Heaven, Earth, Me

After the first tail lash, Yasenia hit the Monolith one more time. However, she had placed too much strength on the first hit, and the results of her four next attacks were lower than her previous 502. Even so, the banging sound of the tail hitting the Monolith made the spectators' hearts jump each time.

After seeing no more results, Yasenia muttered, "Let's start getting serious, shall we?"

The gazes the people were throwing at Yasenia made them look like fish out of the water. They thought that her tail attack was her serious mode, but now they heard that she was just beginning!

"What is wrong with this woman?"

"Isn't she just in the sixth level? How is it possible to be this strong?"

"She must have trained her body to the limits."

Angel and Kali were smiling proudly, happier than if their words were directed at them. They really wanted to brag aloud about her, but they held it in since Yasenia was about to attack the Monolith again.

Yasenia used [Celestial coat]. Her body was covered by the golden-silvery light, creating white firefly-like lights around her, complementing the white balls that orbited around her body in a beautiful picture. She was like a living constellation.

Then, she punched with half her strength.

*BANG!*

496!

Yasenia now had a good gauge of her strength with just the [Celestial Coat] activated and began rampaging on the Monolith again. 521! 532!

The numbers kept going up until the number 575 showed up. Yasenia raised an eyebrow; increasing the number was getting harder and harder. For the spectators, each punch was extremely fast and hard to perceive. Yasenia punched two more times, but only 571 and 574 appeared.

Then, Yasenia used her legs and slammed them onto the Monolith without mercy. The first hit was a proving one, so the number that appeared was just 560. Yasenia nodded and slammed her legs four more times, 590! 598! 604! 624! Finally, she tried to control her tail-lash strength and managed to hit it two different times, creating the numbers 643 and 656!

The people around were already numb, looking at the dragoness beating the Monolith and making it brightly shine as if it was a light show. The explosive sounds didn't fail to make their heart jump, but it was something they were getting used to.

When they saw Yasenia take a step back, they all sighed in relief. 'Finally, this monster is going to stop attacking that thing.'

Lui Yi was sweating buckets, 'As expected, she almost reached 700 points. At least I should be able to survive.'

But to everyone's dismay, they saw Yasenia's aura inflating again and exploding outward with a wild dragon roar! The dragoness aura washed over all the people present, feeling like a water tide had just hit them.

Yasenia had activated [Dragon Strength]!

The feeling Yasenia currently gave was extremely tyrannical and imposing. It was as if her presence had become tens of times bigger before their very eyes, and some people almost kneeled because of the pressure Yasenia currently released.

Yasenia then repeated the process, surmounting her score eight more times. Yasenia finished it with the extra tail lash.

*BAANG!*

The Monolith's light started to become blinding as Yasenia's hit made it light up strongly. The light rushed upward in a small whirlwind, creating a big and bright 789!

Yasenia thought, 'It is really hard to increase the numbers. I only raised my score by 133 points. How high will I be able to increase it when I use [Celestial Dress]? I will deactivate [Dragon Strength] and use it later to reach a higher number.'

Seeing Yasenia deactivating all her auras, their heart relaxed again. That oppressive pressure also dissipated, letting people breathe normally again. Most of the thoughts were similar, 'Now it truly ended! I was scared that the Monolith would break or something.'

But, it seemed they were in for an emotional roller coaster as energy started gathering toward Yasenia again.

Some people were literally crying, wondering when the dragoness would finish shattering their pride. Most of the people here had some level of confidence in their strength since they were able to enter the secret realm, but it was being stomped by the powerful dragon in front of them!

However, all these thoughts stopped when they saw Yasenia's transformation.

When Yasenia gathered the energy to use the [Celesital Dress], the aura coming toward her broke into silver, golden, and white threads, interlocking around Yasenia's voluptuous body seamlessly. The energy threads transformed and created a gorgeous body-fitting white dress with a long, wavy, and silky skirt. The skirt was short in the front, showing off her beautiful and plump long legs, and it had images of the sun and moon on each side, giving it a mysterious empyreal beauty. The dragoness's long sleeves were adorned with two, one golden and one silver, eastern dragons.

Her demeanor became more majestic with the [Celestial dress] on her, and her highlighted body curves increased her seductiveness and beauty to the next level. Her long black hair and tail moved softly, and her golden-red slit eyes looked calm and profound. Adding the small white stars orbiting around her, she looked like a Celestial goddess, charming all the cultivators and townsfolk that looked at her.

Then, they saw Yasenia taking a step forward and punching the Monolith. The air compressed and exploded before Yasenia's dainty fist as it shot forward like a shooting star, carrying tremendous strength.

*BOOM!*

The ground trembled slightly as the Monolith lit up strongly. The light around rushed on top of the Monolith, creating a big 850. Then Yasenia's arm blurred as she punched ten times in less than a second.

*BOOM!* *BOOM!* *BOOM!*

The Monolith was glowing like a second sun, and the light that spilled created one number after another. However, Yasenia wasn't done yet. Her leg moved and kicked six times in another series of explosions, finishing her barrage with three extremely fast tail lashes.

*BOOM!* *BOOM!* *BOOM!* *BOOM!*

The trembles of the ground seemed like a small earthquake as the stone slabs cracked under Yasenia's feet. The spectators saw the numbers constantly increasing until the final tail lash landed on the Monolith.

*BOOOM!*

The shockwave pushed people back as the number on top changed from white to red as if Yasenia had crossed a threshold of some sort. The light red number that formed was 1003!

The people wanted to catch their breath. However, Yasenia's last barrage had only just begun.

[Dragon Strength] activated!

Yasenia's aura became so oppressive that even the half-steps were having trouble staying near Yasenia! The hearts of the people were completely terrified at the dragoness strength.

Another sixteen attacks landed on the Monolith, a combination of punches, kicks, and tail attacks, creating bigger and redder numbers until a red 1241 appeared. The [Dragon Strength] gave multiplicative power, so it was more effective the stronger Yasenia was.

Yasenia had three attacks left in her mind. She crouched slightly, and her hand made a claw shape. Then she activated [Moon Dragon Claw], creating a phantom ten-meter-long silver-scaled dragon claw and swept toward the Monolith.

*BOOM!*

A silver explosion combined with the red light of the Monolith lit up the surroundings like a bloody Moon. This attack created the number 1421 on top of the abused Monolith. Yasenia observed the Monolith for a little bit and saw that it was pristine. 'Thankfully, I'm not able to damage it. It would be bad if Angel and Kali can't gain points after I break it.'

After that, Yasenia took back her hand in the claw form and slashed again, activating [Sun Dragon Claw]. A ten-meter-long golden-scaled dragon claw smashed toward Monolith with powerful momentum.

*BOOM!*

The bigger and stronger golden explosion impacted the Monolith, making it exude rivers of red light, creating the bright red 1571 number.

Finally, Yasenia looked around her and saw that [Starry Sky] had reached the maximum 360 stars. Yasenia said, her voice leaving no room for arguments, "Spread out. The next attack will be too powerful for you to be so close."

The people moved back without fusing about it. They had almost been frozen and burnt because of the [Moon Dragon Claw] and [Sun Dragon Claw]. They really didn't want to be near an attack that the powerful dragon before them considered too strong.

Yasenia saw that no townsfolk remained in the nearby area, so she used her unarmed most powerful skill, [Star Dragon Claw]. The stars around her ballooned and rushed toward each other. They fused without exploding and created a white scaled thirty-meter-long dragon claw. The scales were sleek and beautiful, giving the claw a majestic appearance.

Yasenia then took a step forward, and her hand cut through the air as if it was a viscous liquid. The white dragon claw followed Yasenia's movements and smashed toward the relatively small four-meter-tall Monolith.

*BOOOOOMM!!!!!*

A white explosion consumed everything 200 meters around the dragoness, blinding everyone. The air shockwave pushed some cultivators backward. When the light subsided, they looked up, and their breath got caught in their throat. An enormous blood-red 2000 was floating there as proof that everything they saw wasn't a bad dream or an illusion. The number 2000 then dissolved and rushed toward Yasenia's dantian.

Yasenia nodded, satisfied. She could activate [Day and Night], but that was overkill. It wasn't worth showing her full strength to all these people. The strength she showed was enough to make most people scared of her, and unless someone managed to beat her record in this Monolith, they would have to think twice before attacking her. Moreover, this would deter the lecherous people from annoying her for a while.

The cultivators and townsfolk looked at the tall and charming Yasenia and realized that she wasn't even out of breath. A collective gulp was heard from the people around. It was so absurd that it felt surreal.

Yasenia turned toward Lui Yi and slowly walked toward him with sashaying hips. Her steps were calm, and her face had her typical seductive smirk, but the aura around her made people only feel reverence for her. They didn't dare become lustful for a woman of this caliber!

The man fell to his knees and shouted. "Spare me, senior sister, please! I won't dare cross your path again, and I will even be your lackey or slave! Please let me live! I was blind and didn't see your greatness!"

Yasenia kept walking toward him and asked, her voice calm as if she was talking about the weather. "Would you have spared me if I lost? Would you not have forced yourself on me if I was weaker than you?"

Yasenia's smirk widened, "Or would you laugh as I shouted under you, begging for you to stop?"

Lui Yi was about to answer, but Yasenia cut him. "You wouldn't have spared me. No matter which words you say through your mouth, you know the true answer to my question in your heart. Even now, when you are about to receive my attack, you still look at me with desire in your eyes. There is mostly fear, but your lustful nature still is aroused at my sight."

Yasenia reached before him and said, "I'm not a cruel woman. If nobody comes in my or my lovers' way, I won't even care about what people say about us. I may become angry, but I'm not so unreasonable that I wouldn't let people discuss us."

Yasenia slowly clenched her fist, and her aura rushed toward it. "However, you touched my reverse scale by doing that kind of bet. And no dragon likes their reverse-scale being touched. This is a fate you brought upon yourself."

The man knew asking for mercy was useless, so he stood up and began preparing his defenses. He couldn't retaliate nor escape because of the Heavenly oath, so he could only try to strengthen his body as much as possible. But to his and everyone else's surprise. Yasenia didn't wait for him to prepare. As soon as she finished speaking, she disappeared and appeared before the man, her punch shooting toward his dantian mercilessly.

Her fist blurred and landed three inches below the navel, on top of the dantian, with trampling strength.

The spectators saw Yasenia's fist sinking in his stomach as if it was made of water, and right after, Yasenia transferred all the momentum into his body.

The strength from the fully buffed dragoness punch literally exploded his waist area in a bloody mist, making the top and bottom parts of the body fly in different directions.

However, not a single drop of blood landed on Yasenia's body, as her natural aura pushed the filth away.

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Well, I deleted my previous review because of two important things. My update schedule will be every day at 20:30 GMT+7 until further notice. The second point is that I didn't give my novel 5 stars and that is blasphemy, Why did you just think I'm shameless? I'm not, I totally didn't feel envious of all the other authors that do the same. Finally, I'm writing this novel for fun (at least currently)! Moreover, it is my first time writing anything. If that was not enough, English is not my first language. But don't worry! I'm using two different grammar correcting software! So, it shouldn't be bad, I hope you don't leave because of this. I hope I didn't forget anything... I actually did! Any questions or suggestions about the novel write below. I will answer all of them unless they are nonsense of course. And please refrain from using swear words. If you don't like something about my novel, tell me normally. I only have the outline of the plot and some stacked chapters so changing things is possible!

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Hello, the author here! So, this second review is posted after 200 chapters! What a crazy thing. The other review has some things wrong, so I'm here to correct them and to tell you about other new things. Firstly, I wanted to thank all of you who have read my novel, we are almost at one million views, and I can't believe it. Thank you, dears. Second, the schedule is actually daily at 21:00 UTC+2. You can easily search how to compare it with your local hour on Google. Next, I wanted to say that I've edited the first ten chapters or so, so the grammar is a little bit rough after that point, but I would say that it is readable. Later, I made massive improvements. Following that, this story has a LIMITED harem. The main character won't go collecting women like trophies and cares about all of them dearly. They are also a big part of the story and won't be left behind and forgotten. They all complement each other, creating a healthy relationship between them. Also, there are only Female on Female relationships; there isn't any romantic situation with males. Finally, Any other question you have, you can ask here or in my comment. Thank you for reading this, and I hope you can try my novel and follow Yasenia's adventures in a cultivation world that is slightly different from the norm. ...I hope I didn't forget anything.

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I can only say that this novel has me hooked its a super good read and I love that the author is limiting the harem [img=recommend][img=update]

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Noice. Will there be yandere waifu?

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I've seen this book on to other sites but I've read it on this site it is a very good read the world is very well detailed and I love the characters I don't know why anybody would dislike it other than well the sexuality of one of the main characters so if you like cultivation books then give this one a try

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The novel is very interesting, you have daily updates, and the grammar have improved during the course of the story. There are barely any grammmatical errors in later chapters. Give it a try I don't think you will regret it!

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It is a very well put together story. Honestly there is not many problems at all with it. The only thing I could say is I want more. That is all.

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well Hello I just noticed your novels in webnovel too 😋 keep making this master piece. its one of few that makes my day more enjoyable .

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Nice novel. Very fun to read, lemon’s are good too. keep up the good work.

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