"Did it arrive so late?"

Beichuan frowned. The meeting will start in a few days. To be honest, the manuscripts sent at this time are usually automatically moved to the next issue. However, seeing Ogata's excited appearance, he has also worked here for several years. It is also very experienced, which shows that this new comic is still good.

Looking at the few cartoons on the table that he had no choice but to do, Beichuan decided that it would be better to take a look.

"Show me."

"Yes!"

Ogata respectfully handed the comic draft to Beichuan, and just stood at his desk waiting for his comments.

The first page is a boy with yellow hair, and below it are four big red characters——

"Naruto!"

Beichuan murmured and read the name of the comic. There are not many ninja-themed comics in Japan, but since Ogata can be so excited, it shows that this comic has its own uniqueness.

"Yao Jingu? A name I haven't heard before, is it a newcomer?"

Looking at the author's name circled in blue squares under the red Naruto characters, Beichuan muttered.

On the second page, there is a rather bizarre pattern, next to it is a story of a nine-tailed fox and the fourth Hokage, as if telling history.

On the third page and the fourth page, there are two still pictures.

And the fifth page is the real beginning of the comics.

Turning to the fifth page, Beichuan first glanced at it, and his eyes lit up.

"This kind of mirroring method doesn't seem like a novice."

Chapter [-] I want to surpass the Hokage of all dynasties!

(A reader mentioned the issue of weekly JUMP serialization today. Indeed, it is much more difficult for a weekly JUMP to be serialized in reality than I wrote in my text. However, this is a YY novel. Depressed enough, I can't write things so complicated in the novel, and the novel will always have exaggerated writing.)

(Just like the Tezuka Awards and Akatsuka Awards for Weekly Boys, to be honest, most of the readers probably don’t know about this stuff, and we don’t know about the awards in Japan, and it doesn’t feel real to write them, so it’s better not to write them. )

As the editors of Weekly Shonen Jump, they have their own set of methods for reviewing comics. The plot can be put in the back, and the most important thing is the drawing method and the characteristics of the characters.

The level of storytelling doesn't have to be great, because most cartoonists can't say that the level of storytelling is very good. It's like writing novels. Those who are god-level people don't write stories in each chapter. It can be said that it is cherishing words like gold, writing the deepest connotation in the shortest language, but some very ordinary writers do not have this level, they will often rely on water and some chapters to deceive cheat word count.

The same is true for most cartoonists. Of course, there are also god-level characters in the comics industry. Their storytelling level is very unique and sophisticated. For example, the old thief Fujian, the cartoonist who drew Yuyou Baishu and a full-time hunter, he The level of storytelling is amazing, and he is a real genius, so even if he takes an indefinite hiatus to play mahjong, Weekly Junior Jump will always reserve a place for him to be published, waiting for him to update at any time.

Maybe the old thief of Fujian can have a good excuse to suspend the publication, such as in order not to smash his gold signboard.

"The painting method is a little immature, but it is above the average level of the weekly magazine, and it can be seen that there is still a lot of room for improvement."

The editor-in-chief Beichuan nodded. He didn't read the content of the story first, but quickly flipped through these words to determine the most basic painting style.

If you don't have the level of drawing manga, you can't become a manga artist, no matter how much you master the story, no matter how clever and creative you are!

After reading the basic level, there is no problem, Beichuan also began to look carefully from the beginning. The first episode came up with the protagonist Naruto Uzumaki holding paint and drawing a special painting on the Hokage Rock, and then the hurried ninja ran to the Hokage office to report to Hokage-sama. , and finally captured Naruto.

The first two pages briefly introduced the characteristics and characteristics of the protagonist, which made Beichuan nodded.

Then the painting turned around and became in the classroom. Mr. Iruka asked the students in the class to take a test and used the transformation technique to become his own appearance, making the most amazing ninjutsu in Hokage for the first time. showed a little bit.

When it came to Naruto, who liked mischief, he directly used the 'seduction technique' to become a naked beauty, causing Iruka teacher to spit blood directly from his nose and fainted on the ground.

Seeing this, Beichuan couldn't help laughing. No matter what comics, the first few words are very important. Whether it's painting the Hokage Rock or teasing the teacher with 'sex seduction', it highlights the protagonist Naruto Uzumaki. The character of , coupled with the text accompanying the YuTu shape on the title page at the beginning, and the subsequent dialogue between Iruka and Naruto Uzumaki, used the method of recalling the past to roughly introduce the whole background.

Serious and funny, recalling the past and having a distinct personality, these are very mature opening methods for comics.

Beichuan turned to the first page of the manuscript again, looked at the author's name written on it, and couldn't help but said: "Ogata-kun, is this really a newcomer? His methods are extremely old-fashioned, and he doesn't look like a newcomer at all... No. Which teacher has changed a pseudonym to submit again?"

"From the point of view of the painting method, it should be seen that he is a newcomer, editor-in-chief."

Ogata stood up respectfully and said.

"Well, from the drawing method, it is obvious that he is a newcomer... It's really strange."

Beichuan murmured something, then continued to read.

[Naruto, why are you doodles there?You should know the origin of the name 'Hokage'. 】

In the ramen shop, Mr. Iruka invited Naruto to eat ramen and said earnestly.

【Of course.It is said that the people who can have the name of Naruto are the strongest ninjas in the village. 】

Naruto, who was still young, started to answer Iruka-sensei's question.

[Especially the fourth Hokage, the hero who saved the village from the demon fox. 】

Even if it's just a painting, it seems to be able to think of Naruto Uzumaki's tone at that time.

【Then you still? 】

[Because I will inherit this name sooner or later!And it will surpass the previous Hokage! 】

He is obviously the tail of a crane, and he is obviously a child who likes to play pranks, but in the comics, the background and specially enlarged text are used to portray this sentence very firmly and confidently.

Weekly Shonen JUMP revolves around the three keywords of 'friendship', 'effort' and 'victory'. Although not all serialized comics are of this type, it is also known that for Weekly Shonen JUMP, these are the fundamental.

And Beichuan, who saw it here, can also confirm that this comic fits the theme of Weekly Shonen Jump very well.

"Sometimes I really doubt it. I always feel that this comic was drawn by an editor in the industry."

The editor-in-chief Beichuan said incredulously that there are many well-known cartoonists' manuscripts, which may be linked to the editor for half a month or a month, and all the details can be revised before the manuscript can be published. Mirror details Until the end of the first few episodes, Beichuan didn't find anything that needed to be changed, as if the cartoonist knew exactly how to draw it correctly.

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