't feel envious of all the other authors that do the same. Finally, I'm writing this novel for fun (at least currently)! Moreover, it is my first time writing anything. If that was not enough, English is not my first language. But don't worry! I'm using two different grammar correcting software! So, it shouldn't be bad, I hope you don't leave because of this. I hope I didn't forget anything... I actually did! Any questions or suggestions about the novel write below. I will answer all of them unless they are nonsense of course. And please refrain from using swear words. If you don't like something about my novel, tell me normally. I only have the outline of the plot and some stacked chapters so changing things is possible!

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I can only say that this novel has me hooked its a super good read and I love that the author is limiting the harem [img=recommend][img=update]

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Noice. Will there be yandere waifu?

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I've seen this book on to other sites but I've read it on this site it is a very good read the world is very well detailed and I love the characters I don't know why anybody would dislike it other than well the sexuality of one of the main characters so if you like cultivation books then give this one a try

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The novel is very interesting, you have daily updates, and the grammar have improved during the course of the story. There are barely any grammmatical errors in later chapters. Give it a try I don't think you will regret it!

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It is a very well put together story. Honestly there is not many problems at all with it. The only thing I could say is I want more. That is all.

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well Hello I just noticed your novels in webnovel too 😋 keep making this master piece. its one of few that makes my day more enjoyable .

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Nice novel. Very fun to read, lemon’s are good too. keep up the good work.

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