Looking at the girl with a serious face sitting in front of him in surprise, Jingu Yao never thought that Shiyu of Kasumigaoka would print out this script!

"Yao-jun, after you sent me the scripts, I stayed up all night to read them, but the amount of scripts was a bit large, and it was too dry to look at the computer screen, so I had to print them all."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu said nothing, but the seriousness of her job and her dreams is as good as Zhenbai's withdrawal. This girl is really dazzling when she talks about things seriously, like a reliable student. Same as my sister.

Jingong Yao carefully looked at the eye sockets of Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu, although it was not obvious, but there were indeed some dark circles.

"Shi Yu, why are you working so hard, the game can be played slowly."

Although he was very moved by what Shiyu of Kasumigaoka did, Jingu Yao couldn't help but said.

"Can't!"

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's tone was suddenly a little excited, her pale and slender fingers tightly gripped her bed sheet.

It seems that she realized that her tone was wrong, and after she slowed down, she said: "...Only this matter is absolutely impossible! The "Metronome in Love" that the editor asked me to write is already the same as my original one. The vision is different, and I have to take it seriously for a game that recreates my original vision."

When it comes to the latter reason, Kasumigaoka Shiyu's tone is a bit far-fetched. Jingu Yao can hear her insincere words, but Jingong Yao doesn't want to guess the reason why Kasumigaoka Shiyu pays so much attention to this game. Women's minds are the most difficult. Guess, and Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's mind is even more difficult to guess.

When you think you guessed her right, she will tell you what it means to be slapped in the face.

Pointing at the script in front of her, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's expression changed, and finally she took a deep breath, looked at Jingu Yao with a complicated expression, and said softly: "...Yaojun is indeed a genius, At first glance, I can write the world view and setting of the ordinary love triangle so full to overflowing. I haven't seen the vertical painting of the game, but I am very impressed by the character design that Yaojun drew before. I admire the words of Miss Shiina so much, then I believe her."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's words made Jingu Yao open his mouth. Some words can't be said nonsense. What makes me believe in 'True White' and you also believe in 'True White'?Is this the greatest affirmation of yourself?Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's trust in himself really needs to be re-evaluated.

Jingu Yao is a little incredible, why does this woman believe in herself so much?Although the two have known each other for a long time on the Internet, the only time they met in reality was at their respective signing parties. These two short meetings made her treat herself as a person she could trust. This woman's thinking The circuit and self-awareness are simply inexplicable.

This time I invited myself too. It’s not normal for me to be alone with a man and a widow in the same room. Jingong Yao thought about why this happened, but he couldn’t understand at all. If he wanted to talk about the kindness of her intersection, he was just helping her publicize it. That book, just discussing the plot with her.

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu didn't know that Jingu Yao had thought so much in her mind, she just continued to say, "...the script is very good, whether it is the cohesion of the story and the tangled monologues of the characters, they are written vividly, to be honest, Yao Jun, your mobile phone-themed novel "Love in the Sky" is more like a casual graffiti work. It's just a good time to be so popular, but the script of this "White Album" really makes me very happy. Shocked."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's expression twisted a little, as if he didn't know what words to use to describe it.

"This is the script I want, the story I want to write! I also designed the outline of "Metronome in Love" at the very beginning, but it was just the publisher's needs, the editor's restraint, and I had to change a lot in order to cater to the market. , I try to write my feelings as superficial as possible, and try my best to conform to the general reader's mind. However, this kind of creation makes me always feel that I have lost something, I always feel that I am compromising with something, so I am restless and I have never been able to find a good solution. After seeing Yaojun's script, I finally know what I want!"

She pursed her lips tightly, her tone was a little excited, her beautiful eyes shone with a brilliance called 'longing and hope', she knelt on the edge of the bed with her legs, and leaned forward with her pretty face, that delicate and beautiful face was like a fairy His face approached Jingu Yao, his fiery lips like flaming roses also revealed his excitement and the fragrance in it.

Jingong Yao didn't take advantage of her, and didn't even look at the cleavage she showed because she bent down, because the current Shiyu of Kasumigaoka is too beautiful, not her appearance, not her delicate body. , but the hope and brilliance of finding the goal, the strong will that speaks of his moving and excited.

Chapter [-]: The Thief of the Shrine

(Chapter [-] is banned, I will post it directly in the group, the group number is in chapter [-], and I will also post in the former Gensokyo group.)

(Actually, nothing is written in it...)

The girl's delicate face was less than five centimeters away in front of her eyes, and the aroma she exhaled made the heart beat faster, and the desire and excitement in those bright big eyes appeared in front of her eyes, as clear as a clear spring.

Sensing that her mood was a little subtle, Kasumigaoka Shiyu took a deep breath. She gathered her hair with her hands, her bent waist was straight without any trace, and the toes of her beautiful legs knelt on the edge of the bed. Yes, because of her posture, she couldn't shake her legs.

After pondering for a moment, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu seemed to be organizing language, she tapped the A4 manuscript paper in front of her, and said gently, "...but the script is good, but the personalities and emotions between the characters are also entangled. It's about to come out, but it always feels like something is missing."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu may feel uncomfortable sitting on her knees, she turned over and sat on the edge of the bed, kicked the slippers with both legs, and pointed her toes on the floor, shaking like no one else was around.

As long as there is a problem with her mood, she will always do this behavior, because it is too obvious, even Jingu Yao, who has only met her twice, understands it.

"It should be the relationship between character development..."

After thinking about it, Jingu Yao said, "...because the characters are not only Haruki Kitahara, Kazuma Touma and Shelley Ogizo, if there are only these three characters, even if the plot is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people, it will feel less. What, this is a game script after all. According to the current game laws, in addition to the two most important heroines, at least one or two other female characters can be attacked. The reason why you feel strange, Shiyu, is that What's missing is because I deleted the strategy plots of other characters, and the whole plot is not round enough and a little jerky."

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu heard Jingong Yao's words, her eyes lit up, and the corners of her mouth showed joy, "...Yes, this is it, except for the two heroines, although the other female characters are not important, but the brush and ink are too much. , but the excessive writing ended abruptly, which made people feel too stiff."

She blinked her eyes, and the Wang Qiushui under her long eyelashes was charming, like a seductive elf, with a charming look at the corner of her eyes, looking at Jingong Yao thoughtfully: "...the script seems to be The reason is because you deleted a lot of content, Yaojun, that is to say, this script is not something you came up with recently, but it was conceived or even written a long time ago, and it has been revising recently."

This woman is very smart, and guessed some correct answers from subtleties. As Shiyu of Kasumigaoka said, if the script hadn't been written in advance, this problem would not have arisen at all. If the script is what Jingu Yao recently thought Come out, the plot must not have such defects.

Jingu Yao's response to Shiyu of Kasumigaoka is quite admirable. Although it is different from the actual situation, it is not far from the truth to put aside those things that are beyond common sense.

If the original script is used, Jingu Yao does not need to rely on Shiyu of the Hill of Xia to complete it alone. Most of his time is actually deleting some content of the script, leaving the blank to Shiyu of the Hill of Xia. Kasumigaoka Shiyu perfected it with a woman's heart, making this white album even more 'warm heart' than the original.

Being able to approach this beauty with a script and perfect it, Jingu Yao will naturally execute this kind of multi-pronged action unswervingly.

"Indeed, Shi Yu, you are right, in fact, I almost finished this script a year ago, but after seeing your writing style, I suddenly feel that this script is very flawed, so I hope you can Help me perfect it completely."

Jingu Yao smiled heartily, telling the truth, giving people a sincere free and easy, if you still lie at this time, it will definitely make the girl in front of you dissatisfied, because she is a woman who cannot be deceived by ordinary lies.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu nodded, this woman with excess self-awareness always thinks that she is right to some extent, and the fault must be someone else. Believe any doubt.

"... This script is handed over to Shiyu, and I hope you can fill in all the missing blanks, add some details shown by other lines to the two lines of Touma Kazuya and Kogiso Yukina, and then Try to make the relationship between the three people more 'healing'. I don't think anyone is more suitable for it than you, Shi Yu. In light novels like "Metronome in Love", Shi Yu can use simple writing. Depicting such a character with such a prominent character can even make people forget the illustrations of light novels and immerse themselves in the world written by you. I have to say that I admire it very much. The starting point of my writing is to grasp the reader's mentality rather than relying on writing. Attractive, and Shi Yu, you are completely the opposite, even if you ignore the readers' mentality, you can use your writing to capture their hearts."

Jingu Yao didn't have any embarrassment. He sincerely praised Shiyu of Kasumigaoka, and his words were not exaggerated or demeaning. Most people would like to hear this kind of flattery.

"Yao-jun is wrong. You say your writing is not good, but I don't agree. Just from this script, I know that Yao-jun has a delicate heart...like a girl~~"

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu suddenly laughed mischievously and blinked at Jingu Yao, which made Jingu Yao embarrassed for a while. Could it be that he copied the script himself, and it was impossible for him to look like a girl?

"But Yaojun, your "Love in the Sky" makes millions of girls in Japan cry. If this game is released, it will make the men who have played it unbearable."

Jingu Yao listened to Kasumigaoka Shiyu's ridicule, he just shrugged.

Well, anyway, at most people are called 'Jingu thief', and my tears are returned. It's no big deal.I haven't seen a decapitated senior yet. The magical girl animations in this world are quite developed. I don't know how many people will break their glasses when the Terminator 'Little Round Face' comes out.

"...Actually, before you came, Yaojun, I already had some ideas and wrote them down, but I just need your cooperation."

For some reason, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's face suddenly turned red, but she said calmly.

"No problem, no matter what it is, I will cooperate!"

"But before that, let's have lunch first, which is already promised."

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